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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wo Mile The...Dil Mein Samaanay Kay Liye...Part 9:
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[COLOR=RED][/COLOR]Recap: They all decide Kavyanjali's outifts and honeymoon. Dida wants Kashihs or Nitya to call Mrs.Grewal over for jewelry help.

GaurI: Hiten!!!!!!HITEN!!

Hiten: Arrey kya hua? Kyun pura ghar apne sar par utaia hua hai???????

GAuri: Angry: Hiten tumme pata hai kab say tumhara intezaar kar rahi hooon?? Mujhe shopping le kar jao!

Hiten: Lekin Gauri tumne to yahan aane se pehle hi to itne kapday liye!!! Aur phir se???OMG! WOmen!!

Ga: Mr.Hiten!!! Mein apne kapdoon kay liye nahi baat kar rahI!!! MEin aap kay kapdoon kay liy keh rahi thi!!

Hiten: Puzzled: Meray Kapday??

G: HAAN!!

HI: Inn mein burai kya hai??

G: Arrey tum shaadi mein kya pehno gay!!

hi: Haan wo tho hai!

G: See! Abb chalo bohut dayar ho rahi hai!!

They both walk out to the hall and Dida is sitting with Kashish,Kripa, Nitya, Romila and Vanshita and of course Anjali.

G: Dida, wo mein aur Hiten shooping kay liye jaa rahay hain! Thodi dher mein aa jayain gay..

DIDA: Nahi nahi! Gauri tum humaray saath chalo gi lunch ke baad!! Hum bhi zewaar lene jaa rahay hain Anjali kay liye aur meine tum saab ko bhi kuch tho dena hai!!

G: Nahi dida, wo actually meine nahi karni shopping lekin Hiten kay saath ja rahi thI!

Romila: Arrey bhai!! That is the very good! thab tho Hiten, Kavya,SUjal aur Angad kay saath chala jayay gaa.

Hiten: SOUR LOOK: Ji dida.

Gaur: Laughing: Have fuN!

Then Kavya and everyone else walk out!

KA: Okay dida chalein??

Anjali: Laughs!!

Dida:Lauging: Kavya tum humare saath nahi khud tum sab jao gay!!

KAvya: SOur look: Dida Paar wO!

DId: Mein sab janti hoon isi liye tum ko alag kiya! Laughing! TUm agar humaray saath chaltay tho tum kapdoon ko kam aur Anjali ko zyada dekhtay!

Everyone laughs!

ANGAD: Paar dida ek sharat paar!!

DIda: KYA??

AN: Aap saab ladies hum ko coffe shop mein 4 bajay milay gi!

Bauji: interrupts: Haan bilkul aur abb hum chaltein haiN!!
All ladies laugh and they leave!!

Just then Veena Garewal walks in! She greets everyone and everyone talks, over lunch and leaves for shopping!!

Sorry that's all I could do!
WIll continue soon! Not like before! [LOL]
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice prt..dun worryt we understand :)
kavya anjali rock..i jutst canty wait to read more abt them..thanks and conitne wen u get time 😊 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wo Mile The...Dil Mein Samaanaay Kay Liye...part 10:

Recap: They all go shopping in their own directions! Then they meet as planned at the coffee shop as planned.

Here's what is happening:

The ladies are shyly walking in:

Bauji: Whispering: Dekha bachay...yeh auratein bhi aisi hoti hain! Kehte Kuch aur hain aur karti kuch aur! Maine bataia tha naa aa jaay gi!

Kavya: With a ear to ear grin: Aap ko tho maan gaye bauji...

Angad: Sachin! Wow! What talent!

Hiten: Talent nahin yaar, experiance...

Dida:CUTS IN: Experiance kuch nahi! Hum tho aap loggoon ko yeh baatanay aay thay ki shaadi 12 dino mein hai aur hum taiyarri kar rahay hain...

Anjali: Haan aur wo saari shopping bhi hoo gayi....

Gauri:Aur hum ne sangeet 5 dino mein rakha hai!!

Kavya: KYA???

Kashish: Kya hua Kavya??? Darr gayay!

Kavya: wo...nahi bus wo..

Everyone laughs at him...

