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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Loved dadi maan convo...
Poore update mein dadi ne jo bhi maan ko kaha ya sunaya...bahut hi achha tha!!
Sirf dadi hi maan ko chup kara sakti hai!
Par maan bhi koi kam nahi hai...geet ko pagal kehne ka ek bhi mouka nahi chodta!!
Jis tarha se pooja geet ko care kar rahi hai...awesome!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice teaser
Maan riya ko pasand karta hai!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely story...
really wonder how will maan accept her??

continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago


wow lovely emotional omg update..te way my maan throwed his geet out to get peace but dadi ki stubborness and her words made him top think tat wat he is doing in his arrogant hurting and insulting his family..te way dadi want to make my maan realize his deed but she feeling sad to use geet..atlast dadi ki zid won over grandson's arrogant he brought geet was lovely.yes tis is my maan he can hard like shell but his concern for te people te way his anger wen servants staring at geet and asking pooja to chagne her dress was lovely..te way pooja have to go for hm and making geet to listen her but geet ki zid making her to lose her control but dadi took control and made geet accept was lovely..opps my maan ki frustration for geet and behaving like a baby maan babu who is kid u or ur geet..te way my seeing some pain in his geet which pricked him was lovely..te way pooja ki unsaid abt geet's past did something happen? omg so twist is going to cum..now my devil singh khurana planning something to throw his geet lets see maan babu..i love te update ji
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Posted: 9 years ago


Confusion of names. I changed the name of Maan's cousin I mentioned in Part 3. She is Dia from Ria now and she's not Maan's fianc. Maan's fianc in Ria Kapoor and is introduced in this update. So Ria is not the girl who Maan blasted in Part 3, she's a total different girl. Hope I have cleared and sorry for repeating the names but now I have changed. So Maan's fianc in Ria and his cousin was Dia.


Maan. He stopped closing his eyes. He was already late and he did not want anyone to irritate him. Two days since Vicky and Pooja left for their honeymoon and Maan had avoided Geet Handa like plague. He tried his best to stay away and came late from work but today he was caught by his Dadima. Turn around and say hello to your old lady.

You are as young as the Miss Universe Dadima. She smiled. She knew anyone who would sweet talk her was her Maan but right now she wanted him to stop acting as if he was a guest in his own house. So do not call yourself old lady.

And you stop acting like guest.. khud ka ghar hain and..

I know but kya hain na Dadima kaam bahut hain. He smiled walking towards her but then stopped dead seeing the creature staring at him as if he was an alien. Wat the hell is she doing down there?

Painting. Geet grinned feeling Dadima pat her. She was painting her drawing book but more of the floor tiles. Bachi hain so painting tho karegi na Maan.

You think painting floor tiles is.. shit Dadima wat the hell is gone into her. She is ruining the beauty of those tiles. He growled in anger. Aur aise chalta raha tho pura KM karab hoga.

Tho naya mansion lenge. Maan rolled his eyes. He still had to understand why his Dadima preferred the mad girl over him. But right now how about you take me to mandir.. bahut din hue nahi gayi.

I'm late Dadima.

Maan.

Ok ok get ready. He finally gave up knowing she would not let him step out unless he agrees. Ab dekh kyu rahi ho.. chalo ready ho jao.

Geet beta.

Wait a minute. Maan glared at Dadima who smiled at him. She isn't going right.

Off course she is going along with us and tat to in your brand new Mercedes. She smirked and with a heavy shock Maan just stared at her as she helped Geet to stand and asked the servant to clean the floor. Ab thoda der wait karo.. Geet ko tayaar karna hain mujhe.

Dadima.. you..

I know son you love helping me. She patted his cheek and poor soul Geet too did the same but before he would shout or yell at Geet Dadima dragged her upstairs leaving him all alone.

*****


He was tired of waiting and pacing the living room and there was no one to talk. Naina was away with Yash for some work and hid lovely Dadima was getting Geet Handa ready for the so called trip.

Dadi... the rest of the letters choked inside his throat as his eyes rested on the stairs and refused to blink. He tried to shake his head but then it also refused to act as the full concentration was on the beautiful angel tat walked down along with his Dadima.

Aah.. Maan seriously sorry...

Why sorry? Geet asked before Dadima could complete her sentence. You did no wrong Dadima so no sorry to bad man. Dadima smiled kissing her forehead. Aye bad man why look... and tats when Dadima realized her grandson was frozen. Dadima bad man look at me with big eyes.. I get scared ok.

Maan.. Maan..

Huh. He finally was out from his dreamland but his eyes refused to see somewhere else. Kya hua..

