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Like in every fairy tale, the prince and the princess unite and live happily ever after... same happened with meher and abeer... they got married with the consent of their families. both the families accepted each other full heartedly without any hard feelings against anybody... meher and abeer got married on 14th of february as meher was adamant that she wants to get married on valentines day only. abeer happily submitted to her wish and promised her no matter what he will always fulfil every wish of hers even if it was her wildest fantasy... madhvi and kuber were damn happy that now their small family was complete and happy... .
Its been 5 year since abeer and meher got married... they are happily married and have a son named vivan malhotra. vivan malhotra... hmmm he is 4 years old and an exact copy of his dad oops ' buddy ' thats what he call abeer. coming to meher... noo its mrs meher abeer malhotra now... she is caught up between this father son duo... she is the target of their pranks everytime... she has no work other than running behind abeer in the morning asking him to get ready and go to office and after that she runs behind vivan, her junior abeer, waking him up in the morning, getting him ready for school, making him eat breakfast - and mind it making vivan eat his breakfast is the toughest of all the things... meher runs behind him in the whole house with a plate in one hand and the other trying to catch hold of him... constantly she have to tell him stories or engage him in something or she have to play with him to make him finish his food or even have some portion of it... and once she is done with making him finish his food, there comes another problem - making him drink milk...
today was just another day in malhotra house...
sunday morning, 10 : 30 am
meher : vivan... come baby... lets drink this tiny miny glass of milk...
vivan : where is my favourite doremon mug...??
meher : oopss... i will just bring it... u stay here only...
meher brings milk in her son's favourite mug and sees that he is no where to be seen...
meher : shona... where are you..??
and comes no reply...
meher : vivan... come out right now... vivaannn...
kuber : what happened beta...??
meher : dad have u seen vivan... he was here only few minutes back...
kuber : he must be hiding somewhere... check in my room... may be he is with madhvi...
meher : i think u are right dad...
meher : vivan mumma is now angry... come out... vivan...
meher goes to madhvi's room...
meher : mom... have u seen vivan...??
madhvi : he must in your room... by the way meher do u wanna talk to your mom...??
meher : its mom... i will talk to her later... by the way what are you two talking about at this time...??
madhvi : we have only one topic to talk about... our little prince... i was just telling her about how vivan scared me with a plastic lizard yesterday... he is soo adorable... isnt he...?? My mini abeer...
meher : yeah mom (smiling at the thought that after the birth of vivan, all the people in the house have lost it)

