Ardhika Nesam SS Timeless Love, [ Chapter 10 , page 19] Completed !!! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi guys... i hope you like this part and if so,... please encourage by hitiing like and leave your feedback !!!!!😃😃 and enjoy!!!!!!!


Chapter4 part 1

The party was onn... After the fuss created by arjun... A lot of people went on the damce floor... Except radhika arjun and viraaj... Radhika was standing with viraaj...

V. Can i have a dance with you radhika???

R. Uhjh... Actually...

V.please dont say no...come..

And he took her to the dance floor...

Meanwhile arjun was staring radhika...who was super uncomfortable with viraaj... Who was basically fotcing her to dance...and she wasmt enjoying that at all...

After a while piyali came pn stage and annonced.

P. So guys. .. Today is the...you should all enjoy..as we are the n1 ad company in all india and we even started having international offers... And to celebrate it... How about having couple dances... Im going to call on stage a a girl and a boy... and that couple will dance on a romantic song... ok ????? so lets start ... uhhh... kritika and zunbin...

they went and danced on teri meri... and thye dd it so well... that people couldn't stop clapping for them... arjuns eyes were still at radhika ... and when radhika saw him she gave him a very cold look... and started taloking to viraaj... arjuns patience was at his best but when ... piyali announced ... hat the next couple to dance would be radhika and viraaj... his patience came to an end... and he fumed to the dance floor and took radhikas hand from viraajs ... radhikas was really angyb on arjun .. viraaj was hell disturbed...

R.. arjun leave me ... please leabve me

A..dj... sholon si

An he pulled her towardds him ... and stsrted dancing with her ...

Sholon si sholon si

tere aankhon ki yeh roshni

kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

chandni chandni

tere chehre ki yeh chandni

kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

tera muskurana nazar yuhn jhukana

mere liye hai bas mere liye hai

A.. why you never danced .. so now .. with thagt arjun.. huh?

R.. things change ... arjun.. and people too like you... am I rihhg t????

A.. oh... so the madam who stood so strong on her principlas... now has changed...

R.. arjun just leave me ... and don't creatre a scen here

A.. ohh im not creaitng a scen sweetheart... you r...

And he pulled her even more closer... she tried to freeherself.. but couldn't .. those strong arms didn't let her go...

sholon si sholon si

tere aankhon ki yeh roshni

kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

chandni chandni tere chehre ki yeh chandini

kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

(samjho mera jo ishaara hai

jo bhi hai mera woh tumhara hai)

lehar mein khoyi hoon khoyi

manzil to hai tu kinara hai

yeh meri adayein yeh meri wafayein

tujhko pata hai sabh tere liye hai

R.. please arjun...!!!!! please!!!!!

A.. radhika please ... whats bothering you.. the fact that im dancing wioth you or .. he didn't dance with you...?

R..I don't owe you an explanation arjun sir...

He pulls her and she crashes against his broad chest ... she looked up... and srjun got more closer... toher... thsat she could even feel his warm breaths,,... and he could feel hers...

sholon si sholon si

meri aankhon ki yeh roshni

tere liye hai tere liye hai

R.. why ... wy arjun???????

and saying this arjun had his eyes wet.. and rhdika realised her closeness with arjun... she could see his eyes .. filled of pain..and regret ... but just didn't wanted to accept it... and she freed herself and left the dance floor in the middle of th esong... th edj stopped when she left,... evryone was standing like a statue.. shocked with whtat just jhappned ... piyali broke the silence..

P.. o come on.. lets dance..!!!!!!!

anm devryone bascillay went to the dance flor and enjoyed themselves .. meanwhile... radhika went from the party... and arjun went home ... Radhika was walking in the dark streets under the lamplight... she called her driver to pick her up from the garden... she sat on the bench of a garden waiting for her car ... her phone starts ringin... she sees it ...it was sam ..

to be continued in the next part !!!!!!


Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
awesome update
i think sam will make radhika realise her love for arjun
update soon
waiting to see what will sam do after knowing about ardhika
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thak u souch for your encouragement...!!!: )
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
thanku for the encouraging words...!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Amazing.I am feeling Arjun's pain rather than Radhika stubbornness dont konw why?🤔
Plz continue it.I am really excited what is going to happen next
So lovely written
Plz PM me your further updates 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I stpped it because i didnt liked the story how it went in the show ... But now... Will continue it and finish it... And will sure pm you...thanks im glad you liked it!
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Hey guys... I have decided to continue what i had started... Please dont bash me ... Its just a fiction story ... Which has the concept that is really close to my heart ... And i am tired if seeing neil in devdas mode ..so i decided to modify the title and add a nesam after marriage romance track as well... So ..i really hope you like it . And please leave your feedback and likes. Thank you very much.


