Abhigya and Rabul SS 'Do u still Love me?' part 3 on pg 2, 1 - Page 2

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PART 3

Flash Back

Purab enters in a room. Abhi was very excited.

Abhi: Purab! (hugs him)

Abhi: Purab tujhe pata hai aaj Pragya ne apne parents se baat ki hogi hamare bare me.. aaj main use officially propose karne wala hun... shaadi k liye! I m so so happy!

Purab: Abhi,... mat kar..!

He looked at him confused.

Abhi: kya na karun?

Purab: Pragya di ko propose, mat kar!

Abhi: what? Par... kyun na karun? Tu janta hai na main Pragya se kitna pyar karta hun? Phir tu...

Purab: main janta hun Abhi main sab janta hun par...

Abhi: tu janta hai na Purab tu mujhe kis chiz k liye man akar raha hai? saans lene k liye!

Purab: Abhi main b toh Bulbul se door jaa raha hun na...

Abhi: ek sec, kya kaha? Tu Bulbul se... Oh! ab samjha, yeh sab tu nahi bol raha Purab, wo tujhse karwarahi hain yeh sab.

Purab: yeh sab ek beta bol raha hai Abhi.

Abhi: beta, is it? F9, ban ek acha beta, lekin Bulbul ki taraf teri koi zimmedaari nahi?

Purab: main behes nahi karna chahta Abhi, hum aaj hi banglore jaa rahe hain bus!

Abhi: thik hai, main chahunga tere saath. Chod dunga Pragya ko, lekin issliye nahi ki wo meri mom hain ya main unse darta hun, main yeh sab iss liye kar raha hun kyun ki main tera bhai hun. Hamne har time saath me sab kuch saha hai, ab yeh toh.. yahi sahi. Lekin ek baat yaad rakh Purab, main sirf uss din tak chup hun jab tak tu kuch nahi bolta, apne liye nahi ladta, main b dekhta hun, tu kabtak sehta hai...

Present

Abhi comes and sees Purab thinking something.

Abhi: Purab!

He gets senses back.

Abhi: kya soch raha hai?

He hugs him tightly.

Purab: I m sorry Abhi, mujhe maaf kar de, maine tujhe tere pyar se 2 saal dur rakha, mujhe koi haque nahi tha, meri wajah se tu hasna muskura bhul gaya... I m sorry Abhi, I m really very sorry!!!

Abhi: Purab! (Faces him)Purab relax! Pehli baat, tu mera bhai hai aur tera mujhpar pura haq hai. aur dusri baat, main Pragya se pyar karta hun toh iska yeh matlab nahi k main tujhse kam pyar karta hun. Agar Pragya se meri saanse judi hain toh tujhse dhadkane judi hain. Agar Pragya meri jaan hai toh tu meri zndagi hai Purab. Iss liye aisi baatein phir kabhi mat karna.

Swyam: u know what? I love u bro!!!

Abhi (hugging him): love u too.

Next afternoon

Krisha on dining table. Their mom comes.

Mom: ghar me kuch guests aa rahe hain... behave.

Pragya and bulbul reacted as they don't care.

"Abhishek", "Purab",

Mom called.

They were shocked. They got up from the table and turned towards the door.

Abhi and Purab come walking slowly.

Tere liye ham hai jiye honto ko siye

Pragya and bulbul starts moving to them

Tere liye ham hai jiye har aansu piye

They face each other

Tere liye ham hai jiye har aansu piye

Girls move their hand on boys' cheek.

Tere liye ham hai jiye honto ko siye

Boys keep their hand on girls'.

Dil me magar jalte rahe chahat ke diye

They hug tightly.

Tere liye...

"Abhi, Purab!"

They got their senses back and realized that they were dreaming and girlz were still far. Mom informs she met with an accident and these guys saved him. They needed job and company could give it after a month or two. So they are going to stay at their home for some day. After sometime all sits and chatters. Abhigya and Rabul were looking at each other during the convo with elders. Bulbul serves coffee to everyone. She gives it to Abhi. He smiles but she avoids. When it comes to Purab, it accidentally falls on his shirt. Mom scolds Bulbul and asks her to show him the wash room, unwantedly Bulbul went with him. On the other hand mom asked Pragya to show Abhi their room. Pragya was helpless. They went.

