main hoon na (ZAYA VERSION) epoiluge updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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what will happen when a student will fall for his teacher

its collab between me and my sis harshta sis so pls stay tuned
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Posted: 9 years ago
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charactersketch
aliya-a chemsitry teacher in dareejleing unversity every professor and every guy is behind her but at last zain wins her







zain-a handsome and a hot guy whom every teacher and girls likes but he only only falls for aliya
and a army major and a bussiness man who is currently now on a scret mission
rizwan-best friend of zain and his step brother but zain only knows this
surriya-rizwan;s mother and zain's step mother she don't know that zain is step son
ayat-a good girl respect aliya a lot treat her like her old sister



rehaan-a filrty who always tries to touch aliya but always zain save comes for the resuce
zeeshan-a big villan

usmaan-who died for his nation and left his son and wife for zain


so stay tuned for this story



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Go on, it looks interesting !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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FIRST CHAPTER

army headquater
usmaan-zeeshan tumna unko jaane liye jinka koi guna nahni tha issliye main tumhe aaj army se nikalata hoon
zeeshan-fires the gun on usmaan
but zain comes from the behind and start beating him
zain-mera dad ke jaan lena ke baar main soch bhi mat
but zeeshan signals other guy of his gang and he fires the gun
zain-dad *zeeshan runs away*
zain took usmman in his arms-dad utho na pls maine apke bina kaise raho
usmman-zain ek baar apne pura zindagi main surriya aur rizwan se mile lena
zain-dad pls asia mat kijiye main nahni rahi sakta pls dad
but usmaan died he took his last breath in his loveable son's arms

zain did all the rituals
zain-dad main apse waad karta hoon ki mom aur rizwan doono ko apse milne ke liye yahin lekar aaogein
ghulam-hmm bikul
zain-uncle aap
ghulam-mera saath ghar chalo

at ghulam's house

ghulam-zain main tumhari abbu ka bohut acha dost hoon issliye tumse kehta hoon tum na jo army joint kiye hai uska faarz achi se nibhana kyun ki tum bohat fit aur strong ho
zain-bikul uncle main army join karo yeh dad ka sapna tha
ghulam-toh thik hai tumhara mission toh nahni par mera ek kaam wo meri ek beti jo daarejeling ke ek college padhi karti hain uske jaan danger main hai issliye main chahta hoon ki tum darejeeling main ek student ke jaise jaao aur usko dhyaan rakho karoga na mera kaam uska naam ayat hai aur yeh hai uske photo
zain-main aaj hi daarejeling jaa raha hoon kyunki aapke iss kaam ki baad mujhe dad ka kaam bhi pura karna hai aur phir on duty bhi aana hai


recap-now lets see how instersting this story his ln next update aliya's entry and other character's enter too and haan do read this chapter as its very important actual story is being from this
Edited by steelfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You made two posts regarding this?
I posted on the other one, too. Sorry. :P


Woah! It seems.. cool!
Wonderful, even!

Love the CS and the chap!
Please continue soon ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER TWO
zain reached to darjeeling and he went to the unviersity first of all he directly went to the principal

principal's cabin

zain-may l come in
p.s-yes
p.spls have aseat
zain takes a seat
p.s-toh aap ko ghulam ji ne bheja hai
zain-jee
p.s takes out a paper and hands it to zain
zain-sir yeh toh admission paper hai toh mera admission hogaya kya
p.s-right u may now leave
zain left the cabin and heads towards canteen
all girls and boys were gossping
but soon they saw zain and they stoped for a while
ayat-hmm new admission aap toh 25 years hai lagta hai lekin iss age tak toh graudution pura hojata hai toh aap yahan
rizwan-good question
zain was so happy to see rizwan
zain *rizwan mera bhai lekin samne se sab kuch nahni kahonga kyunki baat pigada sakte hai better hai ki main wait karoon*
zain-friends
rizwan and ayat -yes friends
ayat-lekin main apko bhai bol
zain-okay doll
ayat-doll
zain-hain kyu ki tum doll jaise cute ho
rizwan-see our new chemsitry teacher
zain turned back and was extermely lost in the beauty of the girl who was approaching them
she was wearing a light blue saree with diamond earnings and her curly hairs wear adding more beauty
her saree pallu was flying when she passed by zain ,he hold her pallu in his hands
aliya-tumhari himat kaise hui meri saree pakhadan ki
zain-sorry mama
aliya-chalo meri saath principal ke pass chalo aur hain yeh mera pallu leave it
zain-sorry
zain follow her till principal's cabin on the way her hairs were flying which exposed her milky back
zain in mind -kitna hot hai yaar
aliya and zain both reached the cabin

ln the cabin
aliya-sir yeh mera pallu catch kar raha tha
p.s-hmm main baat karta hoon iss se aliya ji
zain-apka naam aliya hai kitna acha naam hai
aliya-apni tarfi apne paas rakho smajhe sir pls handle him
aliya left the cabin
p.s-zain just leave
zain-thank you sir
p.s just smiled

when aliya was walking rehan approached her and try to touch her
but zain saw this so he came for the resuce
aliya-ji aap
zain-ma'ma l am sorry
aliya-tum
zain winked on her indicating her that he has came for her resuce
aliya gave a smile to him indicating him that she understood his plans
aliya-chalo chemsitry ke formula 10 times likhao come with me
zain takes her hand in his and they both left rehaan,rehaan was shocked


aliya-thanks
zain-its okay ma'ma l am sorry
aliya-hmm next time dhyaan rakhan okay

and she left

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!
Do continue soon!
It's great so far <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-3

