ViDha Special: Kaun Mera..Mera Kya Tu Laage

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Teri Nigaahen

pa gayi rahe Par Tu Yeh Soche Jaaun Na Jaaun
Yeh Zindagi Jo Hai Naachti Toh
Kyon Bediyon Mein Hai Tere Paanv
Preet Ki Dhun Par Naach Le Paagal
Udta Agar Hai Udne De Aanchal
Kaahe koi, apne ko, aise tarsaye

Already stuck up with each other, they managed to find comfort in each other's company...but a comfort which lasted only for a while...it started raining...both got to take shelter under the stall...where they were standing close...closer than ever before...unwillingly, got touch of each other, increasing dhani's discomfort and making viplav lost in her again...she stepped aside...making effort to keep him away from her...keep him away from her aura...but the rain drops falling on her, troubling him..he just stepped out to bring comfort for her...allow her to stand away but not let those rain drops touch her...but his innocence...disability to open up the umbrella brought her back...close to him..again made a small smile glitter her face...she helped him...as if indicating the future...if u r ready to protect me, i will always help u in it...The inner desires again blossom up...the beautiful rain, the comfort, the peace...her hands ultimately raised out..to touch the rain...to feel the rhythm...to feel the magic...and he, again got a chance to see her enjoying something...seeing her satisfied, calm...his hands too raised out...in an effort to feel the same that she is feeling now...the feeling that pleased her...but unable to think of him following her, she pulled her hands back...leaving him dumbstruck...his face stooped down...finally their trouble got sorted...both head towards their homes...




Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage
Bas chale naa kyun mera tere aage
Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage


They reached their destination...near ashram...but not in front of it...she in a hurry just left out...forgot to return to him the jacket, the colour he wrapped over her...just trying to break free from him...he wasn't ready to allow her to go alone...in the darkness..without him around...unsafe...she objected...rebelled citing the world...but no...declares he...the world doesn't matter...u r my responsibility...i won't let u go alone...i don't care for the world...showing how in future he will be reacting to the society's fear in dhani...he was never able to win over her, but today, his concern, care for her didn't let him loose...he won...she couldn't stop him from accompanying her to her home...but destiny plays again..her sari got stuck in a pin...and once again, dhani looses in hands of viplav..after her unsuccessful efforts, his determination to help her, couldn't allow dhani to stop him from helping her out...dhani standing wrapped in is jacket...he crouched near her feets, removing her sari...and a part of it tore off...symbolising, its time for her to get covered by colors, break off from the ill laws that are keeping her tied, not allowing her to break free...dhani's guardians arrived...she was shocked and rushed to them...her jacket fall off...the colourful world to which she was being introduced for now, the inner desires that were blossoming, all falling apart from her, seeing those ladies who desire her to follow the laws...reminds her of her reality...he left behind with that piece of her cloth...selflessly, he just hid that piece ...she got scolded...without being given a chance to speak, and he objected...desiring her to be given a chance to speak...she realised the situation...asked him to leave...but this time thanking him...he left...she too moved...but turned back...turned back to see from where she just came...she saw that jacket...kept it...not ready to loose on the hopes of the colors coming back...





Haan hum badalne lage

Girne sambhalne lage

Jab se hai jaana tumhein

Teri ore chalne lage

She elaborated everything to her guardians...changing their views for him...but meanwhile...too lost in memories...memories of how he saved her twice...her guardians left...she left alone..with the jacket..the memories..and her glorifying smile...she is softening...softening on him...he is not really a rakshas?isn;t?...the sweet memories surrounding her...memories which she was never able to build till now...and there he was..in his home...also lost in the beautiful memories...both lost in each other...in the day...in their moments...in their world...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks roopal your writing always wants to make me cry , but then always knowing they will have a happy future together makes me smile after reading your end para and the lyrics you choose are so apt.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

thanks roopal your writing always wants to make me cry , but then always knowing they will have a happy future together makes me smile after reading your end para and the lyrics you choose are so apt.


That's really a big compliment tahera ☺️
Thank u so so much🤗🤗

U know this is best thing in the show...we can unconditionally ship vidha..nothing to be afraid of..coz they vill end up together only..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so beautiful. Your write up is poetic 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhilam

This is so beautiful. Your write up is poetic 😳


Thank u so much jhilam🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wah roop didn't know that there was a poetic side to u 😛
Amazingly well written 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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roopal beautifully written ..
im in love with ur take...
title has justified ur entire post...
tarun kush hogaya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _zari_

Wah roop didn't know that there was a poetic side to u 😛

Amazingly well written 👏


hey zari 🤗
so happy to catch u here 😃

and thanks dear 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tarun1234567

roopal beautifully written ..

im in love with ur take...
title has justified ur entire post...
tarun kush hogaya


thank u tarun 🤗
roopal bhi khush ho gayi 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SORRY ROOPAL FOR DELAY😭
ONCE AGAIN A POETIC DRIVE IT WAS FOR ME.LOVED IT YAAR❤️

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