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Sapnon Ki Duniya...Dream Factory...

How do you like my tittle? Just thought this would suit the story as this is the other name of film industry...

So the plot here is Geet and Maan are wanna be actors...

For me it's always GHSP story line and characters...so Geet is Geet Handa, innocent, fun loving and adventurous...Maan Singh Khurana, workaholic, loves his work more than anything and too serious with a very bad temper...

Initially he thought he deserves nothing less than YRF or Darma productions and tried only those few big names ...he thought of himself as the next SRK of BW and kept waiting for a call from the chopras and the Kapoors...

After a few rejections Maan comes to face the reality and knows that BW doesn't welcomes everyone with a red carpet...you have to struggle and make ur own way...

Maan keeps toning his acting skills and also learns dancing, martial art etc...

It's yet another day and Maan has been called for an audition...

It's a new banner just 1 or 2 films old but Maan is confident that if he could only get a chance to prove his skills then his work will do the magic and turn his career graph up...

Maan is not fortunate enough to be born into a BW family to get that dream launch nor does his parents have that much money to make a movie for him...

They are the famous middle-class looking for a decent engineering career for their son to settle, but Maan has other plans...

he is searching for that eluding entry into the silver screen ever since he landed in Mumbai with BW dreams ...'

Maan is not at all nervous and also has no worries about rejection for he has seen so many faiures that it's nothing new for him and is ready for anything...

At the audition...

Maan enters the gate and just looks around to find that this could be it, this might not be the most promising banner but it's high time Maan gets a start, he hopes that everything goes well today...just then someone bumps into him and he thinks that what a good way to begin?

As he turns to see what happened he finds someone struggling to get up from beneath a pile of bags , he lends a hand and helps, it's a girl bubbling with energy and so excited that anyone could tell that she is new to this place...

" thank you Mr.Hero, all the best, hope you are lucky enough to be my Hero "

Maan is surprised...that girl addresses him like that as she knows that he has also come for the auditions only...and Maan is impressed at her confidence...Maan also had the same confidence when he came but now this tough life has almost deprived him of his over confidence...he is well aware of the fact that even talent and hardwork won't help you get chances easily...

Maan thinks that this girl is here to try her luck and she'll be back like a bouncing ball to where she came from...she looks like she is not used to hardship and takes things for granted...

Maan keeps staring her b'coz she is so beautiful and full of life that U feel jealous to be so carefree and without worries about anything...she is so fresh and acts like a bird that just got it's wings and ready to fly high dreaming of reaching the Sun without realizing the danger...

That girl thanks him,picks her bags in a hurry and leaves with a pride as if it's her first day at shoot...poor girl doesn't know how much it takes to get there...from looking at her innocent eyes full of dreams Maan understands that she must be new to Mumbai itself...

Even while waiting Maan's attention is on that girl only, she keeps talking to someone on her mobile and never stays in one place, she keeps chatting with everyone and knows all their history...and also she might be telling her story to them...one of the guys sitting next to Maan told Maan about that beautiful girl who is here to become the next Aishwarya Rai bachan and about how she always wanted to be a super star from her childhood, and she likes Salman Khan and hopes to be his Heroine soon, stupid girl, what's the need to tell Ur history to everyone...

First they want to select the male lead and so they do the screen test one by one, Maan gives his best shot and the director is impressed with his acting, Maan also lets him know that he is a good dancer and loves action too...

They narrow in 2 for male lead and Maan is one of them, Maan is now hopeful that this time his dream might come true, it's only a step away and the other guy does look good but Maan has got the looks and also the skills...

It's almost 6 pm and 3 girls are also zeroed in for female lead, Maan is surprised that that stupid girl is one of them...

They all are introduced to one another and Maan learns that her name is Geet...

Then they are asked to enact the actual script in pairs, mix match to find the suitable Jodi...

It's a romantic scene and the director is looking for chemistry...after a few shots with both the actors Geet kind of tries to stay close to Maan...

Geet: halo Maan, seems like your lucky stars are working good

Maan just stares...

Geet: what? don't you think you are lucky to work with such a gorgeous diva?

Maan looks at her with suspicion...

Geet: hare babaji? Look at his attitude? Pehle film bhi sign nahi kiya aur attitude ko dekho, kudh ko kya Salman samjtha kya?

