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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks , il really happy you liked it !
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hi , i have updated the new part of this story , i hope you enjoy it , and please hit like and leave your feedback😃😃😃


Chapter 6, part 1

Sam and neil reached for the dinner at their favourite rrstaurant. That restaurant had a dance floor and couples came and dance there , it was one of the most costliest restaurant in london. Neil was staring sam for a while . Sam noticed that .

S. Neil , aise kya dekh rahe ho ?

N. Kuch nahi sammy , bas , mere saath dance karogi ?

N. Haan !

And neil held her hand and took her to the dance floor . Sam put her hands behind neils neck and neil placed his hands on her waist , and , the next song played .

Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhe
Teri ore chalne lage..

Sam was completely lost in neils eyes , and same with neil , he just couldn't take his eyes off his wife.

Har safar, har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe Khuda
Aur haan wahi ban gaye

Sam stepped wrong and she almost fell, but neil tightned the grip on her waist , not letting her fall. Sam stood properly , but was a little embaressed after the almost fall , so , she decided to leave the dance floor.

Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye..

But neil grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him , she collied with his chest . they had a deep and long eyelock there , then , he continued to dance with her .

Pehchaante hi nahi
Ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi
Hai dhoondte wo tujhe..

Soon, Neil moved his hand on the low of her back, and pulled her even more closer to him, sam was just admiring her husband , she then wrapped her arms around his neck.

Hum the dhoondhte jisse
Woh kami ban gaye
Tum mere ishq ki
Sar-zameen ban gaye

They could feel each others breath and their lips were so close ,their heart was beating faster with with passing minutes. And they were dancing like nobady was watching them .It was the most beautiful moment of their lives and neither neil nor sam wanted it to end.

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye..

And the dance came to an end and nesam returned to their table. They had dinner and ordered vanilla ice cream .

in the office ...

Radhika slowly opened her eyes and found arjun standing there. And she woke up with a jerk and sat on the sofa , shocked.

r. arjun ! aap ? yaha ?

A.. haan , main , yaha ! aur agar mein yaha tumhe na lata toh tum un gundon ke saath hoti !

R.. gunde ? ... aap se zyada aur kaun gunda ho sakta hai (she said whispering)

a.. tumne kuch kaha ?

R..nahi

And she got up and when she started to walk , she stumbled and fell ... on arjun , her hands were on his chest and she closed her eyes , thinking she fell on the floor. When she felt his hard chest , she opened her eyes , and arjun and radhika had a eyelock.

Aaa...Haaa
Aye Humnava Mujhe Apna Bana Le
Sukhi Padi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De

They could easily feel each others breath and their heartbeats, was incresing by evry passing second .


Hmm...Hu Akela Zara Hath Bada De
Sukhi Padi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De

Radhika could see the pain in his eyes , in those dark brown eyes which were now bloodshot , like if he wasnt able to control his emotions to come out in form of tears.


Kabse Mein Dar-Dar Phir Raha
Musafir Dil Ko Panaah De
Tu Awargi Ko Meri Aaj Thehra De

Radhikas eyes started to get wet ,having him so close to her , she couldnt understand her strong emotions for him , her deep feelings for him , she knew she had them but all she felt when he was around her is like all the past memories haunt her and few tear drops fell on his cheeks , he felt them , he felt strong emotions of guilt sorounding him , she was right , whatever happened to her it was all because of him.


Ho Sake Toh, Thoda Pyaar Jata De
Sukhi Padhi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De

Arjuns eyes got wet, he had her so close to him , he didn't want this moment to end , if it was him he would have stayed like this for few more minutes, but radhika got up realizing their position, .

R.. sorry... im really sorry

A.. its ok..

she went towards the door , she found it closed.

R.. yeh darwazaa, kisne band kiya , aap ne?

A.. maine nahi kiya , ho gaya hoga band

R.. ho gaya hoga ? what do you mean by that ? yeh darvaaza kharab hai ! maine aaj bola tha piyali mam ko ki thik kardein kal ! ( she shouted to arjun)

a.. ab mujhe ke chilane se kuch nahi hoga , isko kholne ka koi tareeka nikalo .

