Manan SS- coz you're worth meltin for..!! imp note on 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Coz you're worth melting for..!!


Okay guys... I am back with a new short story...

Hope you all like it.. frankly speaking to I don't like them getting married and having kids and I hardly read such OS leaving a few ones that are very close to my heart like Sun Saathiya, Life with Nandini... and a couple of them

But this is what I am writing is a complete shock to me but this is connected to my real life... it is my dreams I did watch with someone but I know it will never come out true cause we were never meant to be but yes I want this- MY DREAMLAND to get a path and I will convey you all in this SS..

Enough of my bakwas.. don't get emotional due to my bakwas just enjoy the story..

If you all like it I will continue..

Prologue...

"Zidan this is the final time I am asking you calmly give back her doll beta please" pleaded a 25 year old lady to her 2 years old son for giving back the doll of her 2 years old daughter..

"No I will not gib her, aapto pata hai she took my car" cribbed Zidan..

"Bacha, mumma will give you big wala car, come on who aapki sister hai na you have to take care of her please bacha, give back the doll please" asked the lady.

"pehle plomich kalo, mumma plomich only then I'll gib her", said Zidan.

"acha baba mumma promise ab toh dedo bache", almost forwarding her hands now.

"Zidan khud de dega, Zidan plomisch", said Zidan and kissed his mom's cheeks and went to his room climbing with his small small baby steps.

"bacha slowly janna" shouted the caring mother under that lady...

"Nandini, meri watch kaha hai? Like seriously tumhe mere time hai", cribbed a 27 years old man to his wife. "stop cribbing Manik, why do you always forget that your watch is placed in its shelf and secondly now you are not a college student you are a father of two kids grow up", said a tired Nandini.

And now she was in his arms... tight left arm on her waist and right hand he was tucking the lose strand slowly behind her ears. Even today his touch sent shivers down her spines.

"Manik, stop it please bache idhar hi hai" said Nandini and ti which he replied, "you think I care".

"papa, deto na this Zidan he alwat illitate me" said a 2 years old baby girl.

"Haww, aaru baby kya hua? Kisne meri aaru princess ko pareshan kiya batao...", said Manik faking anger to Zidan and he hid himself behind his mummaa...

Okay enough the prologue.. okay so the baby language is inspired by Mawara Ejaz...

Hope you don't mind and if you mind feel free to say that I will change it to normal..

So give your comments and reviews as I need them if I get them I will continue or else I will happily end it..

No worries...

"Coz all you left with me as a part of you is our memories and the dreams we dreamt together"- Kiara.

Love,

Kiara..

banner courtesy: the sweetest cute-aly


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chapter 1- pg 7

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muskancute thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing...concept yrww...Awsome...
Manik And Nandini have 2 kids woow...Zidan is soo cute...and aaru alsoo...I like Baby languages...Nandini and Zidan scene soo cute...lovely...Manik and Nandini scene was Awsome...Then Manik And Aaru scene was...soo Sweet...i loved it...
Plzzz Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskancute

Amazing...concept yrww...Awsome...

Manik And Nandini have 2 kids woow...Zidan is soo cute...and aaru alsoo...I like Baby languages...Nandini and Zidan scene soo cute...lovely...Manik and Nandini scene was Awsome...Then Manik And Aaru scene was...soo Sweet...i loved it...
Plzzz Cont soon...



Thanks a ton..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely prologue.I will love to read further.and yes Sun Sathiyaa is my favorite also.
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i found it so cute..
can i read dis...
the names..zidan n aaru..too cute
seems like one loves papa more n another mamma...
its too cute..
n the title is so sweet...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i had a ques...
r these cute little creatures twins???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one in fact awsome
Awww a cute family
And manan they never ever forget to romance
Cont soon
It's nice story
muskancute thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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No Need of Thanks😊...If Possible Plzzz PM me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!
Loved the prologue very much..
I like baby language very much..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awwwiiieee...neww storyy...wowww😉😳
Manan as parents...yayyiieee😆😉
Nice concept dear😛
Zidan nd aaruuu:))
Manik ne kbhi nhi sudharnaa...hehee😉
Good one;)
Always keep writing😊

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