This is my new ss
part1-page 1
part 2-page 4
part 3-page 10
part 4-pge 14
TRANSLATION OF SONG-PAGE 17
part 5-page 19
part6-page 24
part 7-page 29
part 8 maha update- page 34
part 9-page 42
part 10- page 44,45
part 11- page 50
PART 12-PAGE 55
part 13-page 60
part 14-page 66
part 15-page 70
pt 16pg 74
part 17 page 78
part 18-page 81
part 19-page 85
part 20-page 88
epilogue-page 91
And the name of story is DOORIYAN PYAAR KO MITAATHA NAHI HAI
This is a story which shows about the depth of relationships such as friendship, love , affection etc...
So the character sketch is
1. A.C.P ARJUN SURYAKANTH RAWTE- second in officer of EMERGENCY TASK FORCE (ETF).he is devilishly handsome, hot, ruthless cop, very faithful, trustworthy. Has a very bad past had been disowned by a big businessman father because of his love n affection towards ROSHINI RAWTE
2. ROSHINI RAWTE- the life of Arjun was around her,died 4 years ago . sikander killed her
3. Aditya rawte- five years old , apple of eye of Arjun, the last symbol of his beloved roshini
4. A.C.P Sameer rathod- chief of E.T.F, married to aisha rathod HATES ARJUN BECAUSE OF roshini n shows hatred even towards adithya
5. Aisha rathod- ammunisation head , wife of Sameer rathod .a sweet lady but called the DABANG LADY
6. Sreekanth sen, sakshi, liza,chotu same. Sakshi likes Arjun but he enver gives a heck to her
The storyis set in where Arjun has already joined etf, there is no riya in etf as of now. All the other team are present, Arjun and Sameer are always at loggerheads.
Arjun never mingles with any of his subordinates, adtya studies in kindergarden after which he is taken care in the crche near ETF.the ony person who can make Arjun smile is adthya. Arjun is searching for sikander to avenge roshini dead, but none knows who sikander is.asi is also a quiet boy who doesn't mingles with any of Arjun subordinates. When adi was first bought to etf about 2 years back he wanted to go to rathore, who hated him apparently n never took him after that he stopped mingling with everybody. Mr and mrs.suryakanth rawte are in U.S. Arjun was in delhi, who left delhi n joined Mumbai about 4 yrs after roshini death
Etf has a case where two of commissioners daughter are kidnapped from airport, com first daughter was coming from Sydney n younger daughter had gone to pick her up.so, etf is given the case
Rathore: team we have a case, com daughters are kidnapped
Arj: kahan se
Rat: from airport
Aisha :any demands
Rat: yes mr.lal
So, its we go to handover lal to them but rescue the girl n come, M I CLEAR. Want my team to support me n don't take any impulsive decision
Therethey transfer lal n they give the girls. When the girls are being transferred, Arjun takes the gun from his socks n shoot the head n rescues the girls n lal. The girls face are covered with shawls
Rathore: I had told u not to do any thing implusive, kabhi nahi sudharoge tum.
Ar: the girls are safe right the what
The girls remove the shawls n hug com
Com: thank you guys, ye hai riya meri pehli beti aur ye sheena meri doosari betiriya: hi guys thanks for saving me
Arjun just walks away, riys is confused
Com: vo kuc aisa hi hai, pls use galath math samajna
Sree: whT ARE YOU GUYS DOING
RI: doctor hoon lashon ka
Sheena: architecture pad rahi hoon
Liza: mathlab forensics
Riya: haan , aur apki eam me hi join karne vaalihoon . bye guys kal milthe hain
The next day, in etf all are there
Rat:Com daughter is joiningtoday
Arj; kya?kisi ne bola nahi
Rat: agar kl chale anhi gaye hote toh pata chalta
Arj: jo ladki apni hifaasath na kar sakthi hai vo etf join kar rahi hai, seriously?
