AzMa FS-The Charm (FINAL UPDATE & Note- pg 16..8 OCT) - Page 15

Originally posted by: -shimmer-

i must say this is definitely bestt part...so fantastic!! loved it...
Enjoyed reading this update 👏
Keep writing amy..

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Shreya...*hugs* Thank you for the appreciation. An extra hug too cuz if it weren't for your constant "When r u updating Amy?" , maybe I would never hav finished this 😃


Amy , when is the next os coming ??😉

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

Sorry for such a late reply Amy!

Better late than never!! 😃

I assumed his dreams portend some thing very sinister that is yet to come, instead it was his subconscious trying to convey something.

Ahaaan!! Didn't I tell you the plot was too simple for any evil stuff😆😆

You know what it reminds me of? Those movies where the hero/heroine wakes up with memory loss and are trying to recall bits and pieces of their old life. They see images that show them doing terrible things and they think the worst of themselves. But the more that memory unravels the more it changes the perspective. Similarly Azaad wakes up every time Mahiras clothes begin to blacken until the savvy baba told him his dreams could mean something else entirely and the truth will be revealed in the end. For once he sticks around till the very end and learns that Mahira is his salvation.😳 You're free.. You're free.. Patronus indeed!

Bilkul sahi!! It all depends on the perspective.Something had to really shake him to see what was there in front of his own eyes!!

And aww so cute! Mahira learning that he's worried and coming back early. I can imagine her thinking the mans losing his mind, i may as well go back and see whats wrong😆 She does waltz into his room so unabashedly No?.😳

He hasn't exactly stopped her before..and now toh she is really worried!! To her luck, he was sleeping and not just out of the shower!!😆😆

Savvy Gandalf Baba, you sly sly man.. Azaad never mentioned his name in his ramblings. So Babaji is also a supernatural being. I really loved how he got up and walked off telling Azaad he has already made up his mind, so there is no need to give any advice. Their banter was like one between a stubborn child and parent😆

I KNEW IT!!! I knew that u wud pick it up..Gandalf 😆😆 Made our baba bald to give desi tadka

You've left it open to interpretation on how he proceeds after his revelation.

Arent there many stories on how the hero confesses his love and all..What was always lacking (for me) was how the hero realizes he is in love. And here we are talking abt a man who is clearly battling his demons.It aint easy...it aint easy.

Lovely end to the fic Amy!

Thanks for your reviews and the encouragement!!