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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Loved the update can't wait to read more of it

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#372

I loved how you showed the connection between Arnav and asha. Especially Arnav not only was lost in his pasty earnings but took a step further to replace his yearning with a satisfaction of providing Asha her wish, of replacing hers with happiness and contentment.

Arnav is already noticing so much about Khushi.

Nice update.

P.S. All the best for your exams.

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Loved it i had tears in my eyes while reading it my heart goes to young asha who lost her both parents n also for arnav n khusi

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

me:)

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Lovely update

Loved how little Asha and Arnav bonded

Loved the flash backs. Khushi 's loss of family, Arnav's yearning family and Asha missing her parents seeing a couple playing with child very well written.

Loved the way Arnav fulfilled Asha's longing wish

Arnav was drawn towards Khushi's eyes which talks volume 😳

Hope Arnav pulls Khushi out of her misery soon.

Loved how accepted Arnav and Aakash as her family and happy now even though she was sad when she lost her family in terrorist attack

Loved this line

"For every onlooker, this was the most close knit family. But no one, not even those involved knew that all the three of them shared a similar sorrow and that is why they were bounded together by destiny."

Edited by sudhareddy - 10 years ago

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Asha and Arnav bonded so naturally. the vacancy of dad figure and the language will be something that will only be pulling them together and Arnav seems to be more than willing. I cannot wait for Khushi to come over her barriers , but I know it has to wait...

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Sadhana, very nicely written chapter.

How every small action reminds not only a little child of her parents but also the child within a grownup of her lost parents and her childhood.

Ofcourse Asha misses her Appa and Amma and seeing the little girl thrown up in air by her father reminded her of her own dad. But somewhere Khushi too was her dad's princess and however old one gets, they will always be a child for their parents and she remembering her childhood was also natural.

Arnav's longing though similar yet different.

Loved how Asha bonded with Arnav.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Loved the update.. Glad that Arnav fulfilled Asha 's yearning... Waiting to know who's Karishma 's father..

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Finally caught up with last three updates...sorry for late comment yaar..

Love the way u potrayed arshi emotions..so hearttouching

So finally arshi's past was out...its so heartwrenching nd painful to see arshi like this..

Khushi who was once a happy bubbly girl..now became a broken soul after dat horrible accident where she lost all her loved one..living only for her asha..her hope..with a hope that one day may b she able to b happy again..may b can able live her life fully...may b..

Nd arnav who was abandoned by his parents after he was born..and that innocent child even not got the fate to b loved for to b cherish nd being taken care by his parents which he was craving for alwayz...oh sadh it made me cry while reading abt arshi's past...😭😭..its so painful to see them like this..

Three of them have diffrent emotions by sseing that girl thrown away in air like this..kushi who remebering once her hsppy childhood..nd arnav who alawayz longing for his parents love bt never get that...nd specially asha who was still young to understand what to feel not being able to b with parents..not been able to see him again...bt

Arnav's one little gesture really matters most to that little angle who also craving to b with his father to b loved to b pampered by him to b thrown to air like dat girl..which somehow arnav fulfilled it nd give some joy to her tender heart nd from thier beings a beautiful frndship of asha nd arnav..lovely

Khushi dont wanted to show her pain her vulnerabilty to anyone bt arnav able to read it very well dat pain behind that eyez...he was the angle send by god for her to takeaway all the sorrow nd gonna filled her life with love ne happinesss..nd she realised it soon...😃

Looking forward for nxt..

Continue soon

Edited by latersbaby. - 10 years ago

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chinnulu

@chinnulu

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#379

Amazing and Emotional update.

The longing for their parents love for all three of them, Arnav, Khushi and Asha was written beautifully. The bond between Asha and Arnav was amazing. Loved how the child will bond when the person show love towards them was lovely. Though Khushi doesn't want to Arnav know about her is justified hope she too opens up like Asha wanted which she is opposing in some way or the other. Waiting for the next one.

Thanks for the PM

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#380

It was such a beautiful update Sadhana... emotion packed and with lots of hope for the future of these three people, struck hard by fate. Loved how you have brought together their pain and sorrow... the wistfulness and restlessness they feel seeing the father daughter duo. While Khushi was reminiscing her past... Arnav and Asha craved for this feeling... this emotion of undivided love. The whole part where he throws a sullen Asha up in the air... that brings out bubbling laughter from that little girl was just so adorable. I wonder why Khushi is keeping such a distance from Arnav. Although I am glad she has started affecting him... excited to see where this story flows. All the best for your exams Sadhana... study well and I hope to see you soon. Have made a banner for this lovely story... hope you like it! 😃