sandhir ss:A nightInbachelor's Room(completed)

LalliSam thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
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a night in bachelor's room

It is short story based on sandhir..
how will a girl's life turned into...after spending a night in a bachelor's room...
. is it in a good way or badway...
what happened to her... to know more...stay tuned...




part 1:

Tapping her foot on the ground...impatiently...she is waiting for any sign of auto..

the black clouds made...the whole sky dark..even though its only 7.00 pm...

the wind..is blowing...loudly...with a gushing side...

she adjusted her scarf & hair...which is flying due to wind..

the roads r looking like..a curfew day...

y not its rainy season...every news channel's already alerted ..with the downpouring to day..

but to her bad luck..she stuck at her college..doing the pending assignment..on a holiday..

she didn't even..know the time till the watchmen asked her to leave..as t is college closing time..

she went to drink water.in the hallway,when the watchmen busy on the phone...

when she come out side...not even a single soul present there...

her college...is located far away from city...in the fields

.generally she like the peaceful, less polluted environment..but now she is hating it...

...finally god listened to her prayers ...after 20 minutes..a auto came.

she stopped it hoped inside in a swift moment..as the little rain droplets turned into a heavy rain..

she started wiping her hands,face with the scarf..

suddenly she realized that some one else also present beside her

she carefully...watched the person from corner of her guys...

he is a guy..well handsome guy..at the of 22 or 23

...

one side the distance towards the destination is decreasing by the auto...

on other side..the intensity of rain is increasing...

.she is just praying the god inside that"everything should be alright"

she recently read in news"a auto driver& a person who acted as a co-passenger raped a girl & killed her"

for her the guy beside her..looking decent..because

generally she will get more attention by the boys...in one minute they will start flirting with her..she is a beautiful girly..with a perfect curves

but this guy is not even tried to talk with her..

she liked the ignorance at the same time scared"what if he is a serial killer..who will be silent all the time with a devilishly handsome face "

her heart is beating loudly in her ribcage...


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LalliSam thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
AnightInBachelor'sRoom
part 2:


"bro,stop near Kalyan nagar"the guy said...his voice...ufff...its manly with little bit husky

her pov:

i sighed in relief...

he will get down before me...so no danger...

but i have to be alert...i observed the driver..he is looking like a priest more than driver..with all 'dhagas' in his hands..and hanuman locket around his neck..

even the auto filled with all the posters...of different gods..

...we r at the end of ram nagar...after this street..kalyan nagar will come..

but all of a sudden the wind flowing very wildly...along with heavy rain

the driver can't see the front...even though the wipers clearing the water on front glass of auto...

it become impossible to go further...

with in minutes auto surrounded in pond of water..as the man holes...overflowing...

the driver said he can't go further...as the weather is becoming worse...

he just left two of us..alone on the lonely street on a stormy night and went in reverse direction..to his house..to be precise...

...

what should i have to do now...

where should i go...my hostel is very far away from this area..

even my cell don't have any network...

i know..no vehicle will come..at this time...

so i started walking aimlessly on foot path...at the top which almost covered by shops digital name boards..

i can clearly..hear foot steps following me...

"wt if he will kill me...right now..or do something else...oh god plese save me..."plese"i started chanting...

after 10 minutes of walk..that road turned in another direction...

suddenly the guy called me

"excuse me miss..."

should i turn ..or just ignore him ?'i fidgeted with sides of my anarkali


Edited by LalliSam - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
a night in bachelor's room
part 3:


finally i turned...back...

"hmm...its very dark & raining heavily...i don't think any vehicle available at this hour...where will u go...can i help u?"he asked me in his husky tone..

i just stared at him..blankly..

his voice is sounding genuine...

but every cheater act as a good pesron..right? they manuplate u with sugar coated words...my mind screamed...

i don't have choice..i don't have any place to go right now..i am trapped..

we r half soaked in rain...

i just recovered from sickness...thats y i am absent to my practicles..ended up staying at college to complete them..

if i stay in this weather..definitely i have to reserve a bed in hospital...

