Abhigya and Rabul SS 'Do u still Love me?' part 3 on pg 2, 1

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Prologue

Pragya: Zindagi. Kab kise kis mod par laakar khada kar de, koi nahi janta. Mere saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua. Zindagi bhar saath rehne ka wada kiya, aur chale gaye?? Mujhe chodkar? Akele? Besahara? Janese pehle ek baar reason toh bata dete, lekin ab main kya karun? Wo toh apne saath mera dil bhi le gaye hain. Afsos sirf iss baat ka hai k jaane se pehle unhone ek baar bhi mujhse nahi pucha, "Pragya, Jee paogi mere bina???"

Bulbul: Life? Nafrat hai mujhe iss word se. Life time saath rehne ka promise kiya, aur... Ek nahi, do do baar mera dil dukhaya hai usne. Wo kya sochta hai, main uske bagair kuch nahi? No. he's wrong. Dikhadundi main use ki main apni life apni tarah se jee sakti hun, uske bina bhi. Afsos bas iss baat ka hai, ki jisne baar baar dil ko toda, yeh dil aaj bhi use nahi bhul paya. Had mod par yaad aata hai...!

Abhi: Zindagi? Love! Pyar k bina life ka toh koi matlab hai hi nahi. Kya nahi hai mere paas? Daulat, shauhrat, paisa, rutba, sab toh hai. phir b sache pyar ki kami hamesha mehsus hoti hai. Aisi zndgi hamesha se nahi thi meri, meri life me bhi koi thi, jo mujhse beintahaan pyar karti thi. Mere har zarurat ka khayal rakti thi lekin..., apni hi bewakoofi ki wajan se kho diya maine use. Afsos sirf iss baat ka hai k aane se pehle main use ek baar bhi nahi keh paya ki, nahi jee sakta main tumhare bina...!

Purab: Life?? Dhokha! Har mod par zndgi ne mujhe sirf dhoka diya hai, aur majboori me maine use. Iss dil ne hamesha sirf usise pyar kiya, aur anjaane me hi sahi par... baar baar usika dil tod diya.khud b ghut ghut kar jeer aha hun aur sayad use bhi majbaar kar raha hun, aisi zndagi jine par. Baatien toh bahut saari batana chahta tha par... it was too late. Aaj, afsos bas iss baat ka hai ki ek akhri baar sine se lagakar main use yeh nahi bata paya, ki main usse kitna pyar karta hun. Nahi keh paya.Ilove u.. ek akhri baar...!

Pragya: Dil diya hai aapko, chahun dilo jaan se.

Abhi: Nahi bhula hun tumko, aaj bhi pyar karta hun tumse.

Bulbul: Phir kyun gaye chod kar mujhe, kyun toda dil tumne?

Purab: Nahi bata sakta kya thi majboori, par chaha hai bas tumhiko maine...!

Kya Zindagi par viswaas lautega inka?

Kya ubhar kar ayega koi tinka?

Kya apna Afsos zaheer kar payenge kabhi?

Kya ek dusre se dobara mil payenge kabhi?

Ya bhul jayenge wo khushal din aur raatein,

Aur reh jayengi bas yaadein, yaadein aur Yaadein???


I hope u all like it. i tried my best. My first work on KB. Plz comment and say Should I continue or not.


Love,

Shirisha😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey it's a lovely update, and the banners are awsm.
do continue soon and pls in english dear, hey forget that welcome to kkb a new writer
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wowww this story sounds damn interesting..please continue soon 😳
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Part 1

A girl is waiting 4 someone and watching her watch time to time. But it's too much! How can someone b so late? She decides to have a coffee at the coffee shop nearby. She is about to go when a car stops in front of her. A boy comes out.

Boy: Gud morning Pragya!

Pragya: what the hell is this Abhi? I m waiting for u from last 30 mins in the middle of the road, and u... u really don't care!

Abhi: Pragya m really sorry.

Pragya moves her face. Abhi Shows a flower bouquet to her. She smiles and takes it.

Pragya: Last time!

Abhi: Okay. Lets take the breakfast? I got stronger bark.

Pragya: lets go.

They enter a restaurant hand in hand and see a couple sitting there.

Girl: Look Purab, that's my Piece ... give my pizza back. Now!

Purab: Bulbul, The pizza is not good for your health to eat early in the morning ...

