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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi roch

superb update .
happy with the punishment rashmi got ..
geet's father too suffered ..
geet maan going to marry ..
happy times for them ..
six yearsof pain now going to end
thanks for update
waiting for next


Thanks a lot for sharing your feedback Tabby 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maaneet Miss them ❤️
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Originally posted by: nihatri

Wat a sweet love story

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the extremely late comments! Wow everyone got their karma for what they did to Maaneet. I can't believe Rashmi made up those lies and how could Geet's dad be part of this. There's only one person left to suffer for their deeds. I'm so happy Maaneet are back together and with cute little Pari. I can't wait for the upcoming family moments. Again I apologize for the late comments!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well what goes around comes around. Fate has dished out the punishment to each sinner.
Maan and Geet can finally be together. Pari is one special child who gets to see her parents getting married.
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Thank you 😳
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Originally posted by: janu_2006

awesome parts...

cont.soon


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Originally posted by: TeamMcSwarek

Sorry for the extremely late comments! Wow everyone got their karma for what they did to Maaneet. I can't believe Rashmi made up those lies and how could Geet's dad be part of this. There's only one person left to suffer for their deeds. I'm so happy Maaneet are back together and with cute little Pari. I can't wait for the upcoming family moments. Again I apologize for the late comments!

Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts on my story 😊 It's okay! you are not that much late 😆 That's because basically I update faster 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Alpha01

Well what goes around comes around. Fate has dished out the punishment to each sinner.

Maan and Geet can finally be together. Pari is one special child who gets to see her parents getting married.

Yeah karma spares nobody 😉 Thanks a lot for commenting 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey peeps,

So guys! it's time to say good bye to my short story.😆 Here goes the last chapter. An epilogue will be added later on demand.😳


Inseparable hearts



Chapter 13 (Last chapter)




Finally the much awaited day dawned. Geet was dressed as a beautiful bride. It was a dream come true. Maan kept his promise on making her a beautiful bride & taking her with him with her parents' blessings. Geet was dressed in a gorgeous red lehenga. It was specially designed for her by a popular designer in India on demand of Maan. Maan was dressed in a beige color designer kurta. The bride & the groom looked so perfect together.

Pari too was dressed in a beautiful pink dress. She was excited about her parents' marriage more than anyone. She was lucky to witness her own parents' wedding. She was running here & there in the wedding hall with excitement. Everyone adored her cute antics.


They completed 7 pheras & took marriage vows. Maan put on sindoor on Geet's forehead & put on the nuptial chain. Finally they tied the knot. They officially became Mr & Mrs. Khurana. Raj & Padmini blessed the newly married couple. Maan & Geet leaned down near the photographs of Maan's deceased parents & sought blessings. Rahul who has been missing all these years paid a surprise visit on their wedding day. Maan & Geet were surprised & happy to see him after many years. He had been working on a research project at USA & he was unaware of what was happening in India. He was late when he got to know about the evil side of his own sister. He apologized Maan & Geet on behalf of her misdeeds. Maan & Geet wanted to forget about the past incidents & to start a fresh life.


Their wedding was a grand affair. Everyone had fun dancing & sharing the happiness of Maan & Geet's togetherness. Pari was the happiest. She danced with her newly married parents. She was the center of attraction. Everyone loved her.


Finally the most awaited moment came on. Maan took Geet to the house they had been staying over for the past few months. Since Maan has already established as a good architect in Australia & Geet too has her job as a teacher there, they wanted to settle back in Melbourne after marriage. They were planning to go back to Melbourne within a month of their marriage.


Pari cried that she also want to go to the house with her parents. The elders tried to convince her but she was too stubborn. Finally Geet & Maan had to take along their little daughter. Geet put her to sleep. She caressed her hair till her little girl goes to sleep. Maan was impatiently waiting for Geet. Finally she came inside the room.


The room was decorated with colorful scented candles & roses. Geet was mesmerized by the sight.


'Loved it?' Maan winked.


'It is amazing' Geet smiled. Her happiness knew no bounds. Tears of happiness rolled down her eyes. Her eyes were glittering with happiness. Maan cupped her face. Silence crept between them. It was filled with emotions of happiness & pride. Finally they have reached the destination of happiness after a 6 year long journey of a painful past with so many obstacles. They shared an intense eye lock.


