ArDhika SS:~MIRROR~Ch-3'The CHILD&His COOKIE JAR'Pg24 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago


Thank u dear!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fiza1995

Awesone update as usual sina

loved their scenes. His restlessness and her silent behaviour..his fear of losing her. I can say arjun is madly in love with her.
Want more of this story. Please update next part soon and thanks for the pm :*



Thank u deary!🤗I wil try mkn it fast..😳
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Thank u so much!😛
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Originally posted by: Asheley

Awesome update.no words to say the way you are showing arjun feelings for radhika.waiting for ur next update



Thank u dear!😛I wil try givn 1 soon!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok, So ur next destination is this SS... Waiting for the update now... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi TM! I'd like to start off by saying that you perfectly capture the aura of chemistry that has been showcased by Aham and Monica in Manmarziyan as ArDhika. So it always feels that your stories can very well be plausible on the show (in a PG 13 version of course :D)

I only just read in the paper that Manmarziyan may very well be ending by this month's end. Looking at the ads for Sumit Sambhaal Lega, I guess this is true. As we can all see, MMZ has been mimicking the saas-bahu genre (no complaints, though! It's still better than the usual shows).

But if our favourite show is truly ending, then in the next 19 episodes, the CVs will be forced to fast-track many storylines..which means we may not get our needed quota of ArDhika!

Which makes you and other FF writers on this forum that much more important! You are our only recourse..you can end this story to the best of our satisfaction.

So please do update this story and your other stories.
Much love and luck..!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh God loved it.
See ur such an awesome writer that every story of urs weaves magic. Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
[Hey frnds!🤗Back wid da updt FINALLY!😆😳I know I know u all r waiting for da odr updts too..😳But lemme go along 1 by 1..May hv to work onda tagathon too..😕So nt sure yet,but yeah I m updtn.Nd dnt worry evn if ArDhika isnt on screen,I'll try kipn dm alive thru my works here..Every beautiful thing ends.But sometimes dey nvr end as dey r alive in our heart.❤️
Anyways hope u enjoy da updt!😳Do lemme know,as u know its a bit difrnt from my odr works.😳
Tehsina(SINA)].


Chapter-2"The LOST MUSIC..",Page-17:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/125230280

CHAPTER-3.

"The Child And His Cookie Jar.."

Arjun smiled to himself unable to believe his eyes and ears as the moonlight bathed her slim curvy figure in its silvery magical glow,while the waves drenched her further,nearly making her fall,as she laughed out again.

Her laughter were the sweet music to his ears,was pulling him hard towards her.He had to touch her,feel her,and absorb her presence into him..

It seemed at that moment all his alcohol imbibed senses wanted only to be near her..

And Arjun staggered through the strong waves,frustrated that they hindered his movement and delayed his going near her.He was breathless,as his heart thudded crazily already even before he had touched her.

He was scared least she vanished if he touched her too,and yet he could not stop himself from going near to touch her too.As if something was pulling him hard and fast towards her.And all he could do was move along..

She went still,just when his hand touched her shoulder,and slowly she turned round,and Arjun hitched in a sharp breath,as a hot something jagged though his insides when he saw her face looking up at him.She literally took his breath away.

Moonlight made her pretty face glow ethereally and his imbibed senses made him think she was nothing less than an angel who had come down to play in the waves under the moonlight.Droplets of water lay on her soft skin,her long eyelashes spiky and wet,her eyes wide and surprised as she stared up at him.

Arjun's eyes lowered to her soft lips which were slightly parted,and moist too.He hitched in a sharp breath when he noticed a drop glistening on her soft bottom lip..The silvery light of the moon seemed to be highlighting it and teasing his senses with it.

Arjun was so engrossed in the droplet of water that he nearly groaned out loud when she licked at it with her tongue.

"SIR-..?"

Damn!Not SIR again..!Not now..!He thought to himself as in reaction to her soft voice he pulled her closer to him,plastering her lower body to his making her gasp out.

Arjun nearly groaned out again,but this time in satisfaction as her wet body clad in that salwar suit was now plastered to her slim and sexy body.Her dupatta was not there and that made him pull her closer to himself both possessively and also with need.

Possessiveness,as he did not want anyone else to see her like that,and need,because..Because he just could not help it..

He moved his hands down her back,until they finally settled at the small of her back,and in the process plastered her far closer to himself than before,not even letting air pass between them,as strong waves lashed at them.But still both stared into each others' eyes as if completely lost in a world of their own.

Seconds ticked by,the only sound being the sound of the strong lapping waves and their racing heart mingled with their harsh breath,as they stared on..

