Story of manan(CHApter 2 page 1 updated on 11oct)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😳 hey everyone...😊...i m starting chotu si story of manan...but before that let me share something...i have read many stories over here ...mannn what phenomenal job have u all of done...liltlebit concise praise for all of them because they definitely should get these praises...let me start with my fav LIFE WITH NANDANI(words r less to describe ur thinking as well as writing skill .The way u portray manan character its commendable...they always love each other ,never fight each other.n my personal fav thr lip to lip kissie😛 love u yr ...),JUST MARRIED(here comes our sweetu couple...aww our shy nandu...to cute,how much manik care for each n everone specially our nandu ),DEVIL BRIDE(u showed each n evry cute n devil things in ths story n ur comic timming damn good...choli k piche kya hain...i still remember ths song ...hehe...tooo good),IMPULSIVE SOUL MATE...(exceptional job our chotu nandu having chotu manan in her tummy ...😳)...etc...so here i go with my story..hope so u all going to like it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so here I go with my story.😊
CHARACTER SKETCH:-
MANIK MALHOTRA:-😛 poor guy,geeky,book worm...😃hehe relax all of u ! he is neither geeky nor poor guy ..😉how the hell I can make manik geeky..u all will kill me...jokes a part...he is Rich brat! handsome !do I need to mention girls condition after seeing ths hansome hunk...he is arrogant but nice too...hmmm you ll come to know about his character once you start reading this story...😳
NANDANI MURTHY:-😃😆 she is nave..girl with purest heart...sweet...but know how to fight for her n for her friends..no doubt cute! attractive ,fragile girl anybody can fall for her..even girls also😃😉lolz...
OTHER CHARACTERS:-U LL COME TO KNOW ABOUT THEM SOON...JUST STAY TUNED
CABIR DHAWAN
RIYA MALHOTRA:-MANIK'S MOM
RONIT MALHOTA:-MANIK' DAD
chapter 1-page1
chapter2-page 2
Edited by mishru - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry guyz for late posting...actually I was busy with my xams...
CHAPTER 1-😊
moring mrs Malhotra voice came from back of seat whr mrs Malhotra was sitting n sipping coffee.
RIA(mrs Malhotra)- morning ronit
RONIT(mr Malhotra)- ria whr is our son? is he at home or not?
ria knows he is not at home but she cant say to ronit tht he is not at home as it will lead to problem btw him n thr son..
ronit-ria I m asking u something plz speak up.
but before ria can say anything horn of car grab the attention of ronit.He moves forward n watch towards door of house and gawk at manik who just enter into house with his own unique swag...n carefree attitude.
ronit-he nudges ria and spoke sarcastically"look who just come in" our own great son manik Malhotra👏
manik who just entered house without noticing his mom n dad stops near stairs after hearing ronit voice .he was sure something coming into his way by looking at his dad...
ronit-come here son...let's talk something.
manik- no dad I m not in mood I m too tired to talk ths tym.
ronit-awww our poor son is tired.He must have done lot of hardwork during night thts y he is tired.so howz ur night went in that swanky club.You must hve done lot of hardwork thr.
manik-dad just leave ths I m going.
ronit-(sarcastically)are my baby sit here na...tell me u y u came so early..means its just the start of morning...😡
manik(jokingly)-actually dad I was feeling sleepy thts why I came early 😃speaks showing his teeth
manik thr poor soul don't know he created problem for himself by speaking ths joky line..
This lines created havoc inside ronit.
ronit-tht's it manik.You daily come in morning,hardly goes to clg,.Its time u should realize the value of money which every one earn by doing hard work day n night but u waste it like water.Manik u don't have ur own identity people recongnize u because of me.your so called famous band..hn wht people call's u THE FAB5..so wht all r u planning to do CONCERTS overseas n earn money thts wht all u planning fr ur future seriously😡.Manik it's not like tht I hate ur friends or I m against ur music but u need to realize glamours life n fame does not stick to you throught ur life.once or twice u fails people will forget u beta...thn wht will u do.You all 5 r rich n can join ur father business but manik no ones know wht is future. Every business faces ups n down n its not esy to tackle with it .How can u tackle such situation when u urself behave like a kid not like a mature person.You seems to b only spoiled brat nthng else.You r the only heir of Malhotra's industry but u should know importance of money n hardwork
manik face chnges completely...he knows all ths coming on his way but he was not expecting so soon...😕
manik-fine I ll prove myself dad can I go now n tke nap.
manik was thinking he ll join Malhotra's industry fr sometime after sometime his dad will forget abt ths...😃
ronit-wait manik our conversation still not over whr u heading to...listen manik I hve 3 condition for u..
manik -now wht dad ?
ronit-keep your mouth shut fr sometime n listen to m clearfully.your clg life will end after 1 month as u will finish ur graduation ..
manik-so😡
ronit-so u have to do job after tht without helps of other's n ths is my 1st condition.
manik -what?dad r u gone crazy?finding a job for myself.dad I ll join Malhotra's industry wht's the prob in ths?
ronit-i thnk manik u hven't heard my so called speech carefully.you r not deaf I thnk so .
manik-dad plz enough of ths.
ronit-manik I m damn serious abt ths n u ria don't tke his side ths tym .Manik you hve to find job for urself without tking helps of others.