'Geet...' Maan caressed her face. She was looking at his eyes. They were filled with love. Geet was blushing. He pulled her more closer from her waist. His strong arms were touching her bare waist. That boosted Geet's feelings. She shyly pushed him away.


They heard the rattling sound of the rain. It was raining outside. Geet opened the window. The cold breeze soothed her mind. The sheer window curtains were dancing in the wind. Geet opened the huge glass windows so she could go out to the balcony. She was enjoying the cool atmosphere. She extended her hand to feel the rain. The rain drops collided with her palm giving her a ticking sensation. Geet was enjoying the weather to the fullest.


Maan came forward & put his arms under her's. He touched her hand. It was wet with rain water. He rubbed her upper abdomen gently. It gave Geet a romantic sensation. She was breathing heavily. Her heart was beating fast. She closed her eyes slowly. Maan planted a gentle kiss on Geet's neck. He was back hugging her. It gave her goosebumps. He slowly untied her hair. He nuzzled her hair & almost inhaled the fragrance of it. Geet was blushing red.


'Geet...' He whispered to her huskily. He tightened his grip from back. Suddenly a lightening bolt flashed in the sky. A thunder struck with a loud noise. Geet hugged Maan tightly with fear. Maan wrapped her with his protective arms. Then he closed the windows & accompanied Geet towards the bed.


They were standing, Maan put his arms around her waist. Geet put her arms around his neck. Maan pulled her more closer. A strand of hair was disturbing Geet's vision. He cleared it slowly. His fingers ran through her hair. They are going to intimate physically after 6 long years. An unexplained romantic feeling bloomed inside Geet's body.


Maan tilted his head & came more closer. They were just few inches apart. They were so close that they could almost hear each other's heart beats. Within no time, their lips met each other.


He almost smudged her lipstick. They were kissing each other passionately after 6 long years. They flash backed their first romantic encounter. His tongue touched hers, lustfully. Their sensory glands were moaning with pleasure. Geet ran her fingers through Maan's hair. He was rubbing her back. Another thunder struck, almost shaking Geet with fear. She held him tightly. Maan kept kissing her vigorously diverting her mind from the thundering happening around.


Suddenly they were disturbed by a loud noise. Somebody was banging on the door. Maan & Geet parted away with a confusion.


'Mommy!! daddy!!' They heard her little girl's voice. It was none other than Pari who was banging at the door crying. Maan opened the door. Pari stormed inside crying. She hugged her mother tightly.


'Pari? Baby what happened?' Geet cupped her little daughter's face.


'Mo.. Mommy!' It's.. it's thundering.' Another loud thunder struck & the poor soul hugged her mother tightly, burring her tiny face under her mother's chest. Little Pari was trembling with fear. Geet wrapped her protective arms around her daughter. Maan came near & caressed his little girl's hair.


'Baby! don't worry. Mommy & daddy is here. Nothing to fear.' Maan tried to pacify her. It was raining heavily.


'Mommy! Mommy please can I sleep with you? I'm scared!' Pari was sobbing. She was too scared to sleep alone in the room with the horrifying thunder. Geet & Maan exchanged a glance. They couldn't leave their little daughter alone. Maan nodded approving to keep Pari with them at night.


Pari was delighted to see the decorated bed. She blew the soft rose petals on the bed.


'Daddy! why the bed is decorated with flowers?'


'Umm.. well it's because today is daddy & mommy's wedding!'


'Wow this is awesome! who decorated this?' Pari popped up another question.


'Me! do you like it?' Maan smiled.


'Yeah! but daddy, why didn't you decorate my bed as well?' Little Pari made a face. Maan & Geet exchanged a glace. Geet was trying to control her laugh. Her poor husband was stuck in the middle of a questionnaire.


'Umm.. sorry baby!' Maan held his ears seeking forgiveness from their little daughter.


'Hmm it's okay! but next time you have to decorate mine as well, okay?'