Arjun could not fight the pull much longer,and nor did he care if it was decent or not.Or if he should really be holding her this close to himself.All that mattered to him was now and her.

His one hand tightened round her waist while the other moved up to touch her soft cheek..

She was so soft..All over..And warm..And damn why did she have to smell so ludicrously delicious too..Those soft wet lips seemed to be inviting him closer to take a taste them,and he so much wanted to.He so much wanted it that his stomach muscles tightened and coiled up with the pent up tension of holding back his feelings and growing need for her for so long..

When was it,that he had first felt the initial vibes of attraction towards her..?Was it recently,was it during the Lonavla trip,was it when they first clashed into each other,or was it always?Or was it for an eternity?

He softly cupped her hot moist milky cheek glowing in the moonlight,his thumb gently rubbing at it as he did so,while his breathing got heavier..His arm round her waist tightened while he pulled her close up to himself,letting her feel all of his hardness,as he moved his head closer to hers.

She had such beautiful eyes..Eyes that seemed to look deep into the dirtiest corner of his blackened soul..Eyes that searched for all the hidden secrets within him,and yet when they found them,they searched more..Seeking something,which he was not even sure he himself he had..What did those eyes always seem to be searching within him..?He wondered distractedly,as he moved his head still closer to her.

She inhaled a long shaky breath,when his lips were close to hers,and yet had not touched them.Their warm moist breath mingled together,as he looked at her now closed eyes,and then his gaze dipped to her slightly parted rosy lips.

The moonlight and wind played light and shadow games on her mesmerizing face,highlighting and contouring her beauty to perfection making him forget to breath even more,and nearly making his insides ache with the potent hunger gnawing within him,and slowly but surely burning his insides with simmering heat.

"Radhika.."He called out softly,and she instantly opened her eyes,and Arjun loved the look he saw in them.It looked like wet moist chocolate,and heck he wanted to drown in them and get lost for good."I-.."He was not sure what he wanted to say right then,as his voice had turned husky and nearly choked with barely clogged emotions.

A questioning frown was forming on her forehead,forming little wrinkles that Arjun found cute too.

"Sir..?"She asked in a breathless voice,making his insides squeeze at the sound of her voice,but he again hated the way she called him Sir..It was not right!And he did not want to hear her calling him that!

"Don't!"He warned her,his eyes suddenly burning,as he plastered her closer to himself,nearly forcing her soft body between his parted thighs.Not caring that she could now feel his aroused self too,if she had not already done so.

"What Sir..-?"

"Damn!I said don't!"He bit out raggedly just before his lips closed over her surprised and parted ones.He moved them roughly at first,not caring if he hurt her really at that moment."Don't..!"He whispered against her lips,as his hand crushed into her hair,running his fingers along the wet open strands.

Arjun was not even aware of the ferocity of his own emotions or the turbulence and roughness of the kiss,until she moaned out in protest against his lips and her fingers dug deep into his arms,and forced him to move his lips off her.

Arjun struggled for breathing as he stared down at her now furious looking face.

Damn!Why did she look so beautiful when angry too?!He had always thought that such lines were only used in clichd movies but he was awestruck by the brilliance of her beauty tonight.

"Let go of me!"She hissed out,struggling to be free of his hold now,but all she managed to do was splash some more water around and nearly slip more against him as a strong wave hit them hard.

"Why..?"He asked softly as his hands now traveled on her back,wanting her too feel all the turbulence he himself was feeling.

"Because...Because I said so!"She bit out angrily wanting to be free from his hold.

But Arjun ofcourse was not letting her go that easily.Staring down at her with angry mocking eyes,he picked her up in his arms and completely ignored the squeak she gave out,as he moved into deeper water..

"What are you doing?!!"She squeaked out,as she held onto his neck now with both arms as he reached almost neck high sea water now.She gasped for breath,spluttering out water that she had swallowed as a huge wave crashed over there head."I CAN'T SWIM SIR!!!"She screamed in vain as she felt him floating in the water now..They were already in too deep water for her height..!

Arjun looked down at her then,and with his eyes burning and glinting like shards of onyx in the moonlight,while simultaneously he started freeing his neck from her hold,as she desperately tried to hold onto him.

"What are you doing SIR?!!!"She squealed terrified and gasping ,trying hard to hold onto him with one hand as he already had unclasped her other hand when another strong wave hit them hard while Arjun floated in the water.

"You just told me to let you go didn't you my SWEET WIFE?"He gritted out softly,just before he moved away her one remnant hand too from round his neck while he let go of her completely,letting her slide down his body.

