Manya /Rara SS Tumse pyaar hame hai kitna janejana Chapter 5, page 6 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaynie259

omg Rara are just too cute



ya !!!!!!! they re really cute😳😳😳😳 just like manya😃😃😃
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hi guys, this is the last part of this story , hope you enjoy this and please leave your feedback and likes 😃😃😃



Chapter 6

Mantu brought the cutting chai and gave it to amaya ... A song started playing from the shop ...

Kabhi jo baadal barse

Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke

Tu lage mujhe pahli baarish ki duaa

Amaya took a sip and mantu too , looking at her .

Amaya looked at mantu , lovingly and mantu too looked at her eyes, her beautiful chocolate brown eyes,

Tere pahloo mein reh loon

Main khudko paagal keh loon

Tu gham de ya khushiyaan

Seh loon saathiya

A.. mantu , tum abhi bhi aise hi ho haan ?

M.. haan main kyu badluynga ?

A.. aksar log badal jaatein hein ,na, time ke saath saath log bhi badaljate hien

Koi nahi.. tere siva mera yahaan

Manzilein.. hain meri to sab yahaan

Mita de sabhi aaja faasle

Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le

Zara sa mujhme tu jhaank le

Main hoon kya?

Woo.. aeee.. aeee.. aaa.. sathiyaa..

Ae ae... aa...

M.. amaya, hum nahi badle , aur kabhi nahi badleinge , hum kal bhi tumse pyaar karte the aur aaj tak karte hein( and mantu got shocked at what he said , he just said what was in his hear t from a very long time, and he looked in front shocked )

A.. mien bhi tumse pyaar karti hoon mantu, tab bhi aur aaj bhi , kabhi tumhe bula nahi saki , kab tumse pyaar ho gaya , pata hi nahi chala , bas , tumhaari yaadon mein hi ji ti thi , mantu , I love you

Mantu hugged her tightly without uttering a word , his eyes were teary , and she hugged him back carresing his back to calm him down, he could feel the warmth of her body , slowly mantu calmed down in her embrace, and , amaya was feeling safe and secure in his arms, , and they both got completely lost in this pationate embrace , sitting on the stair in the rain.

At the ghaat ,

The poojas sound got louder ,

Rama and rachita were on the boat, and it was raining, and they were both standing under the jacket rama was holding

Abhi abhi toh mile ho

Abhi naa karo chhootne ki baat

Abhi abhi toh pasand aaye ho

Abhi abhi roothne ki baat!

They both were really close, rama finally , said what was in his heart in front of rachita,

Abhi abhi toh roshni aayi

Abhi naa karo munh chhupane ki baat

Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai...

Abhi abhi tham jane ki baat!

Rama. I love you rachita , and I have always loved you rachita , after my parents death , I have become really depressed , alon e,with no family , when I saw you the other day, all those emotions I had in my heart , came in front of me and I coulnd help myself but, tell you ,,, that I love you

Hum toh haare mahiya re

Moonde naina, neend tihare

Rachita. I love you too rama , I love you ...

Teri baazuon mein meri chahatein samaaye

Teri dhadkano ko meri dhadkanein sunaaye

Teri khwahisho se meri khwahishein riha hain

Teri karwaton se meri dastaan bayaan hai

Kya sukoon kya junoon humnawa...

And hearing this , rama rested his forhead on rachitas, with tears in his eyes, and after a while , rachita hugged rama tightly and he hugged back , tightly, in the bare rain , after he took the jacket from his and her head and placed it on her shoulders.

Abhi abhi dil ki suni hai

Abhi na karo zamaane ki baat!

Abhi abhi baatein ruki hain

Abhi abhi dohraane ki baat!

Abhi abhi aawaaragi aayi

Abhi na karo sambhalne ki baat

Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai

Abhi abhi tham jane ki baat!

The end

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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Nice. .. really wanted u to write more. ... happy ending thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant 😭 😳 I loved it Viny ...!!! 🤗ManYa ❤️ & RaRa ❤️
Beautiful <3 <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow nice so both the couples said what they are hiding in the heart 🥳
It's bad that you are ending here

Plz write more stories

Wonderful writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princicute

Nice. .. really wanted u to write more. ... happy ending thank u




Thank you so much 😃

Im really happy you liked it ⭐️ 😃

Ill write oss on them soon 😃

Thanks a lot for the encouragement 😃 ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta_1

Brilliant😭😳I loved it Viny ...!!!🤗ManYa ❤️ & RaRa ❤️

Beautiful <3 <3




Thank you so much swetha 😃 ⭐️

Im really very happy you liiked it 😃 ⭐️

Manya and rara forever
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asheley

Wow nice so both the couples said what they are hiding in the heart🥳

It's bad that you are ending here

Plz write more stories

Wonderful writing



Thank you so much 😃 ⭐️ 😃

Im really sorry i ended here dear.

Ill write many more stories dear ⭐️ 😃


Thank you so much for the encouragement ⭐️

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