ShivYa FF ~Love Story~ Ch 4 updated on page 3

ok now i m going to start new FF on our shivya... The concept nd the story is totally diffrent from the show so here is character sketch nd prologue... 😊

Shanti devi- The head Of srivastav buisness... she established the srivastav company nd is respected by evry member of this company... She rules the office nd her house as well...she loves her daughter sarla and their children alot... She belives " rich people are god nd poor people are beggers"

Raghav srivastav- MD of srivastav company nd and son of shanti devi... He respect her mother a lot and he loves his wife nd children... He thinks "evry people have right to dream nd have right to keep their view... No one is rich or poor with their own wish"...


Anupam mathur- A small clerk in srivastav company... He loves her daughter riya alot... He thinks " small town people have no right to dream big"


And now our lead couple.


Shivam srivastav- He is son of raghav srivastav... He is a spoiled son of rich buisnessman... He is aomthing like a casanova characters... he loves four women alot... His mother kaushaliya, His sisters namita ,preeti and sonal... Sonal is his bua sarla's daughter bt he loves her alot ...On the other hand he hates pari and amit his cousins who are sarla' children... He thinks" Money is everything... If their is no money then their is no honey , so love honey and love money"

Riya Mathur- she is a daughter of anupam mathur... she loves his father alot... she was 5 yrs old when her mother died... After that her farther grown her up and became his father as well as mother... She loves her best friend bunty who is her childhood friend and partner in her evry crime... she thinks" Money is not evrythin... U cant buy love with money so love evryone ...bcs u need love not money"...



so guys how was the charactersketch ... hope u all like it...

nice start yaar...👏

Amazing concept.
I'm so glad that someone is writing an FF on them.
Can't wait to read it

Originally posted by: Ireena7

nice start yaar...👏

loved Shanti Devi's characterization😆

You have totally changed Shivam's character...😆I am curious to know how would it be...also imagining how would Karam fit it...wow..wanna know the story now...😳

write it soon...

yuppp i thought smthng new so this concept came in my mind and also karam's character was smthing like this in parichey... so hope u all will enjoy

Originally posted by: -Haju-

Amazing concept.
I'm so glad that someone is writing an FF on them.
Can't wait to read it

yeah no one was writing any ff or os on them so thought to start this to make forum more active

Ohk now i m going to update 1st chapter hope u all will like it... so enjoy



It was a normal day of srivastav mension... A man was standing at the entrace when a lady walked towards her...

Man: Gd mrng kaushalya ma'am

kaushalya: Gd mrng mr. mehra aap itni subah yaha kaise...

mr.mehra: actually ma'am mjhe yaha sir ne bulaya tha kch important files leke.

kaushalya: thik hai aap ye mjhe de dijiye mein unhe de dungi...

mr mehra: sure ma'am.
He handed file to kaushalya nd left..

Kaushalya: nimmi,preeti kaha ho tm dono. Aaj tum dono ki subah hogi bhi ya ni...

"gd mrng maa" a voice came from her back.

kaushalya: are preeti aa gyi jogging krke.

Preeti: haan maa av jst aayi hun

kaushalya: aur nimmi kaha hai????

"main yaha hun maa" both turned towards voice nd saw nimmi was on stairs... she said in sleepy voice while rubbing he eyes " kyu chilla rhi ho subah subah. Thik se sone ni diya"

kaushalya: accha toh ab 8 bje subah subah ho gya.

nimmi: maa apna vo kahawat ni suni "jab jaago tb sawera"

preeti: shut up nimmi kch v bolti rhti ho tm...

"Kya hua itna shor kyu maccha k rakha h tm maa- betiyo ne."

Evrybody turns nd saw raghav was standing on entrance...

Kaushalya: aap aa gye ghum ke...

Raghav: haan aur tabhi se aap teeno ki baatein sun rha tha..

preeti nd nimmo: gd mrng papa

raghav:gd mrng

Kaushalya: Jaa preeti papa k liye chai bna k le aa. Vo mr.mehra aapke liye files le ke aaye the aapne mangwaya tha...

raghav: Haan mangwaya tha... waise amma kaha hai????

Kaushalya: vo mandir gyi h ab aati hi hogi...

Raghav: Aur aapke laadle, vo kaha gye unki subah hui ki ni av tk????

nimmi: Papa bhaiya subah hi uth k jogging krne chale gye...
This answer amazed both ragahv nd kaushalya...