"umm...it may feel awkward for u ..but u can stay at my place..only for this night..it as a shelter..."he said sloly

i started thinking..

i can't stand outside..in this chilled weather..already my body is giving up..

after a long pause..

"umm..o,k...just for shelter..nothing else...u see i got black belt in karate" i said in a commanding voice

(my insides screaming..lier)

i heard chuckle...and some muttering

...

we reached his flat..

he asked me to wait ..outside for 2 minutes...

...

5 minutes passed..still he didn't turned up...

what is he doing inside...is he planning to kill me or planning to do something else...

my body is shivering from fear...

the door is ajar..so i peaked in side..taking steps like a cat..

i gasped at the sight...in front of me...

...

there r men...to be precise..bachelor's sleeping here and there..

someone's head hanging from sofa,other slept putting his legs on other guy's stomach..

beer bottles,food items,chips.spread around them...even the T.V.is playing midnight masala(hot) songs

"they all drank too much..i am a girl...how will protect myself..if they attack on me..."

"oh..god..y i am trapped here"


LalliSam thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
a night in bachelor's room

part 4:

my co passenger came from one door..started dragging one of the guy...in to a small room...

the drunken guy is heavy..he is mumbling..in sleep

"rekha...darling...i love u..come to me..plz...don't go behind that suman..rekha...rekha...

-----------

it is becoming hard for him to get up every one..i felt pity for him...he is moving them inside...to give a space to me..

"can i help u?" i asked him..

"umm...no...o,k" he said..

we dragged him inside...

the room is totally messy...the walls filled with cricketers and heroins photos...

we landed him on the bed...

suddenly the guy caught my hand.

my breath caught in the throat...and mumbling ":rekha..my darling"

i jerked his hand...

we came back...into hall...

he took other guys inside the room.. alone...

i landed on the sofa..keeping my bag aside...it is totally wet..i placed all things on the small table..to dry them

actually it a single room(like big hall..)they separated it into..a small bed room with cardboards as wall and a small kitchen one corner..

and washroom...where is that?

water r dripping from my dress...i am getting cold...

he came..in to hall ..he is changed into night dress...

his perfect abs...r easily visible..from the tight t-shirt..

he asked me to "get change into other clothes...otherwise..u will cold"

i just glared at him.

"i am not going to change in to u r cloths..mr...i am better like this..its not a freaking movie..ts real life...thanks for ur concern"

"i am just..."

i cut him off...

"i know..just give me a towel...fresh one..not yours" i told him

he handed me.a new towel...

"umm..washroom?" i said slowly..

"outside.." he showed the direction..

before i close the door..he shouted.."wait,"the door will get jammed "

i groned.loudly..

"fainally i entered...the wash room"

"what the..."i shouted...top of my loungs looking at the messy surroundings..


LalliSam thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
a night in bachelor's room
part 5:


"what the..."she shouted looking inside of washroom..

in that room...models/celebrity girls posters...r pasted..

the problem...is they r either in bikinis or short dresses...almost revealing their assets..

she is welcomed by..the inner ware's of boys..on a rope..

other side..shaving kit,men's hair gels,..and condom's...etc

and not the least magazines(u can understood..wt type of magazines they r)..on the wash basin...

the washroom is very dirty...like public toilet's

she quickly fresh up..wiped her body..and squeezed her dress..to remove water...and again wher that same dress..

she came inside...the clock is showing the time 10 p.m.

he cleaned the hall ..removed the mess of beer bottles..,food packets etc..

she is very hungry...how can she ask a stranger...she want food..

she is still afraid..after watching 'condom 'packets..there..

she so want to trust him..that he is helping her with good intentions...

but she is afraid of betrayal...

"umm did u have ur dinner" he asked after..few seconds of silence..

she nodded her head sideways..answering "no"

"same here...actually they ate whole food...can u wait for sometime..i will prepare something"he said & went to kitchen

she just sat there...observing the things in hall...

every thing in hall..showing"bachelor's stamp" on it...in a messy way..

but one corner is neat..there r some books in a small rack...

cushions placed.near window..like a bed with a bed lamp..