Rabul

Bulbul: there's the washroom.

Purab: Bulbul...

Bulbul: Purab mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai. jis kaam k liye aaye ho, wo karo.

Purab: wahi toh kar raha hun.

Bulbul: what?

Purab:(coming forward) main tumhare liye wapas aaya hun Bulbul.

Bulbul: mere liye? Really? Kyun? Tumhari wo Bangalore wali kahan gayi? Jiske liye 2 saal pehle tumne mujhe chod diya!

Purab: Bulbul...

Bulbul: sorry Purab, agar tumhe lagta hai k main tumhari life main uski jagah puri karungi then I m really sorry, main uss type ki nahi hun.

She turns he holds her hand.

Bulbul: Purab haath chodo.

Purab: Bulbul meri...

Bulbul: mene kaha haath chodo!

He leaves.

Bulbul: mere piche aane ki koshish, galti se b mat karna.

She leaves.

Abhigya

They enter a room.

Pragya: it's your room.

She was leaving. Abhi comes in front.

Pragya: jane do mujhe.

Abhi: Pragya main...

Pragya: let me go!

She was going.

Abhi: Pragya meri baat toh suno!

Pragya: kya sunu main? Aur kehne sunne ko reh kya gaya hai? saari baat toh do saal pehle hi khatam ho gayi thi, jab kisi aur ladki k piche aapne mera dil toda tha!

Abhi: par Pragya main wahi galti toh sudharne aaya hun, tumse maafi mang...

Pragya: galti ki ho, toh sudharoge na, apne galti nahi, gunah kiya hai, aur gunah se liye sazaa hoti hai, maafi nahi.

Abhi: Pragya...

She turns to go. He holds her hand. She stops. Looks at him and drops hand.

Pragya: now, don't u dare touch me, did u get that Mr. Abhishek Mehra?

She leaves.

Boys and girls

Purab: yakin nahi hota, jo ladkiyan kabhi humpe jaan chidakti thin, aaj humse itni nafrat karti hain ki hamari shakal b nahi dekhna chahti.

Abhi: nahi Purab, wo hamse naraaz hain nafrat nahi kartin hamse. Dil k kisi kone me toh hume chupa kar rakha hai.

Pragya: dil k ek kone me, jise hum chahkar b nahi bhul paaye...

Bulbul: Hum control kaise karenge di?

Abhi: wo puri koshis karengi...

Purab: lekin hum nahi karne denge.

Bulbul: wo mane ya na mane, unhe hamari life se jana hi hoga.

Purab: wo mane ya na mane, unhe hamari life me wapas aana hi hoga.

Pragya: wo din kabhi nahi aayega, hum aane hi nahi denge.

Abhi: wo din zarror aayenga. Hum lekar aayenge!

Boys decided to do the reverse. Abhi shuld talk to Bulbul and Purab to Pragya. Bulbul was busy with some books when Abhi entered.

Bulbul: app? Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Abhi: Bulbul mujhe tumse kuch..

Bulbul: Mujhe apse koi baat nahi karni. Just leave ok?

Abhi: But Bulbul...

Bulbul: hum apko apne ghar me tolerate kar rahe hain, bas yahi bht hai... ok?

Abhi: Bulbul tum koshis toh kar sakti ho? Wo din yaad karo jab Purab ne tumhara dil jeeta tha.

She smiled. Flashes came in her mind.

"Maine kabhi nahi socha tha k kabhi b kisi se b yeh sab kahun ga par... us din jab tum mere pass chalkar aayi toh laga jaise, mujhe meri jine ki umeed mil gayi. Tumhare saath bitaya hua hare k pal mrei hard drive me permanently store ho gaya hai jise main kabhi delete nahi kar sakta. Aur main karna b nahi chahta. U know what? Main apni puri life tumhare saath spend karna chahta hun. Miss Bulbul Arora, I really Love u a lot. Aur main tumhare bagair nahi jee sakta. I love u Bulbul, I love u..."

Abhi: yes.. come on.. yaad hai na tumhe???

She again gets flash back

"Bhool Jao mujhe. Hamara saath yahin tak tha/"

"But Purab"

"Main kisi aur se shaadi kar rha hun Bulbul. Mujhe aazad kar do."

