Manan ss - Our story ardent yet painful Last Part pg 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Hadjer13
Nice update
Waiting how he will remember nandini
And how much pain nandini had poor girl
Cont soon😉

Yup, poor soul she suffered a lot and lot, hope manik wil keep her happy for eternity

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-
wow awesome update
well written loved it
thanks for pm 👍🏼

Thank u chithu.

U r always welcome

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: suraiya77
Awesome
manik's and maya's bonding is so strong
loved that
maya has really brought lots of changes in Manik
Manik loves maya unconditionally without
knowing the fact that it's his own daughter
that's called true bonding
anyway update soon.. Can't wait

Thank u dear, glad u liked it, yup the bond is so stronger, he wil be on moon knowing the truth

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: sharon.babu
wow awesome update...
loved the bonding between manik and maya...
hope nandu and manik get back together soon...
can't wait for your new story...live-in relationship...please don't make aliya a villain...meaning manik's girlfriend...please...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

Deftly not, i love aliya, so wil never make her play that role, atleast not for this story, happy that u r interested in it, wil post the cs today, if possible

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priyasmiley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

hey jst nw i read u r story in go

i must say u pinned vry beatifully

the bond between manik n maya was too cute

nyonika made perfect plan to knw the real part of his life

finally manan face off

continue soon

keep writing

stay blessed

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: princypriya
hey jst nw i read u r story in go
i must say u pinned vry beatifully
the bond between manik n maya was too cute
nyonika made perfect plan to knw the real part of his life
finally manan face off
continue soon
keep writing
stay blessed

thanknu so much dear. Yup their bond was indeed one of the reason for all the happenings now. Wil post next post now

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Finally with the last part of this story.

Few things first,

1. This part wil be very short, sorry for that in advance

2. You may or may not accept with the ending, but reply me throu comments, whether u r accepting this end or how u wished it for. Though it may not change anything now, i wil keep it in my mind for further stories.

3. As i said before, memory loss, it is not as simple as it sounds, with this thought i brought this end, hope u all wil be okay with it.

Thanks to all those who liked and commented on the previous chappy

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gagan1deep, MaNaN_trS, yajishtha16, sweetarchie, maherinm88, Angel_Naila11, puzzz, priyakshi301,

mashu, raj90, tanishab, sweta639, Mourvi, ProttashaPriya, Dedeepya33, pooja71, princess08,

Cooldude101, Danny92, alind713, dhillon90, sarita2393, bans8597, Hudah18, lakshita03, Sony.K,

Hadjer13, riya4smartgirl, Shahnazzie101, Parth_Advi, aditi16, yams_ini, sunset17, Divzonly,

sharon.babu, shami810, princypriya, suraiya77, manya_189, Dhariya_, AMAR_LOVE, ashabanerjee,

mehjaben_nahin,

Okay enough of my blabbering, here u go with the final part.

Part 5

But never ever he remembered marrying a girl in his life, and he came back to his senses, and saw the lady staring at him, he keenly watched her features, her eyes, which speak volumes, her button nose, her pulpy lips, he felt like tasting it, and he suddenly moved near her looking into her eyes and something within him drew him more and next moment he placed his lips on hers, and he felt the taste was more familiar to him, but he was so sure that he was seeing this lady for the first time, he left her immediately and moved out for fresh air and he was in deep thinking, stirring his mind to bring out this mystery which disturbs him a lot. He felt the usual head ache, but this time, he was not going to give up to this head ache, he closed his eyes and tried recalling something, but nothing in particular, he thought and thought, and again those blurred image showed up, where he was walking

before a girl, and both of them dressed up in bridal attire, and he didn't stopped this time,and he could see himself placing sindoor in her head and placing mangalsutra in her neck and then he smiled at her and she replied the smile,and there was so much love in her eyes. Those eyes. He opened his eyes abruptly and remembered the eyes.

He ran to his mom asking about his past, but she showing some attitude said that "Whats the use in telling it again and again Manik, you will not trust me, if I say, you got married and you were so much love in with her" and he cut her off by saying "Mom, can i have a look at her, i mean any photo of hers" Nyonika looked at him intently and asked "Why are u asking about all these suddenly after 2 years Manik?" He just bend his head down and said "From very long ago, i have blurred images of a girl with me all the time, and when i saw Maya, i felt as if she is my own, and when i went to make her my own by paying off to her mom, i felt the same with her mom, i felt, she was also mine" and looked at her helplessly.

Nyonika smiled inwardly and said "Manik?" and he continued " By any chance, is maya's mother the girl you said, i meant, is maya's mother Nandini" and Nyonika hurried back with his marriage album and filled him with all that happened. After she finished her story, he flew back immediately to the place where he felt peace and the door swung open and next moment he hugged the lady who opened the door and he murmured "sorry Nandini".

Nandini was beyond happiness to get her Manik back , and she parted from him and looked at his face, which was tear-stained yet confused, and she slowly made him sit and she sat next to him and asked "do u remember me?" with a hint of doubt and he nodded his head to NO and she burst out in tears and she went back to the next room and there cried her heart out, and after few seconds, she felt a pat on her shoulder and turned back to see him standing there staring at her with a painful eyes filled with tears. And he said "Pls Nandini, don't cry, stop it, you had cried enough" He accepted the fact that he doesn't remember her but now he wanted to trust that whatever his mom tried to tel him was all the fact that happened in his life, and the pull he felt towards Nandini and Maya was a evidence for it, his memory could play pranks with him but not his heart.And he was a fool who took this much long to realize all these.

And Nandini readily gave in and kissed him in the forehead, since she could see the pain he felt seeing her in pain, which she had earlier witnessed with her Mani,this was her Mani, who could not see her in pain, and her pain causes him much more pain, though he had forgotten the happenings of the past two years but now they will not let it affect their love anymore, as she needed him to be by her side, and that too as Mani and not as Manik Malhotra. And she felt warm being in his arms again.And he felt peaceful with the kiss on his forehead and the blurred images now seem to vanish off from his thoughts and he felt peaceful with her. And then life was more blissful than ever for this lovely couple with their daughter Maya.

Am done with my first ss in this forum, i could see the likes dropping down, no issues, i wil continue for the rest of u, who are with me. Wil post the cs of my new story.

I have seen many of u sent buddy req to me, for pms pls buddy this account, sorry for being late uma88pm

Time for ur likes and comments. And one more question, do u guys need an epilogue for this? Reply in ur comments na, i wil go with maximum request.

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago