Abhika SS: Gunaah (prologue-pg1)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue:

''Tujhe toh khush hone chahiye kyunki tune Sarika pe huye na-insaafi ka badla le liya hai,phir,itna udaas kyun hai?'' his heart spoke. (You should be feeling happy that you have avenged the insult and injustice caused to Sarika,but,why are you sad now?)


''Main aur udaas... Naah.. Main toh yeh soch raha hu ki ab mere paas koi maqsad nahi hai yaha rehna ka,so,yahaan se chala jana behtar hai.. Ulta main toh khush hu. Ki maine Mihika ko use kiya Sarika ka badla lene keliye..'' his mind replied. (Me and upset?? No and never.. Since i dont have any reason or motive now,it's better if I leave from here.. Infact,i am feeling very happy now that i have used Mihika to avenge Sarika's insult.)


''Tu insaan kehlane keliye layak nahi hai.. Sahi kehte hai,policewalo ke paas dil nahi hota hai.Unka dil patthar hota hai,patthar.. Tujhe uski haayi lagegi.. Kisika dil torhna bohut bara gunaah hai aur yeh gunaah tumse hua hai,Abhishek.. Tum Mihika ki guneehgaar ho... Tumhari gunaah ka yahi saza hai ki yeh akelapan tumhe bhugatna parega... Ek waqt aisa aayega jisdin tum itna rouge aur pachtaoge bhi bohut.. Itna pachtawa hoga ki tumhe ehsaas hoga ki Mihika tumse bohut dur chali gayi hai...'' his heart replied. (You are not worthy to be called as a human. People say the truth that Police officers' dont have a heart. They are stone hearted persons. You will be cursed by the pain of Mihika.. To break someone's heart is a crime and you have committed this heinous crime,Abhishek. You are Mihika's culprit. Your punishment will be that you have to live alone forever. One day,time will come when you will cry a lot and repent fro your deeds. You will repent so much that you will realise that Mihika has left you a lone.)


Scene changes to Mihika:


''Raman,please kuch kijiye.. Mihika darwaza nahi kholrahi hai..'' Ishita pleaded to Raman with tears. (Raman,please do something. Mihika isn't opening the door).


''Ishita,shant ho jao.. Mihika ko kuch nahi hogaa.. Uss saale do taakey ki ACP ko main dekhlunga.. Pathak,Delhi Police DIG ke saath appointment fix kar. Abhi uski aukaad dikhata hu..'' Raman asked Ishita to calm down and asked Pathak to do his appointed work.
(Calm down,Ishita.. Nothing will happen to Mihika. That cheap ACP will get no mercy.. I will see him.. Pathak,fix an urgent appointment ith the DIG of Delhi Police. Now,i will show him his place.)


While Romi,Bala,Vandu and Ishita try to break open the door to save Mihika,she,was thinking about the betrayal of Abhishek.


''Haan.. Maine tumhe use kiya Romi tak pohuchne keliye.. Maine tumse pyaar karne ka jhoota dikhava kiya.. Tum jaisi larki se kaun shaadi karna chahega jo already apni pehli shaadi ko sambhal na paayi... Maine hi tumko use kiya taaki main yeh pata laga saku ki kisne meri behen ki zindagi barbad ki hai...'' (Yes,i used you to reach Romi. I did the charade of falling in love with you. Who would want to marry a girl like you who couldn't save her previous marriage? I did all this to know who destroyed my sister's life and happiness.)


''Nahi...'' Mihika shouted loudly,breaking things which were around her. (''No...'')


''Gunaah kiya dil maine yaar ka tod ke,

Gunaah kiya usey ik din tanha chhor ke..''

(I committed a crime by breaking my love's heart.
I committed a crime by leaving her alone,one day..)

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Prologue: pg1.

P.S: English translations added in brackets.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start what Abhi fake love for Mihika just to get reach to Romi.what happen between all sweet moment between them. Please continue.😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it.
What an interesting start.
Hope that Mihika will be fine.
Wonder if she will forgive him and how will Abhi make up for his mistake.
Please do continue soon.
Edited by smala - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting dear
Hope abhi makes up for his mistakes
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow nice concept...👏 Plzz update soon... Eagerly waiting for reading one more story on them...😊
Edited by Prachi....20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Woahh...
Nyc concept...
Waiting for the next chapter. ..
Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey such a nice concept
interesting
update soon n if possible pm m
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting for next update dear.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing!
I love it...
Please continue soon its very interesting
And can u please PM me for the updates?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept.
I don't understand the logic how cheating Mihika will avenge Sarika because Mihika is from different family than Romi but I will wait for your story to unfold

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