"rats r running inside her stomach..she didn't take her lunch...in afternoon

they sat on the floor..and started eating...

they ate in silence...

now the question is where she should sleep...

the separate room filled with..drunkerd bachelors..

even he doesn't have place there...

the storm...is increasing outside..

the sky roaring with thunders and lightening..which she afraid the most..in her life along with darkness.

suddenly the power is gone..


Edited by LalliSam - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Superb SS
Sanyu stuck in the rain
now she has to trust that stranger

haha bachelor's room, boys will be boys
no neatness and all are behosh bewde

update soon
LalliSam thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
a night In bachelor's room
part 6:


and suddenly power gone...

my heart thumping loudly in my rib cage...

is it gone because of weather..or any planning of him..

my mind screamed...it is side effect of watching "gumrah-seasons" regularly...

he put his torch light on...

"i will bring candle...u sit here for one minute..don't worry" he said looking at my pale sweating face,,and gone..

i sat alone in the sofa in darkness...

he came back with candle light...placed it on a stand

again silence engulfed us...

"umm..r u comfortable sleeping on the floor..u see there is no place.."he said

"o,k" i said to him

he gave me...blanket & asked me to sleep on the corner..bed

he started preparing his bed near sofa..in the middle of hall..far away from me..

"i can't sleep alone..in this dangerous weather..especially in darkness..."

shut up..y r u telling u r weakness..what if he will take advantage of it..my innerself shouted on me

"excuse me..can u move..u r bed a little this side.".vo i am afraid to sleep alone in darkness"i said...praying inside..that he don't took my words.in other way

...

he silently...moved his bed.a little near to mine..

i closed my eyes trying to sleep..

various thoughts crossing in mind...

especially all movie sequences...where a girl-boy struck in a room..on a rainy day...

suddenly i felt a moment...i know..he is coming near to me...

but y?..i thought he is good...y didn't he sleep..in his place..

did he planned to do something..after i slept?

plz..go away..i started trusting u a little...plz don't break my little hope...

my palms..r sweating...i clenched my fiests...tightly

he came very close..near me...

i snuggled...more into the comforter..

my eyes r ready to trickle down tears...

...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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it's awesome
read all parts in one go!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9

a night in bachelor'sroom


part 7:

her pov:

my eyes r ready to trickle down..

he came very close..i shut my eyes very tightly..

...

after few seconds..i opened them only to to see his retreating figure...

i understood that he came near my bed to took a book ..in the book's rack..

he opened his book..and started reading it(novel may be) in the light of torch in his cell

and i noticed that candle placed near..me..along with a water bottle..

my inside slapped me hard..for..my crazy thinking...

my respect for him..increased a bit..

i stared at his handsome face..in that light..absorbing his beautiful features..

he is looking like a greek-god

instantly my lips curved into a smile..

suddenly he turned towards me..

i closed my eyes...pretending to be in deep sleep..

after few minutes my eye lids. gave up..even though my mind giving me warning bells..

...

my sleep broke...with a breaking sound

my eyes snapped open..

i saw a shadow figure..walking in the hall..

i looked at him..he is sleeping...

then who is it.?

i clutched the bed sheet tightly...i want to scream..but my voice not coming out...in fear

that figure..stopped near sofa ..it started mumbling..something..

it is coming close to..him..

i don't know..what to do...

i took a book from the rack..which is a hand distance from me..

i throw..the book on his slleeping frame..it him hard..he winced in pain

he woke up..shouting "who the hell..."

he looked at the book..rubbing his eyes...and at me...

"what happened?" he asked me...controlling his anger...

"vo..vo...mine kisiko dekha hai..tumhare piche chalthe huye..."

(hm..i just saw someone...walking near u)

he opened his torch light..searching for..that someone..flashing it in all directions..

...

