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princess08

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Posted: 10 years ago

Character Sketch

Nandini: very shy...sweet,pretty girl but becomes full of confidence when she meets fab 5...but then manik leaves her and she changes herself completely...from emotional to pratical...from shy to full of confidence to attitude...from smiling simple girl to full on angry girl...from caring girl to someone who doesn't care about anyone except her closed ones...now handles business of abhi with him...hates music as it remember her of manik

Manik: rich, spoilt but very handsome...dream boy of every girl...but full of attitude...becomes polite gentle meeting after nandini..can do anything for his friends...now a great business man

Cabir: best friend of manik...very cool...(not gay)..a big prankster..but very good at heart...drummer of fab 5...after manik leaves nandini...he is best friend of nandini..n cant listen manik's name even...treats nandini as a princess...she is his life..can do anything for her and his friends...loves navya but now they dont believe in love...now works with nandini in business...but is a drummer also...has made several albums

Mukti: guitarist of fab 5... very strong girl...does not care for anyone except her friends...fab 5 is family to her...but when she meets nandini and abhi she is changed...cares for nandini like sister...she too hates manik after what he did...she is a great guitarist and has done many albums...and manages a ngo

Dhruv: shy silent guy...very good at heart...guitarist of fab 5...very kind...loves aliya...he is angry on manik for what he did...but can't hate him...he and aliya manages aliya's parents business

aliya: fashionista...pretty gorgeous girl...plays keyboard...loves fab 5...in relation with dhruv...she cant belive how everyone can hate manik for nandini

abhi: ful of life person...does not believe in anything...(some past which will be relieved) but then meets nandini and starts leaving for her...she is his sister...his everything...just one tear in her eyes and he can kill that person...hates manik and can't see his face even

navya:nandini's best friend...nandini cant keep any secret from her...but everything changes when manik leaves her...she doesn't talk to her much now...they were like sisters...navya loves cabir but now has lost belief in love...while everyone is in usa...she is still in india...and is a very famous writer and singer too...

adi: nandini's manager and only friend that she has made in these 2 years...he doesn't know anything about her past till now

krishna:abhi's best friend and nandini's good friend from college...a very big rockstar...

hey...i have started writing this story...i m already posting it in fb...tell me do u like it? should i continue...?

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princess08

@princess08

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Posted: 10 years ago

part 1

It was morning. Everyone was sleeping in their respective houses when they received an invitation for a business party. In that, it was written that "NANDINI MURTHY IS ANNOUNCED AT THE BEST BUSINESS PERSON OF USA. AND SHE WILL BE AWARDED BY MANIK MALOHTRA". All were shock to read that, and at the same time they received a msg on their group that "meet u all in the party" from nandini. After reading it, they called each other on conference except nandini.

Cabir: did you got her msg?

everyone: yes we did

Cabir: this cant happen. why, why is he back again? and that too after 2 years. He was the one who left her shattered and now he is back and that too like this. Why?

Mukti: Cabir stop. i know its not good but we cant get hyper like this. We will have to do something.

Cabir:You are right mukti, we cant let anything happen again.

everyone: but what we will do?

cabir: lets tell it to abhi first. May be he can suggest something and moreover he has the right to know as he is not in city right now. Mukti you call him and tell as it will be somewhat difficult to tell him that

Mukti: ya i will handle him dont worry. Just think about nandu.

cabir: first let me know usne invitation card pdha h abhi tak ya nhi. I will call adi.

mukti: ya do it fast and call us asap

cabir: ya sure

Then cabir calls adi (nandini's manager in business and a good friend) and comes to know that she has not read it till now and cabir informs him to not give it to nandini till they say so.

Then he calls back everyone.

Cabir: usne nhi pdha h abhi tak

aliya: thank god. m bas ye soch ri thi ki usse kesa lgega janane k bad ki vo vapas aa ra h

mukti: ha yar. 2 sal mei sab kitna change ho gaya h na

dhruv: han mujhe to yad bhi nhi h nandini last tym dhng se hsi kab hgi..bs sara din fake smile leke ghumti h.

aliya: ya jis insan ki ek smile k lie hum kuch bhi kr skte the aj vo esi ho gyi h

cabir: yr but she is doing everything for us. You know right

mukti: offcourse we know. How can we forget that day, the worst day of our lives. That changed our lives forever

cabir: yr m to chahta hu bas ek bar ek bar vo dil kholke ro le. sara pain bhar ane de. But usse lagta h ki agar vo kamzor pad gyi to humara kya hoga. She knows she is the reason of our life. But yar mai usse ese bhi nhi dekh skta. Andar hi andar ghutate hue. Yr 2 sal ho gye hai still she is standing there only. I can never forgive Manik Malhotra for this.

Mukti: Relax Cabir. Please. Dont forget nandini is more important right now then that person for sure.

Cabir: Hmm...but u know she does not meet us that often now.

