R Vs W Sporthy's req OS - Pyar Ki Ye Ek Kahani udt ending on pg 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Happily ever after pad pad k bore hogaye hoge so for a change enjoy this one too😉

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Read it for the writer who has gone out of her way just to fulfil my demand

When she could obviously say no😊

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Happily ever after pad pad k bore hogaye hoge so for a change enjoy this one too😉

Concluding part...

Maan gets angry with his parents conditions and goes mad...

He gets back to the hospital and stays with Geet...

He couldn't see her suffering like that...his Geet who can't stay at place for a monet lays there without any motion, like a lifeless puppet...

Maan cries his heart out sitting beside her and thinking of what to do?

He tries to get help from his friends but they immediately ask about his parents,and some even think it's a big joke and Maan is trying to fool them, yes, MSK's life has suddenly turned into a big joke!!!!!

The doctors urge him to pay the money else it would be too late...

Maan is helpless and he decides to go back to his parents, in the end they won, money always wins, Maan could fight back for a little longer and even win this battle but then he will lose the battle of life, he will lose his Geet which is not what he wants...he is ready to sacrifice himself for Geet, but the problem is he has to sacrifice their life, their love, will Geet be happy with that?

No time to think about all that now, Maan has to first save her life and so he does...

After Maan promises his parents and gets the money he rushes to the hospital only to know that his Geet is brain dead and there is no use of the money now...

Maan feels guilty that he shouldn't have hesitated to take the money and it's all his fault that he is going to lose his love, his Geet...

When he looks at Geet, sleeping in the bed, maybe never to wake up, he is reminded of the beautiful times he spent with Geet...

Maan couldn't control himself and bursts out crying loud...

Maan: Geet, ye meinne kya kiya? Geet, mujhe chodke mat jaana, mein akhela ho jaoonga Geet, ab mere saath koi bhi nahi hai, aasie waqt mein tum mujhe chodke nahi jaa sakthi, Geet, tumne suna nahi meine kya kaha? Geeet, ye MSK ka order nahi hai, lekhin iss nalayak Maan ka request hai, please Geet, wapas aajao, mein promise kartha hoon ki ab mein hamesha tummare paas hi rahoonga, tumse kabhi dhoor nahi jaoonga

Adi and Pinky come...

Adi: Maan sir

Maan: Adi, mujhe Maan sir mat kaho

It reminds him of Geet...and also he is not the MD of KC anymore...infact he is no one now...

Pinky goes and sees Geet and also breaks down...:Geet aankhen kolo Geet, Geet mujhse baat karo Geet

Adi: Pinky, sambalo apne aapko, Geet ab kabhi humse baat nahi karegi

Ye baat sunke Maan bahut toot jaatha, he won't be able to hear her bak bak here after...

Nooo this can't be true...Geet aaise nahi kar sakthi...Geet is a fighter...she will come back no matter what...

Maan: Adi, aaise mat kaho, Geet phir se wapas aayegi aur humse baat bhi karegi, haina babaji?

Maan now has to turn to babaji...ye bhi toh Geet ne hi sikaya hai, when there is no hope and there is only darkness surrounding us then there is always God to retrun the light in our life...

The doctor just arrives and asks Maan's consent for organ donation...

Maan is furious for Geet is very much alive for him and the doctor is so selfish for his next money hunt...this whole medical business sucks, yes now it's a business not a service...

Maan syas that he won't allow anyone to touch his Geet, she is Maan ki Geet and every part of her belongs to him and his Geet is not for sale...

The doctor tries to convince Maan that a little boy is in need of liver and though his father is ready to pay double the money the donar asks they can't find a donar yet and Geet's liver could save him...

Maan doesn't understand anything now and asks the doctor to leave his Geet alone...if they can't save her life at least they let her die in peace...

The doctor leaves as Maan is upset and is not in a position to make the right choice...

Pinky kust then remembers Geet once supporting organ donation and how she would also like to enroll her name for that, but she never had the time to do that...

Maan is surprised but then realizes his mistake, now he is acting selfish, he can't let his Geet's life go meaningless and let her die so soon, and knowing Geet's kind heart and helping nature and her love for kids Maan knows even if Geet was conscious she would have donated her organs and helped people even in her death...

Maan signs the papers for the removal of life support and also for the organ donation...

After that day Maan starts drinking to forget Geet but her memories keep haunting him...

Maan recalls the days at KC...his first day at KC, how Geet was hiding behind Adi on that day and Maan thought that she is just another newbie nervous like him...

What caught his attention was her innocent eyes which he can never forget ...