Maan gets a little angry...

Maan: halo miss

Geet: Miss.Geet Handa, tujhe toh mera naam bhi yaad nahi, how rude? Mein tummare naam ko yaad rakha na, aaise hi chaltha toh hum donno kaise saath mein kaam kar sakthe?

Maan: now look Ms.Geet, first of all you don't know me and I have not yet confirmed my role

Geet: but I wish you get the role, look at that idiot, ek no ka flirt, just look at the way he is wooing those girls, and I don't like working with him ,if he is there then I won't do this

Maan wonders how could she even think of rejecting a chance jus b'coz she doesn't like her co-star? She is not an established star to choose her co-star...than Maan is little worried how would he manage if at all he had to work with her...

But Maan also did notice that...Geet was not at all comfortable doing the hug scene with that guy, he was just sticking to her too much...as if he is her only for this...but Geet is so comfortable with Maan, you know MSk, the perfect gentleman...

Maan: can't you keep quiet for sometime

Geet: I know I'm disturbing you, but I'm new, this is my first audition and that guy was asking me about my personal details, I don't like it at all, that's why I said you are my friend and I'm with you

Maan is surprised, she was the one telling every detail in the morning and now this is what Maan was thinking of, she herself brought trouble...

Maan stares her...Geet smiles and signals him to pretend as if he is also smiling...

Geet: babaji iss sadu ko mein kya karoon? Mr.Maan, mere liye ek smile kardo, please, woh humme hi dekh raha hai

Maan fakes a smile and Geet sighs...

Geet: iss ke liye bhi tum payment mangoge kya? do rupye ki aur smile nahi kar sakthe? Kanjoos

Maan stares...what's Ur problem?

Geet: you are

Maan: what?

Geet: nothing, just keep talking, jo bhi kehna hai say it with a smile, OK, aaise hi mujhe dekhoge toh sab ko lagega ki mein tumse uthar mang rahi hoon

Geet says it with a bid smile...wah wah kya acting hai?

Maan: I can't keep smiling like an idiot

Geet: aaise ginger eating Monkey banke rehne se woh behthar hai

Maan: tum

Maan gets angry again...

Geet: tum hamesha aaise hi gusse mein rehthe ho kya? phir actor kaise banoge? Acting karna hai toh hasna padega, rona padega

Maan: mein yahan acting class ke liye nahi aaya hoon, just leave me alone

Geet: ok kadoos, thanks for Ur help, I'll manage on my own

She leaves him alone...

Then Maan gets the role of the male lead but Geet is rejected...she is very disappointed...she is almost in tears...even Maan felt bad for her...actually she was the better of the 3 but she was too childish and young for that mature role...

That guy is also rejected but he didn't bother much and there he is consoling Geet or troubling Geet...

Maan couldn't leave her alone like that and he walks up to her...he hates when that guy touches Geet often while talking...

Maan just goes and catches hold of her hand...: Geet, chalo

Geet gets closer to Maan...she holds his hand and leans on his shoulder...

Maan: it's OK, you'll get your chance soon

Maan takes her along with him and when they have come far enough from that guy Maan moves away from her and they keep walking in silence...they have come out...

Geet is little upset and also Maan has warned her to stay away from him, she respects his privacy...

Maan has to go home and he doesn't know where this girl would go from here...

Maan: tum chaho toh mein tumme ghar chod saktha

Maan has a two wheeler...

Geet: no problem, My Agent'll be here to pick me up

Geet waits there with her belongings...Maan doesn't want to go...

He is little worried about Geet, what will happen to her? Where will she go?

Maan then leaves reluctantly...

As he rides in the silent dark night he keeps thinking of Geet and also about the fraudulent agents, he also has been cheated by one of them, but that was only money but Geet could lose anything...

That thought scares the hell out of him, with her innocence and beautiful looks, she looks so vulnerable...even Maan couldn't deny the fact that she did look like a Diva...dashing and also fresh as a budding rose...what a girl? Maan then gets angry with himself for thinking like that about Geet...

Now Maan realizes his mistake, atleast he could have waited for that Agent and made sure he is a genuine person whom Geet could trust...

He then turns his bike and returns back to see Geet, he wants to make sure that she is in safe hands...

But Geet has left already...