Wahi tho kya hua? Dadima smirked evilly. Why is tat you are staring at Geet? Achi deekh rahi hain na.

Yeh aur achi. He rolled his eyes. Come on Dadima people with unstable mind do not look good and do not have the ability to stand in front of anyone.. yeh tho pagal khane hi achi hain.

Yes right isliye tho abhi tak tumari aakhein ushe dekh rahe hain. She taunted. And if your quota's fill then let's get going.. mujhe aur bhi bahut kaam hain. Dadima left him back and walked with Geet but soon Maan followed only to be shocked and angry again.

Get out. He yelled opening the door. I said get the hell out right now.

Dadima...

Shut up you mad girl and..

And you shut your tone and drive. Dadima's tone was calm but anger did radiate through it. I said..

Get her out Dadima or I swear I will kick her right now. He grabbed her hand. I said..

I sit hear... Geet Baby seat here Bad Man.

F*** with your bad man..

Maan.

Shut up... oh shit m sorry Dadima. He closed his eyes. Just by seeing her sitting next to the driver's seat he lost his cool. I did not mean...

Geet will sit where she wants Maan and right now just drive. She ordered him. Tamasha karne ki koshish bhi mat karna.

Tamasha. He scowled at her. Do you even know wat will people say seeing her sit here.. for god sake women it looks like you are planning to hook this mental girl with me.. yahi chahti hain na aap ki main ish pagal se shaadi karu.

Agar chahu tho bhi nahi karungi Maan Singh Khuranna. Something hurt inside Dadima. As I earlier said you do not deserve any innocent or nave girl but shit like Ria Kapoor.

She's my fianc Dadima. He hissed at her. Meri honewali patni hain woh and you should take her name with respect.

And tats wat I say... respect people and get respect. Dadima wiped a tear tat lingered around her eye. Aur mere respect karne se ya na karne se kuch nahi hota Maan... you intend to marry Ria and you'll. Who the hell I'm to say anything.

You know I love her Dadima. Dadima smiled weakly. You know she's perfect for me, the one who will I spend my life with.

Yes. Perfect for Maan Singh Khuranna. Maan knew it was a taunt for him. He had tried to make Dadima love Ria but she never did and he was tired now and left it on time. Ab chalo der ho rahi hain hume.

Hmm. Maan hummed and giving a last glare to Geet who smiled at him closed the door and walked towards the other side. He did not want anyone to see him with this mental Geet Handa but having Dadima he had to be quite.

******


Dadima bad man not coming. Geet looked sad seeing Maan sit inside the car and not making a move. He no come Dadima.

Maan does not like temples Geet beta. Geet frowned not understanding the deep meaning of Dadima's words. Devil hain na so devil tho mandir mein nahi jaate.

Dadima..

Kyu kuch galat kaha kya maine Maan. She once again taunted. Pehle tho aisa nahi tha phir ab kyu.. kabhi socha hain..

You know why. He almost glared at her but then smiled weakly. You know Dadima... this place.. it makes me feel weird..

Oye bad man come na.. Geet baby give you Prasad..promise. Geet walked towards his side before Dadima could stop her. Door open bad man.. Geet baby take you to temple.. please.

Geet..

Dadima say na door open. Geet smiled at Dadima and tapped on window irritating Maan. Bad man..open door.. Geet baby take you temple.. Geet baby give you Prasad.

You..

Maan sab dekh rahe hain. Dadima glared at him. And if you don't want a scene then do as she says. Open the door.

I'll..

Will you just do as I say for once? Maan was angry but he saw people staring at him and not wanting to create a scene he opened the door and tat very instant Geet grabbed his hand and dragged him into the temple and seeing that Dadima had tears in her eyes. Kash Geet theek hoti tho main ishe apne Maan ke liye sach mein pasand karti. She said to herself. She loved Geet's innocence and she knew if she was all right then the same innocence would have taken Maan's heart but she knew she was dreaming too much as he was about to marry soon to his so- called love Ria Kapoor.

Geet.. Geet..

No Geet say Geet baby. She continued to drag him and people stared at them with big eyes. It was a lovely sight to see a well built man being dragged by a petite girl who would get blown away with wind. Say Geet baby bad man and now chup... mandir hain.

You..

Maan beta. Geet stopped seeing an old man stand right in front of her. Tum mandir mein.. yeh tho..

Wonder hain Purohitji. Dadima said from behind. Maan Singh Khuranna ko mandir mein dekhna yaani ki...

You are trying to embarrass me Dadima. Maan looked at her with bit angry eyes. Ab mandir mein aana koi badi cheez nahi hain and Purohitji aap kaise hain.