"rehu...wake up...y r u here" he said to his friend. in a irritated who slept on the ..sofa...throwing his legs..almost in the air

"umm..sone dona"that boy said

"get up..go and sleep in the room..any way y r wandering outside..in dark"..'he said loudly

"vo..i felt thristy..so i am searching..water..ronu..baby"he said

"u sit here..i will bring"he said and left..towards kitchen

...

after few seconds...he came...with a glass

"now...drink..it..and go to sleep "he said

"eww..it is not water..."that guy make a face..

"u have..hangover..drink it..it's lemando"he said

the guy drank in one go..

"aww..ronu baby...u care for...me..thats y you are best in everything..in studies..in life..perfect.."the other guy said pulling his cheeks

"stop that"he said...

"aww...baby is angry...i luv u"the guy kissed me on cheek..and ran towards..the room.and closed it before..he can catch..the guy..

he muttered under his breath"i will kill u..rehan bajaj"

i heard laugher...from the room...

...the whole scene..looked funny to me..the other guy acted like a gay..just to make him angry..

i started laughing loudly...

he glared at me...his cheeks..turn red..due to embarasment

i stopped laughing...abruptly...

"sorry" i said...still controlling my laugh but failed miserably

i noticed..his lips also curved into a smile...

"gud night"he said...and turned other side

"u too" i said..and slept...

Edited by LalliSam - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
a night in bachelor's room
part 8:



again her sleep broke..due to heavy sounds of storm...

the thunders and lightening extra with darkness and unknown place..

to increase her fear..she got a nightmare...that all the drunkards in the room...attacked on her..she become helpless..and lost the bottle..

(sometimes..too much thinking about...something..and u r worst fears..comes as dreams)

she is shivering in fear...she started sobbing loudly still under the effect of nightmare

the guy..woke up...due to her sobbing sounds..

he tried to come close to her...

but when he took one step.to wards her...

.she is hiding her self more into the corner...

...he just watched her...for sometime..while she is crying...

after few seconds..

he came close to her,,,raising his hand to touch her..

she hide her self more into the wall...

"hey girl...listen..i won't touch u...just stop crying..take this..." he placed something near her..

she looked at him and at the' thing'

she took it..hesitatingly...its Lord hanuman's ring

she kept it close to her heart...murmered something..like prayers..

"drink the water..and put the ring by u r side & sleep..u didn't get any nightmares..."he said in concerned tone...

she obeyed his words...perfectly

she slept..putting the ring on her finger..peacefully without any distrubance this time

...

her pov:

"hey girl..wake up..."she heard some manly voice...

"ishu..sone do yaar"she said nuzzled more into the blankets

(ishu..let me sleep..)

"hello girl..wake up"the voice said loudly...this time..

she want to kill ishu for distrubing her beauty sleep..like always..

but wait..y is her voice..changed like man?

again some one called her..

she immediately opened her eyes...

to see black orbs staring at her..

there stood a guy..a handsome guy...his voice..so husky...so sexy..

wow..his messy hair..which falling on his eyes.

she stared at the pink lips...which r inviting..hers...like a magnet..they r moving..but she become deaf...

is she dreaming about a greek god...

her trance broke..when someone snapping his eyes infront of her..

she remembered ..everything...from last night...

"hello miss..did u hav a habit to sleep with open eyes like fish?" he said

"how dare u to comment on me"..i said

i know i am ogling about him..but i can't admit it to him..right?

so i started acting all angry..so that he can't caught my intentions..

we started fighting...

still he is looking edible..in angry look..my mind screamed

"keep..u r fight for another time..now u have to leave"he said

"so u r saying me..indirectly..get out" i said...

my inside..glared at me for the fight...stupid girl..he is angry on u now...

"actually..my owner aunty is very strict..if she see u here...she will create a mess..so u hav to leave..before anyone can see u here" he said

"umm o,k" i nodded

my inside..smiled like a half-moon...becoz..he didn't throw me out...in angry

i started placing my things..inside my hand bag..all set to go..

"umm..thank u soo much for last night..i can't forget u r favour...u allowed me to stay here..."i said to him and left from there..

i am totally disappionted..but i don't know y...
Edited by LalliSam - 9 years ago

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