Maan goes in search of her and finds her walking with someone talking...

That Maan hires a taxi and Geet seems not to be interested in going with him, but he keeps talking with her and finally she is about to get in...

Just then Maan enters the scene...

Maan: Geeet

Geet stops hearing his voice and looks so happy to see him, just like a lost kid finding his father...

Geet: Maaan?

Geet drops her belongings and comes running ...

Maan gets off the bike and Geet comes and hugs him tight...

She is still shivering in fear...

Maan tries to assure her that she is safe now...

Geet: achcha hua tum aagaye, mein toh bahut dar gayi thi

Maan: I know Geet, these guys are too dangerous

Maan then looks at that Agent but he has escaped seeing Maan...

Luckily Maan came at the right time, warna Geet ka kya ho saktha?

Maan: tumme kahan jaana hai, mein tumme drop kartha hoon

Geet blinks and immediately tears starts welling up her hazel eyes...

Maan: isse toh glycerin ki zaroorat hi nahi padegi

Geet: ahre babaji, ye meine kya kardia? Mujhe nahi rona hai, haina?

Maan thinks that she has some brain and knows that nothing is going to change by crying...

Maan: haan Geet, rone se koi faida nahi, ab socho tumme kya karna hai

Maan takes his rumal for her but Geet takes a tissue from her kit and wipes off her tears carefully...

Geet: ye mera Kajal toh karab nahi hua na?

Maan also sincerely looks at her eyes to check her Kajal...then he is like what am I doing? Iss ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardegi...first of all why am I so much bothered about her? And why the hell am I bothered about her Kajal?

Maan: what? you are worried about Ur Kajal? You stupid woman, don't you realize that you are stranded in the streets of Mumbai at this hour and U have no place to go

Geet: why should I bother when you are there to take care of that

Maan: what?

Geet: I don't know anyone and you like it or not you are my the only person I know in Mumbai so it's Ur responsibility to help me out

Maan: what?

Geet: toh tum kahan rehthe ho? aaj raat ke liye toh mein tummare hi guest hoon

Maan: tum pagal ho gayi ho kya? aaise raat mein tum kais eek anjaan admi ke saath uske ghar jaa sakthi

Geet: kyun mere saath rehne se tumme dar lagtha hai kya? mein tumme kuch nahi kar roongi

Maan: what? tum toh sach mein pagal ho

Geet: ye toh tum badh mein decide karlo ki kaun pagal hai aur kaun nahi, abhi toh chalein? Mujhe bahut bhook lagthi hai

Maan: are you serious?

Geet: what do you think? I'm serious

Maan: that's not possible, you can't stay with me

Geet: hare babaji, ye toh aaise Gabratha hai ki jaise mein isse shadhi karne ke liye keh rahi hoon, it's just tonight, I'll go on my way tomorrow morning, and do you know any other place where I would be safer thn Ur place?

Maan: achca kya guarantee hai ki my place is safe for you?

Geet: I know face reading, tumme dkehthe hi patha chaltha ki tum bahut achche ho, thoda kadoos ho lekhin dil saaf hai tummara

Maan is surprised...ye utni bhi boli nahi hai, he must be careful...and he also thought that she might need a place to stay and they can't find one at this hour except for his house

Maan: tum ghar se bhaag ke aayi ho kya?

Geet: kyun tum bhi ghar se bhaagke aaye the kya?

Maan: what? mein aaise kyun karoonga? My family knows that I want to be an actor and they support me

Geet: toh mere family mujhe support nahi karegi kya? kyunki mein ek ladhki hoon? Sare mard ek jaise hi sochthe, hum tum logon ke sahare ke bina nahi reh sakthe hai kya?

Maan: what? tum mujhe ye sab kyun pooch rahi ho? aur tummara sawaal ka jawab bhi tumme abhi abhi mil gaya hoga

Geet: rumme kya lagtha? Mein kudh ko nahi sambal sakthi? Tumme kissi ki madat ki zaroorat nahi, I can take care of myself

Geet gets angry and picks up her bags, Maan helps her and says good bye

He then leaves her on the street and rides off...

Geet keeps looking at him as she is shocked...she didn't think that he will leave her all alone...

Geet: babaji koi mere madat kare ya nahi, aap toh mere saath haina? ab mujhe kyun darna hai, haina?

