RiMa TS: Confidential Love... (complete) updtd 23/12

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Hiii Everyone!!!
After ages Am on IF that too with story... it feels good...
Again its special day today thats soul reason am here with this little scribble in hope of you all might enjoy reading it...
DEDICATED TO OUR BIRTHDAY GIRL... *AzraZaidi*

~*~CONFIDENTIAL LOVE~*~


Day 1
Like every eve of mumbai it was smilar... traffic running on peaks, everyone in hurry to get back their nest like those lovely birds in sky... but most unusual incident was destined to play in costa coffee shop of bandra becoz Miss Madhubala walked inside it bumping with a waitress and poor she not madhubala poor waitress got laid back on floor adorned in delicious costa...


Madhubala made a cute puppy face sliding her spects on nose and whispered "sorry!!" poor waitress stood up jerking herself and walked away in dismay... madhubala pouted clutching her colorful papers and walked further pointing out a lone corner table she settled and begun on her work...till late eve she worked no matter how disaster madhubala is but her work is complimentary..



One of waitress came to her informing "ma'am its 9:00 we need to close the shop..." madhubala looked at her wrist watch scolding herself "stupid me... am late... sorry!! am wrapping up just give me 2 mins..." waitress smiled fondly and left... madhubala was leaving cafe just when her eyes got caught by a white board which looked very creative... same waitress came by her side speaking



"Its our Confidential Love Board!!" words got bounced up over madhubala's head so waitress elaborated "our boss put this board to get customers review on our services but slowly it started to define love messages for each other but in confidential way coz no need to reveal identity just leave your msg on it..." hearing out everything madhubala felt it is quite amusing and creative too...



She was reading those lovely, funny msgs on board when waitress showed her marker asking. "you wanna try??" madhubala took it pleasantly and after thinking for a moment she wrote "LOL.. --->" an arrow for any reply from another person...


Day 2


"Good morning angels..." "good morning bossy!!!" "hows my costa doing??" one of waitress replied "very greatly!!" and others got busy in admiring their handsome hunk boss Mr. Rishab Kundra... owner of costa coffe chain all over India...after looking around RK walked in direction of Confidential Love Board his fav place where he can see his success those msgs from cutomers is life to him... Because he is alone in this world these cafe shops are his home and theses customers his family...


While reading msgs on board RK's eyes caught a msg "LOL" he smiled saying "whats so funny in my cafe??" before he can register his hand took marker and wrote before that arrow "whats so funny here?? --->" than he left...



At eve madhubala again walked in cafe shop but gracefully without any disaster... she followed same routine like yesterday getting busy in her work till late... lastly while leaving she remembered board and went to read new msgs... but to her surprise found reply before her msg... reading that reply she spoke "who is this dumb ass who knows only one fullform of LOL..." taking marker she wrote



"not funny... LOL can be taken for Lots Of Love also... --->" after writing she thought for a moment is there any need to specify myself and that too to an anonymous person... "umm.. reply is must here but" thinking so she rubbed previous msgs and spoke proudly "lets see if an anonymous is wise or not to see my reply..."



Day 3
Next day RK stood before board searching his reply but couldn't find any than his eyes caught same writing style of LOL he said to himself "ohoh LOL is for Lots Of Love i didnt knew!!" in reply he wrote. "oopps!! sorry my mistake!! --->"



"its kk no need for sorry dear!! --->" writing her reply madhubala again rubbed prev msgs...


Day 4


"thanks DEAR.. but why clearing prev msgs?? --->"


"dont copy my DEAR... and my wish to clear it... --->"


Day 5


"lols (laughing one) ok was just teasing you... introduce yourself... --->"


"huhh... why so its confidential board so no introduction... --->"


Day 6


"correction "confidential love board" fine atleast share something... how was your day?? --->"


"fine... my day was creative and busy as usual... --->"


Day 7


"creative means you might be a designer like fashion, interior field or something similar... right?? you didnt asked me but my day was cool... --->"



"very wise huhh ya an interior desiger and from your cool word you are a boy or man right?? --->"
Day 8

"hahaha... man you can say that... and from your profession and way of talking you are girl right?? btw thanks for compliment you are wise too... --->"



"thaks to you too! a girl? i can be a woman like an old married woman!! --->"


Day 9


"nahh you are a matured girl i can feel it !! --->"


"fine Mr. Wise you are right btw score should be equal so tell me about your profession?? --->"


Day 10

"if you will know my profession fun will be ruined it will reveal my identity... --->"


"ohh!! you are so much famous... ummm interesting... okay lets promise we will not try to find our identities because am loving this confidential chats... --->"


Day 11


"okay promise! but if need arise we will reveal it to each other by ownself... okay? --->"


"fine... wat more?? --->"


Day 12


"how you like here? i mean costa coffee shop? --->"


"ummm... its lovely and peaceful here... after stressful and busy day in office i love to work here on my own... --->"


Day 13


"good to here this... how about costa coffee?? --->"


"its yummy... btw why you are behind coffee shop and coffee thing?? --->"


Day 14


"nothing just having a conversation... okay you share or ask something?? --->"


"umm... atleast tell me where do you work? i will keep my promise... --->"


Day 15


"hahaha... all over India... --->"


"very funny Mr.wise chuck it... now you ask something... --->"



and this chain of confidential convo continued each next day... both anonymously got addicted to each other sharing their whole life but not their identity defining a Confidential Love Story!!!

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Do drop your lovely views guys..
And tell me this ending is perfetc or not if not will make it TS
Thanks and Love
SuRu
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AzraZaidi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww Suruuu ⭐️⭐️
You finally wrote something !!!👏👏
I know how lazy and busy we both r being but I am glad you wrotee !!!😊
Awesome and beautiful concept 👏
I can see a beautiful love story shapping up !!! 😃😳😳
Keep up the good work
Waiting for the part 2 😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Helllooo girls
Yesterday I was thinking about u girls

Hey girls where ur updates 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haha make it a ts its beautiful start loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome part!
Loved their convos over d confidential love board. It was quite amusing.
Plz do write a sequel...
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely concept lived the story waiting for next part
uma88 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww beautiful story from our suru after so long. I would be very happy if u drop more such works.
I agree that I miss on most of it updates. But never miss os, as I love them.

Coming to the story, I like this hide and seek love story. So nice, so different. I would not say this is not a proper ending, but my greed to read more on this make me request u to make it a ts.
harini06 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story,
nicely written
loved their conversation
manna43 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome. Loved it.make it ts n continue soon.
Nice to see u again with a nice story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOME !! 👍🏼 Loved reading it...😃

Plz continue this soon... and also ur other stories...

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