it was a great story and the way you write is just awesme... i really liked every part of this amazing story. how things unfolded... and how Arnav finally could get his happy family.. Chaahat's character was portrayed marvelously and every part was just tremendous..
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Take a bow, J. You write so beautifully. This was an awesome story that kept me awake pretty late, reading it from start to finish. Gripping in its narrative and beautifully threaded together...waiting to see you complete the other stories now.