Sorry .. Cant say I like ur story... Its too dark.. Moreover i cant imagine khushi in love with anyone other than arnav .. Arnav khushi are meant to be together... Thats the beauty of ippknd...though I understand its reel not real... I am not condemning you... You write really well... But u could have shown shyam and khushi in such story... Its hard to believe that childhood friend can be like this... Its very shallow and lack depth in emotions... Sorry no intention to hurt u...honestly .. Be creative... In true sense... Add some happiness and beauty to world by ur doings..if u cant do that then please atleast dont make people sad ...if u have to write such type of cruelty .. Probably u r a sadist .. Dont use arnav and khushi in such ss... Its an insult to our beloved couple...we love them .. Beyond measures!!
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