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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 14 D


Manik's POV..


What she said were like bombs for my ears..! She think of me so low and cheap..!


"Are you crazy? Tmhy lagta hai wo sab promises jo myny tum say kiya thy sab jhoot tha?"I shouted furiously and she shook her head.


"I am sorry..! Harshad..!"She tried to speak..


"Chup..!"I shouted..! "You think main tum say shadi nahi karoon ga right? Come..!"I said in a serious tone and started dragging her with me..! My buddies tried to stop me but I shoved all of them away..!


"I am sorry pleaseee...!"She shouted crying badly but no..! She doubted me..! I threw her in the car and I myself sat on the driving seat..! I started the car and I know my friends were surely following me..! Today I will clear all her doubts..!


"Manik..! I am so sorry please..!"She again shouted crying like a kid.


"Main pagal dikhta hoon tmhy haan? Sari raat main tmhy pagloon ki trha dhoond raha tha..! Tmhy lagta hai k main tmhy dhooka doon ga..!"I shouted as I too had tears in my eyes..


"I am sorrryyy..!"She screamed painfully but I shook my head. Soon I halted the car in front of a Mandir..! She look out and the look at me. I got down and dragged her down too..


"Come with me..!"I shouted as she tried to protest. My friends too came but nobody dared to interfere..! I dragged her with me inside the mandir and we saw a pandit..! It was very early morning..!


"Pandit ji humy shadi karni hai..!"I said to Pandit ji..! Fab4 and Nandini look at me in disbelief..!


"Beta..! Shadi aisy nahi hoti hai..!"Pandit ji said.


"Jaisy bhi hoti hai I don't care..! Mjy shadi karni hai..! Right now..!"I said gritting my teeth and Pandit nodded helplessly..


"Betiya tum is shadi kay liye razi ho?"Pandit ji asked Nandini as she was crying bitterly.


"Ap shadi shuru kijye..!"I shouted without waiting for Nandini's reply pandit got scared. He immediately covered Nandini's head with dupatta and started the rituals. Nandini was crying like hell her tears were hurting me but I know she needed to learn a lesson..! After mantras pandit ji asked us to stand up for pheras..! Nandini stumbled and I held her hand tightly. We took seven vows and I severe that I will fulfill all the vows..! Then it was time for vermilion and nuptial chain..! I filled her maang with the vermilion.


"Beta Magalsutra laye ho?"Pandit asked and suddenly I remembered that I had bought a gold butterfly pendant for Nandini from Dubai it was in my pocket..!



I opened the box of and tied that necklace in her neck..! She had her eyes closed and silent tears were rolling down her cheeks..!


"Ya vivah saphal hua..! Ab tum dono pati patni ho..!"Finally the pandit announce and I sighed..! I again grabbed Nandini's hand we sat in the car again..! We reached hotel and once again dragging her with me I reached our room and I almost threw her on the bed. Then without waiting for her to speak I came out of the room locking it behind me..!

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"Tu bilkul pagal hai..!"Max shouted.


"Haan..! Tou? Kya takleed hai tjy...!"I too yelled..!


"Wow Manik..! Tjy pata hai pagloon ki trha ro rahi the wo..! She was sorry..!"Cabir said worriedly.


"Exactly..! Harshad nay usy manipulate kiya tha..!"Tiger said in a serious tone..!


"Chup karo tum sab..!"I again yelled and sat on the couch..! I just wanted to go and hug Nandini tightly..! I know she was crying..! I thought that I will make our wedding memorable and what I did..! She was my wife now..! GOSH..! Damn..!


"Myny tou pehly he bola tha..! Larki do number hai..!"Suddenly Jack said and my anger raised to peak..! I grabbed his collar and punched him hard.


"Kaminy..! Tu us larki kay bary main bol raha hai jo hum sab ko sath lay kar I hai? Aray kya kya nahi kiya us nay..!"I shouted angrily and he started laughing. Other's also smiled and I became confused.


"Hmy tou sab dekh raha hai kay us nay kya kay kiya but shaid tu bhool raha hai..! Tu ishq karta hai us say..! Aur waisy bhi she is so young..! Wo kya kehty hain maati ki gurya hai..! Jis trha tu mold kary ga wo mold ho jye ge..! Agr us say choti si galti jisy main galti nahi manta ho bhi gai tou maaf kar day usy..!"Jack said smilingly and I too smiled this time. I hugged Jack and he hugged me back.


"Thank you guys..!"I said smilingly.


"Ja..! Chup karwa hmari behna ko aur usy yakeen dila kay tou us ka sath kabhi nahi chooray ga..!"Cabir said patting my shoulder and all nodded. I rushed to my room and opened the door only to find Nandini lying in the middle of the bed crumbled in a ball and she was crying. I sighed and walked towards her after locking the door. I sat beside her and without saying anything I gathered her in my arms and that was it for her she started crying loudly to which I patted her head kissed her hair..!


"I am sorry..! I love you..! I am sorry..!"She said between her sobs and I smiled.

"Shhh...! Nandini..! Bus..! Stop crying..!"I shushed her softly and she look at me.


"Ni..! Pehly promise kar kay naraz nahi ho..!"She said like a kid and I smiled.


