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You Are Mine
Part c

Next morning, all were ready on time.

Mrityunjay sat on front seat next to the driver's seat. Dadaji and Tara sat behind him. Dadaji and Tara were talking about the places coming on their way and Mrityunjay was quietly listening to them. Mrityunjay was getting bored and slept as he hadn't completed his sleep last night because of the fight between his mind and heart.

After reaching the temple, Dadaji woke Mrityunjay. They purchased the necessary things for the pooja and then entered the temple. The temple priest, on seeing Dadaji, came to greet him.

"Namaste panditji. Meet Mrityunjay's wife Tara."
Tara took blessings from the priest.

"Dhanraj ji as a ritual of your family, Mrityunjay and Tara need to take all the vows here too."

"As you say," he said.

The priest arranged all the important things required for the wedding.

Mrityunjay and Tara sat around the holy fire and the priest started the wedding ceremony.

It was the wedding that every girl wants, with the humming and chanting of mantras, taking marriage vows in front of the holy fire. Tara's eyes' were filled with tears. During her first marriage which was in court when she married Mrityunjay was an adjustment, but now her each and every heartbeat was for Mrityunjay, she now knew who Mrityunjay was. She was taking vows wholeheartedly.

Mrityunjay once again filled her maang, this time with love for Tara, and not for the sake of Dadaji or anyone else but for himself, for his love. He tied the mangalsutra around her neck. Holding her hand, he took the vows to always be hers in all phases of life, in happiness, in sorrow.

Tara too vowed to be his, and be with him always in all his sorrow and happiness. They took blessings from the priest and Dadaji.

After completing the pooja, they started their journey back home. After one hour of journey, Dadaji was tired and so he slept. Tara was watching the outside scenery. The cool breeze was playing with Tara's hair. Mrityunjay switched on the radio.

~Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye shayad yahi too pyaar hai~
Hearing this first line, Tara looked at Mrityunjay and Mrityunjay looked at her through the rear-view mirror with admiration.

~Betabiyo mein dhadkan meri chal paye shayad yahi too pyaar hai~
Tara lowered her gaze on Mrityunjay and was smiling listening to the song. Mrityunjay too smiled.

~Kuch bhi kaha naa kuch bhi suna naa phir bhi bechain dil hai humara~
Mrityunjay was trying to read her expressions, wanted to see what her deep eyes want to say, so he adjusted the rear mirror so that her face was fully visible to him.

~Behake kadam hai muskil mein hum hai dekho sambhle bhala kaise yaara~
Tara noticed his act and changed her position so that he is not able to see her in the mirror. Mrityunjay saw that he was again caught by Tara in his act.

~Chahe bina bhi nazdik hum chale aaye shayad yahi too pyaar hai~
Both of them turned their faces in the opposite direction and smiled thinking how childish they were acting.

~Nazare bicha de pehre laga de dil pe par dil kisiki naa mane~
Tara peeped slightly to see whether he was still seeing her through the mirror and saw that yes he was. She blushed.

~Kaato pe chalke sholon pe jalke roke mil ke rahege deewane~
Mrityunjay was further adjusting the mirror so that even if she tried to hide she can't. But Joseph adjusted the mirror according to him.

~Chahat ki lau toh aandhi mein bhi jhilmilaye shayad yahi too pyaar hai~
Mrityunjay got upset and Tara chuckled seeing this.

Now Mrityunjay started to adjust the side mirror of the car to see her.

~Yeh mulakate yeh teri ankhein ek pal naa main bhool payu~
Tara and Mrityunjay's eyes met once again.

~Kitni mohabbat hai kitni chahat tumse kaise bhala main batau~
Tara was adoring him with immense love in her eyes for him, with a smile on her lips and a spark in her eyes.

~Acha lage jo tu samne muskuraye shayad yahi too pyaar hai~
He closed his eyes to capture her smile.

~Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye shayad yahi too pyaar hai~
She shyly lowered her eyes.

Mrityunjay phone rang. He got irritated with this.
Tara smirked seeing him irritated because of the phone call.
He unwillingly took the call. "Ok I am coming." He cut the call.

"Whose call was it?" asked Dadaji, who woke with the phone's ring.

"Manager's call, there is some important work at office and I need to be there." Before Mrityunjay could complete his sentence,
Tara cut in saying, "So are you going to the office now."

"Yes I need to."
Tara got upset hearing this.

After reaching home, Mrityunjay changed his clothes and went to the office.

Tara was sitting quietly on the bed. "So you love him." her inner self said.

"Yes." she replied.