She keeps chanting babaji's name and starts walking...

Geet: ye mein kahan pasgayi? Yahan toh ek taxi bhi nahi hai, aur uss Dhust danav ek 18 saal li masoom ladhki ko iss art ke andere mein akhele chodke gaya, mein kya itni bhuri lagthi hoon? Girl friend nahi ho kya? Kam se kam mujhe apne friend toh bana saktha, haina? mujhe bhi uss mein koi interest nahi hai, he looks good, issiliye toh Hero banne aaya hai, lekhin woh bhi good looking tha, haina? aur ye dil se achcha hai, aurat ki izat karna jaantha hai, Geet, tujhe na chup chap uske saath jaana chahiye thi, ye natak karne ki kya zaroorat thi? Tum kya samjthi ho? tum bahut smart ho? duffer

Geet is little scared...she keeps saying to herself...there's no need to fear, she is gud and she'll find some decent place to stay...maybe a lodge...maybe she shouldn't have run from home like this seeing that Ad, how foolish it is for her to belive that she'll become a Heroine overnight? Aur ussko ye role mil bhi jaathi toh bhi Geet kahan rehthi? Ussne toh ye sab ke barein mein socha hi nahii, lekhin usske paas koi aur ratha bhi nahi tha

As she walks faster and faster out of fear she finds someone waiting there, she is relieved to see him, it's Maan...

She goes to him and asks...: kya hua? Gadhi karaab ho gayi kya?

Maan: kyun? Tum meri madat karogi kya?

Geet: why not? I'm not Maan to leave someone in trouble like this, koi aaise ek alkheli besahare masoom ladhki ko aadhe raat ko sadak mein chodke jaatha hai kya? tum samjhthe kya apne aap ko? Manthi hoon ki tum uss mardon ke tarah nahi ho, thode alag ho, thode achche ho, lekhin tum utna bhi achche nahi ho, samjhe tum?

Maan shuts her mouth...chup bilkul chup, aaise hi batein karthi rehthi toh sach mein chodke jaoonga, mere saath aana hai toh tummara muh band rakho, samjhi tum?

Geet nods her head...

Maan picks her bag and takes her with him...

Maan's place is only big enough for another person he stays alone as he is not comfortable sharing his place with anyone,but now he had to share it with a stupid girl, that too Geet Handa, what's happening with him and why is he so much interested in that girl, only babaji knows the reason...

Though it's pretty expensive and he could have shared the room with a friend Maan prefers to be alone, he is more particular about his freedom...but he doesn't know that he has lost that freedom...

to be continued...

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ill comment in evening..
waise nice os ...
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Nyc os yaar.. I liked it...
Geet is a chatter box.. I love this geet...
Maan is gud...thoda khadus jus like humara maan...
Gud dat he left his over confidence..
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Awesome start
Loved chatterbox geet in this
Loved update completely
Maan is completely same as serial lit khadus
Continue soon
Waiting for next part
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Loved it very much!!
geet rejected
maan got the role..
geet is sooo cute..
eager to know how they will fall in love
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loved this cute bubly geet very much.
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Interesting start . Loved geet's continuous bak bak nd maan bechara seedha munda .continue soon
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congrats on the OS! Well written! Awesome update! Maan protects Geet
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Vibrant Start
Both Maan and Geet wants to be actors and Maan has struggled a lot went for many auditions
but now finally he got chosen to do a film while Geet was rejected as she was young immature
for the role but Maan felt that she was the best out of the ladies
Geet than goes with Maan but also troubles him with her talks and he leaves her in the middle of road only to go further and wait for her finally she is again happy to see him and he takes her
to his house
lets see now what will happen
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Part - 2

Maan takes Geet to his room...

Geet looks around...

Geet: not bad, I like it

She retires on his bed...

Maan stares as usual...

Geet: I don't mind this bed, it's gud for me

She then looks at Maan...

Geet: tum yahan akhele rehthe ho?

Maan: hmm

Geet: mujhe patha tha, tummare saath kaun rah saktha?

Maan: what?

Geet: aaj ka dinner kya hai? tum mere liye kya banaoge?

Maan: I'm not a cook

Geet: ghar pe koi mehmaan aaya hai aur tumne ek coffe tak nahi pilaya, kanjoos

She takes a 500 rupee note and gives it to him...