Bulbul: don't b so possessive Purab.. Don't behave like a monkey... give it to me.

Purab: what? You told me a monkey? I now urge you to give it at all.. Pungent chili!

Abhigya comes.

Abhi: relax guys! What small thing to fight on ... Chill yar!

Bulbul: It was his mistake, he initialized.

Purab: Who spoke monkey first?

Bulbul: I... but it's still your fault ...

Pragya: ok... his fault, happy? Your fight, uff! Irritating, but cute!

Rabul: we know!

Abhi: Means? You deliberately do the fighting?Purab: yes!

Pragya: but why?

Bulbul: Because ,in a reasoning fight what's fun in it?

Purab: And our love is in our fight only...

Pragya opened her eyes and realized it was a dream. It's not surprising coz she was getting these things two years back. But usually she ignores it. She wakes up and washing her face she goes to another room and find her sis sleeping covering her blanket. She was going to uncover it when she hears, "sis, I m awake." She smiles. "then come down." She replies. She turns to go when she hears it again "sis, I m awake."

"Bulbul", she called out but she got the same line, "sis, I m awake." She bent and uncovered her face. She found her sleeping and her cell phone alarming, "sis, I m awake." She turned and took out the jug of water kept beside and was going to pour on her when she stood up on bed.

Bulbul: Di...! Di, don't!

Pragya: tried to make me fool??? Consider urself very smart?

Bulbul: I m sorry..!

Pragya: sorry? Today I will not leave you, but first u get down of bed ... come...!

Bulbul: Di.. di sorry, Forgive naa...

Pragya: Forgive???

Someone shouts "Pragya... ur phone.."

"Coming Dadi" she replies...

Bulbul: ja ja jaldi jaa...

Pragya: I will show u...

she leaves. Bulbul sits on d bed and smiles.

Bulbul: "My sister is very strong. She has seen many ups or downs in life, But she never broke down. I was torn apart, but she controlled herself and me too. Without her, I would not know what ... Sometimes I think what would be wrong if she were not so strong. "

Bangalore

Purab comes from jogging.

Lady: Purab..., breakfast ready hai. Call Abhi.

Purab: Abhi?? Mom u know...

Abhi comes down stairs and was going outside.

Mom: AbhiShek! Breakfast...

Abhi: no mom, I am not hungry.

Mom: The choice is all yours ...

Abhi: thnx mom, I m nnot hungry.

Mom: Abhi...

Abhi: I said I m not hungry. Why cant u understand?

Purab: Abhi...

Abhi: You don't speak in the middle. Every time you support her, so we are in this situation today. May You agree or not today we are leading such a life just because of her only. You too, and Me also.

He leaves.

Purab: "My brother is Rude much from outside, from the inside he is more broken. He had everything to lose irresistibly. His life was changed, and his face has disappeared a smile as if, it's lost somewhere. Perhaps, just because of me. Sometimes I wonder it would have been better if he does not love me so much."

Mom: keeps shouting at me always. Do you also have something to say.

Purab: When there was time to speak, I kept quiet. Then what will I say today ...

He leaves.

Abhi opens his car door.

Abhi: "I know I did wrong but ... My brother is very cool. thinks of others first. But he should realize that sometimes we have to do more for ourselves. Sometimes I think would be cool if he is not so good."

Delhi

Pragya and Bulbul comes downstairs and watched their mom and grand mom waiting for them for breakfast.

Bulbul: gud morning.

They saw them. Dadi was busy in reading news and mom was busy on phone. After she was done,

Mom: oh god, I will be late.

Bulbul: Are you going somewhere?

Mom: hmm.. important.

Bulbul: everything is important except us.

Mom: what? Wait? Do u really think I m like the typical parents?

Bulbul: mom...

Mom: I m getting late...

Bulbul: Yes .. go ...we really do not have any value in the house.

Mom: Bulbul!

Bulbul: Dont shout! What do u think mom, we have educated us, dress given to wear, and your duty as a mother is completed?

Pragya: Bulbul...

Bulbul: No sis, Let me speak today. Mom doesn't mean to give birth only mom, God made you mom, but perhaps forgot to give a mother's heart

Mom: get lost

She leaves. Bulbul sits on the chair with her eyes fill with tears.

Pragya: "My sister has suffered greatly. She relied on as often life, Life as often betrayed her. Just inside of a sorrow to suppress is Rude. Brings her anger out on anyone. Sometimes I wonder what is wrong if it does not accept my every word."

