SS: || Karun ya na Karun?|| Pt9 Pg54 27/09 - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally an update from one of the devils😡😡...
obviously this one devil has became lazy...


about update...superb it was...eeks i am so excited for confusions...

chotttiii teri bari...
tune likh liya na...to ab ubdate de...😆

p.s. sushiii love😭
gayu jtjb2😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

Finally an update from one of the devils😡😡...

obviously this one devil has became lazy...


about update...superb it was...eeks i am so excited for confusions...

chotttiii teri bari...
tune likh liya na...to ab ubdate de...😆

p.s. sushiii love😭
gayu jtjb2😭


My demand is still the same kitty no comment matlab no jaldi update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu


My demand is still the same kitty no comment matlab no jaldi update 😉

ohhh teri...uske liye padhna padega...i read 4th part...baki padhna h...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

ohhh teri...uske liye padhna padega...i read 4th part...baki padhna h...


Its ok diii i was just joking mai kar dungi update kal tak 😳
Us ke liye comment karne ki zaroorath nahi 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rk654


but you are learning very slow re😉..
like langdon ki race tere liye bouncer ho gayi...😆...
langde kabhi end post nahi pahuchte.to tumhara no.kaha hai socho..(dream wali story)😛
apni weak point to maine khudi tease karne ke liya...taki maine logo zayda tease kar saku😉..
teri to 1 bulet wali pistol humari tomachine gunhai..😆



Manliya ki langdo ki race mai bhi last hum but app ka kya ake kya safty lock mai rakwali safty ke liye😉it is gaya di who is not updating😕how can i update without her update😉aur yaha bhi it is her turn to update😆so scold her mr beep ya kahu mr bean😉

meri Akaal to thikkne me hai...😉..dream ka last update maine gaya ka read kia tha ..tum ne kab update kiya😕...you also confused na see ur emoji😆...nai scho nai asha tabhi hume hui use NirAsha😆...it's ur job..akhir o tumhari co writer hai😉


U guys r still fighting... U people can write a book on same
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahan.. So shagun is not after Raman... Shukar hai
N ab they will dance and Ishita will misunderstand every thing :(... Asha change kar Dena

Sorry Shaktiman--- oye this is my favourite dialogue... Me and my cousin still uses the same never say simple sorry to each other
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Ahan.. So shagun is not after Raman... Shukar hai
N ab they will dance and Ishita will misunderstand every thing :(... Asha change kar Dena

Sorry Shaktiman--- oye this is my favourite dialogue... Me and my cousin still uses the same never say simple sorry to each other


I too uses the same...
Once I even said 'sorry shaktiman' to my teacher 😆
And the teacher gave me another name...that's cute...but...can't tell you...
Because you're a teacher
😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh shit..
Abey yaar I m gonna kill Abhi for that idea..
Gaya ko bhi yaheen end krna tha..
Plzzz update next Part soon
Can't wait to know what will happen next..
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anum_says

Oh shit..

Abey yaar I m gonna kill Abhi for that idea..
Gaya ko bhi yaheen end krna tha..
Plzzz update next Part soon
Can't wait to know what will happen next..
Update soon


Arey... I made it come to this point nah...now let's see how Asha twists it...
She won't do what we ask/say.
so we better keep mum and wait for her update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello friends 😉
Sooo after the super late update this is the next bomb 😉

Warning - weak soles read on ur own risk 😉

Enjoy reading

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Part 9

Challenge accepted !!!!!

Dheck le ishu u might not only fail in the challenge but also break ur heart said miku
( see of )

That we will see and she smiled an evil smile at that

And with that they walked in to the hall as they walked in the hall all eyes were only on ishu not just because she was the most beautyfull girl in the room but also because of the outfit she wore she was the only one in treditional whereas all were in western

Raman and shagun were on the dance area by the time ishu entered but as she stepped it it was as if time freezed for raman he could not see any thing but her he could not think anything but her HELL !!!!!! He could just not take his eyes off her she was looking beautifull in that madrasi dress he instently left shaguns hand and stood numb that is when he saw her aproching him he was exited shocked happy and what not did she remember him that he is pooh and that is y she is coming to his side ???? Many questions were running in his mind

She was almost there and as she came near him he lifted his hand as if to greet her but she just walked past him

Raman -( st) WHAT THE F**K did she just walk past me

and i turned to the direction in which she was walking and i spotted her carelessly standing near the drink section

And that is when that ASHOK walked towards her they were talking casually chatting may but then she laughtd nad he put his hand around her and started laughing as well my blood boiled on seeing this i just wanted to go and hit that good for nothing fellow blue and black i grinned my teeth and walked towards them

Raman to ishu - hey ishu would u like to have a dance with me

Ishu - ( looking into his eyes ) hmm actually no i would not like having anything with u

Ishu to ashok - come lets dance

Ashok - sure darling he said after giving a wink to raman

At the same time shagun came and dragged raman along with her to the dance floor

The song ishq wala love was playing in the baground

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love


And ishu and ashock were moving to the beats of the music smiling and laughing at each other

Shagun was getting hell angry jelous and frustrated and ishu with ashok was like fuel to fire as the whole clg knew how beautyfull she was

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love


And the couples started switching the partners now ishu was dancing with some random boy ashok with shagun and raman with some random girl

Ishu looked at ashok and did a thumbs up signal and ashok winked at her and mouthed a ur the best and she chucked at that all this was seen by a pair of eyes that never left ishus it was raman

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein mal ke dekhi hai maine subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love
Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love


And when the lyrics played along ishu turned and looked at raman and they had a eyelock very intence

Bada ye dil nadaan tha, par aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Jo khone ka tha dar tujhe pata nahi kyu zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua

And with that they switched there partners again now ishu was with raman

Kyon na aise hota
Jo milte tum ho jaate gum saath mere
Hote hote hoga samjhaye hum
Tham jaa aye tham O dil mere
Toota jaata jaata taara jab gira
Zara zyada zyada maangu dil tera
Kabhi zyada zyada maane n


the time became still everything stopped for them it was like every thing around vanished exept eachother and that is when ishu freed herself from raman and left the dance floor

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua

And raman folloewd her to the corner of the hall and pulled her aside she dint even realise when she was caged in between him and the cold wall

He was just looking at her intensely as if finding answeres to his unanswered questions she looked in to his eyes and spoke

Kya hua mr bhalla itne chup chup se kyu hai kuch khena tha kya

( what happen mr bhalla y r u sooo silent wanted to tell something )

Or should i ask the same question to pooh tho kya vo muje jawab dega

( then will he answer me )

Raman -( shocked ) thum ko patha tha

( u knew u )

And she smiled at that
And he was tooo exited and just hugged her

And immediatelly broke the hug and asked fir ashock ke sath dance

( then dance with ashok )

Asked innocently

She pointed towards the stage where ashok was proposing shagun and raman was confused

Ishu - ashok ne thumari abhi aur shagun ka pura plan sunliya tha and he was anyways going to propose her today but thought of playing a bit with u people before he did that

( ashok heard ur plan with shagun and abhi )

Raman was juat tooo exited and lifted her up and spinned her around in air and put her down and said

I LOVE U !!!! I JUST LOVE U TO DEATH

And even before she could respond he kissed her

Ishu was lost in the kiss and dint realise when she started responding to him his hand were clutching her head and her hands were around him

But suddenly ...

SLAP*****

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I found the best place to stop dint i 😉

Dont forget to like and comment 😉

Over to u sushiii dhika de apna jalwa 😆

Asha 😳

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