Geet: lo, aaj ka dinner mera treat hai, tumme kaam mil gaya na, issi kushi ko celebrate karthe hai

Maan stares the note...

Geet: kam hai kya? mere paas itna hi hai, aur mere paas kaam bhi nahi hai

Maan: lagtha hai tum bahut poor ho

Geet: haan, issiliye mein tummare jaise itna bada room afford nahi kar sakthi, kya mein tummare saath ye room share kar sakthi?

Maan: kya? tum yahan sirf aaj raat ke liye reh sakthi, kal subha mere utne ke pehle tum yahan se chale jaana

Geet makes a puppy face...: ek anjaan sehar mein ek 18 saal ki bechari ladhki akhele kaise reh sakthi?

Maan: ek anjaan admi ke saath reh sakthi hai kya?

Geet: tum anjaan admi nahi ho, hum toh ek dusre ko jaanthe hai aur ek saath kaam bhi karnewale hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: waise kal tum bahut bada hero banjaoge toh mere liye recommend karoge na?

Maan has not even started shooting for his maiden show and here she is talking about choosing his co-star...but if Maan had the choice he would have definitely opted for Geet, she is much better than that other woman who looked way too old for Maan, but he has to be satisfied with what he got...

Geet: tumme pizza pasand haina?

Maan: I'm not going to get you anything, tumme bhook hai toh tum jaake khalo

Geet: buddu, mujhe patha hai ki kal se tum kaam shuru karne wale ho, issiliye meine socha ki kuch order karthe hai, fatafat fresh hoke aao, khana tayaar hoga, phir tum aaram kar sakthe ho

Maan is happy to have some company for a change, it's not that bad to share Ur space with someone...

Actually Maan feels lonely at times as all his friends are busy shooting and he is the only one still hunting for a job as he had been rejecting whatever came his way b'coz he is not ready to do anything that's not challenging and worth doing...

All his friends have been telling him that he can't survive like this in this industry, he has to compromise if he wishes to work here...but MSK is MSK, has his own rules and regulations...

Geet takes her mobile and calls door delivery...

Geet: yahan ka address bathao

Maan tells the address...

He then goes to take a shower and when he returns he finds the table set and a candle lit...with some simple decorations that Geet made for the party...

Maan is surprised...but he thinks this is too much...

Geet: aaise hi muh banake rakoge ya phir muskuraoge bhi?

Maan tries to smile but looks like a clown...

Geet: chodo, ye tumse nahi hoga, tum kaisa actor ho?

Maan stares Geet...:issi expression se kaam nahi chalega, tumna hasna seeklo, mujhe dekho

Geet smiles and shows him how to do it...

Maan tries to imitate her automatically without realizing what he is doing...

Geet: that's better, chalo aao, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai, aur ye pizza bhi tanda ho jayega

Maan comes and joins her...he is about to take a piece when she holds his hand and stops him...

Geet: lets celebrate with a sweet

Geet takes out a Cadbury and feeds him...Maan takes a bite and smiles for real...

Geet: ab lagthe ho Hero, waise smile karne ke liye bhi charge karoge kya?

Maan: what?

Geet: phir kulke hasso na, kanjoos

Maan has the best time of his life so far and this is just a beginning...

Geet gets a call...

Geet: halo darling, just expecting Ur call

Maan feels a little jealous when Geet addresses someone "darling"

Geet: love you darling and I miss you too

Maan becomes curious and worries if that could be her boy friend...

Geet: meri fikar mat karo, I've got someone like you to take care of me, and you know what? I got the job, I told you na? who can reject Ur princess?

Maan is shocked to see her lying so easily...

Geet: don't worry about it, they also gave me accomocation, infact I'm not alone, I'm staying along with my co-star, I tell you a secret, he is so hot, thoda akdu hai par chalega

Maan is so embarrassed when she talks about him like that...what a girl?

She just met him in the morning and now she is referring him like that and is not even bothered that she is going to stay with him...but Maan is pretty much bothered, he finds it a bit uneasy to share his room with her, as she said she is really a princess, she looks so beautiful even when she is talking to her boy friend...