COLLEGE
CHEMISTRY CLASS
zain-bhai ab konsa lecture hai
rizwan-wo
and zain was lost
aliya entered the class and everyone wished her
aliya-well main aapke new chemistry teacher hoon
a boy-kitne hot hai ,kaash ki mere nikkah iss se ho jaye
zain hit him
aliya saw all this and came in middle
aliya-zain stop it ,zain
zain was back to his sense
aliya-pagal ho tum principal sir ko pata chal gaye na toh tumhe suspend kar denge wo college se
zain-sorry
aliya-jao jaakar betho
aliya was teaching to whole class but zain was busy in staring her
aliya gave a formula to write and everyone was busy in completing it
zain was knowing the answer but he was not writing
aliya-zain kya hua
zain-ma'ma mujhse nahni ho raha pls help me
aliya came towards zain and sat beside him
aliya bend down and now her hairs were flying and she was looking breath talking now for zain it was difficult to control
aliya-zain tumhe ab smajhe aaye gaya
zain-haan
and the bell ranged
aliya got up from the seat
aliya-okay then bye everyone kal milte hain
aliya was about to leave when she passed a smile to zain
zain smirked back
LIBRARY
every one was reading the book when they saw rizwan in library all were shocked to see him in library as he never comes to library
rizwan took a seat beside zubair
zubair-bhai ek baat bolu
rizwan-kya hai
zubair-ayat teri girl friend hai na
rizwan-shut up wo aur meri girl friend never aare woh toh bikul ladka hai
ayat heard all this and was crying,zain saw ayat crying
zain-kya hua doll
ayat-bhaiyu wo rizwan mujhe ladka kehte hai kya mai beautiful nahni dekhte hoon
zain-kis ne kaha tum bohat cute ho
ayat-main nahni maante
zain-chalo

ALIYA'S HOUSE
zain ranged the bell and aliya opened the door and she was wearing a blue dress
aliya-zain tum yahan kya kar raha ho
zain-mujhe ek help chahiye ayat ko bikul aap ke jaise bana dijiye na pls
aliya-ayat yahan aao
aliya took ayat inside
aliya-tum jaao
zain-par
aliya closed the door

next update-wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
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All 3 parts are awesome dear...
Very intresting...

Update next part soon :)
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CHAPTER-4
COLLEGE
NEXT DAY
everyone was studying when their eyes went on ayat who was now looking cute,zain saw all the reaction and was now smirking (he was wearing a brown blazer and a white t-shirt haan that one which he wored when zain and aliya came back from bhopal after their confession)suddenly his eyes fall on aliya ,she was wearing a baby pink sari and her hairs were straight (suhgaraat wale sari)zain was lost in aliya
aliya was really happy to see ayat and everyone's reaction
aliya patted ayat's shoulder
aliya-hmm so who is this cute girl
and zain approached them
zain-hmm so finally apne mera kaam kar diya
aliya-yeh maine tumhara liye nahni ayat ke liye kiye hai

and aliya started walking towards ,when she was walking her hairs were flying and was exposing her milky waist and back, zain was now loosing his control ,zain was so lost that he was not able to hear the ring of his phone
zain finally picked the call
zain-hello
man-sir woh ladka jo terriost ke gang ka tha ,usne kal raat bhaag ne ki khoshi ki thi
zain-what main aaya raha hoon
zain ran towards his car
HEAD DEPARTMENT
zain entered inside the room and signalled everyone to go out
zain slapped him hard on the face
boy-tum mera kuch nahni kar sakte
zain-aur main tumhe nahni chodunga
zain got a call
zain-hello
ayat-bhaiyu jaldi college main aayi
zain-doll main aaya raha hoon
COLLEGE
everyone in corridor was talking about promo night
zain-rizwan doll college main itna shor kyun hai
ayat-wo bhaiyu aaj raat ko promo night hai
zain-oh really
ayat-lekin entry sirf couples ko hai
rizwan-aur hum teachers ko saath mainlekar jaa sakte hain
ayat-aur aliya appi ko subha se 500 offer aaye gaye hai lekin abhi tak kisko choose nahni kiya hai aliya appi ne
aliya-so aaj raat ke liye partners ready hai
zain-rizwan aur ayat ke toh partner ready hai lekin mera nahni
aliya-kyun tum kitne hot aur handsome ho phir koi ready nahni hai tumhara partner bane ke liye
zain-main hot aur handsome hoon
aliya- l mean to say sab hai
zain-khair kya aaj raat ke liye aap mere partner banegi
aliya-sorry zain but maine already kisko haan keh diye hai
zain was now broken

next update-promo night
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