"SIR!!!"She whimpered out in fear as she now wrapped her sinking legs round his waist now,as she hugged his torso tight,holding onto him for dear life.She moved her head against his neck "Don't let go of me!Please..!"She whimpered

"Are you sure MY LOVELY SWEET WIFE..?Are you sure you do not want me to let you go?!!"He whispered softly as he moved his hand to cup her bottoms slightly as he gave her a bit of support while she held onto him tight.

Another strong wave hit them hard,and Radhika gasped against his neck,moving her face deeper into the curve there,as she hugged him tighter,her legs round his waist tightening their hold on him."YES!Yes!Please don't!Please don't let me go!"She whimpered out.

And as if he had been waiting to hear that only ,his hold on her tightened as he pulled her tighter and stronger into his hold supporting her rounded bottom in his arms,as if his very life depended in not letting her go,while he gave a soft satisfied smile looking up at the moonlight as tears formed at the corner of his eyes,and he clasped her tight to himself,while waves lapped on at them.

Seconds passed,and they floated together like that until Radhika moved a bit..Feeling awkward suddenly at the way he held her,his arms below her bottom and yet afraid to let go least she drowned.

She raised her head slowly from the crook of his neck and slowly looked up at him,and hitched in a sharp breath when she saw him looking down at her with a hot hungry expression on his chiseled handsome moonlit face.

Her heart started thudding now with a different feeling far away from fear as she unconsciously licked at her suddenly gone dry lips,completely aware of her very wet form plastered to him in every way.She could even feel the matching tempo of his heart,beating close against her right breast as she was completely leaning onto him.

As if he could read her nervousness,Arjun moved his hands a bit,and one of them brushed against her thigh wrapped round his waist while the other traveled upwards and slightly brushed the side of her full bosom,intentionally or unintentionally,making her gasp out in surprise.

She could see the darkening of his pupils as she did so,while he moved his lips closer to hers..

Her every fibre seemed to be aware of him in every possible way..Radhika suddenly felt all alive in every form,not really caring she could still smell the alcohol in his breath,as all that mattered to her was the man himself at that moment.

"I won't let you go now.."He whispered huskily as his eyes moved to her lips while he said so,making them tingle as if he had just touched them,and then he looked back into her eyes again.He crushed her closer,so that her soft bosom completely crushed into his hard chest,while she gasped at the contact again as she felt nearly naked due to the water around them.

His eyes burned into hers with an all new fire now,that made Radhika only look at him more mesmerized by them than ever.

"I won't let my Cookie Jar go this time.."He said firmly as he tightened his hold on her determinedly,and this Radhika did not react when he moved his lips closer to hers,as she was lost in his strange words and the light of defiance she could read in his eyes.

What was he talking about..?!What Cookie Jar..?!!

Before she could think more or even ask him anything,he started swimming towards the shore,and soon she had reached it and placed her on the sandy beach beside him,still holding her tight in his arms on as he sat there breathing heavily.

"Won't let go..Won't let my Cookie Jar go again..Promise.."He mumbled softly against her neck as he hugged her tight to himself,surprising her to complete stillness."They take you away every time.."He whispered brokenly in tear clogged voice."Promise won't let them take you again..Won't let you go.."He whispered brokenly against her neck in a childlike voice,and Radhika felt shocked to the core as she felt fresh warm liquid against her neck.

Was he crying?!!

She moved a bit to try to see,but he crushed her tighter to him the moment she tried to move.

"DON'T GO!!!Don't leave me!!!Don't leave me again!"He sobbed out brokenly against her neck,and Radhika let him sob away..

Her insides in complete chaos..And her heart in torment in seeing the strong vengeful man nearly broken like this..!She wanted to reassure him,wanted to hug him and calm him,but he would not let her move at all!

The waves lapped nearby,as a child within the man sobbed his pain out..And Radhika rested her arms round his body as much as she could,letting him sob it all out..His sobs piercing at his heart,as Radhika felt her eyes going misty.

There was so much pain and anguish in those sobs..So much remorse and regret in those words..She did not know the back story behind those tears..

But for now Radhika grieved with the child Arjun that lived within the man Arjun..

She grieved with The Child within,not knowing how to heal as tears fell down her eyes too..She grieved even though she had no idea what had really happened to The CHILD And His Cookie Jar..




Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome
Emotional, romantic,everything you showed in this update
Loved it
Thank you sina for such a lovely updates
Thanks for PM 😊
Loved each and every bit in this update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful emotions!! N m curious about the backstory of the child and his cookie jar...will be waiting for ur next update 😳

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