This girl has got something special that even Maan couldn't resist her, he has become so helpless that he has already said yes to all her wishes, infact she didn't even make a request, she just informed him that she is going to stay with him and Maan never said a word against it...

Geet: gud night darling, miss you terribly sweetie

Maan keeps staring her till she keeps the mobile and comes back...

Maan couldn't control himself from asking the question...

Maan: tumne joot kyun bola?

Geet: joot bolne se kissi ki pareshaani dhoor hothi toh joot bolne se kya problem hai?

Maan: but you can't lie to someone so near and dear, like Ur boy friend

Geet: boy friend? Issiliye tum itne pareshaan ho?

Geet bursts out laughing...

Maan is confused...

Geet: it's not my boy friend, aur mera koi BF nahi hai, ab kush?

Maan: what?

Geet: tumme dekhke lagtha hai ki tum nahi chahthe ki mera koi BF ho

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hai, tummara BF ho ya na ho, mujhe kya?

Geet: interesting, tum bhi achche se joot bolthe ho, lekhin joot bolthe bolthe pakad bhi jaathe ho

Maan: tum samajhthe kya apne aap ko? Tum sab kuch jaanthi ho?

Geet: mujhe mind reading aatha hai, meinne seekha hai, mein psycology student hoon

Maan is really shocked and he turns pale...it's too dangerous to even think about anything before this girl...

Geet: tummare chehre ka rang kyun uthar gaya? Isska matlab mein sahi hoon, haina babaji?

Geet is having a laughter riot...she is enjoying pulling his legs...

Maan is frustrated that he is being defeated by a girl...

Maan: Geet, shayad tum bhool gayi ho ki tum mere ghar pe ho, agar mein chahtha toh tumme issi waqt yahan se nikaal saktha

Geet: tum aaisa kabhi nahi karoge, lekhin phir bhi mujhe kissi ki ehsaan ki zaroorat nahi

Geet goes and takes her bag...Maan is worried that he has hurt her os bad that she is leaving...

But Geet takes out some money and gives it to him...

Geet: this is my share of the rent, ab ye mera bhi ghar hai, samjhe tum

Maan is speechless, he doesn't know how to handle this girl...

Geet: gud night, zyada sochke pareshaan hone ki zaroorat nahi, mein aaisa hi hoon, don't take me too seriously, jaldhi sojaana, kal pehla din hai, time pe studio pohunchjaana

Maan is still in shock...

Geet: waise mujhe nahi lagtha tum zameen pe so paooge, mujhe toh aaise neendh nahi aathi, tum chaho toh tum mere saath bed pe hi so sakthe ho, ye kafi bada hai

She then takes her dupatta and keeps it in the middle, ye lo, this is my bed and that's Ur's...this s just for you, you are an one man army na, don't feel bad, I'm not complaining

She then lies down on her side of the bed and closes her eyes...

Geet: don't stand there and keep staring me, jaldhi sojao, gud night

Maan then follows her words like a kid...he feels as if he is home with his family...

His mom is the only one who keeps commanding him all his life and he missed it so much, now he feels as if he is back with mom...this girl is bossy just like his mom...

Next day Maan goes to work and comes back late...Geet also went to get some informations about new job offers...

Maan looks tired and he has got the script with him...

Geet eagerly takes a look at the script and she likes it...

Geet: wow you play a angry young man, just like Mr.bachan, this is the secret formula for succees, you are very lucky, aur tumme act karne ki koi zaroorat hi nahi padega, you already have that attitude, hamesha nakh pe gussa aur waiting to shout at others, this should be a cake walk for you

Maan snatches the script from her...this is none of Ur business...

Geet: what? this is my script too

Maan: kya?

Geet: I wanted this project and you see I'll get it

Maan: tum pagal ho kya?

Geet: give me the script

Geet gets it back and starts reading it seriously...she tries to enact the Heroines role...

Maan is puzzled...: why are you wasting Ur time ? this is not Urs now

Geet: you know that director did like my act, but he thought I'm not mature enough, he thinks that I'm a funny person,very playful, kiddish and easy going, but he doesn't know that I'm serious about my acting

Maan: mujhe bhi nahi lagtha ki tum kabhi serious ho sakthi

Geet: mein abhi tumme bathathi hoon ki mein kitna serious hoon, come on, you just play Ur part

Geet asks him to act with her...