Even after Maan proposed her and offered to marry her against his parent's wishes Geet was never ready to accept his proposal unless his parents are happy...

If only Geet had been a little selfish and agreed to marry Maan their life would have been different, Maan would have left his fortunes for Geet as he knew that nothing is more precious than Geet's true love and her pure heart...

How could a person be so nice and selfless? As they say this world is not for good souls and hence they return to their world from where they came...

Maan keeps thinking of Geet 24*7 and becomes an alcoholic, he stops going to KC for he hates going to that place without Geet...he starts drinking at home itself and drowning in his past...

The khurana's can't see their heir in so much pain and they got what they deserved, for what they did to Geet they are paying for their deed, they have to watch their son suffering and dying in front of their eyes and they couldn't do anything about that, Maan just wants them to feel his pain, to know what he went thru when he was left helpless and had to see his Geet die in front of his eyes...

He was there with Geet but still he couldn't save her, he had all the money but still he was a pauper, just like that the Khuranas have all the money but all they could do is to see their only son rot in hell...

Sr Khurana has lost interest in business, he is tired of chasing money, and for whom is he earning while his son doesn't need his money anymore, all Maan needs is peace of mind which can't be bought with money...

What's the use of that money which couldn't bring back Maan's happiness, his life, his Geet...

That money would have been precious had it been used to save Geet's life, but now all that wealth is worth nothing as Maan's soul also left along with Geet and only the soulless body of Maan is roaming the world...

Maan's parents try and save Maan by getting him married and now they are ready to accept any one that Maan likes, mind you, it is only like and not love for there is no love left in him now, and are also ready to transfer all the property to Maan's name...

But Maan is not willing to marry anyone, luckily for Maan,he had only promised not to marry Geet and he had not promised to marry anyone...he can't think of anyone but Geet in his life, for him she is his first and last love, Maan is drained of all the emotions as he is exuasted and there is nothing left in him, no josh to live, no josh to laugh or cry, he doesn't even wish to die, he has become addicted to his pain and sorrows that he has started lining with them forever, the moment the pain vanishes from his life he will die...it has become the reason for his survival, he wants to punish himself for letting Geet down, for letting her die while he is still alive and also had that chance to save her...

It's almost a year sice Geet left Maan and as her death anniversary nears Maan's condition worsens...he almost starts starving to death, he has decided that he has had enough and it's time to meet his Geet and peg her pardon, he hopes that she'll forgive him for he has endured all the pain for almost a year now and there is no point in living like this, Maan knows that his Geet would also be missing him as much as he misses her and is ready to go to her...

He knows his Geet is waiting for him...Geet your Maan is coming...he can't live without you...

Maan loses conscious and he is taken to the same hospital...

When Maan regains his conscious he opens his eyes only to see Geet standing there with a bunch of flowers...

Maan wonders what's Geet doing here? Maybe she has come to take him...

Maan: Geet, tum aagayi? Mujhe lene hi aayi haina? mujhe patha hai Geet tum zaroor aaogi, tum jaathi haina ki mein tummare bina nahi reh saktha? Issiliye tum aayi haina?

Geet smiles and gives him a bunch of papers...

Maan is confused and he takes a look at the...'it's a registeration form for organ donation...

So Geet wants Maan also to donate his organs and save more people...

Maan immediately signs them and is happy that he could at least save some lives if not his Geet's...

Then Geet smiles and says " thank you very much"

Maan wonders why she is thanking him, for the organ donation or for their reunion...

Maan keeps staring her..."Get well soon uncle"...uncle?

Maan comes out of his dreams...it's not Geet, it's a cute little boy and he is standing ther with a big smile...

Boy: thank you uncle for saving me

Maan is all the more confused...'

Then the Drs and his parents enter with a big cake...

The father of the boy takes out a cake that says happy first b'day Sonu...

His mother lights the candle and he blows it...

Maan doesn't know what's happening...is he dreaming or what?

Is it the sedatives working? Is he hallucinating?

That boy takes a piece of cake and gives it to Maan...

Boy: have it uncle, it's my first b'day

Maan is surprised... he must be 11 or 12

Boy: patha hai uncle this is my second life, my mother says I survived death on this day last year and was reborn , and u know who made this possible

Maan: God

Boy: no uncle it's you

He comes and hugs Maan

Maan feels happy after a long time...

Boy: Dr uncle said you helped me get the liver

Maan then remembers everything...

Maan: it's not me, it's this Dr uncle who saved you

Maan shows the Dr who was responsible for that...

Boy: but you gave me liver, you are my savior

Maan: so what are you studying?

