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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE


A couple were peacefully cuddling very close to each other on a large king sized bed there was complete silence.sleep is very far from them .both of them were feeling each others presence then suddenly breaking the silence the girl starts
Girl : Manik
Manik : hmmm
Girl : may I ask u some thing
Manik : u need not to ask permission for this u have full rights to do wat ever u want
Girl : Manik I want to marry you
Manik ( shocked ) : whattt ?
Girl : arey why r u shouting as if it is a crime to marry u
Manik : arey Nandini I mean wat is the use of marrying already we are married an
Nandini : ha I know but I want to marry u once again today after watching shreyas wedding I want u marry u again
Manik : its OK jaan ur wish is my command
Nandini : have u remembered that day how we are married
Manik : hmmm
Maniks POV
After remembering that day nandini was silent for any couple wedding day will be the most memorable day but day I almost lost my nandu I felt I lost her forever but somehow god wanna unite us so now we are here and in this mean time I felt my shoulders wet nandu is sobbing seeing tears in my jaans eye is the last thing I wish to do because my heart pierces thousand times when I see single tear in her eye I know she remembered that dreadfull day but now I need to make her stop crying
Manik : jaan stop crying see at me we will marry once again but time we will create beautiful memories by which we can forget that day plzz stop do u trust me
Nandini : I trust u more than myself
Manik : then smile
And she smiles
Nandini : but manik how can some one do in such a way do u remember how many difficulties we faced we almost lost each other agar us din meri shaadi usi ke sath hui tho mai mar jati
Manik : jaan plzz don't speak in such a way ESA kuch nahi hogi see after facing many difficulties we are here cuddling very close still u have doubt that some one will separate us
She nods no
Then sleep peacefully
Tomorrow there is a surprise
She nods and slowly drifts into sleep
But manik is not ready to sleep and then he promises to sleeping
Nandini by cuddling her close
I promise u jaan I will remove that worst memories from ur mind and fill it with our memories only ours and then after lot of pecks he slowly drifted to sleep at 3am



So guys here is the prologue if u want to wat happened in their past stay tuned why those memories are haunting nandini ? Wat is that dreadful past ?

Guys it is my first ff if u support me I can write so who ever read this plzz like and comment guys either appreciation or ur ideas or ur dislikes so wat ever it is plzz comment


I will wait for ur response if I don't get enough response I will stop this I cannot continue without ur support and plzz share this story with ur frnds.


Plzz say I must continue this or stop this plzzz my humble request



Your jasmine

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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very different start..
Highly interesting..
Keep up your good work..
Waiting for you to continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys. I will wait for one week if I get good response I will continue or else I will not post any further chapters because without perfect support we can't proceed in any aspect
Edited by gkjasmine - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1


It was a beautiful morning the manan were still sleeping cuddling each other then suddenly nandini's sleeping was disturbed due to sunrays falling on her face from the window then immediately she turned to the other side to see the beautiful face of her hubby she saw him sleeping on his stomach holding her close she immediately pecked on his forehead and then eyes and cheeks and later she pecks on his lips and she is about to get up but she realised that she was under him he smriks naughitily and then says
Manik : shona u forgot my lips
Nandini : buttt
Before she could complete she found that he started her kissing she immediately responded with equal favour pulling him close to her and after kissing her passionately he replied
Manik : this is how to kiss on lips

She was in a state of shock and opened her mouth in O shape he then kisses oh her cheeks and replies
Manik : OK no problem if u dont know how to kiss I help teach u and he started kissing again
But slowly she came out of her shock and responded
And later they freshened themselves and went down to have breakfast after completing breakfast manik immediately lifted her in his strong arms
Nandini : Mani wat r u doing leave me

and he takes her to the bed room and places her on the bed

She doesn't respond due to shock and he smriks understanding her state

He goes from there and brings a packet from wardrobe and gives her to be ready as there is a SURPRISE

Nandini immediately kissed oh his cheeks due to excitement and he just smiles after seeing her in excitement


Precap : SURPRISE.

Guess what might be the surprise manik wanted to give
And share your views by commenting

Plzz comment fast so that I can update the surprise part

Your jasmine

Loads of love

For PMS buddy me
Edited by gkjasmine - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
intersting start of story
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...
Mana r soo romantic...
Waiting for surprise...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..

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