Chapter 4 part 2

Rad. Sam!!( she picked the phone) hey sam!! How r u??

S. Im great ! Youre at the party be Mypa told me ..enjoying?

R. Uhh... No im waiting for the driver... I ... Long story... You tell me ..?? How r the things there.?

S.great Chashni!!! Just awesome !! But... I really miss you !

R. Mee too...

S. Ahh... Chahni ... You sound sad... Evrythings fine, chashni you still ... your past ??

R.. sam,,,, my past.,,. everyone.. my family ... evrything is gone... evrything... afetr saral broke the engagement afetr hearing that me and arjun had to spent a night on the highway... I tried to tell them ... that a guy was badly following me,,, and nothing happenned between me and arjun,, I mean... we were at the highway waiting for a lift... the whole night... beacause some goons followed me and arjun sved me from them... then his car broke down... but no one believed me ... no one...not even my parents.. they cut all ties with me... only you and neil were there for me,,,, and of course ,,, teji bonnie , zubin and kritika, now only you are my family...

S.. im always therere for you, always ! in fact , all of us are with you !

R. Ya ... Oh ... Sam. .. My drivers calling ...

S. Ok... Take care... Bye!

There, neil came and hugged sam from behind ...

N. Oh. Ho... Saminder singh ... Oh no... Mrs saminder singh idiot!

Sam kissed neils cheek... And turmed around .. Still locked in his arms... And hugged him tight!! After few minutes she broke the hug

S. Neil... You really ... Really helped me to get out of the heartbreak ... Made me realize that you were the obe who i loved.. And not arjun... I love you neil... I love you

N. Forget the past .. Live in the present my sammy...

And neil cupped her face, and softly kissed her eyes ... Which were wet due to her emotions ...

In mumbai...

Radhika picked the call of hr driver...

D. Madam... Im at the bar margold bar... Theres police there i guess a car accident has taken place .. So... Could come there... Its just 15 minutes from where you are

R. Ok.. Ok. Ill come there...

And she walks there.. When she arribes .. She sees that the ambulance abd the police van leaves from there... ... She notices... Arjuns car is there as well...

R. ( in her mind) my god...!!; what is he doing here , at the bar ! Or ... He is the one... Whose accident ... No... But... he was so drunk at the party... My good ... Arjun sir... I just hope youre alright !!

And she gets really wrorried thinking about him... At first. .she thought of cslling him... But then...

R. ( in her mind ) he was so drunk.. Like hes gonna pick up my phone...

And she dropped the idea... So she thought of asking her driver...

R. Yeh ... Accident .. Kis ka hua ???

D. Madam ji koi ladki thi...

R. Accha. ...( and she took a breath of relief )

D. Madamji... Mai... Bathroom hokar aata hu aur paani ki bottle khateed kar kar aata hu... Wo ..pehle...police ne savaaljawaab kar rahe the mujse ki maine kuch delkha tha...aur phir ..aap aa gayi ... Mai abhi aaya...

R. Ji...

She waits there.. But... Some guys gets close to her... And try to touch her... Radhika shouts... And doesnt let them touch her... At the bar. ... Arjun was sitting there ... He had drunk two glasses of lemonade... He was better than the party at least. ... Somehow he manaed to drive on those empty roads, to come to the bar ... He heard radjikas voice... She was shouting... And he ran outside... And saw sth that he couldnt bare...

Radhikas pallu was tore . And her eyes were full of tears ! the man was holding her shoulders!

Precap. fight ... Arjuns care towards radhika ... Radhikas emotional break down... Neil phone call...

Guys... Pationate romance coming for nesam and ardhika !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow amazing work.👏
Beautiful😊
Me is the first commenting
Plz dont stop like that i am dying of thinking wht will haappen next
I hate that guys how they dare to misbehave with our chasni 😡
I hope Arjun will teach them a nice lesson 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
He will !! And thanks for liking it !

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