Boy: I'm in 5^th grade

Maan: gud don't depend on anyone when you grow up, stand on your own legs

The khuranas who are also there feel very bad for what they have done with Maan's life...

Boy: uncle after U saved me I also got inspired by you and have started this small program to enroll people for organ donation, and I wanted you to start this, I wanted to start on my b'day, and I'm so happy to meet you

Maan: I'm also happy, and I'm so proud of you, you are doing a great job, keep it up

Maan gives a thumbs up...and that boy kissed Maan and leaves...

Maan starts thinking of that day when Geet left him...he is so upset...

Suddenly he hears Geet;s voice...

Geet: kya soch rahe ho?

Maan: Geet, meinne bahut badi galdhi kardhi

Geet: kitne bar sochoge? Bar bar sochke apne aapko kyun saza dethe ho Maan sir?

Maan: lekhin Geet meine hi tumme mara

Geet comes and shuts his mouth...: chup bilkul chup

Maan looks into her eyes...and is lost in her...

Geet: aasie kyum sochthe ho? aap ne kuch nahi kiya

Maan: haan meinne kuch nahi kiya, meinne tumme bachane ki kosish bhi nahi kiya

Geet: Maan, aaise hi soch soch ke pagal ho gaye ho aap

Maan: nahi Geet, pagal hotha toh mein sab kuch bhool jaatha, lekhin mein kuch bhi bhoolna nahi chahtha

Geet: Maan, aap kab tak aaise rahoge?

Maan: jab tak mein tummare paas nahi aatha

Geet: Maan, aapko apni zindagi ki keemat nahi patha

Maan: meri keemat? MSK ki keemat zero hai, warna mein tumme bacha letha

Geet: haan manthi hoon ki aapki keemat zero tha uss waqt, issiliye aap kuch nahi kar paye, lekhin aaj aap ki keemat kya hai?

Maan thinks and he knows he is not better than Zero even today...

Geet: mein bathathi hoon, zero

Maan: tum bhi mere mazak udathi ho Geet?

Geet: Maan, aap ne apni value ko change karne ki kabhi kosish ki?

Maan: nahi aur badalna bhi nahi chahtha

Geet: Maan aap ne uss bache lo dekha?

Maan: haan kitna samjdar aur pyara bacha hai

Geet: aap ne usse kuch bhi nahi seekha?

Maan: kya Geet?

Geet: jab aap kissi cheez ko kho jaathe tabhi aapko uski keemat patha chaltha, aaise hi uss bache ko jaan ki keemat patha chala aur usne sab ki jaan bachane ki kosish ki, jaanthe ho usne kya kaha?

Maan tries to recollect what he said...

Geet: Maan he is inspired by you, and look at you, aap ne apne aap ka kya haal banake rakha hai?

Maan: I don't want to live without you Geet

Geet: Maan, I totally hate this, don't blame me for your mistakes, I can't accept this

Maan: lekhin Geet

Geet: Maan, look at that boy, don't you think you should also be inspired by him

Maaa: what? mein bhi organ donation ko endorse karoon?

Geet: nahi Maan, thus boy's lucky to be rich but what about the rest of the people who are poor like me?

Maan corrects her...like us?

Geet: Maan aap chahe toh unke liye kuch kar sakthe

Maan: kaise Geet? mein toh apne aap ki help bhi nahi kar saktha'

Geet: phir se: don't give me excuses Maan, aap chahe toh kuch bhi kar sakthe, where there is a will there is a way

Maan: lekhin mein kya kar saktha Geet?

Geet: wahi toh socho, mein kal aap se milthi hoon, tab tak socho

Maan starts thinking...

He remains at the hospital for another week and when he is there he keeps thinking of what the Geet inside him,actually his conscience, wanted him to do...

He then meets the Dr who helped Sonu and asked what Maan could do to save so many innocent poor souls from the clutches of death, with whatever resources he has...

He also asks the Dr why the Drs have forgot their service and turned to business men, the Dr says it's not the Drs alone who are responsible for the sad state of the medical field in India but also the so called business men who want to make quick money using the peoples misfortunes and their desperate condition to survive at any cost to their advantage in the name of providing the best medical care...

Maan asks why the Drs who earn so much don't came forward to serve the needy once in a while and lend free services, but the Dr says though few Drs like him do wish to really help out they are helpless for they can only provide the service and the hospitals and equipments are in the hands of the money suckers...

Maan is discharged and he keeps doing his home work, collects all necessary detail and keeps thinking about what should he do...

Then again Geet comes, it's not Geet's ghost but his hallucination, she finds Maan too tired...