meher was now angry on vivan... this has become his everyday routine...
meher entered her bedroom and saw abeer still sleeping...
meher : abeeerrr
abeer : kya hai gala kyun faad rahi ho baby...??? (why are u yelling at the top of your voice baby...??)
meher : tum aur kitna so ge...?? (how long will u sleep...???)
abeer : 10 minutes only...
meher : abeer get up now... from past one hour u are saying 10 minutes only... i am just fed up...
abeer : come then sleep with me my bacha... (forwarded his hand towards meher and pulled her towards him...)
and next moment, meher fall on him and as a result the mug of milk that she was holding fell on abeer's tee...
abeer : yucckkk...
meher : haaaww... i am sorry...
abeer : what is this yaar...??? you poured milk on me...
and someone started laughing...
meher and abeer looked at the source and saw vivan holding his stomach and laughing...
meher was about to get up when abeer tightened his hold on her waist pulling her towards him...
meher : kya kar rahe ho...?? vivan dekh raha hai... leave me abeer... (what r u doing...?? vivan is looking...)
abeer : vivan close your eyes buddy...
vivan : ok buddy... but do it fast...
abeer : shut up u brat...
meher : dont call him a brat abeer...
abeer : and i am your jannu... remember baby...??
vivan : are u done buddy...??
abeer : no just 2 minutes...
abeer whispered in meher's ear "Do it fast... my champ hates waiting... kiss me fast meher..."
meher replied "No kiss for u today... i hate milk..."
vivan : i too hate it...!!!
abeer : bilkul maa pe gya hai... (like son like mother)
meher : leave me na...
abeer : but i love strawberry... and next moment he crashed his lips with hers... he kissed her with all the love he had for her and she without hesitating reciprocated it...
after breaking the kiss... meher was just looking at the duo...
abeer : open your eyes buddy... now come n give your buddy a good morning kiss...
vivan : cmon u just had one... (And he giggled)
meher : what...??
vivan : so what did buddy ask u for...??? pasta in white sauce...??
abeer was smirking on seeing how bright his little Xerox was...
meher : vivan stop thinking too much... cmon get ready for your music class...
vivan : can u just excuse us baby...??
meher : haaawww... u cant call me baby... i am your mother vivan... Its pointless talking to you both, i am leaving...
vivan : these girls i tell you...
abeer giggled and stopped when meher glared at him before leaving the room...
abeer : come champ... Good morning mere rockstar...
Abeer kissed vivan's cheek and he wiped his cheek with the back of his palm.
vivan : i need your help buddy...
abeer : help...??
vivan : that tina...
abeer : whats up with tina man...?? (And he leans back on the bed)
vivan : she is really beautiful... i think she should be my girlfriend...
abeer (smirked) : good going buddy...
vivan : but will she kiss me like mumma kissed you...??
abeer : you saw it right...???
vivan : yeah...
abeer : meher will kill you... dont say it in front of her...
vivan : she will kill YOU buddy... she loves me...
abeer : oh hello... she loves me more than you...
vivan : wake up daddy... she loves me more than anything...
abeer : haha...
vivan : we will ask her... now help... Please
abeer : buddy... you are only 4... we all kiss you everyday...right...??
vivan : right...
abeer : so dont think about that girl and her kisses...
vivan : hmmm...
and the whole day passed like this...
after 3 months...
at night...
meher : abeer pls switch off the TV... i need to sleep...
abeer : just 5 minutes more... its world cup final... sshhh...
meher : to hell with your world cup final...
vivan got up and stood on the bed...
vivan: baby why do u shout too much...?? dad she is just impossible...
abeer : i know baby... go off to sleep...
vivan laid down next to meher and hugged her...
vivan : he doesnt love me any longer...
meher : ditto...
abeer : shitt... we again lost... applauding... and he switched off the tv and saw meher n vivan cuddling up together and vian glaring deadly shots at him...
abeer went close to vivan and laid down with his left arm on the bed supporting his weight...
abeer : buddy...??
vivan didnt looked at him and cuddled even more with meher...
meher smirked looking at abeer... she loved this angry avatar of her abeer junior...
abeer : listen buddy... i am sorry...
vivan : answer my question first...
abeer : anything for you...
vivan left meher and went close to abeer and said " why is she becoming fat day by day...??? " (pointing at meher who was 5 months pregnant now...)
abeer gulped listening to again an intelligent question of his junior...
abeer : she eats too much you see...
meher widened her eyes and glared at abeer...
vivan : no buddy... she eats like a squirrel... Sometimes she doesn't even eat anything...
abeer : may be its water filled in there... (very quickly abeer came up with another excuse...)
vivan : no...!!!!
abeer : what happened...?? Why are you shouting...??
vivan : the baby will drown then... she doesnt know how to swim... (meher opened her mouth in shock...)
abeer : what...???
vivan : yes... there is a baby inside... i heard nani saying to mamma to take care of the baby...
abeer : you are really smart viv...
meher : haaw... i told u to go n play... and did u hear all of it...??
vivan : yes... so what...?? thats my house... i can roam anywhere i wish like...
meher : and who told you this...???
vivan : maamu
Meher : yeh tunnu na.. Kal maar khaega mujhse..??
abeer : guys... lets sleep... Aur meher tunnu bacha hai yaar..
Meher : bacha toh koi bhi nahi yahan... Na toh tumhara tunnu na toh tumhara junior... Thanks to you..
vivan : but buddy when will she come...???
abeer and meher : who...???
vivan : this baby...
abeer : very soon... come now sleep... you have school tomorrow buddy...
vivan : yeah i have to meet tina also...
meher : yeh aur iski tina... (she giggled thinking how her son knew everything...)

