SwaSan SS - Twin Flames ~Twisted Destiny~ CH-2 PG-5 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Awesome
PM me when you will update the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
That suspense tho please continue awesome as usual
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
nice storyline...
waiting to c how swasan meet /...
or whether swara will even come to know about sanskar is one behind her attack...

continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
superb dear do update it soon and let me know
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Misha its really good <3
Bt why sanky did acid attack:(
Tum writersbhi na ek meri sanky ko rapist or ab acid attack;(lol
Bt i love this one pls do continue soon:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Dont know hw they gonna to knw eachother. while his truth comes out how she will react? Pls continue soon
Edited by gayu6 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Wow...
What a beautiful concept...
Loved it...
Wonderful...
Brilliant...
Cs is amazing...
Chapter one is
Don't know what to say...
You made me speechless...
Continue soon..
And plss pm me..
I had sent you a request
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
hey..misha.h r u?...my name is sana...
ur story was too gud dear...👏👏really like ur work...waiting for next ud..ud soon..😊

love
sana.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Hi buddies I'm back wid new update 😊
Thankz fr liking & commenting fr previous update 😳
Keep liking & commenting 😊
Ur likes & comments means alot to me 😳
Thankz once again 😊

Pls ignore typos - autocorrect problems 😡

Recap - Swara wz running to catch train.
Sanskaar saw her & forwarded his hands.
She grabs his hands & he pulled her inside..acidental hug & train enters dark tunnel..Sanskaar pushes her away..

Chapter - 2

HAs tunnel ends
They finally saw eachother faces
*Normal eyelock*
Swara's monologue - Ajeeb insaan hai pehle khud hi andar pull karta hai aur phir khud hi push karta hai 🥱

Swara - Thanku...aap nahi hote toh meri train chut jati...by the way apko nahi lagta ki apko bhi mujhe kuch bolna chahiye ( she was expecting sorry from him as he pushed her )
Sanskaar was not interested in her talks...his phone rings..
Sanskaar moves towards next compartment...
Swara - 😲 huh.. Sorry bolne se iski height kam nai ho jati 🥱

She joins her group.
Tia - Thankgod tu aa gayi..I thought tu time pe nahi pahuch payegi..

Swara hugs Tia... Thankz to u yaar...agar tu time pe call nahi karti toh main time pe nahi paunch pati...vaise train toh meri miss hi hogyi thi almost wo toh kisi ne haath badaya aur mujhe andar kheech liya... Flashes of Sanskaar pulling her inside & their accidental hug & he pushing her away from him...

Tia & other girl - oh ho kisi ne? Kisne? 😉

Swara - Mr Push Pull Sadu 🥱

Tia - Mr Push Pull Sadu 😕 ye kaisa ajeeb naam hai

Swara - ye naam maine rakha hai 🥱 suits his personality 😵

Tia - Girls don't u think yahaan pe kisi ki love story start hone wali hai ☺️😉

Swara - Accha mujhe bhi batao na kiski love story? 😃

Tia - Teri aur tere Mr Pull Push Sadu ki 😆

Swara - Shut up !!
Main love mein believe nahi karti...
Swara gets upset & sits near window... She gets flashback of his & Laksh story & how Laksh insulted their love by showing sympathy...

Tia - Sorry yaar Swara... Hum toh bas aise hi masti kar rahe the.. We didn't intended to hurt you..

Girls say sorry to her..

Swara - itz okay 😊

Tia - Swara teri ek earings kaha hai?
U look weird wid one earing 😕

Swara checks her empty ear ...oh no meri dusri earing kaha gayi? Ye earings mere liye precious hai... I can't afford to loose it... Main iss earing ka pair nahi tutne de sakti...
She gets panick & starts searching her other earing...
Tia & other girls too helping her in finding earing.

Swara - kaha jaa sakti hai wo earing?

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On the other side Sanskaar wz busy talking in phone - mujhe naa sunna pasand nahi hai...just do it damnit 😡 & cuts d call in anger.
He notices earing was stuck in his suit.

SwaSan gets flashback of their first accidental hug...

Sanskaar takes out that earing and throws it outside window...

Swara - Shayd meri earing galti se uske suit mein naa atak gayi ho...she rushes to Sanskaar's compartment...


Sanskaar was busy sending urgent mails from his mobile phone...

Swara comes to him...

Swara - Hiii

Sanskaar ignores

Swara - Hellooo

Sanskaar - ignores

Swara thinks he z deaf...lagta hai gunga hai

Swara shakes him...

Sanskaar gets angry 😡 gets up & looks her in anger... How dare u touch me?

There wz no one in Sanskaar's compartment except SwaSan

Sanskaar - How dare u enter my compartment? 😡
Who d hell r u?

Swara wz scared wid his angry glares & attitude bt wz nt showing it...- Ye pura compartment apka hai?

Sanskaar - Yes

Swara - dekho mujhe koi shauk nahi hai apko disturb karna ka.
Mujhe bas meri earing chahiye.

Sanskaar - Toh jake market se khareedo yahaan kya kar rahi ho?
Who d hell r u?