Sujal: Tho hum aisa kartein hai ki shaadi 2 teen mahine baad kartein hain! Theeek hai??

Kavya: NO WAY!Calming down: mera matlab hai...nahi Sujal theek hai...

Angad: Lekin Kavya....5 din.. teasing

Kavya: Bas kara karo!

Anjali: mischeviously: Nahin Kavya agar koi doubt hai tho...I don't mind!

Kavya: ANJALI! 5 dino mein theek hai!

Anjali: Theek hai??Iska matlab usha nahi??hmm....mein tho soch rahi thi ki tum excited ho gay! Par tum to...anyways tumari marzi hai! laughing!

Everyone laughs!

Then they all head home and we see their 5 days go by in just preparations and leaves are now falling generously. Kavya has called Anjali out right before their sangeet:

Anjali:
Kya hai baba???

Kavya: gusse mein: Kya kya AnjalI? Mein apni honay wali biwi kay saath kuch akelay mein waqt bhi nahi guzar sakta???

Anjali: Kavya....yeh baat nahi hai...sab dekh rahay hoo gay humme chalna chaiyay!

Kayva: Anjali rooko:Holding her from behind:


Leaves are covering the whole area:

Kavya:Anjali, yeh tumharay liye...holding a maple leaf towards her....it has their names on it...

Anjali: Kavya, mujhe yeh patay bohut pasand hai...

Kavya: Janta hoon!
Anjali: Hugs him: ThanQ Kayva!

Kavya: moves away: Anjali bohut din ho gayay tumse kaha nahi...

Anjali:Smartly: Kya??

Kayva: Anjali stop it now!Okay now listen.......Anjali I luv you!

Anjali: I luv you too

: more leaves fall and wo mile the plays!

This is all I could do for today, hope to continue sooN! Please do leave comments and suggestions on the story! Thanq and please keep readin!
-Jia Big smile

Edited by Jia_444 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
wow..awesum luvly part..luvd uit aboslutely..ka rock..continue as soon as possible
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wo Mile The..Dil Mein Samaanaay Kay Liye...Part 11:

Recap: KA express their feelings to one another outside while their sangeet is going on inside and the orange maple leaf becomes a symbol of their love....

Currently, their sangeet is still going on and they have headed in, at this point they have just entered:

Nihaal,Shlok,Bebe and Angad and Sujal are heading towards them:

Bebe: Kavya!!Tum log kahan chalay gaye thay??(smiling)

Kavya: Wo actually...

Shlok: bhaia wo aap kya???

Sujal: wo anjali tho aap hi bata do??

Anjali: blushing: Wo hum...

Shaurya: Aap log bhi naa...aap nahi sammajayain gay!!

Kavya: Wohi tho bhaia...

Sujal: Haan wo naa yeh log dono bahaar kuch kar rahay thay..wo aap tho...

Angad: You are absolutely right bhaia, Kavya aur cookie tho ahmm ahmm...pyar kar rahay thay....

Anjali: Bhaia:chasing him: aap ko naa mein chodo gi mein..



Bebe: Aab chodo inn ko aur chalo aao beto!!

They all go take their seats and their is a performance by Sujal/Kashish, Gauri/HIten, Angad/Kripa, and Shlok and his new "friend" disha..

First, Sujal and Kashish did a dance on the song: Thoda sa pyar hua hai

then Gauri and Hiten did a dance on the song: Teray Bina from the movie Guru

and then Angad and Kripa obviously on Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai
and then closing performance by Disha and Shlok on the song yeh kya hua and obviously everyone saw their love

and Kavya and Anjali obviously looked at each other lovingly the whole performance and they all had the couples dance on Jiya Dhadk Dhadk! Here are some pix!

I am sorry as usual for being late but please don't stop reading and it would be great if you kept up the comments and to help me if you can please pm me and pix you think are good because i can use all the help I get! I really want to take this ahead and ave plans and I need to do this slowly so the wedding isn't rushed...thanks again for reading!
-Jia 😳

Edited by Jia_444 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesum prt! even we want u to arry it further and ewill support u!
after all its an awesum ff
and most inp. its a KA ff!so no probs!amazing..cotninue wen u get time :) 👏

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