Aliya: lets go to her home today. Please. and will tell her there only.

dhruv: hmm...aliya nic idea..so guys meet u all in evening at nandini's place.

everyone: ya sure

In the evening, they went to nandini's house. They ask kaka where is she? And kaka replied that she is in her study room and some meeting is going on through video call. They then head to nandini's study room.

Seeing them, Nandini come and hug everyone and asked why are they here?

To which they replied, can't we come here without any reason.

nandini: ya y not. Its ur home too.

nandini: acha listen go to living room. I will come after completing the meeting.

Everyone: ya sure

cabir: yar yahan aa to gye but usse btaenge kese?

precap: they tell it to her

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parthnitiholics

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow this is just awsm

mind blowing

sifferent story line

nandini stubbon girl..fab 4 supporting her..instead of manik

manik mahotra is back...

whether he will be guilty or he didnt realised anything yet?

y nandu is like this ..aisa kya kar dia manik ne

love to read more...more about..what happen in past...

wanna see manik's condition when he is not with fab 4...

alone manik...wanna to see how the story continuous

thnx for the pm

keep writing...do pm me whenever you update it again...

love sakshi

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suraiya77

@suraiya77

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Posted: 10 years ago

Plz continue
I read it in fb

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princess08

@princess08

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parthnitiholics
wow this is just awsm
mind blowing
sifferent story line
nandini stubbon girl..fab 4 supporting her..instead of manik
manik mahotra is back...
whether he will be guilty or he didnt realised anything yet?
y nandu is like this ..aisa kya kar dia manik ne
love to read more...more about..what happen in past...
wanna see manik's condition when he is not with fab 4...
alone manik...wanna to see how the story continuous
thnx for the pm
keep writing...do pm me whenever you update it again...
love sakshi

hey thanx alot for such a wonderful comment...

i will surely continue and will pm u...

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Jyoti

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start. ..

Waiting for how to story will unfold. Continue soon...

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AMAR_LOVE

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome story...just waiting fr the update

so plz cont soon and do pm me

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princess08

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Posted: 10 years ago

after sometime, nandini come downstairs and join them.

nandini- hmm...so guys how u all here?

cabir: nothing.. bht time ho gya tha tujhse ek sath mile to socha aa jae, kyun tujhe acha nhi lga hamara ana

nandini: arey mene esa kab kaha offcourse mujhe bht acha lga...but achanak without any info...isliye bas pucha...vse kya loge tum log

cabir: han yr bhuk to bht lagi h vese..:p

nandini: pta tha mujhe...tu na bhukad hi rhega..ruk mai kuch mangwati hu

mukti: han yr yahan bhi khana...cabir..

and everyone laughs and nandini tells her servant to bring some food for them

after sometime servant come and serves the food, they start eating it

dhruv to cabir (whispering): tune socha kya krna h

cabir: nhi yar abhi tak to nhi...lets c kuch to krna hi pdega vo bhi jaldi..party sham ko hi h

cabir to mukti: yr tune abhi se bat ki usne kuch bola

mukti: nhi yar usse contact nhi ho pa ra h...vo uski meetings chal ri h

nandini: arey dhruv cabir mukti tum kya bat kr re ho akele akele han

cabir: nothing sweety...just talking about work and all...

nandini: hmm...ok...now eat..

Everyone finishes eating and then go to living room for talking.

Cabir: nandu tu bht thaki hui lg ri h, kya hua

nandini: cabir kuch nhi...bs meetings n all..

and aliya y r u not speaking anything

Everyone knew that aliya was very nervous at that time and were worried that she will speak everything so to handle the matter, mukti speaks in.

Mukti: nothing...tujhe to pta h na dhruv n iska roz ka kam h...chod

Aliya: mukti...nandini its nothing like that...actually thda headache tha that's all

nandini: oh...u can go to my room and sleep for sometime...

aliya: no i am fine now

nandini: ok...btw guys aj hume party mei jana h..u guys remember na...in the morning only i texted u...i wish bhai was here...he wanted this only from 2 years...

Seeing her sad, Mukti: nandu, u know na abhi ko kam tha, that's y...n he will still be happy n really proud of u...

nandini smiles listening this.

Then her phone rang so she went to answer it.

Dhruv: yar ab or wait nhi kr skte hume btana hoga isse

Aliya: ya i think so

Mukti: but kaise?

Cabir: yar guys i cant do this sorry

Nandini (confusingly) : cabir what u cant do?

Cabir(shockingly):vo vo...

Nandini: vo vo kya cabir...speak na...n vese bhi tu mujhse kabse kuch chupane lag gya hmmm...

Cabir: nandini listen to me..ok...dhyan se sunana...n plz plz kuch react mat krna

nandini: cabir what's wrong...tu mujhe dara rha h ab

cabir: nandini tujhe invitation mila party ka..?

nandini: nhi cabir abhi mene dekha nhi...bt wat happened? wat's wrong

cabir: we are not going to the party that's it

nandini: but what happened cabir?

cabir: nandini he..he is back...man..

