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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Ok ok, I'm back with proper feedback 😆

Nidhi, this was wonderful! The way he touches her and she still reacts to him, despite all these years apart was just divine. You write with an ease that is very hard to come by 😳

My favorite was definitely this:

"Phir tum mujhe besharam kehti." He raised an eyebrow and pretended to leer at the gaping neckline of her robe.

SOOO Nachiket! 😆

Thank you for posting this and allowing us to read your wonderful work; it's a pleasure to read everything you've written 😊

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Shikha,

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you liked the last part and thanks for all your support throughout. 😳

Nachiket knows this is one of those situations where the biwi is always right but he might as well say his piece 😉

I hope you will continue to share your talents with us as well 😊

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

That was one wonderful update👏i loved it...

Though I am disappointed that you ended it too soon😒

Can we get another story from you?? Pleaseee...??

Oh and my favourite line was this:

"Just a man." he placed her hand over his heart. "Who misses his wife very much."

This was sooo sweet😳

And when he surrendered himself to her❤️

Loved it😳

Please Please Please do write again soon... Will be waiting

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Narges, thank you for your lovely comments😳...they're appreciated more than you know.
Sometimes I think that when they come together it will be because of a momentous occasion, sometimes I think it will be an ordinary day like any other.

I'll write more per the terms of our deal😊

Terms of our deal? I never knew we had one! Please get your facts right 😉

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...
That was one wonderful update👏i loved it...
Though I am disappointed that you ended it too soon😒

Can we get another story from you?? Pleaseee...??

Oh and my favourite line was this:

"Just a man." he placed her hand over his heart. "Who misses his wife very much."
This was sooo sweet😳

And when he surrendered himself to her❤️

Loved it😳

Please Please Please do write again soon... Will be waiting

Thank you Tiana!! 😳

I'm glad you enjoyed the ending... Wanted to bring Nachiket back to his caring gorgeous self.

I'm a bit tapped out in terms of inspiration at this point, we'll see. Would love to read another one of your poems or stories also 😊

Also both your beautiful icon and siggy are two of my all time favorites 😃

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: metoyou

Terms of our deal? I never knew we had one! Please get your facts right 😉

What??

I guess I should have had Nivi write up the contract

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Thank you Sukhi!! 😳 I am glad you liked the ending, I wanted that moment to be gentle despite the tension. Thanks for your patience with this. ❤️

It was gentle, nuanced and everything they stand for ❤️

Thank you!!

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