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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks 😊


Thank you :)

Originally posted by: eishe10

Interesting update!!!


Thanks 😊



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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: jdd1959

NICE UPDATE...

POOR KHUSHI...FELT SAD 4 HER...
THNX 4 D PM.


I too feel sad for Khushi

Thanks for liking 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Teddybear_doll

Awesome update. .
Thnx for the pm. .


Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Wonderful update Sanjana...

Your Arnav seems to be a loving and caring guy...he is able to help Khushi...and now standing on her side.
Rapist should be hanged...I know not in my country but still they should be given some very tough punishment.
I hope she will be safe in Arnav's house.


Arnav's character is meant to loved 😊 Rape is a heinous crime which is not punished properly in India Her Humdard will shelter her 😊

Thanks for commenting 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ranogill

my god ...hope khushi stay with arnav


Let's see if she stays with Arnav or not.

Thanks for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: TaujooMadiha

awesome update. Marital rape is such a sad reality 😭


It indeed is the baddest thing because even if it is crime, woman digest it as the love of their husband and hence suffer.

Thanks for commenting 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pdrover

Nice update
What was that constable whispered the inspector
So khushi now at Arnav's house?


Wait for the next chapter to get answers 😳

Thanks for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: Laugh.

Did I ever say you write beautifully? <3

Being so nice to his niece, depicts Arnav to have a caring attitude. The innocence he showed when his niece was scared was such an overwhelming scene. I hope Arnav is able to treat Khushi in the same way in the future :) And I also hope Khushi is not carrying Shyam's child :/ That would be too bad :(

And yes, please let Khushi stay with Arnav only.

Thanks for the PM :)


You are so nice 😃 I am glad you liked it. About Khushi being a carrier of Shyam's child, wait for the story to proceed 😃

Thanks for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: pup03

Very nice update.. loved it a lot.. 😊


Thanks Di <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: tparvaiz

awesome dear

but khushi last statement 😲 me

she don't remember arnav

please continue


She never got to know who he really is in the hospital. She just knew that he saved her and brought her to the hospital. So just to know the reason and his identity as to how he brought her to his own home, she asked him who he is 😊

Thanks for commenting!


I will update tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you all 🤗


xoxo
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Posted: 10 years ago
FAQ:
1. Is Khushi pregnant?
=> Maybe, or maybe not.

2. Is Arnav living with his family?
=> He just has his sister with him. To know where she is, wait for the story to proceed.

3. What did the constable whisper in the policeman's ear?
=> Read the chapter below.

4. Will Khushi stay with Arnav?
=> For now, yes.

Anything else? No, I guess.

Accha one thing, anyone heard the song Dheere Dheere se? Gawd, if you don't want to hear the song, just watch its video and you will fall in love with Hrithik Roshan <3 He looks asdfghjklkfdf in that ☺️
Edited by -SanjanaSobti- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I have replied to all comments. Here's next :)
Ch 3
~Care~


"I'm Arnav. Arnav Singh Raizada."


Khushi looked down and stepped back, shaking her head meekly. She swallowed the lump in her throat and clutched the material of her suit in her sweaty palms, struggling to make any movement.


She felt comfortable in his home, the comfort which she never felt in her husband's home.


"I want to go home" her mind screamed and the words travelled out her tongue, but her heart sank in her chest with a fear of facing the same man who violated her just a day back and losing the comfort of his absence.


His eyes grew wide with shock, but he refrained from speaking anything. He closed his eyes, took a short breath, and walked past her to the dining table.


"You must be hungry, come," he said without looking at her. He ordered a servant to fetch her some food and he himself got seated on the dining table, working on his phone, though his mind still revolved around her.


He didn't wanted her to live in that same place ever again. Not that he considered to be her owner, but his heart ached to see her in pain. There was an unknown force seeping inside him which forced him to look after her and undo everything that gave her pain.


Her heavy breaths could be heard from a considerable distance. She didn't move a bit, but turned in her place to look at Arnav, with more of a blank expression. A dilemma had given rise to a conflict between her heart and her mind as to how to react. She didn't wanted to experience the same pain again, or rather say, she didn't had the courage to do that, which would be an obvious thing if she decides to live with Shyam. On the other hand, if she decides to accept help by Arnav, her conscience will not accept it as no matter how much she denies the fact, she would be living with a complete stranger, being married to another man.


"How can I live with you?" A really soft voice made him look at her from the phone screen, trying hard to study the expressions of her emotionless face. He gestured the servant to excuse them and the servant walked out of the dining room instantly.


"Why can't you?" He asked, getting up from the dining table and walking towards her.


"I am married..." She trailed off as she felt tears crowding the bottom line of her eyes and her hands going cold again.


"To a man who considers you less than a piece of meat!" His voice raised suddenly and she shuddered and involuntarily moved back a step.


"You don't have to live that kind of a life, Khushi. Understand your importance," He slapped himself internally and softened his voice again, reminding himself that she's still scared and may get panicky by his loudness.


She raised her eyelids in the slowest of fashions, blinking a few times to dry-off her fresh tears and she stepped backwards further. Unconsciously her knee hit the corner of the center table and she yelped in anticipation of falling on the glass table, but was instead grabbed by a strong hand wrapped around her wrist and she was pulled into her initial stance with a gentle pull.


"I will not hurt you, promise" he whispered, tightening his hand's hold on her wrist.


He didn't knew why he said that to her, maybe just to have her trust with him or maybe to console his own disturbed self.


Her tears grew in amounts and hence flowed down her eyes, while she continued to look straight into his eyes, feeling her heart sink more and more.


"He said the same thing.. But he broke his promise" She spoke in a daze, shoving his hand off her wrist. The way she looked at the moment, had already made him desperately wishing to meet that Shyam and beat him to death; but the present moment required him to be calm.