Raghav: subah subah aesa mazzak mt kro nimmi... shivam aur subah uth k jogging impossible... Usse office join krne k liye kaha vo toh hota ni aur jogging... aane do usse aaj kch baat krni h... Aaj unki mrng hm gd krte hai...

Precap: ShivYa and amma ji's entry... shivya first meet

Ohk i knw its little boring bt i will try to update nxt part asap...

nice characterization ..like shivam character quite opposite to Mam shivam aur sasikala businesswoman wow nice eagerly waiting for the updates dear😃

Originally posted by: Agrata23

nice characterization ..like shivam character quite opposite to Mam shivam aur sasikala businesswoman wow nice eagerly waiting for the updates dear😃

sure dear whenevr i will get tym i will update it 😳 today i hv updated first chapter now when i will be free i will update

NICE START.👏👏👏👏👏👍🏼. CONTNUE SOON AND DO PM ME😃

sory for late update was bsy with some work bt now i m going to update so enjoy...



"shivam shivam shivam" the crowd of girls was startd cheering for their hero who was going to perform his concert in the college auditorium ... A boy with his guitar was standing on the stage...

Girl1: yaar yeh larka kon hai nd isse dekh k sbhi larkiya pagal kyu ho rhi h..

Girl2: are tjhe nhi pta yeh iss college ka most demanding larka hai the handsome hunk SHIVAM SRIVASTAV

yes he was non other than shivam srivastav... he start singing his fav song kabhi jo baadal barse... after the function was over he came out of the college... he took his phone out when he realise his phone was ringing.

Shivam: nimmi iss waqt kyu cll kr rhi h kya hua hoga... he recievd the cll and said in angry tone..

shivam: nimmi tmhe pta h na mjhe pasnd ni ki mjhe iss waqt koi disturb kare cll kyu kiya tmne..

nimmi: waah aur aapke wajh se yaha papa ka gussa mjhe jhelna pad rha hai waise aap kaha ho????

shivam: main av jst college se nikla hun. mein av mandir k paas k bahar khata hun mera car ka tyre puncher ho gya h toh car thik krwa rha hun kyu kya hua papa gussa hai kya???

nimmi: haan bhut zyada aap ab jldi ghar aao aur aap mandir m kya kr rhe ho???? she asked in teasing way

shivam: oh shit

nimmi: kya hua????

shivam: dadi ki car yaha kya kr rhi h agr unhone mjhe yaha dekh liya toh mjhe maar daalegi sun nimmi phone rakh tu m baad m baat krta hun bye...

nimmi: per bhaiya meri baat... before she could complete shivam disconnectd the cll...

shivam was trying to hide from shanti devi as her car was coming towards him... suddenly his eyes stoped at a girl who was praying to god he was continueosly staring at her he was mesmerized by her beauty... she was coming towards him... suddenly he saw dadi was also coming behind her. he got shocked he was confused what to do?? how to hide from dadi??? suddenly he pulled that girl close to him before she could say smthng he quickly kisses on her lips... she was shocked as she try to pull him away bt he held both her hand and pinned her to the wall... he kissed her vry passionately as he w dont want to stop the kiss... dadi came towards her car and saw a couple kissing each other...

Dadi: cheee aaj ke zamaane ke bacche bigar gye h mandir k bahar hi yeh sb cheee driver car chalao...
shivam was passionately kissing her lips... finaly with her full power she pushes him away... before he could say anything she give a tight slap on his cheecks...

Shivam: how dare u to slap me

girl: how dare u to kiss me

shivam: listen mein bs apni dadi se chup rha tha isiliye mjhe tmhe kiss krna para

girl: toh yaha pe m hi tmhe milli thi kya jaake kahi kisi per ke peeche chip jaate
kiss krne ki kya zarurat thi

shivam: listen tm mjhe jaanti ni mein Shivam Srivastav hun smjhe

girl: toh mein kya karu dance kru kya

Shivam : well i dnt mind miss...
he saw a file in her hand... he looked at the name on file
Shivam: miss RIYA MATHUR ri8

riya: listen mjhe tmse larke apna tym waste ni krna go to hell

shivam : same 2 u babes...


precap: ShivYa second meet in srivastav office