Maan: are you serious?

Geet: I'm, waise tumme bhi practice milega

Maan did want to do his homework and he is happy he has got company...

This is about a girl who is cheated by her husband and is a single mother, she has been struggling to take care of her child doing odd jobs until she gets a permanent job at the Hero's company...

There the Hero falls in love with her not knowing about her past and she keeps avoiding him and try to tell him the truth...but he is not listening and is giving her a tough time with his intense love for her...he is not used to hearing a "no" from anyone and when she rejects him he gets angry and tries to hurt her more and more so that she'll be compelled to say "yes"

She is equally strong and she is stubborn that she won't be selfish and let her child suffer b'coz of her decision, she wants her girl to get all her love and doesn't want to feel neglected by her own family...

She knows that her daughter can never become his heir knowing that he is the only son of his family which is eagerly awaiting his wedding and for their new heir...

The story goes like that with all their struggles until they unite...

The scene is where they meet at their office...their first meeting and eyelock...

Maan struggles to look into her intense passionate eyes...she becomes that girl who is in love but fights with her feelings for the sake of her child...

Geet: kahan dekhthe ho? look into my eyes, you don't have any reservations to love me, you are an eligible bachelor

Maan is shocked, he takes it for real but she is talking about the character...

Then h looks into her beautiful eyes and is lost in them...he forgets his dialogue...

Geet: tum kya kar rahe ho? aaise hi chaltha toh mein kaise practice karoongi

Maan: waise ye mera script hai, tumme fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi

Geet: teek hai, ye lo

Geet throws it and goes...

Maan starts memorizing his part and prepares for the next day's shoot...

Geet watches him act...it's cool, he is gud...and she likes him...

Next morning...Maan is getting ready...

She makes black coffee for him... He is surprised...

Anyway Maan needed that...

Geet: all the best

Maan: thanks

Maan has a long day as he had many takes due to his co-stars...

He returns tired...Geet is waiting for him...

She is excited to know what happened...

Geet: how was Ur day? Aaj kaunsa scene shoot kiya?

Maan: hmm Geet, I'm tired, kal baat kar sakthe hai

Geet is disappointed...it's OK...it's his first day...

Geet gets a call again...

Geet didn't want to disturb him...she takes her mobile and tries to sneak out...

Maan doesn't want her to go out alone at this time...

The other guys in the building are not so gud...

Maan: it's OK, tum yahi baat kar sakthi

More over Maan is curious to know who it is?

Geet: halo darling

It's the same person...

Geet: hmmit was OK, it's gud, all are very nice to me, specially my Hero

Maan feels happy...she is talking about him...

Geet: nahi nahi, he is a gud guy, you don't worry

Maan gets eager, what's Geet thinking of him...

She really thinks very high about him...

Suddenly Geet gives the phone to Maan...

Geet: lo tum bhi baat karo

She signals him to keep the secret about her acting...

Maan doesn't know what to do, he never lies and doesn't support such things...

But he had to, for Geet...halo young man'

It's a lady...it;s Geet's Dadi...

Maan: halo m'am

Dadi: so you are the Hero

Maan: haan

Dadi: tumne isse pehle kitna shows kiya hai? koi BW experience?

Maan: nahi this is my first show

Dadi: kya? tummare liye bhi first time? Poor Geet, you know my Geet should be working with SRK and Salman, she'll do one day, she is so unlucky, how do you look? Like Ranveer? Or Hrithik? Atleat Ranbir Kapoor?

Maan gets little angry, this girl has not yet got to work and her Dadi is too much...

Maan: no I don't look like any one, I look like myself, MSK

Dadi: gud, I like that attitude, you need that to achieve big like SRK, one more thing Mr keep away from my Geet, she is our princess, don't mess with her, aur teek se acting karna, don't embarrass our princess, it's her first project, you don't make it a flop, achche se mehnat karo, Geet ko dekhke kuch seekhlo, koi bhi doubt ho toh don't hesitate to ask Geet, she is a sweetheart, she always helps others

That;s true...

Maan: OK m'am, Geet se baat kariye

Geet: darling, ab toh yakheen ho gaya na> he's not a bad guy, and you don't worry I know how to handle bad guys

Haan haan Maan ne dekha kaise bhaag ke Maan ke paas madat mangne aayi thi, ye mujhe madat karegi?