R.. mein akeli sochu , aapki wajah se hua hai , aap socho . Aur waise bhi , aap ki itni acchi body bani huyi hai , use kijiye usse .

a.. radhika... tumne darwazaa dekha hai ? its crytal , todunga toh bikharjayenge tokdon mein aur lag jayegi

R.. sir, maine todne ko kab kaha? use force and open the lock or so something similar.

Arjun tried to open then door , but he couldn't .

A.. nahi khul raha .. watchman! main usse pfone karta hoon ?

R.. aapko watchman ka number hai ?

Arjun looked at her with anger and called the watchman. the line was not clear .

a.. hello , bala ? tum jaldi se upar radhika ka office kholo!

B..hello sabji ,ujhe kuch sunai nahi de raha! main ghar pe hun , aapko bulding khol ke di thi na , phir ghar chala gaya mein... sir ji sir ji ...

.A. hello 1 hello bala ! bala!

and arjun cut the call and he kept his phone in his pocket

A.. mujhse darvaza khul nahi raha , watchman apne ghar gaya , party chal rahi hogi waha aur hum yahan.

Radhika sat down in helplessness. she realized whata big mistake she did,

r.. ( in her mind ) my god! aaj sam aur neil ki anniversary thi ! aur maine unhe wish nahi kiya! ( to arjun ) sir,,, mujhe aap ka phone chahiye , kuch urgent kaam hai .. ( she said getting up )

A.. yeh lo.

And while giving her the phone, her hand by mistake touched his, and they both freezed for a second, looking into each others eyes, and forgetting the whole situation, arjun pulled his hand back. and he went towards the sofa and sat there .

Radhika typed a anniversary message on sam and neil mobile. And gave the mobile phone to arjun .

R.. thanks

A.. Wah ! tumhare mu se mere liye thanks nikla ! badi baat ho gayi aaj toh !

Radhika didn't answered to him and went to her chair and she sat there , resting her head on the back rest. Arjun saw her , she had her eyes closed and slowly a lone tear escaped her eyes . Radhika was reminising all the moments spent with neil and sam , and specially sam, that beach walk , that cutting chai at the stall, her first day in the office and how arjun broke her heart and neil supported her , and how they got married and neil took her away from all of them , so she could completely forget all what happneed and start a new life. That lone tear was just the beginning , few tears were flowing from her eyes.

Arjun somehow knew the reason of her tears, it was him .

Arjun . ( in his mind ) I couldn't give you anything , except tears and lifelong pain , I wish I could do something to mend your broken heart and bring that old radhika back , that used to laugh and enjoy her life .

Precap. Neil tells sam about transfer in the restaurant ...piyali samrat emotional ... Arjun dream ...ardhika office romance... radhika confronts arjun... and team location hunt.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
I don't know why i am feeling bad for arjun. 😕 😭
I can't see Sam, Neil, Radikha and arjun hurt 😭
This is so emotional update dear 👏
I want everyone to start new life forgetting past
Thanks for PM 🤗
You made me cry dear.
Such wonderful story
Keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sam and neil r happy but radhika doesnt want to forgive arjun because she had to face the separation from hr parents because of arjun , and soon you will ses how things turn out out to be nice and situations turn cupid for radhika and arjun !

thanks for the beautiful comment !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: heartbroken1

sam and neil r happy but radhika doesnt want to forgive arjun because she had to face the separation from hr parents because of arjun , and soon you will ses how things turn out out to be nice and situations turn cupid for radhika and arjun !

thanks for the beautiful comment !


Eagerly waiting to see what will happen next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks i hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update viny 😃...waiting for next chapter :)😎
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thanks a tone for the encouragement !
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thanks a tone ! im happy you liked it!
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Arjun dream ...ardhika office romance... radhika confronts arjun... and team location hunt. ...cant wait for next part 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

Good work DOLL 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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