Short Story - Walking on Water

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello DMGians,

Had a sudden thought yesterday night while watching DMG and penned down a one shot story...

Thought would share a preview and know if you'all are interested in reading it and if so post the story itself...

The dark ocean spreads afore like a dismal abyss ...
Tears of the heart , flow like a soulful lament ...
Of the hand, that led me on, I let go...
For I ain't walking on water anymore ...

Do let me know , if y'all want me to post the story ....😊

-Sareeta

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Suree!!! Why not! The poem sorta thing is quite a nice trailer for the fic!

So do post the fic....and I trust that your fic would be highly interesting sareeta! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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of course we want u to post the story!!😊
n as 'xMarauderx' said, i'm sure it's gonna be very interesting!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it seems interesting sareeta do post it yaar..... 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah plzz do post it.... 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plzzz plzz plzz plzz do post it.... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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when did i say no to u???
nw if there is lot of hindi u better help me out k di.....
but i think after reading all of your poems n FFs
my hindi is much better these days
😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Of course Sareeta, do post it 👏 👏
Edited by jenny1000 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Absolutely I want you to write this SS 😳 I've always loved whatever you have written 😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice poem.. I think it's gonna be interesting... plzzz continue.......

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