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wooo... interesting start dr.
I guess memory loss track s on de way.
cont soon.

Now this is what I would call, start with bang ...
I was totally on the edge..what exactly is happening here ...
Gal u picked up my fav genre - mystery romance...and should I just say it was thriller all the way ...
I am hooked and booked to this story ... usp of this story hands down is suspense thriller mystery around the romance ... Take a bow gal
Im sure its not just plain memory loss here ... See u already kicked my detective mind into running hahaha
Kudos to u gal for this brilliant piece ...cheers
Loads of love and best wishes

wow awesome update...

Originally posted by: vyshnavivaiga

wooo... interesting start dr.
I guess memory loss track s on de way.
cont soon.

Originally posted by: Tishyy

Now this is what I would call, start with bang ...
I was totally on the edge..what exactly is happening here ...
Gal u picked up my fav genre - mystery romance...and should I just say it was thriller all the way ...
I am hooked and booked to this story ... usp of this story hands down is suspense thriller mystery around the romance ... Take a bow gal
Im sure its not just plain memory loss here ... See u already kicked my detective mind into running hahaha
Kudos to u gal for this brilliant piece ...cheers
Loads of love and best wishes

A/N: Hey guys, here with an update in less than 24 hours! Don't say that update your this story that story and update lamba lamba and all! I am actually studying, aur padhte padhte kuch bhi dimag mein aajata hai:'D It's my Math exam tomorrow so wish me luck! And enjoy!! Chottu chapter hai but you know na something's better than nothing! :P

Chapter 2 - We lost him

MANIK

"Oh, I am thrilled to know that." I replied rather sarcastically. I was already late in reaching home and this girl was finding ways to waste more of my time.

I shouldn't have attended that sick party. I couldn't even meet the birthday girl with whom I was supposed to sing my debut song and then I saw something too horrible which literally pissed me off. Ugh. Soha wasn't picking my calls. Then I saw a girl with a pool of blood on the road. Now this girl is squandering my time. What the hell is happening today?!?!

The day was indeed sick. I had already disconnected the call not wanting to listen to her. I do accept that I got chills after listening to her voice for the first time but she was hell irritating.

I kept the phone on the table beside the girl's bed and took a seat next to her. She looked pale and too horrible at that moment. The injuries proved that she had got into a very big accident. I couldn't see her face properly and still was curious to know her. Who was she? What happened to her? How did the accident happen? Is this a hit and run case? I was having too many thoughts regarding her.

She was trying to speak something. I called for the doctor and took an attempt to listen to her voice. "Nandini," she sighed.

No God not again!

I groaned in frustration and the doctor finally made his grand entry with a few cheerleaders, oh I mean, a few nurses with him. They all ran towards the patient and tried to make her sit. Wasn't it a bit too early for a victim like her to gain her conscious? She was so badly injured and still woke up in less than an hour. Girls are great!

She sat and tried to register her surroundings. The doctor was blabbering to her about her health and wasn't even able to open her eyes properly. God knows who made him a doctor. I walked towards the girl and tried to give her a smile. She looked at me and then her eyes grew wide after seeing me from top to bottom.

"MANIK?" She shouted, taking the doctors and the nurses in surprise and yeah, me too.

"Yeah that's my name." I made an attempt to act cool while I was a bit uncomfortable with the sudden change of events.

"Manik" She sighed and cried and then pounced on me. She was sobbing and sobbing and sobbing and I couldn't stop her. "Manik... where were you... we thought... I thou...thought... that..."

"Hey hey, get a grip on yourself." I said and tried to push her out of the hug.

Suddenly the ward's door flew open and a girl of mid twenties entered inside. I looked at her and her breathe hitched. She was looking at me like I was some long lost love of hers and now finally after years I was back. Yeah, she was beautiful but the way she gauging at me, it made me... prickly?

I pushed the injured girl out of the hug and smiled faintly while the other girl kept staring at me without even blinking. I know I look handsome but puhleez, you are making me feel uncomfortable woman.

She smiled a little and then ran towards me. No God another disaster!

I immediately took two steps back and said, "Hey now you don't start okay?" I looked towards the girl in the hospital bed's face and then towards the girl who just entered, "I don't know you so..." I trailed off.

