SS:MANAN IN MYSTERIOUS ISLAND-chapter 13 pg-31(24/1) - Page 17

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FLASHBACK:

(flashback in pink color and present in blue color and plz don't confuse while talking about flashback both manan talk in present about their situation and how they felt )

manik : oh noo!! Damn, yeh ladki kaun hain?

A girl run away suddenly crying from there.

cabir and dhruv : we don't know. Well , who cares manik. Let's go. We have to plan again. Come

manik : but cabir, wo ladki,

Cabir: usne hee pura plan kharab kardiya.

Manik ": its not her fault man. What does she know ?

Dhruv : haan, sahi hai tu manik, ab jaldi chalo, what if that girl complaints on us. Let's go.

Cabir : I hope she is fine. We didn't do much anything, its just darkness. She will be fine.

( dhruv pulling manik, chalo, we have to reach camp )

Manik : just once. I forgot my favourite blue and white stripe sweater there, mai lekar aata hu, tum jao. I will catch u up guys.

Cabir : hum saat mey chelenge, yehi hai na, chalo manik.

Dhruv : wo, dayaan incharge doonti hogi, attendance ke liye, sab tents check Karne nikal gayi hogi.

Cabir : haan, wo bhi hai, hum sab tent se baahar hai. Jaldi, chalo, manik , kaha chod ke aaye ho.

on other side the girl is shivering with cold, scared, crying and lost the way. She is in terrible condition in darkness under a tree.

Manik : hmm mmm, mujhe yaaad nahi hai . dhoondna padega, ek kaam karo, tum log manage karo, I will be back.

Cabir : tum apne fav cheez bahut dhaayan se rakhte ho, ye tho pehli baar hora hai. I can't leave u alone in darkness here. Dhruv will manage, we will go ,find and come.

( manik doesn't feel good so he wants to check on that girl )

Manik : ( suddenly shouts ) no. You can't come. Bcz bcz,, dhruv can't manage. You know he is bad at lies

.

Last time exam mey hum theeno pakade gaye and also because of this duffer .

Mam isse thoda pyaar se kya puch liya, he said " sorry mam, it was my chit, I'm giving to manik "

Yaad nai hai kya tumhe cabir ?

Present :

Slowly in a mild voice

Nandini : tumhe yaad hai, ek baar tum log copy karte huye pakada gaye, wo Dean tumpe bahut chilaarahi thi ?

Manik : ( who didn't sleep yet ) hum ? Haan, wo dhruv ke waje se. And how do you know ?

Nandini : I'm your class only. But you guys busy teasing , doing masti. Dhruv is good. We both are friends in class. He said me.

Manik : ooo, good. But I first met you that night on trip.

Flashback :

Dhruv : manik, tum na.. I can manage. See

Cabir : haan, okay. Jaldi karo, we both will manage.

Dhruv : Maine bola na, I will manage, u go with manik and come fast

Cabir : mujhe pata hai bhai, tum karloge. ( in funny way ) But aaj na, mujhe jhoot bolna mana hai. Tho, chalo, will go.

( he drags dhruv and takes away )

Manik smiles, nautanki dosto and

he starts searching for the girl.

He hears a cry in one of the corner.

He goes around the tree silently.

Girl gets more scared looking at his shadow.

Girl : hiding her face with her hand, resisting, mujhe chod do, Maine kuch nai kiya., (and she cries)

Manik : (feeling so bad for her) don't get scared, I am not ghost. Don't get scared.

Girl : ( still crying )

Manik : gets close to her, puts his hand on her shoulder

Girl suddenly hugs him ( her hands holding manik shirt, face into his chest , keeps crying )

Manik feels something different, his heart starts pounding fast.

Manik : ( in dilemma, should put his hand or not , he gets closer and takes back, does this 2 to 3 times )

( suddenly , a wooo sound of a fox is heard, as it is mountain )

That girl holds more tightly and cries out of fear. Manik shirt gets wet.

Manik : finally placing his hand , shh shhh, don't worry I'm there. Shh, don't cry. I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to hurt to you.

Present :

Manik : hahhaha, just like today.

Nandini : kuch bhi nai badla, sach bolu tho, I was very happy you came there for me.

Manik : hum the kaise, bachon ke jaisa. Cabir , sabse baa da badmassh, shaitan hai.

Nandini : head tho tum hee hona, uska ( and smiles )

Manik : tumhe dekhe mujhe bhi dar lagra tha. Hmm.. Very longtime, that's a great night .

Nandini : hahha, but fun part was next day of it. The way you got scolded.

Flashback :

Manik rubbing her tears, shhh, don't cry, please.

Manik : don't cry, nothing happened ( with lot of concern )

Girl : you na ,, ummm, ( crying) you,,, umm,, I forgot the way, can, ummm, you take me back to tent.

Manik : okay, don't cry first.slowly wipes her tears with his tumb

(after wiping Manik gives his bottle which is in his bag. )

Drink some water.

Nandini after drinking water , thanku.

Manik : are you okay ??

girl: yeah a little bit thanx

manik : let's go now.

girl : thanku for coming.

They start walking slowly back to camp site.

Girl : what is your name ?

manik : manik malhotra, yours ?

( it is dark all around, each other didn't see manan face)

Girl : My name is nandini murthy

Manik : hi nandini , where do you stay ? How did you come here ?

Nandini : I am St.Joseph school. I came for trip here.

Manik : oh which class your are ?

Nandini : 8th B,

Manik : what ? Oh really ? I have never seen you. Even I'm same class.

Nandini : even I didn't see you. You will come to class daily ?

Manik : haan, I do come. But mostly punished.

Nandini : kkya tumhe sab Mr.dramebaaz , shararath, bhulate hai ?

Manik : (feeling shy ) hahha, yeah. Some teachers.

present:

nandini : tumhe yaad hai, manik, tum hee kuch bhi yaad nai rehta, hum dono next day, kuch baat pe ladai huyi hai.

manik : haan, that you started scolding cabir na, for previous night incident. Bechara, kitna kuch sunaya tune. So, I have to defend him na.

Nandini : par galat tho kiya hai. Even I scolded you then we yelled at each other. I find it funny when all other friends came and stopped us.

Manik : haan, but I left it. Ladki se kya panga Lena. So, we left.

nandini : aha,... pata nai itni easily maine maff kaise kiya tum sabko. Mam ko bhi nai batayi mai.

manik : haan because no one can resist manik malhotra .

Where did you leave so easily ? Bahut sunayi thi na.

nandini : haan bus bi karo monsters the tum sab log tab,

manik : hey don't say that u very well know why we did that.

Nandini : haan, later I understood. ( manan smiles spreads all over sky )

flashback
(before nandini enter actual scene)

There is a fight going on between two guys. Majority support to a boy little tall, fair, strong with silky hair and very few supporting another guy, who is short, strong and good looking.

Harshad : manik malhotra I will not leave you, he shouted angrily

Manik : then who said to leave? ajao, aur maar khane keliye ,he says sarcastically.

All starts laughing

Harshad gets angry they get into dual.

Manik:iss bar nai harshad tune sari haad hi par ki.. how can you so cheap to misbehave with a girl(angrily punches harshad on his face)

cabir finds mam approaching and tells manik to leave.

Both stop fighting and cabir asks harshad to leave before he get rusticated from school.

While leaving harshad says : don't think manik mein dar gaya, mein kisise nai darta hu.

Just wait and watch , what I will do to you. (And left the place)

Manik looks at cabir and dhruv with evil smile , rest two idiots understood what manik is upto and three laugh loudly .

The execution of plan takes place after 2 days from this incident as there is Aravalli mountain trip.

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