Theek hoon beta but yeh pyari si ladki kaun hain. Purohitji asked. Kiski beti hain.

Pooja's sister. Dadima answered. Dheeraj Handa ke bade bhai Mohinder Handa ki beti hain... She was.

Maan. Suddenly the temple echoed with a voice tat Dadima hated. Everyone turned and stared at the source of the voice and seeing a girl hardly dressed for temple, their eyes wide and mouth open. Maan how dare you..

Ishe yaha kisine bulaya. Dadima asked with anger. And how dare she yell like tat. Is this how she behaves Maan.

Ria. Maan smiled ignoring Dadima and walked to greet Ria, his fianc forgetting tat Geet still held his hand and with the force tat he pulled her she banged into him pushing him into another women who was carrying a puja thaal.

Geet beta tum and the time stopped as the sindoor in the puja thaal fell on Geet's head filling her mang and coloring her white suit with red. No one said a word as they just stood and watched wat was happening.

Maan how dare.. Ria stopped as he ignored her and slowly turned facing Geet. Maan how dare you ignore me?

Shut up. Maan hissed as he was totally out of control now. You bloody bitch.. how dare he grabbed Geet by her shoulders. How dare you dirty insane girl... tumari himmat kaisi hui mere saath yeh sab karne ki haan.. tum wat do you think..

Maan..

I said shut up. Maan growled not even caring tat it was his Dadima who was trying to stop him. How dare you play dirty games with me... tum sach mein pagal ho ya.. ya natak kar rahi ho..

Bad man...you..hurt me.. you.. and then suddenly he still as if he was looking at his own death and then in flash of second pushed her so hard tat she banged herself into the side pillar and walked away from the place.

Maan...yeh tum..

I hate you dadima.. I hate you. He shouted as he walked away.


Precap: Geet in Maan's room

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NEXT : PART 5



Edited by sdlife19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update .
haiye this geet is so cute .,
aww !! She ws painting on floor .
maan avoided geet for.two days
uff this maan is also mentally unstable .
his behaviour is really irritating nd confusing .
Geet forcibly took mr.akdoo singh khurana to temple ,
thjs ria is like a bee .
humseha maan ke aas pass bhatakti hai .
why maan also follows her nd wants to.marry her???

wow !! Geet's maang got filled by .mr.dusht daanav .,
nd he scoled her again.

waiting for next part eagerly !!
Edited by mskfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update,geet baby is so cute in her way of talking and all,but proved she is so beautiful that our bad man has already floored just by one look😳 ,but its really confusing why he behaving so rude to her,and thank u for clarifying ria is different girl as i thought she is the same and maan doesn't have feelings for her,
Edited by nostalgicmoon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Will read and comment on night as am travelling
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Posted: 9 years ago

Fabulous update 😊which left me with so many questions and confusion😕" no geet,geet baby call"😊 geet baby is making me fall madly in love with her, I don't know why but I can already feel that by the time this story ends ,geet baby will be very close to my heart after my adorable jaan of guzaarish😃coming back to the update maan avoided geet for two days good for him😃geet baby doing painting on the floor 😃how cute and adorable 😛I think you have wrongly portayed geet as unstable because actually its maan who is mentally unstable 😡and needs to visit a mental asylum soon😃why does he get so hyper seeing geet. Daadi asked him to accompany her to the temple but maan doesn't want to go but why?when geet took maan to the temple and daadi's reaction again confused me😕what did she mean by her unsaid words or is she hiding something 😕Ria Kapoor good for nothing 😡I just hated her in an instant,control freak kanhiki😡then the shocking turn ,sindoor fell on geet by maan unintentionally and still he blasted geet for it😡why did he say I hate you daadi and his reaction was more than shock or anger,as if he was conveying something else 😕hoping to get my answers soon and what does destiny have in store for my geet baby😊very interesting precap😃geet baby in bad man's room 😲😆😛😉god save her 😛

Edited by ns.1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow that was lovely
Loved to read it
Maan didn't said anything to Geet in 2 days and for that he didn't came to his own home but how would DM made let him escape
She took him to mandir with Geet
I don't understand why he hate Geet this much
Geet is too way innocent but why did DM got hurt when she said that Maan don't deserve Geet
And Maan when he know none liked ria why is he so adamant to marry her
Geet forcibly took Maan to temble and all were shocked
Hate ria she controls Maan and he follows her everywhere
But that was quite shocking Geet maang got filled and Maan scolding Geet but what was her fault in that
And why did he said that he hates DM
What he saw that made him say this
Waiting for another one
Lovy update

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