'Okay baby!' Maan placed a soft kiss on her tiny forehead. He picked his little daughter & placed her on the bed. Maan & Geet too settled down on the bed keeping their little daughter between them. Little Pari was snuggled up to her mother. She put one of her legs over her mother's body. Geet caressed her hair.


Maan was looking up. He seemed to be a little bit upset as their Suhaag Raat was ruined by their little daughter. But they didn't have any option other than keeping Pari with them. The little girl was too scared to sleep alone.


'Maan..?' Geet spoke softly.


'Hmm..?'


'Aren't you sleepy yet?'


'No' He replied in a dull tone.


'Maan?' Geet called him again.


'Hmm?'


'What's wrong?'


Maan pointed at little Pari who was sleeping, snuggled up to her mother. Geet smiled. She understood the reason why Maan was upset. She slowly touched his hand. He was staring at her. She caressed it gently. Maan smiled at her. He too held her hand, almost making a protective hand wall over their little angel Pari. Their little girl was secure with them. Pari was lucky to have her mother back & now she is under the protection of both of her parents.


Maan placed a gentle kiss on his little daughter's tiny forehead & another one on his newly married wife's.


'Good night Geet..'


'Good night Maan..' They wished each other a good night.


'Maan...?' Geet spoke again.


'Hmm..?'


'I.. I love you.' Geet smiled.


Maan took her hand & placed a gentle kiss on it.


'I love you too Geet.'


Unfortunately their wedding night was troubled by their little daughter. But Maan didn't give up on his plans. Pari was sent to Handa mansion. She became friendly with her grandparents & she loved being with them. Raj & Padmini assured Maan & Geet that they will look after Pari well till they return back from their honeymoon.


Maan's honeymoon trip was a complete surprise for Geet. He took her to Maldives. Both of them loved beaches. Maan has booked a small private island specially for two of them. Geet was mesmerized with the breathtaking sight of the sea. The shining blue waters & the cool & salty breeze soothed her mind.


They relaxed a bit & at the night they had a special sea food dinner. It was scrumptious. Then they walked around hand in hand in the sea shore. The sea was calm. The silent waters in the sea was shining silver with the reflection of the moon. The atmosphere was calm & serene. They were all alone lost in their own world.


They were in bare foot. The silky sand was soothing. The cool breeze gave Geet goosebumps. She locked her hands due to the coldness. Maan wrapped his arms around her to keep her warm.


'Maan...'


'Hmm?'


'Thank you so much.' 'I don't know how to thank you for all these things Maan.'


Maan cupped her face. 'Geet you deserve these things for your love & support. I know they simply cannot reach up to your love but I wanted to make our honeymoon remarkable.'


'I love you Maan...'


'I love you too..' They hugged each other. After a few minutes they broke the hug. Geet was staring at the calm sea. Maan splashed water on Geet playfully.


'Maan!' 'Maan stop it!' Geet was trying to escape from his water attack. But Maan was too mischievous. He kept splashing her. Geet was almost drenched in water. She too splashed him sea water in return. The newly married couple were splashing water at each other like kids.


Geet was wearing a sheer white beach dress & her dress was almost soaked with water & her undergarments were visible. It boosted Maan's feelings. Finally Geet managed to push him to the shallow waters. He was drenched too.


'Hahaha! How was that Mr. Khurana?' Geet was teasing him. She kept giggling.


'Geet! help me to get up!' Maan was struggling to get up. Geet was laughing hard.


'You think it's funny? now please help me!' Maan made a face.


'Okay okay!' 'Calm down.' Then Geet extended her hand. She was unaware of Maan's evil plan. He pulled her too. She was on top of him. The tiny waves kept colliding with their bodies. Both of were wet. Geet's face was covered with strands of wet hair glued to it. Maan cleared them slowly. He cupped her face.


Both of them felt something special. Their desires were burning inside. They couldn't wait anymore. Their lips met each other within no time. They started kissing each other passionately. Maan was holding her tightly. Geet thrust her hand on the wet sands. She almost scraped the sands with her nails, enjoying the luscious encounter. Soon they were hit by a bit big wave & both of them parted away. Geet coughed as salty water struck in her mouth.


'Geet..?' 'Are you okay?' Maan was worried.


