Sherdha OS a rainy night

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hi guys , it just few days back since when im watching piya rangrez and couldnt help myself writing an os for them , hope you like it and please leave your feedback . And also , please tell me if i should write more on them . Well , i hope you enjoy this .

A rainy night

Shradha and Sher were stuck in the middle of a highway and at both sides of them , there were a lot of trees , or better said , a jungle. A lush green view, thanks to the previous rains .

Shradha was wearing a blue and pink saree and sher had his jeans with a white t shirt .

Sher. cant go back home because my car broke down and theres no mecanic near here .

Shrad. Dont worry sher , somebody will give us a lift .

Sher nodded in response . But , suddenly it started to rain , and it became heavier .

Sher . this was the only thing which was left ?

Shrad. Sher ji , look theres a little cottage there ! lets go there

sher. and if someone is there ?

shrad . haan toh , lets see na ! or you want to get sick here .

And they went towards the cottage . Sher opened it , nobody was there , it was like an old abandoned little house .

Sher. chalo , at least we have a shelter for tonight ( saying this he smiled at shradha and she smiled in return )

They entered , sher saw a lighter and some kerosene lamps there , although there was some light coming through the window ,( moonlight) . Shradha closed the door .

Sher . waw ! bhagwan ne bandobast karke phasaya hamein !

Shradha laughed at his remark , sher noticed that , and just couldnt take off his eyes from her , and just kept staring at her until she got shy of his glare and stopped laughing looking down .

Sher sat down on his knees and lit those kerosene lapms .

He looked at his wife in that yellow light , with the saree which was completely wet and stuck to her body , letting her perfect feminine figure marked .

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

Shradha noticed his glare , and lowered her eyes , sat down in front of the fire , opposite sher . She looked up and looked at him ,at his wet hair , those raindrops on his face and neck , that wet white t shirt and looked down due to her shyness. Sher stood up and placed the lamps in sevaral parts of the cottage for the light , and while he was doing that , shradha was looking at him, lovingly .

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Behad aur beshumar aaya hai

He came and sat down , with his eyes on her , and hers on everywhere but towards him. After a while , when he couldn't stay away from her anymore, He got up and slowly walked towards Shradha , removing his t shirt . Shradha saw him coming towards her and she started breathing heavily . He threw his t shirt and shradha got up to pick it as an excuse of getting away from him , due to the nervousness. But , he reached her , and stood behind her , she could feel his male cologne . He got more closer to her , and with his hand , took her hair and slid it in front of her shoulder , touching her shoulder soflty while doing so , and he leaned forward and kissed the nape of her neck , which made her grab the pallu of her saree and closed her eyes . just then , they heard the thunder noise , and suddenly , shradha hugged him , very tight .

Toote toh toote teri baahon mein aise

Jaise shaakon se patte behaya

Bikhre tujhi se aur simte tujhi mein

Tu hi mera sab le gaya

Na fikar, na sharam, na lihaaj, ek baar aaya

She felt his cold body against her hot , and her already heavy breathing became faster, he hugged her back , placing his hands on her back , and carresing it , she felt shivers run through all her body , she broke the hug , slowly , and looked at him .

Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai

Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai

Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

And she satrted leaving , but , sher grabbed her forearm and pulled her towards him , she collided against his chest, his bare chest , and her hand was on his chest as well , he moved his hand to her waist . He could feel her hot breaths on his cold chest .

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

Sher came more closer to shradha , and when his lips were almost touching her ear, he whispered

Sher. ap humse hamesha door hi kyu jaati hain shradha ji ?

Shradha . kyunki ... kyunki ... agar hum apke kareeb aa gaye toh .,,

Sher . toh..( he whispered very close to her ear )

Shradha. toh...main ,

Tu hi meri awaaragi, tu hi dua, har shaam ki

Tu khamakhaa, tu lazmi, tu hi raza, tu hi kami

Aur tu hi woh firaq hai jisko

Hai silsilo ne mere paas laya

He couldn't control himself any more and kissed her ear , which made shradha close her eyes,

Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai

Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai

Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

He then kissed her cheek , and He whispered in her ear

Sher. I love you shradha ji , I love you , kya aap mujh se lyaar karti hain ?

shradha . haan ... main bhi apse bahut pyaar karti hoon sher ji ,

And he loosen his grip on her waist , and she pulled back , shifting her hands from his chest to his broad shoulders and slowly taking them off her hands from his body , she just stood there staring at him , in those chocolate brown eyes ,which had pain in them , but today only love , care towards her .

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

He lifted her in his arms , without breacking the eyelock ,and taking her where there was a lot of grass ,he bent down and placed her there . She wrapped her arms around him , embracing him , he recipocrated her hug, tighly and she carresed his back , he felt the warmth of her body which he never felt , and felt today , with her , only her . They were enjoying the rainy night , in a cottage, alone , away from evryone, anyone who could disturb them .

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

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Posted: 10 years ago
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How could you end like this 😡
Such a romantic update
You took my breath away dear
Loved it
Wonderful writing
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Originally posted by: Asheley

How could you end like this😡

Such a romantic update
You took my breath away dear
Loved it
Wonderful writing



thanks a tone ashley !!!

im sorry yaar 😆 😳 😳

im really happy you liked it
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thanku so much 😃 im really happy you liked it ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Beautiful! 👏
Loved it so much! 😳
Please keep writing 😃
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Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Wow! Beautiful! 👏
Loved it so much! 😳
Please keep writing 😃



thanks a lot 😃 i reallu hapy you liked it 😃 sure write more on them ! ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Extremely Sensuas,hot and sizzling... i just loved it...plz continue...nd do write more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow that's a very romantic os 😳 totally loved it ! very well imagined...extremely hot...wish we could see this in the show sometimes...would love to read more! keep writing dear
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Originally posted by: zeba_kausar

Extremely Sensuas,hot and sizzling... i just loved it...plz continue...nd do write more...



ohh !!! thanks a lot 😃 ⭐️ im really happy you liked it , ill definitely write more ⭐️ 😃
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thanks a lot 😃 im glad you liked it ⭐️

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