What is love ..A SwaraYa FF Part 2 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi all,

I want to write an FF on swaraYa. especially now swaraYa is no longer together on the show. I hope you enjoy reading this . The story revolves around swara,laksh and sanskaar .
ragini will be there too 😊.

Part 1:

'And the business man of the year award goes to laksh maheswari.' everyone claps for laksh.
he looks at the crowd and smiles looking at his aunt rajashri and younger brother who are seated in the front row.
laksh thanks the audience and gestures about his journey as a business man and goes to his aunt. he takes blessings from her. he looks at his younger brother sanskaar and move forward for a hug and realizes he is hallucinating.
rajashri looks at laksh and asks him what are you looking at!

'I thought sanskaar was here' ..laksh replied sadly.
'don't worry laksh he will come back soon.' his aunt replied him positively though she is unsure whether sanskaar will come back or not.
laksh acts normal and assures his aunt that no matter what he will find sanskaar.

He bid's bye to his aunt while his secretary leads him to the car.he gets into that car and calls someone and shouts "how much longer i have to wait. find him soon". he angrily disconnects the call and ask his secretary to go to park apartments. his secretary is puzzled and looks at laksh with a surprised expression. 'is there something on my face. what are you looking at.!' questioned laksh.
'nothing sir' , his secretary karan replied with a worried expression. karan then instructs the driver to go to park apartments.

the driver stops the car outside the apartments while laksh look at a specific apartment on 2nd floor. he gazed at the window for couple of minutes and instructs the driver to drive home. as they headed to home, laksh head is occupied with many thoughts.

he enters home and freshen up and goes to bed after spending his entire day at award celebrations.

he wakes up as the alarm starts buzzing.he takes shower and opens closet and looks at all the suits that are neatly arranged. he picks a grey suit with a red tie and wears it. as he steps outside his villa , karan is ready with car. he opens the door. laksh sits inside car and looks for his schedule. they arrive at a 5 star hotel. laksh is accompanied by his secretary and few other staff who were waiting for him to congratulate him on his new accomplishment for getting the award. he then heads inside. while he passed by registration desk he notices a coffee cup and trash on the tea table. his manager notices it and rushes to pick the trash himself while the remaining staff shivering with the fear of loosing their jobs.
laksh angrily shouts at his staff is this a way to keep the hotel clean and leaves to his office.
the manager then scolds his staff and assures them they will not last long if they ignore our company policy to keep clean. he then instructs the staff to be careful as our boss doesn't like to see a place that is messy and he is very particular and organized.


swara who is sitting in a park hides her face and avoids looking at a lady passing by.
she breathe with a sigh of relief as the lady who was her friend radhika gets into a car and leaves.she sadly looks at them while radhika leave with her husband vinod in the car.
she recollects her moments that happened 2 years ago.

"swara is struggling with her studies as she finds it hard to complete it on time. her exam is day after tomorrow and she is not prepared for it. though she is studying hard ,she still fears herself whether she would pass the entrance exam or not. her friend radhika arrives with a book and greets swara. swara asks radhika if she brougth the book that she asked for. radhika shows the book to swara.
swara hugs her in happiness and thanks her for finding the book.

'how much more will you study. isn't enough that you have been preparing for this since 3 months.' questioned radhika.
'no. I can't fail this exam. this is really important.' swara replied her.
radhika worriedly questions swara what on earth makes you think that he is worthy for your love and you are working so hard for this exam.
and it's really not easy for women to do this job.
swara says i have been in love with him since 2 years and if i want to stay near him i have to pass this exam and get the job at the embassy.I can't risk it.

Radhika worries if swara would really going to pass this exam and get a job there."

please share your views :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice update dear ...be continue
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sanskaar is elder right? or is it younger in ff?? okay then...
just a request...pls remove the line that swarya are no more together in this show'..other than the fact that swalak fans would ignore it with great difficulty, in the world of television, anything can happen anytime...and they are still together... lakshya still loves swara and swara still loves lakshya,,,,so how are they not together? Krishna had different wives and radha had a different husband, but when it comes to worship love, don't we still take the name radhe Krishna????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update dear😃😃 continue soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow brilliant...do continue yaar...naya storyline hein...pls pls continue soon...😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2
Swara waves her hand in front of radhika as she seems to be lost in thoughts.
'nothing..i was just thinking about you and vinod' replied radhika.
what's there to think about ..we have beeen together since 2 years. He became so busy at work after he joined embassy.
Now I have to get a job there. so that i could spend time with him. She then concentrates looking at the book and takes
long a breath as swara feels it might be hard to finish reading all the pages. yet she is determined to do so.
Radhika bids bye to swara as she has some work to catch up.