"But does he love you?" her inner self questioned.

"Yes he too." Tara replied with confidence.

"Did he ever tell you that he loves you?"

"No. But I know he loves me and tomorrow I am sure he will say that."
Tara was confident about Mrityunjay. Tara slept while waiting for Mrityunjay to return.

Mrityunjay returned after midnight. He went to their room and saw Tara sleeping. He immediately went to his study, brought paper and pencil and started sketching her.

She was looking like Sleeping Beauty; her deep eyes were covered by petal shaped eyelids. There was contentment on her face which attracted Mrityunjay. After completing his sketch, Mrityunjay gently covered Tara with the blanket. He went back to the study to keep his sketch and pencil and returned to their room to sleep.

When Tara woke up in the morning, she saw Mrityunjay had slept next to her on the bed facing her.

His face showed how content he was. A smile was lilting up his face.

Then she noticed Mrityunjay was sleeping holding her hand. She blushed and then slowly removed her hand from his. She freshened up and went for breakfast.

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Khadeja Akter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#353

Excellent Update Archi ...👏

WOW!!! 2nd marriage with all rituals...
They married for their dear ones ..
Now , they married with whom they love
Again, Mrityunjay doting and caught by Tara 😛
This time Tara also caught and truely their childish behaviour made me laugh 😆
The song is lovely , i was listening while reading...
Now they realise their feelings ...😳
Waiting when they tell each other... 😃

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#354

So good update!!!! 😳

2nd marriage...wow!!!! ❤️

You are a brilliant writer... you described the car scenes so beautifully...

Chup chup ke ek dusre ko dekhna...Sharmana...loved it!! ❤️

and the song..hamesha itna perfect song kaise choose karti ho?😳

Tara's inner fight between her heart and brain...

she realized her feelings and is confident about MJ too... 😳

But I have a feeling that something is going to happen...itni jaldi confession..I don't think hoga...!!! 😉

Jo bhi ho I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!!

waiting for next one!! 😊

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Tina Moni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#355

Such a sweet and endearing update. .loved it..

Throughly enjoyed reading it...

Don't forget to update. .

Thanks for the pm.

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Pooja trivedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#356

Wonderful update

I liked 2nd marriage .

I fully enjoyed & imagined their car scene.

for this one song from my side " do dill mill rahe gain magar chupke chupke , Samson me bari bekarari ..."

Plz update fast

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Archana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: Khadeja
Excellent Update Archi ...👏

WOW!!! 2nd marriage with all rituals...
They married for their dear ones ..
Now , they married with whom they love
Again, Mrityunjay doting and caught by Tara 😛
This time Tara also caught and truely their childish behaviour made me laugh 😆
The song is lovely , i was listening while reading...
Now they realise their feelings ...😳
Waiting when they tell each other... 😃

Thanks dear for loving it 😃😃😃

He is thankfully not smart and always get caught in his act of doting 😉

They are acting like teenagers 😆

I am sure you must have enjoyed song while reading 😃😃

Lets see whoes gonna be first to tell😉

Updating soon 😊

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Archana

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com
So good update!!!! 😳
2nd marriage...wow!!!! ❤️
You are a brilliant writer... you described the car scenes so beautifully...
Chup chup ke ek dusre ko dekhna...Sharmana...loved it!! ❤️
and the song..hamesha itna perfect song kaise choose karti ho?😳
Tara's inner fight between her heart and brain...
she realized her feelings and is confident about MJ too... 😳
But I have a feeling that something is going to happen...itni jaldi confession..I don't think hoga...!!! 😉
Jo bhi ho I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!!
waiting for next one!! 😊

Thanks for loving that car scene Nira 😳

Don't you know , I have secret song box 😉😉

Tara can see, he loves her 😊

hahaha 😆😆😆😆
Why you feel something is going to happen ?? 😆😆😆

Thanks for loving it Nira 😃😃

Lets see next update to know whether u were right 😉
Updating soon 😊

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Archana

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: TINAMONI
Such a sweet and endearing update. .loved it..
Throughly enjoyed reading it...
Don't forget to update. .
Thanks for the pm.

Thanks for loving it dear 😳😳😳

Updating soon 😃

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Archana

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: kumari27
Wonderful update
I liked 2nd marriage .
I fully enjoyed & imagined their car scene.

for this one song from my side " do dill mill rahe gain magar chupke chupke , Samson me bari bekarari ..."

Plz update fast

Thanks for loving it dear 😃

car scene 😳😳

The song you suggested is also suits that situation 👏

Updating soon 😊

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