I am so glad you decided to write this story!
With all the tension and negative vibe going around the forum these are the only things that keep the real positivity and good vibes alive! I am really grateful to you for that.
And I agree it's our job to keep both Manya and RaRa alive through out imagination.
Coming to the first three chapters. Well What can I see I know a good story when I read one! And this is definitely one of those!
You have really grabbed both Mantu's and Amaya's characters very well. While reading these chapters I felt like I was watching the show through words. Literally. It was so...them you know! And I love it when people are able to do that. That way us fangurls can connect better and on many levels. haha.
I liked there interactions so very much! It's like tasting chocolate chip ice-cream. There's the choco chips and then there is the ice-cream itself. and when then blend it...bon appetie mon ami! Haha. Sorry my love for ice-cream escapes my power to understand it as well. But it's true love just like they one you are writing about! :P
Oh and can I say...girl! I love the way you made Amaya give it back to Uma. Literally you might as well have been lighting Uma's face on fire! Lol cause she sounded red hot with anger! And that jealousy...oh so green as they say. red and green mixed together gives you..yellow! And yellow yellow dirty fellow sitting on a buffalo! Hahah.
Poor Mantu Apologizing for Amaya! OH Mantu why are you so nice!
And she hit him on the head too! Violent creature. Seriously...she needs to calm herself but of course she is Uma..so I ain't got no hope for her, which is why blue isn't her colour.
Mantu and Amaya working together. Haye, trip down memory lane! I miss dem days when they used to work in the same office. But I like this idea of working at home too! That way you have more chance of romanchee! Hehe.
Waise I got say I was surprised when Amays said she was going to make cha! I means call it her lack of kitchen scenes before this.. ahem..KAND happened. But this story fixes that too because we also get bonus Kitchen scene + Kitchen Romance = I died and went up to heaven kinda situation!
It's like getting a banana split where you get to pick your flavors! :P Ahem sorry I veered off topic again!
I love Amaya though she is like so cute and one point so mature at another! Good Good! I like her character.
Oh and the most recent scene of theirs where they make kheer! Hailaaa more kitchen romance dude! I think Imma get diabetes right now at such young age! but I don't mind hehe! :P
Their close proximity was happening in the scene and here I was hyperventilating! God lord that scene was lajawab!
I love how Mantu thinks Amaya as already part of his life. It's so natural to him like breathing and eating and walking...
Her simple request of ironing his and chiklu's shirts and doing other chores really made him crave for her presence in his life for forever. And forever is along time..I hope they get it! Scratch that I know they will get it!
kyunki ki picture abhi baaki hai mere dost! Hahah ;)
I absolutely love love love love x infinity your story! Keep writing and update soon!
I hope your university is going good! I know how hectic it can be after all I am in Grade 11 as well. Best of luck though!
And thanks for these fantabulous updates so far! Love it and love you!
Loads of hugs! and kisses (on the cheek don't get the wrong idea :P hahah)
Cricket