Some days later

Pragya comes to Bulbul's room and she finds a CD.

Pragya: Bulbul, What is this?

Bulbul: no idea. My friend gave yesterday. Was saying, is a music show. Take if wanna see.

Pragya: Well, I'll see it in my room.

Bulbul: ok.

Pragya leaves.

She opens her laptop and put the CD. She was shocked. It was a show in Bangalore. And the performer was none other than Abhishek Mehra! She closed her eyes. She had d previous feeling. All the past memories danced in her mind.

She opened her diary and started writing:

Says the world is round. Where the Journey starts from; one day ends in the same place. Perhap So, I the name I wanted never to hear, whose face never wanted to see again, Today, the same name is echoed in my ears and the face, Is facing the front of the eye.

Me, Pragya, St. Louises student. I had a small world. Maa, Dadi and with my little sister, Bulbul I had Music. Me and Bulbul are different course, but our life, is living in another... However, this story Started, when my sister stepped for the first time in St. Louise. Not just studying music at a college has also given importance on. And we both mean the same healthy life of sisters. Music! Music was our dream. Our Passion. Or simply Say, music was our world. We never thought of anyone else in this world but yes, we included them, but they were not only our need, they became, our habit.

3 years ago

St. Louise

"Someone saw Purab anywhere??", asked Pragya.

"No!!!" She got d reply.

She turned and bumped to someone. She was about to fall when he held her by waist. They had a eye lock. {BGM: Ishq Wala Love from Student of the Year}. After sometime they got their senses back.

Pragya: Abhi, where is Purab?

Abhi: Purab? What happened? Do not go to the devil on my poor brother

Pragya: Poor?? Don't tell me! Just 2 hours left, and do not know where he is.

Abhi: Basket ball playing my champ!

Basket Ball Ground

Purab picks the ball and plays with it. Abhigya come.

Pragya: Purab We have so much work to do in so less time and you're playing ball? Come with me right now!

Purab: Pragya di, one basket.

Pragya: no!

Abhi: Why not! Pragya, don't disturb my bro. U carry on champ.

Purab baskets the ball. Abhigya clap and he smiles.

Evening

Purab was standing near the door with some roses. Abhigya come.

Abhi: What happened champ?

Purab: u are asking this dude? You said me to give all the juniors red roses! Why??

Abhi: So that will heart will bell in Love, like me and Pragya.

Pragya: shut up Abhi! Let's go.

Purab: Move quickly and do not come back to eat my brain.

Abhi: Yeah right ... but remember the bell dude.

Purab: u go man.

Abhigya leaves hand in hand.

Soon Bulbul enters. Purab looks aside. She comes in as if searching for someone. Purab was lost in her. He felt as if there was no one except them. {BGM: Dil Kyun Yeh Mera from Kites}. She came to him and took the red rose. "Thank you" he heard from her. He was at the 7th sky.

Purab, my best friend. That evening,Bulbul settled in the heart of Purab, permanently. I was very happy. Purab was just perfect for Bulbul. I thought Purab would love Bulbul more than me but...

Purab's diary

That evening watching Bulbul for the first time, I felt like I have found my reason to live. When she came to me, heart started beaing fast. And when heard her voice for first time, "thank u" then, I heard the bell in the heart. My first feeling, My first Love. It was the most beautiful evening of my life, after all, that evening I got my life ...

Abhi's diary

After that evening my brother's life was to Enjoy. Bulbul, Pragya s Sis, For whom my brother was total change. From that day me and Bulbul were best of friends. Never had a thought that I would cry to love Someone, cry in search of a friend. But...

Bulbul's diary

That evening, for the first time, I saw Purab. At first glance, I got a weakness for him. And after that evening, Abhi was my best friend. Never thought i will love someone so much that, it will be impossible to forget him. I loved Purab giving my life, and pragya di, loved Abhi. But I can never forget that evening, afterall, the betrayal stared from there...

to be continued...


i hope guys u like it... i tried my best.. comment and tell how it was..!!


