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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
I loved it
I didn't even imagine Khushi could say those words
He is giving her time n now she wants him :'(
Plz don't make its ending sad
N update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shot #3 (last one)

She was devastated with the news of her husband's departure.

Tears roll down from her eyes as she was walking on the road aimlessly. Her heart was feeling so void and empty. The last hope in her life gave away and now her head was spinning with the intensity making her stumble back.







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Employ, after khushi left, call Arnav telling him about their deal and then suddenly he told him about khushi and Arnav sigh Raizada was shocked and shouted on his employ for telling khushi lie.

He ran back to RM and like a mad man he barged inside shouting "KHUSHI! KHUSHI!" but he was informed by HP that "KHUSHI HAD GONE OUT" ground beneath his feet slip away as he heard hp, all bad thoughts surround him. What if Shyam try to harm her?

He ran toward his car and drive as fast as he could to reach his office, he got out of his car running around shouting for khushi as he saw a car hitting her badly making her fell on the other side of the road with a pool of blood around her. He ran toward her and soon in no time he was beside her kissing her as if she will healed. His mind clicked and he took her toward his car, making her lay he started the engine and drove toward hospital.




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Hours later

ASR was sitting on the chair like a lifeless man, his eyes red and swollen due to cries. He hadn't informed anyone as if they care. It has been hours but no sign of doctor. He was restless now even more.

"How does it feel to leave me this way,

When all that you have's been lost in a day?

Everyone knows, but not what to say.

I've been wondering now".

After 20 minutes doctor appeared with a relief sigh he said before Arnav could ask "SHE IS FINE" after a pause looking at the broken man "AND GOOD, SHE NEEDS PHYSIOTHERAPY FOR NEXT THREE MONTHS" Arnav nodded and again before he asked doctor said "YOU CAN MEET HER IN NEXT SOME HOURS...PLEASE" Arnav away before nodding again and doctor left.

"Start to see this,

Everyone I know cannot believe this.

Trying to hold onto the sweetest feeling,

So I'll never let you go, don't you leave me lonely now."

It was early morning as Arnav saw khushi and gulped his empty throat looking at her state.

"When my eyes open, morning pulls me into the view,

No

I guess I'm only acting in the way that you do, Just being alone, no.

Only time tells me more than I hoped, all that I know is.

I'll be fine a fortnight, lo and behold,

I know I shouldn't have let you go."

He sat there silently for next two hours just watching her as if she will disappear if he looked away from her.

"I've been staring at the hotel ceiling,

Drinking everything I've found this evening,

Trying to hold onto the sweetest feeling,

So I'll never let you go, don't you leave me lonely.

Start to see this everyone I know cannot believe this

Trying to hold onto the sweetest feeling,

So I'll never let you go, don't you leave me lonely now."

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3 months later

"MRS. RAIZADA IS PERFECTLY FINE NOW" haring doctor both smiled. In these three months khushi realize how much he loved her and now she wanted to tell him that she loved him too.

Khushi was wearing a red sari with diamond earrings which suits her well.

She moved toward poolside hearing her name called by him (ASR).

HE FROWNED looking at silent room before approaching toward pool side as he opened the glass door fairy lights started glowing giving him proper view of his khushi. He moved toward her not breaking eye lock.

"YOU LOOK BEAUTIFUL" he breathed inside her hairs. She touched his shoulder as he kissed her neck.

"I WANT TO SAY SOMETHING" khushi said slowly moving away from him. "WHAT IT IS DOLL?" she looked up as he cupped her cheek with one hand and other held her hand.

"I WANT TO SAY...*she took a deep breath*I-LOVE-YOU" he looked at her wide with eyes and khushi laughed looking at his expression.

"AWW YOU LOOK SO CUTE" she laughed pulling his cheek and a smirk appear on his face before he grab her by her waist saying "THEN WHAT WE ARE WAITING FOR?"

"MY LAADGOVERNER TO START" she said moving more close to him, their breaths were mingling with each other.

Life isn't a bed of roses but still it isn't so bad too. Things may be difficult sometime but not impossible at all, are they? Love, kindness and care from your loved ones is boost and power against problems just like fuel in automobile.

Love is life :) do love in your life not once but again and again.
















here you go hope i do not disappoint any of you

i am so sorry if i hurt any of your feelings.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Aww.. So so lovely...
Loved it...
Tysm for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Hi nicely written keep going 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
wow beautiful update and ending loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Part 2

Wonderful awesome. Amazingly good superb. Well written. Excellent. So khushi is all broken and so is Arnav. Hope they reunite soon. Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3
So Arnav hadn't been to London. Thank God khushi in cured. They confessed their love. Very nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Wow, lovely update... loved the shots... thanks for the beautiful ending 😊👍🏼
Edited by christi002 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Thank u for beautiful end ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Lovely End!!
I loved the way you ended it!!
Beautifully written:)

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