He was going to speak but nandini stops him

Nandini: don't...don't cabir...don't take his name...n wat r u saying

cabir: nandini...he is the chief guest of today's party

Listening this nandini runs to her room and locks it.

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Thanx for liking it...and whoever want pm do buddy me...

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princess08

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Posted: 9 years ago

cabir: yar i hope she is ok...n he goes out

nandini in her room(she was crying): why ayiappa y...y r u doing this... y y he is back now...jab mujhe uski sabse zyada zrurt thi he left me and now he is back...kya usne mujhe kam hurt kia h that he is back...y y

no nandini u cant be weak...tu weak ho gyi to bhai and cabir ka kya hoga no...u dont believe in emotions...remember that...u have to b strong...for them...u cant cry like this

She wipes her tears and goes out where everyone was sitting (except cabir)

Mukti: nandu, r u ok?

nandini: han mukti, mujhe kya hona tha...n tum log ese ku bethe ho...bhul gye kya we hav to go to a party...jao ready ho...n cabir kahan h?

dhruv: nandini vo tumhare jate hi bhar chala gya

nandini: ok...tum log jao...i will see him...bbye...sham ko party mei milte h

Then everyone leaves and nandini goes to Cabir.

nandini: oe..yahan ese kyun betha h...

cabir: nandini dont act like u dont know

nandini: cabir i m totally fine...n i have moved on...u know that right

cabir: yr kab tak kab tk apni pain apne emotions humse chupaegi kb tk...we r ur friends na

nandini: u r my best friend and my family too...n m tumse kuch nhi chupa ri hu...nw go n get ready...party mei jana h

cabir: r u sure

nandini: i m 100 percent sure cabir...i cant let him affect me more...i have to do it...n u r with me na so no worries

cabir hugging her: i m always with u babydoll...now go n get ready...its very important day for u...award n all...han

nandini: shut up cabir...n u too get ready...

Then they leave for party...

At party venue...

manager to a boy: everything is ready na...manik sir and nandini mam will arrive shortly...n u know none of them like anything wrong...they want everything perfect...

boy: yes sir...everything is perfect

boy 2: sir sir manik sir has come...

manager: ok...lets go

At the entrance...a car arrived and manik comes...

Manik was wearing black blazer, blue denims, and white shirt...he was looking damn smart...all the girls were just looking at him...

then all the managing members of party comes and welcomes him...

He goes inside and start meeting some business men..

At the same time, aliya and dhruv arrives in one car, mukti in 2nd, cabir n nandini in 3rd...they come out of car...

nandini was wearing a black gown, silver silletoes, diamond earings...she was looking like an angel...then some members come to welcome them and they goes inside...nandini was holding cabir's arm

there was an announcement...so now we are going to begin the party...thank you all for coming

Manik was standing with some persons holding glass of wine, then he see nandini and other friends...he smiles and goes near them

Everyone was enjoying, talking and laughing but as soon as they see manik everyone gets angry

manik see nandini and just keep staring at her...nandini feels uncomfortable and was just going but manik holds her hand...that was enough to make everyone more angry...cabir holds his hands and makes nandini's hands free...at the same time adi also came...dhruv, cabir and adi stands infront of nandini hiding her...

manik tries to hug cabir but he stops him...

cabir: dont u dare do this...

manik: cabs, nice to see u buddy...yar i missed u all very much...finally i am able to meet u...pta nhi kabse i was trying but finally...

cabir: stop it...mr. malhotra...nice meeting u...but please only my friends can call me cabs or buddy...i am just mr. cabir for u...

manik: tum ye kya bol re ho cabir and nandini u r looking very pretty and mukti u toh are completely changed han...

cabir: i said dont...dont u get that...

he was going to push him...but nandini comes and holds cabir's hands

nandini: cabir...plz...its a party...dont...and dont spoil ur mood because of someone...

and they leave...

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Hey guys plz comment otherwise how will i know that i should continue it or not...

and those who want pm buddy me and pm me...

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parthnitiholics

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Posted: 9 years ago

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ekkksss m the first one to read...

first of all..

y u updated sooo late...i mean i read the frst part long time back...n u r updating now..very bad...but but but..very good...the ff is awsmmm..different concept...

nandu angry on manik..y .what is th past...manik is behaving norally with evryone..as if kuch hua hi nahi...y...short term memory losss...lol..hahah..no offence pls...

fab 4 is with nandu awww...so sweet.instead of manik...they r with nandu thats nice...different concept i must say...

nandu hiding her emotions with evryone..but cant hide..cause they become her family..n we cant hide anything from family...

cabir and nandu convo awww...like their bond...and when boyzz come in from of manik to stop him while he was talking to nandu..wow...they r very protective..wanna know more..what happen in past..y evryone changed...aisa kya ho gaya😲

love the concept...thnx a ton for the pm..its an awsm ff...

is br do update jaldi jaldi cant wait to read more...

pm me when u update next

love

sakshi