after 4 months...
abeer : see mom she is really beautiful...
madhvi : hmm... exactly like meher...
abeer : but see her eyes are somewhat like me... And her smile should be exactly like mine... Killer you know...
Madhvi smiled while vivan didn't like it at all...
vivan : i am like u buddy... she is like mumma...
abeer : see he is already jealous... (giving his new born to madhvi and she and kuber got busy admiring their little angel...)
abeer picked vivan in his arms and make him look at the little princess...
abeer : viv... now u are a big brother... u have to take care of her buddy... she is your responsibilty...
vivan : she is my what...???
abeer : sister...
vivan : yeah... Ok... but i miss mumma...
abeer : come lets go to our darling...
abeer took vivan to meher who was resting in her room with suman n tarun with her... madhvi n kuber followed him...
abeer : see here is your mumma...
vivan got down and ran to meher...
meher : what happened shona...??
vivan : i missed you mumma... i love you...
meher : i love u too mera bacha... have u seen ur sister...??
vivan : hmm... she is bful...
meher : but u are my prince charming...
vivan : will u love me less now...???
meher : no my love... mumma loves soo much...
abeer : and we love you both... (bringing the new born to meher...)
meher was about to forward her hand to pick the baby but when she realised that vivan wasnt ready to leave her hand, she just looked at the baby and placed a kiss on her forehead...

vivan : give me my sister... i will hold her...
meher n abeer shouted " nooo... "
vivan : why...??
Tarun : because i am taking you out... lets go to ccd...
vivan : yeah i will have my favourite cold coffee and brownie... Let's go maamu...
Tarun : ok... lets go n leave these people here... we will hang out together...
vivan : good idea maamu...
Tarum winked at meher and left with vivan... so that abeer and meher could spend time with their newly found happiness... and so does others...
abeer : thank you baby... by the way have u thought of a name...??
meher : nope..
abeer : OK so then its my decision... Leher... Leher Malhotra..
Abeer kissed Leher's cheeks and whispered "I love you soo much my angel..."
meher : mumma also loves you Leher... Though I know she will daddy's girl..
abeer : princess and now we are equal... You n your son... Me and my daughter...
meher : no I guess now its 3 v/s 1. Poor me... You and your kids abeer...
abeer : haha... I love you baby...
meher : love you too abeer.
so this is how abeer n meher became mehbeer... this was their journey of love...!!!! ❤️ [L]

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VJDIPA thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb written naina!!
Keep it up!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is beautiful ,
Girl I should praise ur patience to write everything in single OS , it's not easy .
Aww I am in love with junior Abeer😆
Loved it keep writing
Thank u so much for pm.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWWW !!!! <3<3
This was tooo sweet! Vivan was cuteness ki dukaan!
I love how you included all the main characters in the story. Vivan and his Tunnu mamu were the cutest!
Meher and Abeer were so dreamy!
The part about the baby drowning had me like😆😆
I wish something like this would happen in the show too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This OS was super cute, how adorable is Junior Abeer.
I love the bond both farther & son share, Abeer would make a great daddy.
MehBeer & their sweet little family <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Totally loved it
Awoaome os it was so cute
Loved vivians baby dialouge
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...it's AMAZING...
Junior abeer is wayyy quick than his dad...😆
Love the cute fights b/w mehbeer and Vivian...
And awww a daughter...poor Meher...
It's lovely OS...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

This is beautiful ,

Girl I should praise ur patience to write everything in single OS , it's not easy .
Aww I am in love with junior Abeer😆
Loved it keep writing
Thank u so much for pm.



thank u madhu...!!! glad to hear it from you dear... you are also brilliant you know... thats why... and yes I agree junior abeer is too lovable... like father like son...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: VJDIPA

Superb written naina!!

Keep it up!!



thank u dear...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u... 😊

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