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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you 😳
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Originally posted by: rufana10


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loved ishra first meeting šŸ˜†
it was superb 😳
shagun is irritating
waiting to know what happened in past
update soon


Thanks yaar
I'll try to disclose the past ASAP...
Still... I can't promise it that soon 😳
I hope you'll wait for it to be disclosed 😳 šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tum shagun ko kitni bhi acha banalo I will def hate her
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Hi guys...😊
It's a resolution part. Not the end though. But the starting of the progress. The falsbacks will be disclosed in course of time šŸ˜‰

Not proofread. So ignore typos and enjoy reading šŸ¤—


PART-5


"Crying is all right in its way while it lasts. But you have to stop sooner or later, and then you still have to decide what to do."

____C.S. Lewis


"Why can't you just...move on when Ishita doesn't even care for your feelings Raman...? Raman she left you...Why can't you get that...?"

Shagun literally roared on top of her throat at Raman who turned to her furiously. Clutching on to her arms, he looked at her face which was deprived of any feelings. Just numb. Adamant. And...insensitive!

He felt disgusted at himself for touching her. He did always felt the same. But, he chanted one thing in his mind that she is his friend and he is indebted to this impossible woman for something. Albeit now...he was not being able to suppress his anger as he was completely concerned about his daughter. He did not care about a thing as everything him doing was out of his love for his daughter.

"Stop torturing me Shagun...Just stop torturing me...Stop acting when I know your truth. I didn't say a word to you till now thinking that you love me. That you're not understanding anything because you're mad in love! But you're playing from the beginning. You're scheming against your own sister...! How insensitive you can be!!!!"

"You...what're you talking about...?" Shagun asked stuttered.

"I'm talking about yourself. Sometimes...people forgets to hide somethings which would unravel their truth. You did hide it from me from the past six years but...forgot this time...Thanks to this accident!" He smirked showing her diary.

"Wh-where did you get it...? How shameful that you took my personal things...? Give that to me..." She tried to snatch it from him only to see him giving her it without any problem.

"You're a fool Shagun...How could you think that I'm here without reading your novel...! Haha...you're a fool! And FYI...I'm here afer thinking a lot. I just wanted to know one thing...just one thing...whether you love my Rooh or not...But...you proved my bhai right...You don't love her...! How easily you agreed to give Ruhi away to Ishita for me! She is not a thing to buy me Shagun...I will never do business at my daughter's cost. I did snatch my daughter from Ishita to make her feel the pain of losing something precious from her life. Because I thought she never felt that pain when she lost me to you. You are so dumb to think that I'll be able to live in peace without my Rooh...You mistook me a lot Shagun...!"

"Stop your drama and come to the point." She said making a face. Inside, she was scared. Scared thinking that her plans are getting destroyed by her carelessness.

"Why so hurry sweetheart? Take a chill pill..." He patted her cheek and took a seat in front of a frozen Shagun.

"Till now...you've seen that Raman Bhalla who was helpless in front of love. That man whom you know is so pure at heart whom you tamed so easily. Maybe I did let you tame me...with all my heart...to make you succeed...in making a place in my heart for you. But...You ignored one thing that the Raman Bhalla is a great genius in scheming! And your sister Ishita had simply tamed that rude boy! She's strong. Your bad. And you're gonna pay for underestimating me."

"To hell with it! I don't care. I'm here today...at this point...after a lot of struggle. And I won't give you a chance to slip out of my grip Raman. You are that trump card I love to use against my little sister who will do anything for me. She will even die for me..." Shagun smiled scrutinizing Raman's expressionless face.

"I know...But you see...Now that the real game has begun...I won't give you a chance to reach Ishita. You'll fall so badly Shagun."

"Hahaha...fall...and me...You're so cute when you're angry Raman. You should learn how to threaten someone...especially Shagun Raman Kumar Bhalla!" She patted Raman's cheek mockingly.

"Hmm...I'm appreciating your guts to stand in front of me as if nothing happened even after knowing that I'm eating up my urge to kill you"

"And I know that you're still hesitant to ask me something which I'd love to hear if you show the guts!" She bite back.

"I want a divorce." He said in his dangerous voice making Shagun shudder.

Gaining her senses she shouted at him, "I won't give you. You're just mine. I own you..."

He replied chuckling, "Oh really...! You own me? How funny Shagun...I would have given my decision a second thought...only if...you said that you love me. But you made it easy for me...I'm not guilty anymore. I know what to do to be in peace Shagun...I know."

"You'll never be able to win this game Raman...you will never...You know why...Shagun mumma is the best mumma in the world. Maybe you'll succed in taking away Ruhi from me...but...She will always love me because her Shagun mumma is a Goddess in her life. A Goddess you godamn! Ishita can replace me in your life...but...she can never replace me in Ruhi's even though she is her real mother. Your bad!" She laughed evilly while Raman looked on astounded at the audacity of the woman who somewhat trapped him again. But this time, he was determined not to back off.

"Do anything...don't give me divorce if you don't want to...Stay in Ruhi's life as her "perfect mumma"...But the truth is...You're nothing. You're nothing in her life you bitch!" He hissed at her.

"Mind your language Raman...!"

"I'm...You just mind your business and just get lost."

"You don't know who I'm..." She threarened him.

"As far as I know...I'm a slow learner...so please teach me slowly..."

"Aarrrgh Raman...You're crossing your limit!"

"Get lost." Saying which he walked to Ruhi's room not wanting Shagun to stay there for her who would not even mind harming her.

