4S: RaGa Blooming love Last Chap @ 22 {23 August} COMPLETED

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hello guys, as few of you know me but still little about me... well readers should know the writers right????
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anyways I am shona/babydolll... i recently joined ETR2 forum... i am going to write a story here but first i will clear some things first...


i have not watched serial yet so i am not familiar with the characters hence i will use 'Yuvrajsa' instead of Rana ji or what so ever until i will get used to his character...


I dont know the name Of Queen so i will use Raanisa...
hope this will work...


also let me warn you i am not a good writer this just a simple idea came into my mind so all the positive and negative comments are welcome


if it resembles with somebody else's work drop a comment or a pm i will either change it or remove it

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INDEX

part 1 - next post






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Credit- Sandy-Naz


PART 1

Gayatri was a daughter of normal family not too rich or not too poor. Having education unlike other women she knows how to be in society. Yuvrajsa as name itself suggests was strict person... talking too much does not suit him... he believes in "work matters than words".


Due to some circumstances, these two were in a sacred bond of marriage. Gayatri was learning about royal things were Yuvrajsa as usual does not care as it's not his personality to interfere in someone else's life whoever the person it may be. But now a day's something is changing, he reminds himself that work comes first and later to his annoyance ends up going back early to the palace, making him edgy.


Gayatri who is in love with her Yuvrajsa becomes scapegoat of his annoyance. Months after marriage things were not improving sometimes it was too bad that Gayatri ended up sleeping with her friends in the garden. Yuvrajsa started dropping his work just to understand his feelings but getting confused at the end, comes to conclusion of "damn this royal work". Gayatri who understood his turmoil stopped going in front of him and Yuvrajsa who was so much into the work forgets that he is married and he has a wife. The other day he planned to go to the other village regarding merging of the royal families.


The day he was returning to the Ameerkot, he was in deep thinking as Looking at the benefits after merging two royalties, deal was not bad, just a condition he has to follow. "marry my daughter" this words kept ringing in his ear. No doubt the princess was beautiful and intelligent he was in dilemma. And he took leave from there pretending some other works and got some time to think about the marriage.


The gate of the palace opened and Yuvrajsa came out of the car. All the servants bowed down their head in respect. He was walking towards the door he heard someone is giggling and humming something. The voice soothed the storm which was going in his heart. He moved towards the voice and was mesmerized the site.


Gayatri who was free living bird although married to royal person as her husband does not care about her at all, was very happily working in the garden. Humming a song watering the plant cutting the weed seems to be her favorite past time. The flowers which she was taking care of were her friends. She was way mature sometimes but her behavior was childish. Yuvrajsa was drinking her beauty. Suddenly one servant came there and told her about the arrival of Yuvrajsa. her face became pale. She just nodded at the information. After servant left she spoke to the flowers "you all can become happy as I will spend more time with you all from today hushhh..." Though Yuvrajsa couldn't understand the meaning of this line went in the palace.


Yuvrajsa was relaxing on the chair... His eyes were closed but he was thinking deeply about his "almost forgotten wife". As the reality slapped him he was in turmoil now about the future of royal merge. His mom, raanisa came to meet him and asked about it. He told her everything happened in other village. As raanisa was against his marriage with Gayatri told him to go ahead and marry the princess. He looked at his mom shocked, but immediately he put his blank face on. And went to his deep thinking.


Gayatri was feeling cold outside, she heard everything about the talk between her husband and her mother in law. Tears were rolling down her cheeks.


After thinking a lot, Yuvrajsa was waiting for his wife to come in their room so that he can have a talk. But he slept while waiting next day when he opened his eyes found out that the room was same as yesterday nothing changed not even the air. He was in deep thinking where was she the whole night???????


Making a mental note of meeting her in the garden he went for a shower. Gayatri was sad but her friends needed her attention so she got busy in watering her plants. Yuvrajsa came there as he was going to voice her name, the pipe with which she was watering got loose. Because of the force of the water she got drenched she immediately tried to close the flow but seems to be impossible for her. Suddenly few servants came and helped her. Gayatri was drenched, her saree clinged to her body as if it is second skin. Yuvrajsa was looking at her he was literally drooling on her milky white skin which was illuminating in the sunshine. As her saree was stuck to her skin more part of her body becomes visible due to transparency of the saree. He can see the naval he wanted to feel this under his skin. He smacked himself in the mind and started looking here and there. And he saw red, every other male who was present there were lusting for her... As she was removing excess water from her hair suddenly she felt warmth. As she turned she saw her husband put his coat on her. She gasped at the thought that now he will insult in front of everyone. She closed her eyes but she heard "go change the dress and come to my room I need to talk to you" she looked at him and saw something flicker in his eyes was that possessiveness??? Was that lust???? No ways it was love... was it???' as she was reading him he put his mask on... she nodded and went inside.


As she was changing she thought about the thing he is going to talk. She will accept his decision about marrying the princess and expanding the royalties. She will not come in between his dream if it is. After almost a year Yuvrajsa was feeling happy as he protected his wife from the evil persons. He felt anger towards himself thinking on how she might have live by her own... this might not be the first time happened "damn it"... As she entered in the room he wanted to do nothing but to take her into his arms and make love to her endlessly. Yes finally he realized no one matters to him except his wife and he will take care of her, cherish her, love her, protect her...


She was standing there as she looked at him she found him smiling. Her heart broke then and there. She thought he is happy as he is thinking that he will get rid of her now. She spoke "I am ready to divorce you". The smiling Yuvrajsa got shocked he looked at her and asked "just what did you say????"


THE END


was it boring???? honest opinions please... should i continue???? i know its not exactly what you will look here but still...🤔

DON'T COPY OR SHARE MY WORK TO OTHER SITES WITHOUT MY PERMISSION 😡 OR YOU WILL BE PUNISHED SEVERELY

(Thappad padega agar chori ki toh hum aapki mummy se bhi complain kar denge🤣).

credit goes to one and only aayesha aka HUHU


Edited by babydolll - 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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update sooon


plz PM me wonderful concept


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
Would love to read what happens next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice start dear..
waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start
Felt bad for Gayathri ... but luks like things are going to change and yuvrajsa has realised his mistakes
Waiting for More
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg
You can't stop there
Its too good
Really loved it
Can't imagine Yuvraja response to this
Please update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow I loved the update ⭐️ its quite connected with the show also since Rana or Yuvrajasa here are both detached to love while Gayatri at heart is romantic
So while Rana has fallen for Gayatri after ignoring her long , Gayatri decides its best for both if she gives him divorce
Eager to read the next ❤️

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