Ri: for ur kind information MR. ARJUN SURYAKANTH RAWTE, I never went n told them to kidnap me nor I am a police officer, I am a forensic surgeon aur mujhe ye martial arts ki zaroorath nahi hai my work is in helping u solve a case, do u get me MR?
Sree(in mind): ladki me dum hai boss
Ri: aur han I will prove myself as a capable officer agar kar na payi toh TAANA marna ab nahi, in low voice( patha nahi apne aap ko kya samaj tha hai)
Ri :my joining letter sir
Rat: liza, ye ahi tumhari nayi senior
Arj: lekin miss. Mukherjee aaj hi join kar rahi hai na, toh senior kaise
Riya: first of all call me riya, mujhe apne kabiliyath ko prove akrna not as com daughter so all will call me riya and wil not use my surmame . pls it is a requwest n secondly to your question,I worked for INTERPOL as junior forensic in Sydney, ao ho gayoi na mein senior ya aur kuch batana hai?
Ri: sam sir, can u show my cabin
Rat takes her with her liza too goes
Arjun also leaves to his cabin
Chotu: are ye tho sam sir se zyada ladthi hai arju sir se, he bhagwan ekdum perfect
Sree: haan yaar pataka hai
Sakshi: but I didn't like her back answering
Aisha: tujhe Arjun ko koyi kuch kah ye kab acha laga hai.
They get a case where riya shows that she is the best by solving half the case with forensics
Ri: ab patha chala riya kya cheez hai n goes n sts in her place
Sak: arj chodo v sab , I will get u tea
Arj: pls mera dimaag karab math karo(shouts n walsk off)
Sree: fir thod di iska dil
Ri: haan dil thd di, kya matlab?
Sree: vo kya ha na madam loves our Arjun sir but he never gives n heck for her
Ri: I am giving u a fee advice , use pyaar karo who will respect first.
Sakshi: vo aisa nahi hai
Ri: oh please pyaar ko support karne ki zaroorath nahi hai
Like this days are moving Arjun n ri can never gt along each other personally but professionally, they are good.
One day, riya is about to see the article about roshini death that arj shouts at her.none dpeaks about arj n his life. That da, com comes to etf. All thinks what is wrong
Com: toady all come to my house
Rat: kuch kaas hai kya
Com: u people don't know today is riya birthday
All feel bad because arj had shouted at her. All re coming no abhana
All: sure sir excep Arjun
Arj: I am sorry sir, mein nahi aa pavoonga
Com: kyun
Arj"; kyunk aaj mera son ka bday ahio
Com :kya, o.k we will celebrate it together.
Arj :no thanks sir
Com: are arj come on, its an order n leaves
Sak :atleat u can do this for making her cry on this day
Arj :fine
Com takes riya from pantry n leaves
Com : u have a surprise today
Rip; what is that
Aom: u will come to know in the evening
Everybody come there when Arjun n aadi enter, com welcomesa them
But at the same time arj gets a call abt sikander
Arj tells this to com
Adi:aa p anhi rahoge kya
Arj :smjo beta ye bahuth imp ahi
Com: tum jao Arjun know this is very imp for u
N picks adi n goes inside
Com to ri
Com: this is ur surprise, ths is adi , today is even his bday
Ri\: really acha we are sharing our bday
Ri: ye kiska beta ai,
Co; vo etf mein kaam karne vae
At the same time arj calls n says that he needs o go UC for finding about sik
Com asks him to go n he will take care if adi, arj refuses but later gives in
Com calls ri aside n says that don't tell abt his adad to him , he is on uc, so iam plannn to make him stay here
Ri: o k dada
Then roi n adi cut cake n feed eachother n party goes in full swing . com aasks ri to take adi aside n tells hall the guest who are frm dept that not to remind adi abt adi bcz of arj UC
( SO BASICALLY GUYS RIYA DOES NOT KNOW ABT ADI DAD as along with Arjun even two more people have gone to uc)
Like this one month passes, arj is in u.c . oneday, team gets info that arj has been injured badly in the uc , sik ahs been killed
They all rush to the hospital the last one to reach is riya
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Fb:
When this news is recieveed all fgo to hospital excepr riya
Dr: aap me sein p[atient relative kaun hai?
