*Gives A Standing Ovation*
*bows down*😆
Seriously, this has to be your most heart touching and beautiful creation ever. I have never read something so soulful and profound. 👏
I really don't know how to respond to this?! I really don't know! I know I cry while writing such pieces, especially some lines. But you do know how amazing to know that your readers too cried?! That's an undescribable feeling. I really don't know how to take this! I am just too honored! ❤️
Her grieving by his thumb stone and how the people cherished and remembered the man he truly was. - A gentle soul.
The bedroom scene along with the wooden box she found, was really thoughtful. It made me so sad to think that this is the kind a ending they got. They really deserved so much more.
"He loved her silently, with his whole heart." - So true! I couldn't have said it better. Her happiness was as his own.
I absolutely love how you incorporated all the things they had come across. From the earring, flower, taveez, scarf, ring... And that letter.. Gosh! You're such an amazing writer with a beautiful mind.
All that up there! Specially the line in bold! Ah, we do know, what things we like yeah?! That has to be my favorite line too! 😆 And yes the box thing, I had serious discussion over it to have it or not. Would it sound like it doesn't fit, etc.
And also one more thing - I first thought to have this box part with HIM being a witness in real. I mean, I thought to not to make him go, but I changed it, you may call me Gul Part 2 😆😆
Prags, I usually good at finding words to describe how the given piece have touched me one way or another.. But I'm failing to express myself.. This is beyond anything.. It has already touched my eyes, my skin, body, my heart, my mind and soul.. And I'm still processing it..
This up there!! ^^ SIGH! What should I respond to it now?! ❤️ I think I can see your still processing it. There is something about how people respond, you just get to know what they are feeling you know? You getting? You just know..
But these words are world to me! I am not able to comprehend it all. Thank you so much love! 🤗
"He came towards her, bent down and laid a kiss on her forehead. "I love you Sanam, always""
You've left me in a heavy daze here.. It somehow reminded me of how we shouldn't take others for granted. That we should notice every little gesture people to around you.. Take every sign into your mind and consider into a bigger a meaning.. I'm blabbing, I know.. But that is what you've done, Prags. ❤️
Okay. This thing made me tear up a little. I don't know why I had this lump in my throat after reading this. This means so much! It has even deeper meaning than what you have conveyed..thank you so much!
Wonderful piece and I will take the step to save this on my laptop. Whenever I want to feel something, I shall read this and think...👏
Thank you, Love.. For writing such in depth picture of two pure lovers. Thank you for making me think about the choices we make. 🤗
Anupamaa
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