Nibir ff : Miracle Happens\\\\\\ (part 19 on page 117) 18/02 - Page 21

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hey guyzzz...thanks alot for your heartly love...m so sorry for late update & m here wid d nxt part...

HAPPY READING

here u goes...

PART 5


MIRACLE HAPPENS




Their Car stops infront of Hotel...kabir...gets out from the car...goes to opposite side and opens door for nisha...she comes out silently...dey both were now standing infront of hotel...kabir looks at the name plate of hotel...HOTEL SUNSHINE...was written wid d combination of golden n pink colour...which makes name of the hotel shines brightly...it was a lavishing hotel...looks exactly like a GRAND PALACE...where dis PRINCE CHARMING wid his GORGEOUS SINDHRELLA have came to start beautiful journey❤️ of his new life...

Driver comes towards kabir gave him a note...& left...
kabir open the note and reads it...

JOJO,

Dis is a small surprise for uh...my son...i hope u like it...😊

luv...
MOM...


he folded the note n a smile appeared on his face wid d same smile he asked nisha...shall we go inside????...widout seeing him she shook her head in positive...and dey both went towards d door...a man greeted dem and open d door...n dey went inside...

The interior of the hotel was fabulous...der was a big fountain in a corner...which makes the entrance of the hotel to look perfect...3 three seater sofa was also der whose colour was same as the colour of wall...kabir asked her to seat on sofa n he himself went towards reception...to take keys of der room...

As he reached he told his name n asked receptionalist for keys...she checked his name in her pc n said Mr and Mrs Kumar dis is yr keys ur room no. is 420...n she giggled...kabir in mind...God mujhe yhi room no. milna tha...den he walk towards nisha...and dey both went to der room...

Kabir open the door with the help of keys...as d door opens kabir was dumbstruck...the room was decorated wid candles...and roses...red n white balloons were spread on the floor...both went inside...in the middle of d bed der was red heart which was made up of rose petals...he said to nisha u go n be comfortable i will be right back widin 5 min. n he went out...

Nisha goes towards bed ...seats der...and starts thinking...nisha now...now wat will u do???how will you tell him...dat...dat u r not comfortable wid his closeness... wid...wid his sudden touch...should i te... tell him the rea... reason behind it???(she was fumbling wid her own words)...den a voice came frm her mind no nisha no...u cant...take any risk...of opening yourself infront of him...after all he is stranger to uh...will he understand u...???? or wat will happn if he misunderstood u... ???? den a voice came frm her heart ...nisha u hv to tell him about yr past...after all he has the right to know about it...n u dont hv any right to keep him in dark...she was struggling between her mind n heart...den suddenly a different thought replaces her previous thinking...nisha now he is your husband...n he has right to come close to u..n..u cant denny it...he is also a human being nisha...n he has many expectations from his bride...n u cant hurt him...juz because u hv d horrible past...den she painfully smiles n said to herself..."i m a dead soul now he can do anything wat he wants afterall d nisha who loves to enjoy life is dead now..."

The sound of opening of door broke her trance...now she knew...she knew dat der is no other way...she had to yes she had to... fulfill his expectation whether she like it or not...as she cant hurt him becoz of her own selfish motives...

He started walking towards nisha...nisha's heart started beating fast...she clutched a pillow tightly wid his one hand...while her other hand started shivering which was not unnoticed by him...he comes close to bed seats beside nisha...holded her hand which was shivering wid his one hand n patted it wid his other hand...den he said...Nisha plz dont feel uncomfortable... i know dat u are hesitating to open yr heart infront of me...and u r right in your place...after all we both are strangers...& we both needs time to understand each other...to trust each other...but in onething u can fully trust me dat i will never ever force myself to u...nisha...as she heard dis...she immediately look towards...him... shockingly... it was d first time she was looking at him...der eyes met...both started looking at each other's eyes deeply...seems like dey are talking wid d intense of der eyes...while looking in his eyes...she was thinking...how he get to know wat i was thinking...is he a mind reader...how he knew dat m not comfortable wid his closeness n i need sometime...how????
while he was thinking...i m happy nisha dat u saw me once...i m so happy...no no m more den happy...nisha...dat...i hv loss of words to describe my feelings...nisha u r looking beautiful...juz like an angel n i promise u i will always keep u happiee makes u smile...


