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PART 30

M- What part you don't understand? I am asking you; if you really feel the way you say you feel, what are you willing to do? Coz people do a lot of things when they are in love, for the one they love

G-Is this some kind of a test?

M- No. I am just trying to see if your idea of love is same as mine and it's not some half bake thing like calling a kiss the way to become pregnant

G-See I refuse to take a test and if you do believe me then fine, if not...then...what can I say

M- As I said it's not a test; just a statement ...declaration to avoid future problems

G-You answer first

M- What you want? What do you want from me?

G- emm...nothing

M-You obviously can't even answer that without asking what all I can do...

G-You answer me

Maan shrugs

M- I would do everything reasonable you ask me to do

G-Same here

M-It's not like I can concentrate on anything much ...or I rather have. So I rather be here with you than try to do something else which I can't anymore

G-So you wanna say...'i love you'? To me?

M-I love you. It's not difficult for me to say that

G-hmm

M-I just didn't say it earlier coz i dint want to lose what little I had with you. But then you already didn't want anything more and never indicated otherwise. Plus you went to great lengths to avoid me. So I got the message and I left you alone

G-I had my reasons

M-Which included not trusting me; not trusting yourself; being more afraid of the whole world than of losing me

She shakes her head

M-I don't presume that any of it would have changed overnight either

Maan says bitterly

G-You are the most unromantic person living on this earth

She says bitterly and runs back in

Maan follows her inside the building running catching upto her midway on the stairs, grabbing her hand to stop her

He spins her around to face him...ab jo dekhe wo dekhe

M- I am unromantic!!! You care about me being unromantic?! That is all you have to say?? It doesn't matter what I feel what i am willing to do for u... ??!!! But just the fact that I am unromantic? You would rather have besotted fool slobbering over and then leave you whenever things get tough; rather than one...who is willing to stick by your side through everything even if I don't fit in your definition of romantic? What the heck do you know about romance anyways? You are unsexy and unromantic, mood breaker yourself!!

Maan says shaking her with every sentence to make sure everything gets inside her brain... hila hila kar set kar raha hai

She narrows her eyes

G-Unsexy? Unromantic? Fine! Then get someone sexy and romantic

M-Did I say I want someone like that? Did I complain?

He shakes her back and forth again

M-Did I?!

G-Yes, you said. You are complaining

M-Observation is not complaining. And if I was complaining it would mean wanting you to change and I have said nothing about you changing or indicating an interest in your changing; but you don't get it. You just can't believe anything good of me. You don't even care what I feel. You have some wrapped up concept of love and romance and I don't even know why I am standing here!

G-Fine then, go! Leave

M- Do you have any idea what you do to me?

G-Yeah...I am a person who you could insult anytime, anywhere

Maan opens his mouth and then closes it again

M- You... you... oh...youuu...!! I must have hit my head hard somewhere

He mutters and let's go off her and steps back

G-Fine! I always knew you don't love me as I do...see that is the reason I wanted to avoid...but it has happened. Arghhh!!!!

She turns and climbs stairs

He looks at her walk away and then turns back himself and leaves

Geet ko samajh nahi aaya ki ye sab kiya hi kyun Maan ne, jab last mein wahin chodna tha

Geet is thinking, how can he be so not understanding and do unromantic

Udhar Maan soch raha hai ki usne sab kuch out loud admit kar hi liya hai to he sees no longer the reason to try and delusion himself into thinking ki he can go back to his former pre Geet life. He would no longer try to make it with other woman, usse pata hai Geet ki yaad aani hi hai. So, rather than avoiding it and hating Geet for it...

Wo ruk kar thodi der ka break hi leleta hai to araam se sit back and thinks about happy times

Wapas wo hotel bhi nahi gaya, ghar walo se pehe bhi baat kam ho rai thi. Ab to bilkul band si ho gai hai

Pehle; maa bhai kisi party mei bulaye kisi se introduce karaye to Maan would make an effort thinking he can do it.. Geet is no one...lekin ab he doesn't even give it a try

So basically he works and daydreams and philosophizes

Maan Next day, lunch break pe apni usual place pe khada hoke cigarette pii raha hai

Tap on his shoulder

Geet khadi h uski behen ke top aur shorts mein[sexy lol]...haath mein tiffin box h thama deti hai...tip toes and peck on his cheek..aur mudke chali jaati hai ek bye kehke

He drops his cigarette and almost the lunch box too, grabs her hand and frowns hard; another scan up and down

M- What. the. hell. are you . wearing?!!

G-Clothes

She says with an innocent blink

Maan opens his mouth but closes it at loss to say anything

M- Come with me

He says recovering some sense

G-huh?

Haath pakad kar he takes her to his office

G-Have to go home. Leave me

M- You are not roaming around in that.

He says pointing to her shorts

G-What's wrong in this? Didn't you see your black dress date?

M- Are you trying for the s**t look then? Why don't you put on some red lipstick too

G-What is wrong?

M-unbelievable...just unbelievable

He mutters closing the door to his office

He calls his secretary

M- Cancel my meeting for today

G-Kyaaa??? My sis got it for me from US. I like it. What's your problem?

