MaNan Mystery (chapter 4 pg 2)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's my second version of story.Now I have planned it in limited chapters and it will be short.

Chapter 1

It was almost two months after accident.

In college

Nandini was sitting on staircase.

Aryaman came there and sit with her.

Aryaman: So kya tum participate kar rahi ho competition mai?

Nandini: No. I don't feel like

Aryaman: It's Ok I understand. Saying this he placed his hand on her shoulder

Someone was observing this

In auditorium

All students gathered. principal was announcing final list of shortlisted students and final name which was announced was Nandini.

Dhruv : hame laga ki tumhe participate nahi karna hai toh phie

Nandnini: guys I don't want to participate

Alya: par your name

Nandini: I don't know.I didn't even registred my name.I will go and talk with sir

In Neonika's cabin

Neonika:What the hell ek bhi kaam tumse thik se nahi hota

Person: hum yahi the but hame nahi pata yeh kaise ho gaya.

Neonika: then find it, aise muzhe cal karse time waste mat karo jao

Person : yes mam

Principal's cabin

Nandini: sir mai sach bol rahi hoon maine koi nam nahi diya

Principal: Muzhe kuch nahi sunana hai Nandini. It is sbout college so I can't take any risk. You have to participate

Nandini leaves room

Alya,Dhruv,Mukti ,Nvya, Aryaman were present in collider waiting for her.

And asked her what happen

Nandini: Principal asked me to participate in competition

No Cabir , No Manik

So were are they ? what happened with them?

Are they live or dead?

Want to know ?

So guys do you want me to continue...

Chapter 2

Chapter3

chapter4


Love

sonpri

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
waiting for the next update :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start...
can't wait to find out how it turns out...wondering where manik and cabir are...who is the person talking with neyonika and the person observing nandu...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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int...plz cont soon
pm me also
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Chapter 2

Harshad was in neonika's cabin
Neonika: what is it this time?
Harshad: nothing and smiled
Neonika: toh run aaisehi khush ho rahe ho
Harshad: nandini is taking par in competition
Neonika: but she didn't wanted to toh yeah kaise
Harshad: Mrs. M aap muzhe kaise hhul jato Havi hamesha
Because of nandini I had suffered a lot now it's time for payback
Aur ab to manik bhi nahi Hai usake sath.voh toh bechari manik ke yaad mai to rahi this
And use part nahi Lena tha par Maine socha ki kyu na use Jo karna nahi Havi who karvauun uasae
Neonika: so this was ur plan .so that vo competition mai as sake

Nandini started to prepare for competition

In mansion
Person1: as you have told me I have went there but didn't find anything fishy.
But I am sure that she is hiding something
Person2: yes she is .she up to something I have to find out before it's true late

This is day for competition
All were present there to support nandini
There was some time left before her performance
She was remembering manik and her singing together
After making many efforts she pulled herself together
She goes to backstage
One guy told her that her friends are waiting so she goes near store room
She was looking for them but no one was there so she was about to turn back then she saw a shadow having knife in hand that person was about to hit her but suddenly he was hitted by an object he gets his hand injured nandini was trying to see that person but she couldn't.
She screamed as person started to get up.
Aryaman listened her and rushed to her.he was trying to get him but he couldn't. Person was wearing mask so both couldn't saw that person.
Aryaman: tum thik toh ho
Nandini; yes but she was hell scared


So what do you think
Nandini performance de payegi bhi ya nahi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
all these mystery people are getting on my nerves...hope they don't hurt nandu too much...she needs to be strong...
she will perform and will be the best...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

Competition get started It was Nandini's turn.

Nandini was lost in her thoughts. She was remembering Manik and her performance at FC concert. She came out of her thoughts when Fab3 reached there to give her best wishes.

Nandini goes on stage.

She saw Neonika sitting in front row chatting with guests and thought how can be someone so cold.

Kya use koi farak nahi padata ? Manik was so right about her

Neonika get interrupted as her phone rings.She went out of the auditorium. Harshad also followed her.