"Haan nahi hoon naraz baby..!"I said smilingly and she without further delay fused her lips with me..! Our first kiss as husband wife..! I was touching her for the first time after our just happened marriage..! Suddenly the urge of claiming her as my wife craved in my heart..! I kissed her passionately,wildly,madly and she was just moaning helplessly..! I grabbed her both wrists and pinned her under him..! I entwined our hands and she clutched my hands tightly. I broke gasping for air and she sighed..! What should I do? Claim her or not? No..! Abhi nahi..! I will make that night special for her as I still have to fulfill my filmy proposal wala promise..! I pecked her forehead and she hugged me tightly..! Then we laid down cozily and she rested her head on my chest..!


"You liked the pendant?"I asked lovingly as she was staring at the pendant.


"I loved it..!"She said smilingly. "Thank you for me making me your wife..! And sorry for troubling you..! Bohat naughty hoon na main ap ko bohat tang karti hoon na?"She said sadly and I smiled.


"Haan..! Tang tou karti ho but I love it when you trouble me..! Haq hai tmhara..!"I said pulling her cheek and she too smiled.


"I love so much..!"She shouted excitedly.


"I love you too..!"I said smilingly and hugged her tightly..After an eventful day finally we were together and that too we were at peace..!

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Phewww...! SO LONGGG Update...! OMG..! Itna kuch ho gya awlaaa twist hai na? I am tou enjoying this story to the core..! Sachi..! Boht maza aa raha hai..! Ya twist Expect kiya tha? Ni na? I knew it..! Yar tum sab tou boht chalo ho bina pm kay he update prh laite ho tou kya bolty ho PM na kiya karoon ;) hahahaha..! Acha please itna long update kiya na myny tou ab please comments bhi long long karna..! Choto comment not accepted...! Thank you sooo much for all the love and support..! I love you all so so much..! And those who call me Di you are most welcome cuties jis naam say dil kary bulaoa..! I love it apna apna sa lagta hai..!

So I will try my to update it's Love tomorrow..! Dadi kya karny wali hai? Any guesses? Hmm..! And about sun sathiyaa tou babies I will try paka ab baar bari bool kar mjy sharminda na karo please...! Keep smiling..! Keep shining for your love ones..!

Lots of Love..

Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nd m first.. hahahahahaha... bye lemme read
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update... u write so owsm... finally the mystery of fab 5 resolved...!! Manan love is bliss nd u portray them sooo beautifully that u made me fall for them all over again... in simple words It's beyond perfection...!! Keep writing nd keep smiling... your all stories r so beautiful nd very dear 2 me...!! Stay blessed lots of love for u on such beautiful stories.
Nd yeah i would say option # 2. So plz update dheere dheere, but next is on u, u update that in which u r comfortable.
Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Liked Your warning more than the update hahaha...

Manik's father is so bad
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Posted: 9 years ago
Eee!!!!!!!!!
I am literally the first one to Like and also comment on Chapter 14 !!!! I am so happy !!!!!!!
I will give u a really really lamba comment ...but in the morning...abhi na mujhe update padhna hai or Manan dreams dekhne hai...;)
All the love for u !
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow wow n jus wow...sb drama ho gaya bt finally happy ending v mil gayi...so impulsive manik is bt jack kya bat h...yahan to cabir ka role jack kar raha h full to masti...ekdum bindass h yaar...super duper hit wala update...mmuuuaaahhh love you...manage kaise kar lete ho aise sab karna han...wow amazing work. ...really appreciated dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
fadu update ...suprb...kya shaddi krvai...I lyk maniks character so much ...seriously yrr kitna pyaar krta h ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh god yrrr... phele toh itnaaa bdaaa update.. mnzzz ittaaa bdaaa vala update... thnku thnku thnku.. loved itt.. dekhaa mera pyaar ufff bina pm k frst.. hehee... i knw m boasting.. cant help it yrrr... godd... manik poora ek din door.. dat scene naaa schi.. nd nandu awww.. she is such a sweetheart.. den dat milk n cereals.. heheee... aftr dat... dat jerk.. m gonna sue him.. a... huh.. mnzz hsmeshaa kch naa kch... n poora nandu.. chottu c baby... ndd omg monster manik... ek dum shaadi.. nd now dis one was least unexpected.. literally jahan hamari soch khatam hti h na tumhari shuru hti h.. luvd it to d core yrrr... it was hell awsm.. nd especially dat respect fr nandu by manik.. na hatts off... ndd yeah how can i forget dat fab 5 bonding.. schi... mzaaa aaa gya... ab chain se so paungi... heheheheh... bye mawara.. gud nite.. :)


samriti
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank you sooo much for the update!😳
This was such an emotional rollercoaster, everything was unpredictable with
harshad in the picture and I was so scared for my Nandu, but thank god nothing like that happened atleast!
MaNan is married😳🥳
Even though in the most unexpected way ever, but this was oh so amazing!
Toatl drama, masala and at last Manan!😳
And I really love this Fab 5, they look like real friends😆
Loved the update😳
Manik, better make it dreamy for his Nandu and all the readers here☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome one.
Just loved it.
U r an amazing writer I love your all stories.
Keep writing n may u go miles n achieve what you want.
Love u.

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