Maan is relieved that Geet's darling is nly her Dadi...kya Dadi hai?

Maan: Dadi se joot kyun bola tumne?

Geet: kyunki woh kamakaam pareshaan hogi, iss umar mein mein usse pareshaan nahi karna chahthi, waise aaj nahi toh kal mujhe kaam mil hi jayega, I'm just telling her in advance

Maan: apne aap pe itna barosa hai toh uss din tumme woh role kyun nahi mila?

Geet: lagtha hai ki uss director ne mere pure talent ko nahi dekha, kabhi toh usko dekhna padega

Maan: gud night

Geet: gud night

Next day at the studio...Maan is shocked to see Geet there before him...

This girl is not what she looks like, she has got the fire in her and is sure to succeed as she said...she is not the one to give up easily...

She pleads the director to give her another chance but he is not interested at all...

Maan feels bad for Geet but he acts as if he has never met her, he doesn't want to work with her, this girl is like a time bomb, pretty dangerous...aur uski Dadi...

And she easily makes you forget yourself and you don't realize what you are doing...

Maan ke saath aaisa hi hotha jab Maan Geet ke saath hotha...he is lost completely...as if it's a magic...

He is already struggling to escape from her magnetic aura that keeps pulling him towards her and if she happens to be around him at the sets too then Maan will have a tough time to concentrate in his work...it;s better she gets to work with someone else...

Director goes for the next shot...Maan tries hard to ignore Geet but she is there encouraging him to do well...she shows a thumbs up after he gives the shot...

Director is also pleased...: very gud man

Geet then comes in the break...

Geet: Maan Maan tum hi bathao, director sir ko, mein kar sakthi na? achcha tum aao hum uss scene ko act karke dikathe hai, kal humne rehearse kiya tha na

Geet has memorized the script already...

Geet starts acting...

Geet: DD aagaye

She runs and bumps into Maan and that famous fall and catch scene...

Maan catches hold of her and their trademark eyelock...

Maan is really mersmerised and there was no need for him to act...

Geet: sorry sir'

Maan is still lost in her beautiful acting...

Geet: Maan, aasie nahi, hamesha ki tarah DD banjao

She whispers and Maan realizes his mistake...

He then stares her and continues the act...

All are impressed and the producer happens to see them, he is so impressed and he thinks that it's an actual shoot...bohut achcha director sir, you just wait and watch, we are going to rule prime time

Director is shocked...

Producer talks to Maan and Geet thinking that they are the led pair and says that their Jodi is the next best pairing of TV...

Actual heroine comes and she is angry...she starts shouting and calling the crew cheaters and the producer doesn't like her tantrums and he fires her...

Geet gets the opportunity to be Maan;s pair in reel and also real...

Geet's energy and liveliness lights up the whole set and even the moody Maan is not spared to stay away from all the fun...

She makes friends easily and even the spot boys and the light men like her...

She respects all of them and treats everyone equal...so she is popular among everyone...

Maan and Geet do their home work at home, they keep enacting the scenes the night before...

Maan is not comfortable with the romantic scenes and he tries to avoid rehearsing them and says that they can perform at the set itself...

Geet discovers that Maan is a perfect gentleman and he takes care of her even at the sets, he makes sure she gets enough rest and tries to do his scenes inbetween to let her take a break...

He is so nice that he never crosses his limits as an actor and makes sure Geet doesn't feel uncomfortable with any scene...he tries to be utmost professional though he has crossed the line and moved from reel to real long before...

As he acts his part as a crazy lover he also becomes one and along with his character he too falls in love with Geet...but he thinks that it's not the right thing as this is purely professional relationship and there is no room for personnel affairs...

He believes that Geet trusts him so much that she came and stayed with him even though he was a stranger and he should not betray her trust...

Geet's Dadi too believes that Maan will take good care of her pothi and has given Geet's responsibility to him...she keeps saying that no one in the family wanted Geet to enter this industry knowing about the dangers...

Dadi has immense faith in Geet abd so she is backing her...after knowing Maan Dadi always says that she is not at all worried about Geet now as she is under Maan's care...

Geet knows that Maan likes her just like she likes him but doesn't know why he is scared to accept it...

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