"Tum mujhse chahte kya ho?"

"chali jao meri zindagi se, hamesha k liye"

Abhi: Yaad karo jab usne tumhara dil jeeta tha

Bulbul: Mujhe wo din b yaad aa rha hai, Jab usne mera dil toda tha!

Abhi: Bulbul, sab kuch thik ho sakta hai, hum sab phir saath ho sakte hain, pehle ki tarah...

Bulbul: Pehle ki tarah ab kuch nahi raha Abhi, na main, na aap, na Pragya di aur na hi Purab!

Bulbul sitting in her room. Thinking Abhi's talks.

Flashback

It was Bulbul's birthday. Party was over and she was gonna sleep now. But suddenly the lights went off. Pragya shouted from the other room to light up the candles. She lit one and was shocked to see Purab in front.

Bulbul: tum???

He put his palm on her mouth.

Purab: shhh... Pragya di aa jayegi.

Bulbul: par tum yahan kya kar rhe ho? Party toh khatam ho gayi na?

Purab: han. Par hamara moment abhi baaki hai.

Bulbul: what?

He held her in arms,

Bulbul: Purab yeh tum...

Purab: chup! Bilkul chup!

He took her to the balcony. There she sees lots of decoration and a cake on a table.

He puts her down.

Purab: Bulbul, main tumse kuch kehna chata hun.

Bulbul: ya...

Purab; wo main... Maine kabhi nahi socha tha k kabhi b kisi se b yeh sab kahun ga par... us din jab tum mere pass chalkar aayi toh laga jaise, mujhe meri jine ki umeed mil gayi. Tumhare saath bitaya hua hare k pal mrei hard drive me permanently store ho gaya hai jise main kabhi delete nahi kar sakta. Aur main karna b nahi chahta. U know what?(comes on knees) Main apni puri life tumhare saath spend karna chahta hun. Miss Bulbul Arora, I really Love u a lot. Aur main tumhare bagair nahi jee sakta. I love u Bulbul, I love u...

There was a silence.

Purab: Bulbul.. My knees are paining...

Bulbul smiles and comes on knees hugging him.

Bulbul: let it be... I love u too.

They get up hugging each other. Purab kisses her forehead.

Purab {Breaking the hug):Ab main chalta hun.

Bulbul: Purab...!!!

Purab: what?

Bulbul: proposal ha gaya, uske baad??

Purab; uske baad?

Bulbul: kiss!!!

Purab: wo b toh kar diya!

Bulbul: tum sachme itne stupid ho ya sirf pretend karte ho?

Purab: what?

Bulbul drags his collar.

Purab: u know what? Tum bahut fast forward ho...

Bulbul: so toh hun!!!

Present

Pragya was going, Purab came in front.

Pragya: maine kitni baar kaha hai, mere saamne mat aaya karo!

Purab: but Di meri..

Pragya: Di kehne ka haq tum kho chuke ho Purab.

Purab; Bhabhi kehne ka haq main lene aaya hun Di.

Pragya: bahut der ho chuki hai.

Swaym: It's never too late Pragya Di. Aapko wo din yaad hai na jab aapne Abhi ko propose kiya tha?

Pragya got flash back.

"Abhi, jabse maine pyar ko jana hai, aapko samjha hai, maine sirf aapse pyaar kiya hai. Main janti hun k hamari friendship fight se suru hui thi, par, wo kaise love me badal gayi, mujhe patahi nahi chala. I love u Abhi, I love u a lot. Main nahi janti aap mere bare me kya feel karte ho, par maine feel kia hai k aap b mujhe... u too like me. Issliye main aaj confident k saat keh rhi hun. I loveu, more than my life!"

Purab: yaad hai na aapko?

"Pragya pyar tak thik hai par, shaadi.."

"Abhi shaadi ka faisla aap hi ka tha."

"mera wo faisla galat tha."

"aap kehna kya chahte ho, saaf saaf batao."

"Pragya, I know mujhe tumhare saath ghoomna phirna acha lagta hai, time spend kar na acha lagta hai but.."

"but what?"

"but you r not a married material!"