Swara leaves to her house and starts reading unknowing to her that its her friend radhika and her first crush vinod was
cheating on her. swara and vinod were college friends. when vinod expressed his love to swara she was hesitated as she
never thinks of him as a friend. but he promised swara that he will be with her all the time. as swara like him very much
as a friend and that's when she decides to give a thought on his proposal and she said 'yes' as she doesn't want to hurt his good friend who dearly loves her. 2 years passed and now swara has a crush on vinod. as much time as she wanted to spend with vinod unaware to her knowledge he started cheating on her with her best friend radhika. radhika is always jealous of swara and she always tries to show down swara. swara knew thaat radhika behaves rude at times yet she forgives her being her childhood friend. as days pass by , swara runs towards vinod's work place as she wants to share the news with vinod. But she was as she saw vinod priosing to radhika. neither a tear dropped from her eye nor she was mad at them. she stands like a statue and couldn't believe what she saw. she fall down on her knees and stays number for a while. everything seems to be blurry to her. she didnt realize that vinod and radhika were already gone from that place while she was sitting in the middle of lawn. she quietly leaves to home and cries her heart out. she looked at the mail that she
received about her getting a job at embassay. she crushes it and thrown it into trash bin. The night passed like an year as she struggles to get sleep.

swara comes out of her thoughts and realizes that she completely forgot that she gotta get back to work after lunch.
she goes back to her desk. she then thinks about radhika and vinod going together. swara assures herself that 'she is neither in love with vinod nor it does effect her'. thought she doesn't love him anymore ,but the scars she got for being in love is still remains. It's a hard day for her as the past passes right in front of
her which she doesn't want to think about. she never met them after radhika and vinod married. swara becomes restless and
angry with herself for not being able to move on in life while the later stays happy. she goes to restroom and splashes water on her face.she motivates herself ..'swara ..its already been 2 years..don't stuck on your past. its time to move on..'. she then make up her mind that she need a make over. she is determined to start a new life and makes an appointment with beauty parlor.

'do a hair style that no one can recognize me' a 25yr old swara screamed innocently while she is still busy in looking at
the hair styles from the magazine. the parlor lady looked at her and suggets few hair styles. swara then likes a hair
style and asks her to go ahead with that style. while the lady set her hair and applied a gel for next process. swara is relaxed and reading a magazine for time pass. she then notices the interview with business man of the year . she looks at him and thinks what a handsome and lucky young man. she turns the page without reading his interview. just then she hears a voice 'OMG..swara is that you' screamed radhika.

swara opens her eyes wide enough in disbelief while the later approaches her with no shame while she cheated her own
friend. swara thinks in her mind why should I run from her. she should be the one running away from me. she greets her as
if everything is fine though she is still angry with radhika.
Though swara wants to forgive radhika , radhika is a person
who could never allow it as she annoys swara even more with her hubby talk. Radhika then questions swara 'are you married?'

'nope..' as swara struggles to respond . radhika interrupts even before she completes her sentance. swara then thinks that
she can't loose to radhika. swara answers her phone while she gets a call. it's from customer care. and automated call.
swara then looks at radhika who is eager to hear from swara about swara being still single. swara acts as of she is talking to her husband. she answers "love you darling. don't be late tonight. I will be waiting for you. love you honey . bye .."
she then disconnects the call and looks at her radhika whose eyes opened wide and still in disbelief what she just heard.
radhika is always jealous of swara as she lacks in everything when compared to swara. she thinks she achieves everything by
snatching her love. now she couldnt digest that swara is married.
swara then excuses herself to clean up as she has to go home as her dearest hubby is arriving home after a business trip.
radhika who is in shock can't believe what she just heard and she doesn't want to believe either. she decides to meet swara's husband. she then finishes her facial and goes towards the room where swara was. the parlor lady informs her she is gone already.
frustrated radhika leaves to home in a taxi while she curses her husband as he never comes on time to pick her.

later in the night swara goes to a pub while she couldn't digest how radhika bombarded her with all the stupid questions. she thinks how stupid she was when she lied. she asks the waiter to bring more shots as she continue cursing her friend who is more than enemy. a young man approaches her table and sits while she continue drinking. the man none other than sanskar lifts his glass to say 'cheers' as he finds swara cute and innocent as swara is behaving as if she is the only person in the bar. he then introduces himself and smiles at her . he then tries to initiate a conversation. swara who is angry and sad as well pours out her heart to sanskar without her knowledge as sanskar listens to her with patience. he is about to console her that's when he hears someone call 'sanskar'. he closes his eyes for a moment and thinks 'he is already here ...uff'.he runs outside and get into a taxi to leave as quick as possible.

he thinks his brother is being too much following him like a james bond every where. sanskar then thinks 'i would never go home with you laksh ..i am sorry..i just can't'.by the time laksh arrives looking for his brother he is already gone. swara then comes outside in a drunken state shouting at sanskar to stop as she doesn't even know who he is and he took her jacket by mistake. laksh looks at her and recognizes her being with sanskar at the same table. he then approaches swara...

PRECAP : Laksh picks swara in his arms ..and asks his secretary to get the car ready.

hope you all like it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: willina

sanskaar is elder right? or is it younger in ff?? okay then...

just a request...pls remove the line that swarya are no more together in this show'..other than the fact that swalak fans would ignore it with great difficulty, in the world of television, anything can happen anytime...and they are still together... lakshya still loves swara and swara still loves lakshya,,,,so how are they not together? Krishna had different wives and radha had a different husband, but when it comes to worship love, don't we still take the name radhe Krishna????


sanskar is younger brother of laksh ..just for a change 😉. btw i didn't intend to offend you or anyone by saying swaraYA are not together.i wan them to be together.as much as you do... that's why i wanted to write FF on them.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhanvibella

nice update dear😃😃 continue soon 😛



sure ..thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhanvibella

nice update dear😃😃 continue soon 😛


sure..thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow its awesome...😳😳
do continue soon pls...😳😳😳

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