Geet: Maan

Maan: Geet

Geet: Maan aap bahut tak gaye ho, ek coffee piyo toh refresh ho jaoge

Maan: tum hi banake lao Geet

Geet: Maan aap hamesha mujhse har kaam karwathe ho, ab aap ko apne madat kuch karna padega

Maan then makes himself a coffee...

Maan: coffee?

Geet: mein abhi bhi coffee nahi pithi

Maan smiles...

Geet: ab bathao, kya karne wale ho?

Maan is still thinking...

Geet: Maan, aap abhi tak soch rahe ho?

Maan: Geet, mujhe sochne do

Geet: aap aaise hi sochthe rahoge ya phir kuch karoge bhi?

Maan: Geeet

Geet vanishes...Maan is upset when he relizes his loss and he is determined that he would help save innocent lives like Geet and Sonu

After 5 years...it's Geet's 5^th anniversary...

Maan is proud to have completed his dream project and is waiting for someone special...

Sonu arrives and Maan goes and welcomes him, he is so happy to be here and he runs and hugs Maan...

Maan takes him to the inauguration stage and asks him to cut the ribbon...

Sonu looks at the place for a moment and he cuts the ribbon and enters the building...

Maan follows him as they proudly walk into "Geet Memorial Medical Care Centre"

That Senior Dr who helped Sonu congrudulates Maan for his effort to make his dream a reality, a free hospital for the poor and needy, where unlike the GH( which treats them like second class citizens) they would be provided world class medical care with the latest technologies and the best Drs from around the country for free,though the service is free their lives would be valued and taken care of with all the respect and dignity every single life on this earth deserves...

After Maan decided what should be done, he takes charge of KC which was running into loses as Sr Khurana lost interest in earning after he himself ruined his son's life. Maan now understands the value of money and the necessity of it to survive. He first turns KC back to its winning track and launches his dream project, with every single success of KC Maan carefully diverts its resources into his dream project and here it is successfully finished and opened to public service on Geet's 5^th anniversary...

Maan thinks of that dreadful day 5 yrs back when his ill fate took his Geet away from him in front of his eyes while he could only stand there and witness everything as he was helpless and specially penniless...

Maan then went to Sr Khurana and told him that he wanted to take charge of KC and he wanted to earn money...he told his father that he has realized his mistake for taking money for granted and now he wanted to conquer it, Sr Khurna was shocked and he tells Maan that the mistake is only his and not Maan's and he warns Maan not to become a slave of Money like himself and lose the family like him...

Maan says that he is not going to become a slave but he is going to enslave the huge monster called money and make it work for Maan...for that he needed his father's guidance who knows the trick to make money...

Then Sr Khurana helps his son thinking that Maan wants to start a new life and yes, it's kind of a new lifw for Maan...

When Maan strats to run the business successfully he gets a lot of offers for business and also marriage, Sr khurana now requests Maan to get married and move on, Maan says that he has moved on but his destiny is not marriage but something else and tells about his dream project...

Sr Khurana is impressed at his son's visions and vows to fulfill this wish of Maan, maybe he could try and pay for the biggest mistake of his life this way...

That's how all happened and now Maan is back as MSK...the dashing MD of KC while his parents are more than happy taking care of "Geet Memorial Medical Care Centre" and they find solace in helping people save their loved ones though they couldn't save their son's beloved Geet...

Maan is sitting and looking at the hospital model on his table in KC with a little pride and immense satisfaction...

Geet enters his cabin as usual...Maan

Maan opens his eyes and looks at Geet, she is wearing the same green dress she was wearing when Maan first came to KC...

Maan: Geet, you look beautiful in this green dress

Geet: kyun kal ki red dress mein mein bahut bhuri lagthi thi? Aut phir uss beige saree mein? Jo aap mere liye lekhe aaye the, Maan aap bahut badal gaye ho, ab aap mujhse nahi mere dress se pyar karthe ho, haina? babaji, ye kabhi nahi sudhrenge

Maan shuts her mouth with his fingers...chup bilkul chup

Geet smiles and Maan keeps staring her...

Her image slowly fades away and Maan's smile also vanishes with her...

Maan keeps gazing the wall before him and is reminded of the numerous times he had pinned Geet aginst it and how she would become nervous with that touch of him, now also he could feel the warmth of her in this cabin walls and he has to be happy with her memories for the rest of his life, yes Maan Singh Khurana is all alone in this struggle called life without his soulmate Geet...this is what his fate is, a lonely life with no one to share his succees story and his deepest sorrows...MSK continues his work sitting like a ghost alone in his cabin with tears filling his eyes looking at the empty seat in front of him and the table with it's name board, Geet Handa, Secretary...