Den kabir comes out from his thought while nisha was still lost in his thoughts kabir snapped his hand infront of her n she came back to reality...kabir den spoke again...nisha i want onething frm u...n i hope u will not refuse me for dis...she noded in positive ...becoz now she knew dat he will never cross his limits...he again said...nisha it will be a honour for me to hv a friend like uh...will u be a friend of mine????n he forwarded his hand infront of her...widout thinking she shake her hand wid him now her hand was not shivering...becoz d fear of der closeness which was killing her frm inside was vanished in d air...n...kabir notices it...

kabir- so friends
nisha- friends forever(wid a bright smile in her face)

kabir's heart was now dancing in an anonymous beat...on seeing her smiling and on hearing her melodious voice first time...

kabir- i will change n come
nisha- ok
he went towards washroom

nisha(monologue)- kabir u r so nice i had never expected dis frm uh ...u r such... a jentleman...onething i promise u dat i will never ever hurt u...

i will always respect u...kabir n u deserve dis...
den kabir comes out...n said to nisha

kabir- wifey i dont think dat u r comfortable wid yr attire so go n change it...
nisha- wifey????
kabir- u r my wife na so frm now i will call u wifey n u can call me hubby...
nisha noded n walk towards washroom...

wen she came back den wat she saw makes her feel happy shocked lovingly n relief at d same time

she saw dat kabir had made a pillow wall in between der bed...seeing dis ...she smiles at him n he smiled back...
both were seated on der beds...at der own corner of bed...

kabir- gud nite wifey...
nisha- gud nite hubby...

on hearing hubby frm her he smiles...n goes to sleep...

nisha lay down on bed thanking kabir under her breath...soon she also goes to sleep...

guyzzz i dont know...dat i had fulfilled yr expectations or not...but i hv tried my level bst...the nxt part will be pad fere ki rasam...

To know more about pad fere ki rasam stay tuned wid dis story...

plz leave yr valuable likes n comments n ur criticisms are most welcome...
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome👏
NiBir😳
Kabira kitna understanding hai😃
update soon😊
Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it nimo
Nisha part made me cry they way you described her situation mind blowing you are very good at writting emotional scenes kabir so caring and understanding loved the way he supported and consoled her
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late comment
Edited by Ashoo20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimisissy🤗

Best Update 👏👏👏👏

No 420😆🤣🤣🤣 Bechare ko apne SR ke liye Room No: 420 mila🤣🤣🤣🤣

Loved the way U described Nishu's State of Confusion...👏👏👏

"i m a dead soul now he can do anything wat he wants afterall d nisha who loves to enjoy life is dead now..."


@BOLD It just made me feel like Sharp Knife stabbed my heart😵

But Kabira is such a sweet heart & as usual I was like

Why r u making me Aww ng all the time 4 Kabira???😆

@PINK My Fav parts☺️Their Understanding.. thru eyes Bina kahe sab kuch samajna..Kabira ka Nishu ko dosti ke liye manana... Nishu ke mann main Kabira ke liye respect..Hubby-Wifey

He started walking towards nisha...nisha's heart started beating fast...she clutched a pillow tightly wid his one hand...while her other hand started shivering which was not unnoticed by him...he comes close to bed seats beside nisha...holded her hand which was shivering wid his one hand n patted it wid his other hand...den he said...Nisha plz dont feel uncomfortable... i know dat u are hesitating to open yr heart infront of me...and u r right in your place...after all we both are strangers...& we both needs time to understand each other...to trust each other...but in onething u can fully trust me dat i will never ever force myself to u...nisha...as she heard dis...she immediately look towards...him... shockingly... it was d first time she was looking at him...der eyes met...both started looking at each other's eyes deeply...seems like dey are talking wid d intense of der eyes...while looking in his eyes...she was thinking...how he get to know wat i was thinking...is he a mind reader...how he knew dat m not comfortable wid his closeness n i need sometime...how????
while he was thinking...i m happy nisha dat u saw me once...i m so happy...no no m more den happy...nisha...dat...i hv loss of words to describe my feelings...nisha u r looking beautiful...juz like an angel n i promise u i will always keep u happiee makes u smile...

Den kabir comes out from his thought while nisha was still lost in his thoughts kabir snapped his hand infront of her n she came back to reality...kabir den spoke again...nisha i want onething frm u...n i hope u will not refuse me for dis...she noded in positive ...becoz now she knew dat he will never cross his limits...he again said...nisha it will be a honour for me to hv a friend like uh...will u be a friend of mine????n he forwarded his hand infront of her...widout thinking she shake her hand wid him now her hand was not shivering...becoz d fear of der closeness which was killing her frm inside was vanished in d air...n...kabir notices it...

kabir- so friends
nisha- friends forever(wid a bright smile in her face)

kabir's heart was now dancing in an anonymous beat...on seeing her smiling and on hearing her melodious voice first time...
Waiting for their NEW JOURNEY

Thanks 4 PM😳 (Res ed b4 PM🤣)

Do write More...🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry fr late comment
bt ths was awesome yaar
you did a amazing job
kabir Is so caring n understanding
and again the description of the emotions was outstanding
m excited for their journey
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Kabir is so caring
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Perfect
Loved it totally
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👏 and all parts are very beautiful and plz update soon I can't wait to read next part of this beautiful story 😊

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