He swallowed the accumulated lumps in his throat and decided to shove off the topic for the time being, having a weird kind of surety spread inside him that no, she would not leave.


He noticed Khushi going back into the room and sighed helplessly.


This would not be easy.


*


Three men in brown uniforms entered the AR Fashion House, the top fashion company of Delhi, proudly owned by Arnav Singh Raizada aka ASR. The company had been running since two and a half years, and it had only climbed up the stairs of success and fame. The extremely hard-working staff and the foreseeing supervisor had made AR to be one of the top fashion houses of India.


Aman, ASR's right hand, welcomed the three policemen hushed-ly. The four of them walked into Arnav's cabin, without any staff member notice them much.


"Mr. Raizada," the police commissioner shook hands with Arnav, and settled down on the chair in front of him.


"We have found out about Shyam Manohar Jha. He has many complaints registered in the local police station. He had been engaged in quite a lot of serious fights in drunken state in one or the other drinking bars. Most of times, his wife, Khushi Manohar Jha, had bailed him by giving her jewelry and stuff. This time too, yesterday itself, we received another complaint about him. The police has arrested him from his apartment, and a judicial case has been registered against him. The court's hearing is day after tomorrow," the police commissioner told him ever detail they found out about Shyam.


"I can't thank you enough, Mr. Pandey. Please keep me informed about the court's decision" Arnav sternly smiled at him and again shook his hand with him.


The police commissioner along with his two constables made an exit from AR, while Arnav leaned back on his chair, his mind seeping in deep thoughts.


Shyam Manohar Jha, the name itself ran an anger-filled current through his body. When Khushi knew about his actions, then why was she still with him? What forced her to be with him? Why did she cover up his mistakes every time? The questions created a commotion in his mind and he let out a troubled sigh. He had to ask her, just to make her feel lighter, for he knew that she was entangled in the betrayals of the abusive relationship, whose reason he was yet to find out.


His train of thoughts were broken by the receptionist's call, and he straightened up, "Yes?"


"Sir, the Malhotra's have arrived. Should I make them sit in the conference room?"


"Yes, I'm coming."


*


Khushi dragged herself into the room where she was sleeping some hours ago, feeling sad again. She was made to eat food by the maid as per Arnav's orders, who supposedly went away as soon as they had the short conversation. The pain she felt physically was healing quite quickly, but the mental pain had disturbed her to such an extent that, even if she tried, she wasn't able to come out of it.


She tied her hair in a messy bun and stood in front of the mirror. Her eyes met her reflection's eyes and she felt herself going numb from inside. Her gaze travelled from her eyes to her lips, which had a deep red mark near its left corner. She looked at her neck, which had bluish marks on it and the incidents of the night rushed into her mind. Further towards south, she saw her upper arms covered with bandages with tiny blood marks on them.


Her hands clutched the hem of her suit and she dug her fingers hard into her palm. Had not been the material of the suit between her nails and her palm, she'd have surely bled because of the tightness of her fist.


The material of the suit dropped down and she stepped back. Hot tears ran down her eyes as she looked at her whole self, being destroyed by her own husband and she breathed soundly. She opened her mouth to take in more air, for the air within her was causing intolerable suffocation.


Unable to control her pain by seeing her reflection, she picked up the jug of water kept on the side table and threw it on the mirror, splashing water over the pain she felt and breaking off both the mirror and the jug.


Her action crashed the deafening silence of the place, while she fell down on her knees, crying hysterically. Arnav, who had just returned back from his work, heard the loud sound and came running into the room. He drew in a sharp breath on seeing lying near the broken pieces of mirror.
He walked slowly near her and knelt down in front of her.


"Khushi" he breathed out in the gentlest of voices, catching hold of her arms to make her look at him and the next moment, her head was on his chest and her hands were pressed over his biceps.


The air was filled with her loud sobs, dry and hurt-filled, accompanied by infinite amount if tears.


"I loved him so much, then why did he do this to me?"


His arms wrapped around her shoulder, not speaking anything at all. He wanted her to cry and let out all her pain, he was ready to feel all the pain she had felt all this time, if by that, she feels better. Her sobs were endless, gradually fading off the tension existing in the strings of the forced relationships she was stuck in. Her hold on his arms tightened and her head wobbled on his chest, her heart aching terribly.


He gulped in pain seeing her in pain. There had been times in his twenty-seven years of life which saddened him, but nothing ever moved him to such an extent. He was beyond shocked to hear the brutality of a husband over his own wife. Not able to hold himself, he let his tears blind his eyes and he, almost inaudibly, said:


"You'll stay here, with me. I will take away your pain and in turn, I'll give you your deserved share of happiness!"



Writing becomes much more interesting if you know that whatever you write, will be liked :) Thanks a lot, angels!


Please like and comment. Any ideas/hopes/wishes/suggestions/queries/anydamnthing can be posted here or you can PM or scrap me :)


Thanks for reading!


PS. The next update may be delayed due to exam pressure. I hope you all will co-operate 😊



Edited by -SanjanaSobti- - 10 years ago
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Yayy I'm first 😎
Can I call you Sanju? 😳

Okay so, the update was fabulous <3 The way Khushi was saddened by not being able to decide between her husband and Arnav, in the same way his mind too was jotting down plans to make her feel comfortable. How well he changes his form from ASRish type to Arnav <3 His character is yet to unfold, I know, and that makes me eager to know more about him. I'm waiting for the time when Khushi will finally accept Arnav as a part of her life! Shyam is in jail? 😲 Or will he be given death sentence? 😡 He should be!

The last line made me cry! Arnav understands her so well like he himself went through the same kind of pain. I'm in love with his character <3

Please continue soon.

All the luck for your exams.

Love~
J.
Edited by Laugh. - 10 years ago

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