Pragya: mujhe wo din b yaad hai Purab, jab unhone mujhe reject kia tha!

Purab: Pragya di aap..

Pragya: Purab, jitna ho sake, stay far from us.

She leaves.

Pragya sitting on her bed and thinking something.

FLASHBACK

Abhi was standing near a bridge. Pragya comes running.

"Abhi", she called.

He turns, she runs and hugs her.

Pragya: Abhi I m so.. so happy!

Abhi: Pragya i...

Pragya: I know aap nervous ho. But don't worry, everything will be ok. I m with you.

Abhi: baat wo nhi hai, actually i..

Pragya: maine kaha na Abhi, don't worry, mom aapse mil kar bht khus hongi.

Abhi: Pragya main tumhare parents se nahi mil rha.

She was shocked.

Pragya: what do u mean by nahi mil rhe? Abhi we have already talked abt it. U agreed isliye maine maa se baat ki. Aur ab aap keh rhe ho k..

Abhi: listen Pragya, pyar tak thk hai par shaadi... I don't think it's the right time.

Pragya: Abhi shaadi ka faisla aap hi ka tha.

Abhi: mera wo faisla galat tha.

Pragya: aap kehna kya chahte ho, saaf saaf batao.

Abhi: Pragya, I know mujhe tumhare saath ghoomna phirna acha lagta hai, time spend kar na acha lagta hai but..

Pragya: but what?

Abhi: but you r not a married material!"

Pragya was in a dead shock! She couldn't believe her ears.

Pragya: kya kaha aapne? Phir se bolo.

Abhi: look Pragya i...

Pragya: agar apke dil me yahi tha, toh kyun khincha iss natak itna lamba? Kyun kia pyar izhaar?

Abhi: izhaar pehle tumne kia tha maine nahi. Propose tumne mujhe kia tha, friendship ko love ka naam tumne diya tha.

Pragya: agar aisa hai toh aapne accept kyun kia tha?

Abhi: kyun main us waqt tumhara dil nahi todna chahta tha.

Pragya: toh ab aap kya kar rhe ho? Abhi I really don't know, aap yeh sab kyun keh rhe ho, but I know very well k aap mujhe pyar karte ho. I m damn sure u love me!

Abhi: Pragya aaj main bagalore jaa rha hun. Wahan koi mera wait kar rhi hai.

Pragya: oh! Like, really? Aap mujhe chod k iss liye jaa rhe ho coz aapko koi aur mil gyi hai?

Abhi: look Pragya, I m sorry..

Pragya: no, I m sorry, k maine aapse pyar kia, aapke liye apni feeling waste ki, aapke jhoote pyaar ko samajh hi nahi payi. I m really sorry for that. Lekin ek baat toh batao, usme aisa kya hai jo aap mujhe chod rhe ho? Batao..

Abhi: sunna chahti ho, toh suno. Wo tumse jyada beautiful hai, tumse jyada intelligent and, understanding hai...

Pragya: aur married material bhi? M I right? Or m I right?

Abhi: Pragya..

Pragya: enough, u know what? Just go to hell! Maine aaj tak sirf yahi pray kia hai k har ladki ko Aap jaisa partner mile, . par aaj k baad, main roz yeh dua karungi k aapke jaisa partner kisiko na mile. Main.. main aapki sakal b nahi dekhna chahti,, so gud bye forever, Mr. Abhishek Mehra!

She left. Abhi ended up with tears.

Abhi: Dil me tum, Saanson me tum, Meri har dhadkan tumse hi

Pragya: Dard me tum, Aansuyun me tum, Meri har Tadap tumse hi.

Purab: Na dard hoga, Na hi Aansu, ab rahenge hum saath

Bulbul: kaise na darun, agar chod diya tumne phir mera haath???

to be continued...

Love,

Shirisha😊

omg...d banner of dis story is very awesome...

wow shrisha, this is awsm story.
i liked how they confronting, pls cont in english, yeah i knew hindi but not like english much
pls pm me

read all three chapters in one go
superb... its so nice and the poetry lines are simple and beautifully written... loved the way you portrait them...
please add me in your pm list...
continue soon...

wow shirisha

can you please translate the part 3 .if not fully ,translate only abhigya part