The news of Raman going to divorce Shagun spread viral in their family. Ashok was the only person who was genuinely happy for his brother. He thought that Raman's decision is because of his advice. He was completely unaware of the reason which made Raman act the way Shagun had been acting in front of everyone. She knew everything...still acted innocent!

Whenever a problem pops up in Raman and Shagun's marital life, her parents would rush to Raman. To ask him the reason for the problem. To emotionally blackmail him to solve it. Say sorry to Shagun even if it is her mistake. He had a great tolerance when it comes to amma and appa. Now after knowing everything about everything he felt anger for respecting them.

They came to Raman's house the evening Ruhi got discharged. He was making Ruhi to have some soup when they entered there. The servant gladly welcomed them not knowing the problems that had cropped up in her boss's life when he was in the hospital with Ruhi. Raman gritted his teeth when Ruhi jumped from the sofa and hugged the old duo happily. Once the pleasant hug was over he ordered Neelu to take Ruhi to her room.

"What you want?" He asked looking at his mobile completely ignoring their faces.

"We're here to talk about Shagun..." Appa said looking at Raman who feigned nothing but indifference.

"Raman...why are you acting like this? You're not even asking us to sit down. You didn't even let us talk to Ruhi...what happened to you? Why are you acting like this?" Amma started faking tears.

"I don't have time to waste on you people. Just stop your melodrama and come to the point." He raised his voice against amma.

"First you answer her Raman..." Appa got angry thinking that Raman will show respect to him as always.

"Who the hell are you commanding me?" He asked poking a finger on appa's chest. "Alright then... listen...I don't want you both to meet my daughter anymore. You know why...because she is your younger daughter's 'illegitimate issue' as you always says to insult Ishita thereby insult me and my Rooh. I don't want you both trouble yourself for your maniac daughter. So...you better stop coming here. Forget me!" He said folding his hands in front of them insulting them to the core. Making them vanish in thin air.

He was feeling peaceful. Away from all dramas. Away from Shagun. So close to Ruhi. He cuddled her in his arms and she fell asleep. A slight smile lingering in her lips on feeling her papa so closer. That reminded of the emptiness she was feeling on the other side. She could not help but ask him, "Where is Shagun mumma papa...?" He did not has any answers. He didnot want to give a false excuse...false expectation to her.

"Ruhi loves papa, right?"

"I love you so much papa..." She nuzzled her nose in his chest tickling him.

"Then...don't ever ask papa about your Shagun mumma. Papa don't want Ruhi to meet her. Ruhi is just papa's princess."

"Hmm...you feel bad when I spend time with her? Awww...you're so cute papa...! I'll do as you say if you promise me to spend a lot of time with me..." She looked up at him with her big beautiful eyes.

"I'm at your service ma'am." He rubbed his nose with hers making her giggle. Though, he knew that Shagun's chapter from their life is not closed yet.


TO BE CONTINUED...


PRECAP

"Don't...I...you please...leave..."

"Why...?"


Sorry for the same precap 😳
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Edited by Gaya3sb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Updated Part 5
Enjoy reading and leave your comments šŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gaya thnk u so much for showing the mighty RKB I loved d update... U gave me another reason to hate shagun thnks for dat".. She is a bloody witch who always tried to snatch everything from ishita... Even now she wants raman because she wants to own him bt ny because she loves her... I want Ruhi to mingle with ishita and shagun watching it dat her place in ruhi's life is long lost and ishita had taken it... Even amma and appa are with shagun in all her planning and plotting??? I jst loved d way raman handled shagun and amma appa...
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Originally posted by: Sri1091

Gaya thnk u so much for showing the mighty RKB I loved d update... U gave me another reason to hate shagun thnks for dat".. She is a bloody witch who always tried to snatch everything from ishita... Even now she wants raman because she wants to own him bt ny because she loves her... I want Ruhi to mingle with ishita and shagun watching it dat her place in ruhi's life is long lost and ishita had taken it... Even amma and appa are with shagun in all her planning and plotting??? I jst loved d way raman handled shagun and amma appa...


I didn't want to make this sudden change Sri
But when my readers are angry on each and every characters...I thought of making a sudden change in the hero šŸ˜‰
Glad you liked it
PS. Amma and appa supports Shaggy a lot...that's all... I'll come to that soon 😳
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Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


I didn't want to make this sudden change Sri
But when my readers are angry on each and every characters...I thought of making a sudden change in the hero šŸ˜‰
Glad you liked it
PS. Amma and appa supports Shaggy a lot...that's all... I'll come to that soon 😳



Kyun?? Ishita vunki sagi beti nahi hein kya??? Aisa kya hein vus diary mein ki raman ko itna gussa aa raha hein?? Does ishita know dat reason??? Anyways I want raman to mana for ishita and get her back into his life... Acha hua hota agar ishita raman aur shagun ki Baath sunleti aur shagun ki also chehra vuske samne aajati
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Originally posted by: Sri1091




Kyun?? Ishita vunki sagi beti nahi hein kya??? Aisa kya hein vus diary mein ki raman ko itna gussa aa raha hein?? Does ishita know dat reason??? Anyways I want raman to mana for ishita and get her back into his life... Acha hua hota agar ishita raman aur shagun ki Baath sunleti aur shagun ki also chehra vuske samne aajati


Whoa whoa girl...good thoughts šŸ‘
I didn't think of it yaar 'Ishita overhearing ShaRam convo šŸ˜‰
For your questions...
I'm yet to Cook up a reason babe šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
After having endured the crap that is happening on the show, I am so glad updated this story.
It was a fantastic update. So happy Raman verbally bitch slapped Shagun.

I am worried about how Shagun will cause problems from Raman and Ishita.

Keep posting regular updates as you have been doing.

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