Nandini goes on stage and she saw Navya, Aryaman, Fab3 was there to cheer her. She gave them weak smile and started to sing

Tu mujhe chhod jaaye
Yeh nahi ho sakta, saathiya

(she remembered time when she heard news of Manik's accident)

Meri baaton mein tera zikr sadaa
Meri yaad mein teri fikr sadaa
Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa

(she was thinking time spend with Manik while practicing songs)

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho
Arz bhi, mera marz bhi
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

(she remembered time when Manik tried to heal her wound that was given by Pandit )

Tum hi ho, tum hi
Karz bhi, mera marz bhi
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

As the song finished she couldn't hold herself together she busted into tears.

She started to running towards changing room.She locked the door and started to cry bitter

Nandini: Manik kaha pe ho? You promised me that you will be there with me Hamesha. Aur aaj muzhe aaise kaise akela chodke chale gaye? How could you?

Saying this she throws her phone on table near mirror and she heard

"Nandini I know ki tumhe meri avaj sune bina nind nahi aati so I am sending this message ab so jao good night"

That was voice message . She had that clip in her phone.

She took her phone in her hand which had Manik's wallpaper.

Looking at it she said "I missed you Manik"

Light was dimmed in that room.

She saw one shadow

Nandini: kaun hai waha pe?

But no one replied she thought it was her hallucination she turned back looking into mirror

Her eyes get widen as she get to see glimpse of shadow.

"Soha..." this was only she was able to say

She blinked her eyes and started to see but she doesn't found anyone.

She goes near door to open it but it was already closed.

But Fab3 reached there and listened her voice. They opened door

she looked frightened. So they aksed

Kya hua Nandini? Tum thik toh ho na ? all asked

Nandini: Mai who ...I think I saw soha

So guys zatka laga ya nahi?😉

Please comment so that I can write next part

Love

sonpri

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
how did soha come there...does neyonika have anything to do with it...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4

Nandini: woh mai ...I think I saw soha

All were in shock listening this.

Mukti: How's that even possible soha is dead

Alya: I this tumhe hallusiation hua hoga

Nandini: haan muzhe bhi yehi lagta hai

Aryaman: chalo phir

Nandini: nahi woh I have some work so you guys carry on mai baad mai chali jaungi

Saying this all leave

In Mansion

Girl: I think she saw me

Person: what yeh kaise hua SOHA

Soha: I am not sure there was dark in room so I can't say

Person: ok but be careful next time.

Soha: yes sure

It was a night time when Nandini was walking on street for going home.

She thought that someone was following her so turn but could't find anyone.

Suddenly man wearing black mask attacked her he put handkerchief on her nose she got fainted he was about to took her in his car but suddenly punched by someone very hard. But he manages to escape from there.

Another person took Nandini in his arm and carefully placed her in his car and started to drive.

Nandini was still uncautious. Person took her in room and placed her on bed .And goes from there.

After an hour she woke up still feeling dizzy.her head was paining.

She started to remember the incident and got scared.she started to move from bed without making any noise taking vase near her table she goes near door she didn't find anyone . In next room she saw a shadow that was moving towards her .Without wasting any second she was about to hit the person with vase but he hold her hand very quickly.When she saw him she looses her grip on vase .it felt down.

She had tears in her eyes.

Nandini:MANIK... Kya sach mai tum ho

Saying this she hugged him tightly.

He also hugged her tight.

Nandini:I missed you nandini..

She was still crying

Manik: please don't cry

Nandini: Manik kaha pe the itane din aur tum yaha kaise

Manik:sab batata hoon just calm down

Nandini: what calm down itane din kaise dur rahe tum .tune muzhe miss nahi kiya na?

Manik didn't waste any time and took her for a passionate kiss. She was taken aback by his gesture but reciprocated with an equal favor. Manik realized that she needs an air so he stopped .now both were panting heavily.

Manik: How can you even say that Nandini.

I was dying to hear your voice, to feel your touch.

Hearing this he took her into bone crashing hug.

I hope yeh part apko accha laga hoga

Love,

sonpri

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