'Yeah. I'm alright.' She stood up. Maan was looking at her body.


'You look so sexy.' He winked. Geet realized that her sheer beach dress was drenched with water & her undergarments were visible. She tried covering her body from her hands.


'Why so shy?' Maan winked again. Geet looked down with embarrassment. In a swift, he picked her up & stepped towards their beach cabana. Both of them were drenched in salty water & a good amount of sand were glued to their bodies.


Maan accompanied Geet to the bathroom. Geet was blushing in red. He cupped her face. Geet's heart was beating fast. 'Geet...?' He caressed her face. Geet looked at him shyly. She smiled & nodded approving to proceed. Maan slowly undressed her & then he took off his clothes as well. He opened the shower & put his arms around her bare waist. They showered together.


After the shower Maan wrapped her in a towel & picked her. She put her arms around his neck. Within a minute they settled them selves on the bed. Geet was breathing hard. Maan came more closer to her. They shared another passionate kiss. Soon they parted for some air.


Maan was staring at her with anticipation. Geet understood it. Both of them wanted to lost in each other's worlds. Both of them were longing to be in each other's arms for 6 long years. Geet nodded approving with a smile.


Maan came more closer. Geet closed her eyes. Her heart was beating fast. He started kissing her from head to toe. He planted soft kisses on her bosom. Geet ran her fingers through his wet hair. Their romantic feelings were boosted with the effect of striking hormones. Maan's masculine figure drove her crazy. Their naked bodies collided with each other. They felt each other's warmth.


'Geet..' Maan cupped her face.


'Geet.. are you ready to start a new life with me?'


Geet nodded smiling.


'Geet.. I've been craving for your love for years.' He caressed her face.


'Geet... I want something from you.'


'Hmm?'


'Geet...' He placed a soft kiss on her forehead & finally blurted out his wish to have another baby with her.


'Geet... I missed your pregnancy phase. I want to experience those moments. I want to take care of you. I want to be with you fulfilling your needs. I want to feel my baby when it is inside your womb.' 'Geet.. will you make me a father again?'


Geet smiled. She nodded agreeing. She cupped his face.


'Maan...' ' I want the same. I too missed our Pari's early childhood as a baby. Even I want to take care of a new born baby & watch him growing up.' 'And our little Pari needs a companion to play with.' Geet chuckled.


'I love you Geet..' He planted another kiss on her forehead.


'I love you too Maan..'


'Maan.. is this a dream?' Geet was over the moon. She couldn't ask any more in her life.


'No Geet. This is reality. I'm here, with you. We will be together forever!' Maan smiled. He wiped Geet's tears. They were happy ones. Then without taking much time, they became one, after 6 long years. them back closer.


The love birds were reunited. They spent the night indulging in a passionate love making session. It was a perfect start for their new journey. Though they were separated physically for 6 long years, they were inseparable from hearts. Both of them were loyal to each other. The destiny was once cruel for them but the same destiny brought them closer. Their love was strong. They started their new journey of life, as a strong couple, with their symbol of love, their little daughter Pari beside them & weaving dreams of another addition to their cute little family.


The end.


Hold on guys! 😆This is not an end! I know many of you might be sad that this story came to an end.🤔 Hope you have heard the proverb that, 'Every good thing must come to an end.' 😆So same goes with my short story. But don't worry, I promised that I will give an epilogue on demand.😉 So please let me know if you want one! 😆Just share your thoughts below. Thank you everyone for all the love & support.🤗 I'm glad that I got amazing feedbacks on each update. I have a bunch of readers who gave me lovely reviews throughout this short story. I'm very much grateful for them for encouraging me more. Thanks for the readers who commented on each update even though in a word or two. Dear silent readers, I hope to see your response as well. Hope nothing would cost you for sharing your thoughts in a word or two on my story. 😆I have put a lot of effort on this story to pull it off for nearly one & a half months & 13 chapters already tackling it with my personal life.😳 So I expect that you will give your valuable feedbacks. Please do point out my errors. Please let me know if you didn't like the story much. So I can improve my writing & my next outcome will be less with mistakes.😃Thanks a lot once again! Love you all! See you with the epilogue (hopefully)😳

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