Manan SS.... Pyaar ka imtehan Part 30 on pg 136 updated .. 1st Nov - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear...
Thanks for the PM's for all d part...
Sorry wasn't able to commemt before because of my Xams...
Just read your SS today...
Hayeee... Tumne yoh mere manik ko wapas le aayaa...
Thnkew soo mch...
U penned it really beautifully...
It does not seems to be your first time...
I liked very very much...
Kaash show mein bhi aisa hi kch jo jaye...
Continue soon...
Update Asap...


LOADS OF LOVE,
GARIMA
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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Friends here is the next update . Plz give me your reviews and comments about this.sorry in advance for mistakes.

Waiting for your response


Part 6

Nandini saw tears in Manik eyes so she controlled herself and held his hand and then again saidwith determined voice: but Manik tum na... tum tension nahi lo... main ne ... main ne abhi tak haar nahi mani... Main Fab 5 ko phir se eik kar k rahon gi.aur ab to tum bhi ho na merey sath. Hai na?

Manik noded in yes

Nandini : bus Cabir ka kuch pata chal jae.

On hearing this Mr Malhotra said: Don't worry Kids: Cabir bhi kuch dino me a Jae ga.

Manik and nandini both gave eachother surprised look and Manik said in surprised voice : Dad


...

Mr Malhotra assured Manik with his eyes and said : Yes Cabir ! Cabir zinda hai.

Manik: Dad app ko kaise pata

Mr Malhotra ( with a smile) : kyok wo jahan hai os ka pata sirf mujhe hai.

Manik and nandini at once said : Kahan hai wo... Cabir thek to hai na uncle.

Mr Malhotra again with smile: Relax kids ! Ab sub kuch thek hai.

Manik : Dad plz batao na ... Is Cabir fine? Kahan hai wo? App ko kaise pata k wo kahan hai?

Mr Malhotra: Manik filhal mujhe commissioner k pass jana he meeting k liye . yeh detail wapis a k bataon ga... Aur tumhari satisfaction k liye filhal itna hi... K Cabir jahan bhi hai safe hai aur kuch time tak wapis a jae ga. Itna trust to hai na apney Dad ki baton pe.

Manik at once stand from his seat and hugged his Dad and said: Dad app aise kyo bol rahe ho... U know na u means a world to me . I trust u dad.

Mr Malhotra threaded his hair and said : And Nandini Beta! Thanks for all what you did for Manik and if u don't mind can u give me your phone for that recording.

Nandini nodded on this and gave him her phone .ok then mein abhi chalta hoon aur haan apni baton mein Khana khana mat bhool jana. Kyok jahan tak main nandini ko samjah paya hoon is ne kal se tension ki wajha se kuch nahi kahaya hoga. So keep this thing in mind aur tumhe to khane k baad medicine bhi leni hai na.

After this Mr Malhotra leave from their and only our manan left .

Manik hold her hand and made his way towards his room.( na na... gandi baat... esa kuch nahi sochna abhi to manan emotions k pool me dobe hoe haan so filhal kuch nahi hoga) and made her sit on bed and he also sat beside heron other side.She put her head on his shoulder and asked.

Nandini: Manik tum... tum uncle k sath kaise?

Manik : Nandini tumhe yaad hai... Is accident se pahle jab hum dono ne os Harshad aur Nyonika ko aik sath room me dekha tha... (Takes a deep breath)... Main ne os time hi decide kar liya tha k main Dad k pass chala jaon ga. Os raat main ne Dad ko phone bhi kiya tha yeh batane k liye but Nyonika k bare me baat nahi hoe bus unhe sirf yeh bataya k main un k pass a raha hoon.

I don't exactly know Main Dad k sath kaise ... kyok accident k baad meri Dad se zyada is topic pe baat nahi hoe but jab mujhe hosh aya to os waqt Dad mere sath the. Dad ne hi mujhe bataya that I was in coma for 1 month and when I regain my sense I was not able to move a bit at that time... Tumhe pata hai jaise hi mujhe hosh aya na to sub se pahle main tumhe apney sath dekhna chahta tha.lykin har baar ki tarhan is dafa bhi meri kismat ne mera sath nahi diya...I was very worried for you all kyok Nyonika cheap games ki Master hai and I know meri absence me os ne tum logon ko bht tang kiya hoga. ...( in very emotional voice) Mujhe... mujhe tum tak pohanchne k liye itnaaa time lag gya na.

Nandini did'nt like this emotional manik so try to change his mood : She hugged him from shoulder and said : But Manik acha hoa na itne time me hamein Harshad and Nyonika mam ki real intensions pata chal gayi.

Nandini now to light this emotional atmosphere said with cute pouty face:Wese aik baat hai Mr Monster Manik Malhotra ... itni toot phoot k baad bhi kya hero wali entry mari.

Manik on listening this gave a beautiful smile to her and said: Wo kya hai na Apni life ki heroien ko bachane k liye hero ki entry esi hi hoti hai and wink.


Nandini smile on this.


Manik after some silence: tumhe pata hai jab Main os roof pe pohancha aur os Harshad ko tumhe Dhaka dete hoe dekha( he closed his eyes tightly as he don't want to remember that moment) U know 1 pal k liye mujhe laga k main tumhe dobara pa k bhi kho doon ga.

I don't even want to remember that moment. While saying this He also side hugged her.

After some time Nandini sit straight and then cupped his face and gave him a kiss on his forehead .She then placed her forehead on his forehead and with closed eyes said


Manik some time na we have to go through the Hard Times to realize how strong we are.So I think hamare liye yeh wohi time tha ... Jo ab pass ho gya hai. And see we are Together again.Yeh Hamare Pyar ka imtehaan tha shayed ... Aur dekho is imtehan ko par kar k hum dono phir se aik sath haan.

Nandini pass a sweet smile to him and he replied with same.

Mila hoon ab jo tum se
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Tujhe hai paaya Rab se,
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Har pal haseen sa huaa hai
Saanson ko tune chhuaa hai
Badhi tujhse nazdeekiyaan
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. mm..

Mila hoon ab jo tum se
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. mm..

Jab se juda tujhse jiya
Chain o qaraar dil ko mila (x2)

Jab bhi rahoon sang tere
Bhoolun har gham shiqwa gila
Tere ishq ka hi nasha hai
Meri rooh tak mein basaa hai
Tune aankhon se jo chhuaa
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. mm..

Mila hoon ab jo tum se
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.
.



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Jane se pahle : plz tell me your point of view regarding Fab 3's behavior towards "The group Fab 5 " . like jaise mukti ka fab5 or manik ka naam lene se hi over react karna. Is it right?

plz plz plz tell me coz next update is related to this so mujhe app sub ka point of view chaheye.


Next


Thanks for your Time


love you all



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Edited by cute-aly - 6 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
update! update! update!!
amazing yaar. the talk, tine emotional ho gaye Mr. Malhotra ke same hi.. but it was very sweet :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar that was superb...
Emotional talk..
But i want some action...
Bada maza aayega..
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Want an update !! Aur abhi bhi kuch suspense bacha hai!! Plz update soon Aur raaz kholo !!per the story is interesting !!! Keep updating !! Keep entertaining!! 😊👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...
The update was blissfull...
Really loved it...
N yeah plsss dont show that mukti's reaction in the show in your ss...
Its a request...
N update next asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved all bits of it...
glad manan found they peace with each other...
i think mukti will be the first on to agree to become FAB5 again...alya and dhruv will probably blame themselves for everything thinking that they don't deserve the friendship...hope they clear all the misunderstanding and become the old FAB5 minus the bullying...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update
don't show mukti reactions
like in the show
cont soon

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