Both the girls changed confused glances when Soha entered.

"Oh Manik! Why weren't you picking my calls? I was so scared for you," she said and embraced me lightly. "I missed you."

The way the girl who just entered looked at me, I felt the urge to push Soha away, "Uh soha..." I pushed her a little, "I just came to the hospital with her," I said looking towards the girl who was in the bed and now was looking towards me with confusion, "she met with an accident."

"Oh!" Soha gave the girl a cunning smile and she looked towards Soha with a grim expression. "My God Mukti! It feels so good to meet you after all these years." Oh, so Soha knew her from before.

"Manik meet Mukti, my friend and Mukti meet Manik m..." she about to continue when she noticed the other girl looking towards me with a pained expression. The look on her face irked me and I looked away. "How could I not see you before, my love?" Soha again started with a sugar coated voice. "Manik meet Nandini, she was my best friend from college and Nandini meet Manik, my boyfriend." She said and smiled victoriously as if she got some Oscar award or something.

So she was Nandini.

She looked at me then towards Soha and then towards the g... I mean Mukti and ran outside. I was about to go behind her when Soha held my hand. "Where are you going Manik? Let's go home. Her friend is here with her, right Mukti?" She looked towards Mukti who turned her face. "Awe Mukti we will meet you some other time, take care of yourself sweetie." And with this she dragged me out of the ward and then of the hospital.

A sudden emptiness engulfed me and I wanted to go back to the hospital, console that girl who just ran away and take care of the one who was lying injured in the bed. I felt restless, I felt helpless. Soha drove me towards home and I crashed.

My mind again got clustered with different types of thoughts. Why did Nandini run away? Why did the other one hug me? How does she know my name? There's something missing in the puzzle, something big.

I don't know when sleep engulfed me.

NANDINI

He was my Manik! He was definitely my Manik! He is alive, he is alive! Thank you so much Aiyappa! I couldn't control her emotions. I was crying and mumbling to myself in the hospital washroom.

I wiped my tears in haste and ran towards Mukti's room but I couldn't find him there. Mukti was looking out of the window, aimlessly.

"Mukti where's he? Where's Manik? Where did he go? Abhi to, abhi to he was right here! Mukti bolo kuch... Mukti please say something... Muktii!" I was shouting helplessly and she was just wasn't responding to me.

"He lost his memory." These four words stopped the air around me. He lost his memory; yes he couldn't recognize us... he forgot us... he forgot me... he forgot his Nandini...

He doesn't remember any of the things. Those beautiful memories which we shared, those beautiful memories mean nothing to him now. He doesn't remember us... He doesn't remember Fab5...he doesn't remember MaNan...

We lost him...

*****

Awwwew 😭 he lost his memory 😭 really feel sad n pity for MuKni 😭 really hating dt Soha god want to kill her 😡 plzz update itx nxt chp soon will b eagerly w8ting for nxt one 😊

Originally posted by: Paniloving

THIS WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!

Sorry for not commenting at the previous chapter.

This one was amazing my dear!

You really have some great talent!

And you say that you just got this idea without thinking?!

And you say that you just wrote it in 15 minutes! Woman give all of the talent to me!

The 1st chapter was so beautiful, so ethereal...

You depicted everything so nicely...

And here Manik is restless... I think it's some plan of Soha and Harshad... Mukti was calling from Harshad's phone... There must be something...

Continue soon! AND ALL THE VERY BEST FOR THE EXAM!!! WISH YOU ALL THE LUCK FROM THE WHOLE WORLD!! YOU WILL ACE IT I KNOWWW !! I HAVE FAITH AND THEN YOU WILL TRY TO GIVE US ANOTHER UPDATE TOMORROW RIGHT RIGHT RIGHT? THANKSSS!!!

AND SORRY I JUST GOT TO KNOW ABOUT THESE FEATURES THAT'S WHY USING HAHAAHA MISS YOUU

I love you gall!!! MARRYYY MEE

Originally posted by: iqra286

Awwwew 😭 he lost his memory 😭 really feel sad n pity for MuKni 😭 really hating dt Soha god want to kill her 😡 plzz update itx nxt chp soon will b eagerly w8ting for nxt one 😊