ManYa OS : The Confession.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Forumwaasis ,
Like all frustrated fans (let's not talk about it) , even I was . Meh .
This is pure imagination , how I wish the confession would be along these lines ❤️
Hope you enjoy and it relieves you of your frustration .
-Nidhi

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This emotion was eating out every bit of sanity he had had. He couldn't take it any more . She was so close to him , so very close.

He decided to end this torment once and for all . Today there would be no ego , no uma, no misunderstandings . This would either sail them across or put the final full stop .

"Rama , aaj tumhein hamaari madad karni hogi" Mantu said firmly.

"Arre, bolo naa" Rama wanted to be of help .

"Hum jaise hi kamre ke andar jaate hain, Tum Bahar kisi Ko bhej ke Darwaaza Band Karwa Do"

"Par Kyun Mantu?"

"Baad Mein Batate Hain Rama . Ab jaise humne kaha hai waise karo"

"Theek Hai"
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Amaaya entered her room to fix her hair . Her hair was a mess after the dance .

Mantu went in too. And Shyamu sealed the deal by locking the door .

"Amaaya"

The voice , HIS voice , sent shivers down her spine.

"Hmm?" She managed to respond .

"Humein Tumse Kuch Poochna Tha.. Hai"

"Suno , Mantu mere paas time nahi hai , aur Tum toh mujhse door rehna chahte the naa?"

"Par Kya Tum Humse door rehna chahti thi?"

"Bolo Amaaya" He took one step towards her .

"Main Woh .." He took another step towards her , she moved a step away.

"Main Woh , Tumse Door.." She stuttered.

They were against the wall, inches away from each other . Her heartbeats quickened .

"Rehna Chahti Thi"

He looked into her eyes . Touched her fingers . She felt her heart thudding .

She couldn't look at him , Mahadev what type of torture was this .

"Tum Itni Laal Kaise Hogayi , Amaaya. Tumhein Toh Farak Nahi Padta" He held her hand tight.

A lone strand fell on her face . He moved in and blew it away .

She couldn't feel her heart , anymore .
"Mantu , please"

"Shh, Amaya Mathur."

"Ab Hum Tumse Poochte Hain , Tumhein Hamaari Kasam , Sach Bologi Tum . Kya Tum Humse Pyaar Karti Ho Amaaya?"

Mahadev , what a weird situation you'd put her in . Her 'sharth' would be broken . She looked away . "Mantu Jaana Hai" she managed to utter .

"Aaj Tum kahin Nahi jaogi . Humein Jawaab Chahiye Amaaya ."

Why? Oh Lord he was so close . His intense gaze was sucking out the iota of sanity that was left in her . She felt so helpless .

"Mantu , Main..." She couldn't break her promise . She'd promised Uma that she wouldn't tell Mantu , that she loved him . But she could hint at it , couldn't she? That wasn't breaching the promise .

She hugged him tightly . He hugged her back .

What was that? He thought , A yes, no or maybe?

She could hear murmurs outside . 'Amaaya kahan hai'
'Amu ka room check karte hain'

She broke the hug , kissed him on his cheek . 'Tumhein apna jawaab mil Gaya hai . Ab jake chupo , Jazz aa rahi hai'

Jazz opened the door . She found no one in Amu's room .

Mantu-Amaaya were behind the curtains . He cupped her face , 'Amaaya Hum..'

He kissed her forehead .

'Mantu ...woh wahan dekho '

Amaaya , ran out of the room , blushing .

'Mahadev , yeh ladki ' Mantu sighed .
His cheeks turned red too.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nidhi,
dude that was awesome.. written so well ! but most importantly! You made them confess ! 🤣
THANK YOU !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Steph..

Nidhi,

dude that was awesome.. written so well ! but most importantly! You made them confess !🤣
THANK YOU !



Thanks Steph ! 🤗
Yes . I want a confession so bad , that I imagined it in my head xD 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I felt so good after reading it because from yesterday everyone is just disturbed but this made me smile Thankyou so much 😛😃 You wrote it fantabulously😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os..
Loved it..
Well written. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pilothegirl

I felt so good after reading it because from yesterday everyone is just disturbed but this made me smile Thankyou so much😛😃You wrote it fantabulously😳



Thank YOU so Much !
Means A lot :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AartShefa

Nice os..

Loved it..
Well written. .



Thank You ! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Hey well written ... really a booster after that news...
Very nice ..hope it happens .. Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u for such a wonderful os...made me very happy...y cnt cvs give us such scenes

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