My 2nd conition...=u have to leave ths home.
manik-thts means I m going to live in farmhouse thts no prob fr me.😛
ronit-let m complete my sentence manik..u will neither going to stay in house nor in farmhouse.Find home fr ur self
manik was now hell angry😡
manik-dad u hven't hve enough by asking me to find job fr myself n now u are asking me to stay away from house..seriously dad...dad I thnk so ur mind is not working ths tym plz hve breakfast n keep calm urself.
ronit-manik...stay here
ria-ronit wht r u saying how he is going to live away frm us ...plz ronit
ronit-ria plz I respect u but stay out frm ths matter..
ria-but ronit...
ronit-ria plz...
ronit-manik just remember all my conditions..do use ur brain
manik-fine I ll live in cabir's or dhruv's house.
ronit-yes u can stay thr until u find job fr urself but within 1 month u hve find job fr urself n stay in ur home whch u hve to find fr urself not with thm.😳
manik-dad but😕...
ronit-he stops him by showing his hand n speaks my 3rd condition is ... u r not allowed to use any of ur cards and until n unless u gain repect fr urself n earn proper amount of money u cant stay here.😃you can come here as visitor only.
manik who was speechless by listening to his dad condition's nod his head n straightly went to his room without speaking further.
manik who cant live without his swanky lifestyle how he going to manage all this..want to know...stay tuned...😛
n han nandani I ll b introducing herprobably in next chap...
phew😉 ...long update...if u like it hit like button n do coment also...do avoid mistake...
Edited by mishru - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey everybody I m back...😛
chapter 2:-
MURTHY'S MANSION:-
small girl sleeping peacefully on her comfort bed without any worry...She lost her parents at very young age when she was 10.She missed her parents a lot.Who can live without parents but ths cute girl is blessed with chacha chichi who care take of her as thr own child with lot pamper n affection.She to love thm a lot but as people say na nobody can take place of parent's specially mother .MOTHER'S ARE EPITOME OF GOD .MOTHER'S ALWAYS REMAINS CLOSE TO THE HEART OF CHILDREN NO MATTER WHAT..(MOM LOVE U SO MUCH)...while sleeping she was dreaming of something which made her smile...Her sweet peaceful dream was broken by chachi's voice ..(nandu get up beta)...
nandani-chachi plz let me sleep more by putting cutely.
chichi-beta even I don't want to disturb ur sleep but u ll surely miss college today
nandani-chachi.😭
chachi-nandu beta these r last day's of ur collge only a month is left for ur collge to b over so enjoy these days beta.these days never come back...
nadani-chachi u r best I love u so much😛 u care for me a lot.
chachi-awww my sona bacha chalo get up and come down for breakfast.
nandani(by blowing kisses)-ohk chachi 😛
nandani quickly get up and went to bathroom to take bath.After having bath she dressed up beautifully and went down to have breakfast along with her sweet family which include (chachaa,chachi n her)
nandani-morning chachu😛
chacha-morning nandu have breakfast .nadu my sweet bcha u already becoming thin day by daY plz eat properly beta...SHANO JI... bring chola puri for our doll.
chachi-layi.murthy ji...
chichi-nadu beta u have to eat all of ths😉
nandani(by making puppy face)-but chichi ths is so much how I m going to eat ths much😃
chachu(cutely)-like thss nandu grab ths puri dab it in chola and eat like ths...so yummy
chachi n neice went awww by seing murthy ji..(so cute)
chachi-aww murthy ji don't make this type of cute face instead of gobbling food I will gobble u...
chachu-shano ji..u want to do romance hn..😛
nandani----aww so cute both of u...
chachi I hve eaten .I m getting late for college bye .love u both...
chachu-beta go properly hn...
bye chachu chichi...
chichi-murthy ji I think its time to tell nandu about our condition..
chachu-no shano ji..not yet let me handle ths my way...I need to sort out all my matter I don't want to create tension for her...she is so fragile she cant handle ths much of burden plz...
chichi-as u say murthy ji...I love u so much murthy ji so do nandu...let hope for best murthy ji...
MALHOTRA'S MANSION-
manik who was lying on bed cannot even think on his dream tht his life will tke ths turn.he was from one side to another not able to register properly wht just happened few hour ago..wht he is going to do after one month.what job he is going to do...he was thinkly suddenly his phone started ringing..
manik-y u calling me this time?
boy-calm angry hulk what happened?
manik-cabir plz spare me ths time I m not in a mood to tlk..
cabir-i am coming over there n without listening manik he cuts the phone..
manik was still lying on bed.n was in deep thought when suddenly cabir enter's with thud.
cabir-manik bro u still awake at ths hour of time...hmm strange something seriously happened with you manik now spill the bean from your mouth n tell me what actually happened?u look stress..
manik narrate what all happened with him couple of hour ago tp cabir as he cant keep secret with him..
cabir-r u kidding manik ...means ths will change ur life manik...no money nothing...
manik-cabir...bimbo u think I m joking...
cabir -acha ok listen manik if ths is realy serious u don't have much time u only have 1 month
uncle will not alow u do job in any of dad's company.we have to search job for u as soon as possible .Its not easy to find job in such short span of time...
manik--cabir not only job but home too
cabir- let first find job for u...chalo now get up we ll go to college otherwise uncle will again going to say tht u hardly go to college n winks.😉
manik-cabir.i ll kill u some day...
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so people...here's ur update...I m not good in writing stories.its just a thought came in mind tht y I decided to pen it down.if u like it thn do like it ohk...

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