Love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 10 years ago
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Shirisha! It's amazing. Really interesting. Eager to read more.
Nice banner! <3
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Originally posted by: apple123flower

Shirisha! It's amazing. Really interesting. Eager to read more.
Nice banner! <3


thnk u so much i m glad u like it!!
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Its nice dear ...now only got time to comment it...liked it...
continue 😊
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hey sirisha, it not fair that u left us without complete, love this.
wonder what happen next
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Part 2

Bangalore

Purab comes downstairs. His mom comes in front.

Maa: Why u did such a big deception with ur mom Purab?

Purab: What I did Mom?

She shows him bulbul's pic.

Ma: I got it down ur pillow. you...

Swyam: I m sorry Mom. I tried my best but, I couldn't forget her.

(Abhi comes)

Mom: What do u mean by that? Is she any goddess that, you cannot forget her?

Abhi :( in mind) Do not remain silent Today Purab. You have to fight today. Not for yourself, for your love. Say Purab, Say!

Mom (trying to tear d pic): Today I'll erase this thing totally.

He holds her hand.

Swyam: sorry mom, not today. This time I will not remain silent.

Maa: Purab...

Purab: If my Bulbul had trouble, it has to face me first.

Maa: Abhi, u r listening na? what he's saying?

Abhi: Since two years I was waiting for this day, when it is happening today, you want me to stop this? Forget about it!

Swyam: for ur sake only, I hurt my love, insulted my friendship. Becoz of u only, I betrayed bulbul, lied pragya di and Abhi, my brother lost his smile, only coz of me. But I kept quite. I was forced to live through the memories of bulbul only but I kept quiet and today u want to remove them also? No mom, that's enough!

Abhi: 2 years, can u imagine? Since 2 years, we 2 are living in suffocation!... perhaps, we four. But not anymore. Now we will live our life. With each other. We know they're still waiting for us, So we are going to Delhi today mom, and this time no one can stop us. Not even u. Let's go Purab.

They were leaving.

Purab: One thing the mom, Bulbul is not a thing, she is my life, and do not ever forget that.

They leave.

*************************************************************************

Pragya opens d window. The cool breeze touches her face and the blow of air makes her hair flow.

Pragya: Today's a new feeling in the air, do not know why it looks like after so much wait, something very right is going to happen.

Abhi was packing his stuffs.

Abhi: I'm coming Pragya, to do everything right, to get you back. Then we will never be separated. Never.

Bulbul on study table

Why, it seems like everything is going to change, like life is taking a new turn. Something stands back. I m going to have something back..

Purab: your Purab is coming back Bulbul, to get your love back. With the hope that you will forgive me.

Delhi Airport

Abhi and Purab comes out of d airport.

Purab: Abhi, Where will we go now? Even we do not know their address.

Abhi: don't worry Purab, When Destiny has brought us here, it will show the way forward.

Purab: Know what, these winds are a strange feeling, which was two years ago.

Bulbul: why am I having the feeling that I used to have before? Butterfly in the heart suddenly?

Pragya: Why look like the old story of the forgotten Love is going to write a new chapter, The winds are changing their stance.

Abhi: These winds will change its stance symptoms. Here come the real-hearted, who are about to complete an incomplete story, who are going to fill love, in these airs.

Pragya: Adhure sapne, zindagi adhuri, pyar ki yeh kahani rahegi hamesha adhuri,

Abhi: Pure honge sapne phir sajegi zndagi, mohabatt ki iss dastan ko main karunga puri.

Bulbul: Bichad gaye sapne, zndagi ne b na saath diya, toot gaya dil jab tumne mujhe dhoka diya,

Purab:judenge sapne, zndagi ne b hai palat liya, milenge ab hum, kismet ne hai mauka jo diya.

It's a short update but tried my best. Ready for all chappals n tomatoes!!!!

Love,

Shirisha😊


Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 10 years ago
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Shirisha!! This is just amazing. The lines you've written are just amazing.

Pragya: Adhure sapne, zindagi adhuri, pyar ki yeh kahani rahegi hamesha adhuri,

Abhi: Pure honge sapne phir sajegi zndagi, mohabatt ki iss dastan ko main karunga puri.

Bulbul: Bichad gaye sapne, zndagi ne b na saath diya, toot gaya dil jab tumne mujhe dhoka diya,

Purab:judenge sapne, zndagi ne b hai palat liya, milenge ab hum, kismet ne hai mauka jo diya.

And the lines about destiny too. :)
You really gotta continue soon. I'm already hooked to the story. <3
Thanks for the PM.

Edited by apple123flower - 10 years ago

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