Sam: koi nahi, his wife iis dead, his parents are in US, tnere are no other relatives for him
Dr: then I call his parents, I wont sign without his parents consent bczthe patint is in bad condition n his xcondition is worsening, so we cant operate on him
Art calls his parents who promises to come so that Arjun will be alive
Fb ends}
When ri reaches, fdr:I am sorry to tell u that mr. Arjun heart rate is going low, the tblert that should work is noy ashoiwng any effects on his body.
Ri: did u give him enicillin in glucose( imaginative guys no big info abt medicine)
Dr: haan, that's gsd or clotting
Ri: are iu mad, he is allergic to pencilin n u people give that means his heart rate will reduce right'
Dr: nobody told this to me
Ri: crap,why idnt u start the operation
Dr: nobody suigned the consent form
Ri: I will sign it, give me the consent form
Dr : who are u o him?dont u know only relatives should sign it
Ri: I AM MRS. RIYA ARJUN RAWTE, HIS LEGALLY WEDDED WIFE.
Dr: but these people said that his wife died, I think u are lying to save him
Ri: takes a diary from her bag, takes a paper from diary n shows their wedding paper n snatches the consent foir and signs it
Dr starts the operation
The full etf, com , his wife, sheena are shocked with riya and her words
When the operation started , com goes n asks
com: ye tum kya keh rahi ho, tum Arjun ki biwi aur ye legally wedded wife mathlab kab kya?
Ri; meri aur Arjun ki shaadi 5 yrs pehale ho chuki hai
Rat: toh roshini
Ri: rosh k kya hua
Com: tum roshini ko jaanti thi
Ri: roshnini is my best friend
Rat :means arj n roshini, cheated u
Ri: what are u all telling, arj or roshini can never cheat me
Rat: he has cheated u. rosh deserves such a death . I used to feel bad for her bcz I felt bcz of arj rosh died but now I think she deserves that n even Arjun also
Ri slaps rathore
Ri: one more word against arj n rosh I will kill u
Rat: don't get me wrong , ri bcz of rosh only my brother ABHAY died
Ri: aap ABHAY RATHOD KE AYI HO, AUR ROSH MAR GAYI KYA KAISE
Rat: tum nahi jaanti arj had killed sik rother, so sik enetered arj house with intention of killing his wife n killed rosh. Arj could save only adi , who was in rosh womb
Ri: kya meri jagah, rosh mar gayi. Mein apni best vrnd ko bacha nahi payi. Adi is rosh son,n cries
Rat : u all wanted to know right why I haed arj, listen bcz roshini cheated my brother with arj n seeing this he drived harshly n died in an accident. I hate adi bcz he reminds me of roshini n her betrayal
Ri: u can never hate adi when you know his reality bcz he is ur blood, he is ur brothers son, ADITHYS IS ABHAY DHAMSING RATHODE AND ROSHINI RAWTE SON
RAT: aisa ho hi anhi saktha hai, u expect me to believe that roshini after marruing Arjun was pregnant with my brother son
Ri: bas kijiye ye sab , roshini Arjun ki biwi nahi hai aur na hi ho sakthi hai, Arjun rawte ke dil , dimaag aur jism par sirf aur sirf ek hi ladki ka haq hai, mera aur kisi ka nahi
com: agar biwi nahi hai toh roshini ka naam roshini rawte kaisa bana, beta sambhalo apne aap ko, rosh is his wife we all know it n even adi looks a lot like arjun
ri: are ROSHINI is not his wife, he is his sister her name is not ROSHINI ARJUN RAWTE, BUT ROSHINI SURYAKANTH RAWTE ,arj sister, my best friend , abhay lover
so, hw is it guys. Pls comment. Next update mostly next week.do read my stories n comment.pls
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