M- My problem is that you are showing too much skin and I don't like people ogling at you

G-At least I don' carry a 'look I have boobs attitude' like your dates

Maan sits down at his desk and puts his hand on his face feeling a head ache coming

M- Can you just stop caring what my date looked like?

G-Why aren't they sexyyy?

She says in bad mimicry

M-Do I really look like the guy who wants to flaunt an arm candy saying that I can bang sexy chicks? I'd rather do all sexy things in private rather than in public and since we don't do anything private; there is no reason for you to try exposing

G-Are you my moral police? Main bass ye cookies lai thi banaye the to. Khaa lena. Bye bye

M-I am your nothing. Doesn't mean I can't have an opinion

Geet baal jhatak ke chal di

M-Stop right there!

He gets up and grabs her hand

G-How did your mom let you out wearing that anyway? I counted on the old bat to have enough sense

Maan mutters and then opens the door

M- Chalo

G-Kahan chalun?

He takes Geet's hand guiding her out

G-Main jaa hi to rahi thi

Raaste mein Maan says to his secretary

M-I'll be out for 3 hours... reschedule everything

Secretary just frowns and manages not to bang her head

Bechari jab se Maan ne confess kiya hai yahi karti rehti hai...Maan ka mann nahi; he says reschedule and uski shaamat

Secretary prasad chadayegi agar uski setting ho jaye

Maan Geet ko leke gaya as usual uske liye gate khola car ka

G-Maan

M- Yeah?

G-Where are we going?

M-Your place. Tumhe ghar jana hai na

G-I can go

M-I know that...you came so you can go too

G-Yesss

M-Exactly, so let's go

Maan grabs her shoulder, puts one hand over head and pushes her inside the car, closes the door and gets in himself

G- What are you being so stubborn about?

He says starting the car

M-That you don't have to bother. I am an independent woman

G-You bothered bringing me food I am bothering dropping you home. Will that satisfy your sense of independence? Favor for favor?

G-It was not a favor

M-Act of kindness?

G-There's no use telling you again and again

M-Then can't I have the same unspoken reasons? By the way, thanks for those cookies

G-You don't even miss me

M-You know that, how? After all, I may be missing you but not just being romantically expressing it

Geet is silent and looks down

M- And don't wear shorts outside. You don't even know how babies are made

G-I know

M- Tell me...

G-It's like this...

She puts fingers of her one hand in between fingers of other hand

M-oh... and what after that?

Mazze le raha hai

G-Just that

M- You don't mean that is enough...

G-That is

M- You should go through the book I gave you once again or maybe we should upgrade it...

Geet bhi aaj mood mein thi zara bend hui achanak...quickly bit his ear...then quickly sits on her place looking out .'la la la..did I do anything' attitude

Maan ka accident nahi hua bas

Maan side me kar rok kar looks at her incredulously

Geet to dekh hi nahi rahi..bahar bada interesting hai

M- Seriously?

M-You had do that while I am driving?

He grabs her arm to turn her to look at him

M- Should I return the favor?

He says moving close, dangerous twinkle in his eye

He moves closer...inches from her face

M- You better say no now...

He growls sexily rubbing his nose on her cheek then slowly kisses her ear

She moans softly

He is slowly nibbling kissing trailing down to her neck his hands at her sides, turning her and lifting her so that she was half sitting on top of him now

She closes her eyes

He slowly trails his hands up her spine burying in her hair, bending her face so that he can kiss her on lips

G-Maan

M- hmm?

He mumbles while kissing her lips, eyes closed for a change

G-emm...I don't know how to kiss

M- You are doing very well..

He moans

M-Just do what you feel like doing...don't stop yourself...open your lips...

He says and delves deeper to kiss her more thoroughly

She kisses him back...but she is an amateur

But as long they both enjoy who cares about her being an amateur

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
awsm updt...loved it...Get is fiery ovr here...lovee maneet convo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for pm
very funny
confuse geet making every thing n every efforts of maan go invain

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb Update
Maan been more matured in matters of love wants Geet to understand him
but it does seem difficult for her as she is innocent in these matters and when she
tells him that he is unromantic I'm sure she did not mean it in the romance love way
I think she actually meant that whatever she says Maan was suppose to accept and just be happy
as for her the relationship of lovers is still unknown so she will take it like good friends yet with some
moments when he perhaps holds her hands . while Maan feels that just by kissing her she freaked
out saying she will get pregnant than how can she call him unromantic for him he wants her to understand his feelings for her for him he just wants whatever he says she should be able to do
but he also feels that she does not trust him and there I feel she does trust him its just that
she herself has to be aware of her true feelings for him .
Maan's possessive way comes out when he sees her in shorts for her its a gift from her sister
and there is nothing wrong in wearing them as all his dates too wear short dresses but for him
she is different she is his he cannot allow other to see her bare legs and the difference of their thinking does collide which actually makes them a very unique couple .
here Geet is so unlike the girls he knows she does not throw herself on him
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow maan babu...gr8...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oye Hoye Zabardast Update 😃
Maan tamed her finally 😳 😆
Superb 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update 😉
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loved it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
awesome update! well written! Poor Maan! Geet drive him crazy! she is indeed confused!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it.
I wonder wat next?
will Geet's mom see dem kissing :p

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