Swara - oh hello Mr tameez se baat kariye...
Thodi der pehle apne meri help ki thi...mujhe lagta hai jab aapne mujhe andar kheecha tab meri ek earing aapke suit mein atak gayi thi...
Sanskaar - oh toh wo earing tumhari thi?
Swara - matlab aapne wo earing dekhi hai?
Pls mujhe meri earing wapas de dijiye...
Sanskaar - wo earing toh maine phek di
Swara - phek di? 😲
Par kyun aur kaha phek di?
Sanskaar - wo earing mere liye kachra thi... Just a waste so Maine use phek diya window se bahar...
Ab pls tum yahaan se jaogi 😡 let me do ur work..
Swara in tears ...grabs his arms Aise kaise phek diya? How could u?

Sanskaar pushes her away.. Dont touch me okay? Aur apna ye rone dhone ka natak kahi aur jake karo 😡

Swara - natak? Theek hai apko jo sochna hai sochiye...main yahaan se tab tak nahi jaungi jab tak mujhe meri earing wapas nahi mil jate...

Sanskaar - are u mad? Kaise laake doon tumhare earing?

Swara - ye toh apko earing phekne se pehle sochna nahi tha...jaise pheka hai waise hi wapas leke aao...

Sanskaar looks at Swara from bottom to top...( Swara wz wearing full sleeves anarkali suit.. She always wear full sleeves attire to cover her scars )

Swara - aise kya dekh rahe hai aap?

Sanskaar takes out money from his wallet & gives 1000rs to Swara...

Sanskaar - ye lo
Swara - ye kya hai?

Sanskaar - Itz money Miss Honey 😉
Yahi toh chahiye the na tumhe?
I mean don't worry main samjh gaya... Yahi kaam hai tumhara...rozi roti aise hi chahati hogi...
Swara - 😕 aap Kya bol rahe hai? Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha... Jo bhi kehna hai saaf saaf kahiye.

Sanskaar - okay so tumhara Roz ka kaam hai na jaan mujh k mere jaise rich guys ko phasaana aur lootna?
Tumne apni earing jaan mujh k mere suit mein atkayi taki baad mein tum mere paas aake apni earing maango aur agar mere paas abhi wo earing hoti aur main tumhe deta toh tum bolti ' ye earing meri nahi hai... Meri earing toh asli sone k thi' aur phir taki main tumhe uss nakli earing k liye asli earing k equal money doon right?
So ye 1000rs lo aur chalti bano warna I can call cops jo tumhe aur tumhari gang ko pakad lenge 😳

Swara - Shut up...kab se sun rahi hoon iska matlb ye nahi hai jo aap bol rahe wo sahi hai 😡
She snatches Sanskaar's mobile phone & throws it... Mobile breaks... Oops sorry galti se haath se gir gaya... Ye lo 2000rs she returns him his 1000rs note too... Apna phone repair kara lena. 😊

Sanskaar - what the 🤬😡
He grabs her with arms *intense eyelock*
Ye Kya kiya Tumne?
Mera phone...damnit ... 😡
Swara - Maine toh sirf apka phone toda hai par aapne toh meri earing phek di uske sath judi memories ... Tears drop down her cheeks...
Sanskaar pushes her away... Just get lost 😡
Swara - jaa rahi hoon & I hope we never meet again Mr Push & Pull 😡
She leaves...
Both angry birds 😡🥱


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Swara remembering her childhood moments she & one more girl disturbing dida & playing together...

Swara - she looks at star outside window & whispers I'm sorry maine aaj iss earing k pair ko tod diya...tears drop down her cheeks...

Tia - Kya hua Swara? Everything okay?
Swara wipes off her tears...nothing bas kisi special ki yaad aa gayi thi...
Tia - itz okay yaar & hugs Swara...

Other girls - yaar badi boring journey hai... Let's do some fun 😃

They give guitar to Swara & asks her to sing...

Swara starts singing -

ik pal ki zindagi dede ik din ki duniya
mohabbat me hai sirf barbaadiya...

iss aag ne jalaye kayi
pagal diwaane banaye kayi
phir bhi ye pyar ke silsile na rukay
mar gaye mitt gaye par kabhi na jhukay
kaise kahein humein kitni mohabbat hai...
kitni mohabbat hai...


Sanskaar working in his laptop & wz hearing Swara's voice & wz mesmerized by her voice ... As song ends he realizes lyrics of song is known to him...
Sanskaar - ye song...ye song toh Kavita ne likha tha...
Lyrics likhna toh Kavita ka secret talent tha... Jiske baare mein sirf mujhe pata tha... Kavita k likhe song lyrics kisi ko kaise mil sakte hai?
Ye gaana kon gaa raha tha?
Mujhe iska pata lagana hi hoga...he moves towards other compartment to find dat singer...


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Swara aur Kavita k beech Kya connection? 😲
Keep guessing 😉

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For PMs pls buddy me 😊
Edited by MusicMyLife. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Lovely Update Mishu...!!!!
NIce name Mr.Push Pull Sadu...😆
Sanskaar is akdu...😉
Angry birds...👏
Waiting to see how their Love story unfolds...❤️
Hope Sanskaar sees that Swara is the one singing...
Continue soon...😊

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