Manya /Rara SS Tumse pyaar hame hai kitna janejana Chapter 5, page 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice chapter yaar 😊
i am excited to know wht is ur suprise 😉
Keep it up
absolutely loving it
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Thanks a lot! Im really happy you liked it!
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thanks a tone ! im happy you liked it!
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hi guys , hope you enjoy this chapter , well my surprise is the meeting of both rara manya and i wish you like it, please like it and leave your feedback , it really means a lot to me 😃😃😃
, also that the next chapter is going to be the last chapter .


Chapter 5

In front of mathurs haveli,

M., bhai , hum yaha kya kar rahe hain?

R.. yaar, mujhe rachita ko batana hai .. ki mai usse kitna pyaar karta hoon, chal ,

M.. bhai , aap ko bhukhaar toh nahi hai na.,.?( and he forbides him to go dragging him )chalo ghar chaltein hain...

R.. Kya yaar.,,,, mujhe jaane hi nahi deta tu toh ... ghar nahi jaana mujhe !

M.. haan par mujhe jana hai! chalo ab aap yaha se!

And on the way to ramams house , these two drunk boys, :

M: waise , bhai , pyaar toh hum bhi bahut karte hai amaya se, lekin ,

And they go to ramas house, mantu leaves rama to his bed and leaves from there and goes to his home and sleeps.

The next day... in the evening .

Rachita wanted to take a ride to see the ppoja ... so she was in the boat , which was ready to leave the place,and in the same boat , rama was there as well , facing the river , thinking about rachita ( he was wearing white shirt and a leather jacket with jeans... ) ., and rachita was wearing a high waist cream colour long skirt with full sleeve blouse and with soft waves in her hair, at the other corner of the boat , facing the river ,as well , lost in her thoughts , lost in rama .

At the ghaat...

Amaya was looking at the river peacefully after a tiring day of work, she was enjoying the view of the ghaat. And the people were performing the pooja at the other side. Mantu was passing from there with his bike .. And he saw her ... his eyes were just stuck on her , she was wearing a white and pink patiala suit and her hair was tied in a loose messy bun with some soft curls out of that bun . He just couldn't take his eyes pff her and after parcking his bike ( without taking his eyes off her ) and walked towards her , he now was standing just behind her.

Rama turned around and saw rachita sitting there , he went towards her ... he was now standing right behind her , rachita got up and turned around ... as he was just standing behind she didnt have space enough to walk so she stumbled and was about to fall behind but rama grabbed her arms and pulled her towards him ... she collided with him ... her hands on his chest and his hands were on her lower back ... when she saw who was ... she got surprised , but ... a slight smile drew on her face ...his touch sent shivers to her body ... her heart ws breathing really fast ... their faces

were so close ... snd their noses almost touch each others ... rama stepped back taking off his hands from her back ... and rachita stepped towards him

R. rachita ji ... ap yahan ??

Rac. haan ... main..woh ...pooja drkhna chahti thi ...

R. ohh...

Rachit. aur ap ???

R. main bhi ... pooja ke liye aaya tha ...

R. oh...

Mantu was standing behind amaya , amaya turned around to see mantu , the gentle breeze made some of her hair to cover her face ... mantu ...with his hand ... tucked them behind her ear . Amaya was closed her eyes due his pleasant and gentle touch . When she opened her eyes to look atmantus innocent dark brown eyes, it started to rain .

And mantu grabbed her hand and took her to a shop which was there and a tea stall was there as well . right in front of the shop where they were. when they reached , they were already wet . Mantu noticd that amaya got wet and removing his jacket he placed it on her shoulders, while doing so , amaya was looking at mantu lovingly getting completely lost in him .

At the boat , rama and rachita were staring at each other and thinking what to speak , and rama saw few drops on rachitas face ,on her face , near her lips , on her lips and then , eventually itbecame

faster .

Rama took off his leather jacket and held it over rachitas and his head, getting closer to her , rachitas heart was beating faster again, with an unknown pain in her heart ... wanting to say something ...to burst out

R. dont worry , itll stop in few Minutes

Rachita nodded . She wanted to say something ... but... her lips were opening ... but no words came out ... he was extremely close to her ... which made her really nervous ... they could feel each others breaths

In the shop , a song started playing ...

A. this is favouriye song !!

M. really ?

a. ya ...why ?

M. tum wo pehli wali amaya nahi rahi ...

A. haan... ab yahan aake ... yahan ka maza bhi lena chahiye ( she said with a wide smile )

Mantu was looking at her beautiful chocolate brown eyes , and smiled back ,

a. mantu !!! mujhe ek cutting chai peeni hai chalo chalke peete hai

M . are par ... baarish pad rahi hai ... bheemar ho jayogi ... main jakar leke aata hoon...

A. ok...

And mantu goes to buy cutting chai , amaya sits down on the stair which was connecting the line of shops and the pavement .


Precap . mantu amaya confession (romantic song sequence ) , rachita rama confession. ( romantic song sequence )

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Nice update dr..
Thanks for the pm
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thank you so much !!!!!1

im glas you liked it !!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow beautiful and amazing ❤️
So smooth going story
Feeling relaxed and good
Oh god i can't even say how much beautiful it is no words to say
Loved it ❤️
You are really beautiful writer
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Originally posted by: Asheley

Wow beautiful and amazing❤️

So smooth going story
Feeling relaxed and good
Oh god i can't even say how much beautiful it is no words to say
Loved it❤️
You are really beautiful writer



Thank youbso so much ashley 😃

Thanks for such encouraging words 😃 ⭐️
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Good update.👍🏼...Waiting for the last exciting part...😳
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Originally posted by: frenz4u

Good update.👍🏼...Waiting for the last exciting part...😳



thanks alot😃😃😃

im glad you liked it😃😃😃😃😃😃⭐️⭐️

i hope you enjoy the last part as well 😳😃😃😃

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